高中英语作文写作教学公开课共26页

The essay
What makes a good essay?
A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
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species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
Concluding raph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic statement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.

a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless

7. (Much)To our (great) surprise, Xiao Ming knows everything.
8. Xiao Ming's knowing everything surprises us.
to simplify
9. Everything known by Xiao Ming, we are surprised.
1. Xiao Ming knows everything and we are very surprised.
2. We are very surprised that Xiao Ming knows everything.
3. That Xiao Ming knows everything surprises us/makes us
Varied sentence structures.
u All simple sentences, and the readers will feel bored. u All long and complex sentences, and the readers will feel tired. u Combination of long sentences and short ones, and the readers will feel
Step II: 点拨质疑 导学提升
To simplify
uHe decided that he would buy a digital camera online.
→He decided to buy a digital camera online.
uThe man who is talking with Mary is my brother.

Verb tensions
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
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Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills

问题:
7.句子结构不完整 Only make full use of them does it make
sense . Only by making full use of them does it make
sense The 29th Olympic Games which hosted in
Beijing were held successfully. The 29th Olympic Games which were hosted in
Hstoadwiutmosuasftee/rmBaekijeingusheosotefd/mthaek2e9tthheOlbymespticoGf athmees . sAIoshuftfaectthedacerreiusystsmhotafueudslai.Oluyr.emlycsmoalpfletieccrtiGBnegaimjsinoegmsheoasdtveidcethoen2h9othwOtolymmpakiceGthaembeesst After Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games .
Beijing were held successfully.
写作步骤:
1. 审题
体裁 时态 结构 要求
2. 列提纲/要点
字数 内容
3.连词成句
4.连句成篇
5. 润色修正
6. 定稿
1.审题: 体裁 书信格式
人称 第一,三人称
时态 一般现在时
要求
字数 内容
抓要点,
120个左右
①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.
Para.1 开头 信息1
②征集奥运会后如何综合利 用体育场馆的建议.

What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance

●__正__文_____________(_注__意__：____英__文__书__信__不__要__写___一__些___ (B__o__d____y__o____f __L__e__t__t__e__r__）______h②__e__l__正l__o__文,______部h__i__分之____，类____严的____格问____按候____照语______文)____章____的____提
●签名（Signature） (文章一般都会给出）
Yours sincerely， Li Hua
Organization
Mood
In a moderate mood!!
Content:
Cover all the information
Better to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.
Good points
书写有较大进步， 总体来说书写认真， 字迹较工整
书信写作的格式及其要求：
Dear Mr. Smith●，称呼（Salutation） 文章一般会给出
__________________________________①____起____首____语______-__-__-__-____亮____明____身____份______，____开____门____见 _________________山__说__意__图_______________________
Language:
No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes
In accordance with the requirements of the composition

参照模板写作的两大原则 1. 不背范文背句型。 我们主张考生熟背模板中的句型，并达到熟练运用的程度，而 不是机械地背育其中的一、两篇范文，考试时生搬硬套。 2. 先写死，后写活。 参照模板进行写作的方法是一种兼具封闭性（目前高考全国卷、 江苏卷等）与开放性（目前北京卷、上海卷命题模式，未来各 地命题模式）的模板式作文法。固定的结构与句型体现了作文 的封闭性，适用于初级练习作者；待考生能够熟练应用模板写 作时，可以根据试题要求，灵活运用各种句型，甚至发挥更为 适用的句型，这体现出作文的开放性。
1）就失约向你的朋友道歉
2）解释失约的原因
3）建议下次约会并提出下次方便约会的时间
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道歉信模板
Date:
Dear ,
⑴I am very sorry to say/tell you that . ⑵Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.⑶Please accept my sincere apology. ⑷I fear you are unhappy at . ⑸I hope you will understand me and excuse me for .
⑹Let me explain. ⑺The reason for my delay/absence was that way out because .⑼Therefore, it,s not in my power to .
. ⑻I had no
⑽Naturally, I want to suggest tell me when and where you soon.

演示课件
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
4. 逐字翻译问题 The stadiums can open to people for do exercise use.
The stadiums can be opened to people for doing exercises. 演示课件
5. 词性混淆问题 It can creative money.. It can create/bring in money. Many people can use them to strong our body. Many people can use them to strengthen our
• Dear editor,
• I am Li Hua, a reader of your paper.
• ………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………
演示课件
内容
要点全，拓展有度，有效
Beijing were held successfully. The 29th Olympic Games which were hosted in
Beijing were held successfully.

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表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.

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Writing
By Zhang Hui
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Ⅰ. Discussion
What makes a good essay?
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感知典型范例
——句型层面1
他昨天下午来的。
He came here yesterday afternoon. (not…until) →
1. He_d_i_d_n_’t_come here _u_n_ti_l__yesterday afternoon.
读 者
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——篇章层面3
neat and clean 卷面整洁 well organized 结构合理
the content is complet内容要完整
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Conclusion: What makes a good essay?
1. neat and clean 卷面整洁 2. complete content 内容完整 3. well organized 结构合理 4. exactly used and advanced words
感知典型范例 ——段落层面
I think, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy. Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged.

Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice

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post-writing
The thing that goes the farthest toward
making life worthwhile,
That costs the least and does the most, is
2) Begin with a question Do you think a smile will make people beautiful? Would you like to smile? As we all know, we can benefit from smile a lot...
pre-writing
pre-writing
while-writing
post-writing
Checking and polishing
ASSESSMENT Is the essay divided into parts? Structure Does each part have a topic sentence? Are all the details stated? Content Is everything to the point(切题)? Does the writer use any linking words? Are there any mistakes? Language Is there any advanced vocabulary? Are there any good sentence patterns?
while-writing
post-writing
Good beginnings
3) Begin with a generalization It’s universally acknowledged that smiling is