雅思大作文高分句型
I. 不要总是以有生命的名词或者人称代词开头。
屌丝：People experience many great changes in the last half century.
高分：文章原句
技巧：找到原句中的非生命名词短语，把它变成主语。
屌丝：Because the rich and powerful people impose the changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that depends on them.
高分：文章原句
技巧：使用强调结构。在强调的内容前加上it is，强调的内容后加上who/that, 公式就是It is + 强调内容+ that + 非强调内容
屌丝：Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.
高分：It is widely(commonly) thought/believed/held/accepted that birth control is quite necessary.
技巧：使用主语从句。Many people think...= It is widely(commonly) thought/believed/held/accepted that.....
屌丝：Many Chinese people have gone to the Unite States in the past 15 years.
高分：The past 15 years have bought many Chinese people to the United States.
技巧：用时间做主语，效果非常好。The last half of the 20th century has seen/witnessed many great breakthrough in every aspect.
练习：
1.In many of these countries, this increasing number of visitors (mostly from western countries) has caused problems like drug abuse and alcoholism.
2.Because only rich people have enough money to travel overseas, poorer countries such as Thailand and Indonesia have become the playgrounds of wealtheir nations.
II.英语中被动使用频率远远高于汉语
屌丝：They make a lot of innovations to make money for a few people.
高分：文章原句
技巧：宾语变主语
屌丝：We may think more of the elderly who live apart from their children.
高分：More thought may be given to the elderly who live apart from their children.
技巧：动词变名词。
练习：
1.We produce millions of tons of pollutions every day.
2.Nowadays sophisticated computer games fascinate every child.
III.不要总是用“如果”、“因为”、“当”等口语意味较重的句子。不要对动词过于依赖，要
学会使用名词/介词等结构来表达意思。
屌丝：Even if believe change is inevitable, this does not mean “change is always for the better”. 高分：文章原句
技巧：使用同位语从句
屌丝：If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior to cars.
高分：Careful comparison of bicycles with cars will show the superiority of the former over the letter.
技巧：把动词compare用名词结构来表达意思。
屌丝：If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good results.
高分：The application of book knowledge alone won’t bring you good results.
技巧：用名次结构来表达意思。
屌丝：If we can better understand the greater pressure of the population growth, we will have a correct attitude towards family planning.
高分：A better understanding of the greater pressure of population growth is essential to a correct attitude towards family planning.
技巧：用名次结构来表达意思。
练习
1.If we don’t recognize the serious problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake.
2.The style of living has become more and more popular accepted by more and more young people.
IV. 不要总是用肯定句来表达，要学会用否定句来表达肯定的意思。
屌丝：This means the change is the common choice among us, and we have to face and also need to adapt to keep pace with it.
高分：文章原句
屌丝：Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost.
高分：There is hardly a young boy and girl who does not want to earn a little money to help cover higher college costs.
技巧：Every = hardly + not
屌丝：Food is the most basic issue to individual and national survival.
高分：No issue is as basic to individual and national survival as food.
最高级= no + as...as
屌丝：Gathering around and listening to mother or father read a good story is the best pastime to bring a family closer together.
高分：Few pastimes bring a family closer together than gathering around and listening to mother or father read a good story.
技巧：最高级=few...than
