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第一章应用文写作推荐信1结构要点:推荐信是向收信人推荐某人做某事的信件,一般分为三个部分:1.指出被推荐的人及推荐的原因;2.介绍被推荐人的情况;3.总结说明被推荐人值得被推荐(例如能胜任工作)。
Directions 1Suppose you have been a private tutor of Mr. Wang s daughter for two years. But now you are going to graduate and so you recommend your friend Lily who is a sophomore to take the place of you. Write a letter to Mr. Wang in about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using Li Minginstead.Sample:Dear Mr. Wang,I am very sorry to tell you that I am going to graduate this June and cannot go on with my job asa tutor of your daughter. It has really been a pleasant experience to teach your daughter English as she is such a lovely and smart girl. Here I take great pleasure in recommending to you my friend Lily who is a sophomore majoring in English in my university. She is particularly willing to take the part time job of an English tutor when she knows about your daughter.Lily is an excellent student. Especially her spoken English is both fluent and proficient, which can positively influence the person speaking with her. Moreover, as a lively, cheerful and easy going girl, she is good at communicating with others.Therefore, I am confident that she is highly competent for the job and will help your daughter make further progress in English.Sincerely yours,Li Ming推荐信 2语言注意点:推荐信应多写被推荐人的优点,肯定其成绩。
考研英语考前30天狂背作文(三)(3)投诉信2语言注意点:投诉信应重点表明投诉的原因,叙事应客观、准确、简洁。
最后提出的解决方法应切实可行。
在表达自己的不满时,语言要把握分寸,不失风度。
Directions 16Write a letter to complain about an unhappy experience in about 100 words to describe the matter and ask for the mistake to be corrected. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using "Li Ming" instead.Sample:Dear Sir,I am writing to you about a most unhappy experience. Last Tuesday morning, we took a long route bus of your company from Dukou to Lijiang. The bus was scheduled to arrive in Lijiang at 7 o'clock in the evening, but it stopped midway at four p.m. for mechanical problems. The driver and the ticket seller could neither solve the problem by themselves nor seek help from others.Where we stopped was nowhere near a village. Up until 8 o'clock, another bus finally carried us to a shabby rural motel. We had to pay for our accommodation. The room was too small and the quilt was so dirty. To our surprise, when we just managed to sleep at around 2 a.m., the driver came to wake us up-the bus had been fixed!I suggest that you look into this matter immediately and deal with it quickly and properly.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming询问信1结构要点:询问信是希望获取信息的信件,分为三个部分:1.说明自己的计划或目的,也就是询问信息的原因;2.征询具体信息;3.期待回复并表示感谢。
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Directions 6Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should:1. describe the two pictures,2. interpret their meaning, and3. point out the consequences for this phenomenon.You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.审题:在写作中,审题这个环节是非常重要的。
在图画作文中,我们不仅要仔细审视图画,而且还应将英文的提纲看清楚。
这篇文章配了双图,双图多是表示对比关系,这里是凸显时间的先后。
提纲包括三个部分:描写图画、阐释含义和指出后果,这就决定了我们文章的结构走向。
Sample:Two pictures above describe a story which we would never wish to encounter. In the first one, a large crowd gathered around a man lying on the ground. One person said, “He seems to be drunk.” Another whispered, “His head and hands seem to be bleeding.” In the second picture, a policeman is asking those who were present, “Why didn’t send him to hospital?” The first one said, “I was hurrying to work.” The second one said, “I was hurrying to school.”It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to this most unfavorable social phenomenon. Many people are used to finding all kinds of excuses to shirk their responsibilities of helping those who are in need of help. In their eyes, their own daily businesses are always more important than those of the strangers, even their lives.This phenomenon will bring a series of harmful consequences. First, when people refuse to take care of the strangers, the danger of accidents will be much higher, because you have only a small group of people to rely on whenever emergency arises. Everyone may come across accidents from time to time, and mutual help will prevent most of them from being destructive. Second, the possibility of attaining a happy life will be much smaller. If everyone only takes his own interests into consideration in face of big events, the society will be full of selfish people. The social cost of achieving success will remain high before cooperation becomes a habit.If any one of us wants to enjoy a happy and secure life, we have to be prepared to extend our helping hands to others including strangers, for helping others is equal to helping ourselves.点评:这篇文章最终写成了四段,结构非常清晰。
考研前30天成功试卷(英语)试卷1Section I Use of EnglishDirections:Read the following text. Choose the best word (s) for each numbered blank and mark A, B, C or D on ANSWER SHEET 1. (10 points)In October 2002, Goldman Sachs and Deutsche Bank 1 a new electronic market for economic indices that 2 substantial economic risks, such as nonfarm payroll (a measure of job availability) and retail sales. This new market was made possible by a 3 rating technology, developed by Longitude, a New York company providing software for financial markets, 4 the Parimutuel Digital Call Auction. This is "digital" 5 of a digital option: ie, it pays out only if an underlying index lies in a narrow, discrete range. In effect, Longitude has created a horse race, where each "horse" wins if and 6 the specified index falls in a specified range. By creating horses for every possible 7 of the index, and allowing people to bet 8 any number of runners, the company has produced a liquid integrated electronic market for a wide array of options oneconomic indices.Ten years ago it was 9 impossible to make use of electronic information about home values. Now, mortgage lenders have online automated valuation models that allow them to estimate values and to 10 the risk in their portfolios. This has led to a proliferation of types of home loan, some of 11 have improved risk-management characteristics.We are also beginning to see new kinds of 12 for homes, which will make it possible to protect the value of 13, for most people, is the single most important 14 of their wealth. The Yale University-Neighbourhood Reinvestment Corporation programme, 15 last year in the city of Syracuse, in New York state, may be a model for home-equity insurance policies that 16 sophisticated economic indices of house prices to define the 17 of the policy. Electronic futures markets that are based on econometric indices of house prices by city, already begun by City Index and IG Index in Britain and now 18 developed in the United States, will enable home-equity insurers to hedge the risks that they acquire by writing these policies.These examples are not impressive successes yet. But they 19 as early precursors of a technology that should one day help us to deal with the massive risks of inequality that 20will beset us in coming years.1. [A] created [B] generated [C] initiated [D] originated2. [A] reproduce [B] restore [C] represent [D] resume3. [A] sophisticated [B] expensive [C] available [D] established4. [A] made [B] called [C] asked [D] read5. [A] in the course [B] in the event [C] in the light [D] in the sense6. [A] when [B] until [C] now that [D] only if7. [A] extent [B] range [C] line [D] area8. [A] for [B] in [C] on [D] up9. [A] virtually [B] admittedly [C] absolutely [D] originally10. [A] assume [B] assess [C] dismiss [D] erase11. [A] them [B] which [C] that [D] whom12. [A] management [B] insurance [C] security [D] technology13. [A] what [B] those [C] where [D] it14. [A] guarantee [B] protection [C] component [D] source15. [A] secured [B] sponsored [C] released [D] launched16. [A] look to [B] set up [C] lay down [D] rely on17. [A] terms [B] specifications [C] concepts [D]consequences18. [A] is [B] being [C] been [D] are19. [A] emerge [B] appear [C] stand [D] arise20. [A] somehow [B] anyway [C] otherwise [D] therebySection II Reading ComprehensionPart ADirections:Read the following four texts. Answer the questions below each text by choosing A, B, C or D. Mark your answers on ANAWER SHEET 1 (40 points)Text 1The California Public Employees' Retirement System (CalPERS) has positioned itself as the premier champion of investor rights, regularly singling out bad managers at some of the nation's largest companies in its annual corporate-governance focus lists. And with $153 billion under management, Wall Street tends to listen when CalPERS speaks out. But the country's largest pension fund has never taken on as big a fish as it did Dec. 16, when it filed a class action against the New York Stock Exchange and seven of its member firms. CalPERS' suit charges the NYSE and specialist firms with fraud, alleging that the exchange skirted its regulatory dutiesand allowed its members to trade stocks at the expense of investors.The move is a major slap in the face for the NYSE's recently appointed interim Chairman John Reed. The former Citibank chairman and CEO came on board in September after the exchange's longtime head, Richard Grasso, resigned under pressure over public outrage about his excessive compensation.Reed has been widely criticized by CalPERS and other institutional investors for not including representatives of investors on the exchange's newly constituted board and not clearly separating the exchange's regulatory function from its day-to-day operations. The CalPERS lawsuit is evidence that the investment communities' dissatisfaction hasn't ebbed. "Our hopes were dashed when Mr. Reed didn't perform," says Harrigan.The suit alleges that seven specialist firms profited by abusing and overusing a series of trading tactics. The tactics, which are not currently illegal, include "penny jumping," where a firm positions itself between two orders to capture a piece of the price differential, "front running," which involves trading in advance of customers based on confidential informationobtained by their orders, and "freezing" the firm's order book so that the firm can make trades on its own account first.Many of the suit's allegations are based on a previously disclosed investigation of the exchange conducted by the Securities Exchange Commission. According to the suit, the October SEC report found "serious deficiencies in the NYSE's surveillance and investigative procedures, including a habit of ignoring repeat violations by specialist firms."The suit highlights the growing frustration that institutional investors have expressed with what they perceive as a system that needs to be revamped ——if not eliminated. According to California State Comptroller Steve Westley, a CalPERS board member who participated in the Dec. 16 press conference, he has repeatedly called on the NYSE to end its use of specialist firms to facilitate trades and move to a system of openly matching of buyers and sellers. BLIND EYE? "There's no reason not to move to a fully automated exchange," Westley says. "Every exchange in the world is using such a system. The time is now for the NYSE to move into the 21st century and remove the cloud that there's self-dealing working against investors."21. What does the word"a fish"(Para. 1) probably referto?A. CalPERS.B.pension fund.C. Wall Street.D. NYSE.22. The CalPERS lawsuit indicates that ____.A. the NYSE did ignore its regulatory dutiesB. John Reed should resign like his predecessorC. the investors were dissatisfied with the NYSED. the exchange should have its board reelected23. Which of the following statements is Not true?A. Investors were not sufficiently represented on NYSE's board.B. The seven specialist firms made profits by illegal procedures.C. CalPERS's suit against the NYSE resulted largely from a SEC's report.D. NYSE had ignored the firms' improper operations for a long time.24. According to Westley, NYSE's problem results from ____.A. its reliance on specialist firmsB. its system of matching tradersC. its automated exchangeD. its violation of investors' interests25. The best title for the text may be ____.A.Champion of investor rightsB.Seven specialist firmsC.CalPERS speaks out to Wall Streetwsuits against NYSEText 2Multifunction superpills aren't nearly as farfetched as they may sound. And reducing such serious risks to heart health as soaring cholesterol, diabetes, and high blood pressure potentially could save many lives and be highly lucrative for drug companies. A combo pill from Pfizer (PFE ) of its hypertension drug Norvasc and cholesterol-lowering agent Lipitor "could have huge potential," says Shaojing Tong, analyst at Mehta Partners. "Offering two functions in one pill itself is a huge convenience."If such pills catch on, they could generate significant revenues for drug companies. In Pfizer's case, the goal is to transfer as many qualified patients as possible to the combo pill. Norvasc's patents expire in 2007, but Pfizer could avoid losing all its revenues from the drug at once if it were part of a superpill. Sena Lund, an analyst at Cathay Financial, sees Pfizer selling $4.2 billion worth of Norvasc-Lipitor by 2007. Thatwould help take up the slack for falling sales of Lipitor, which he projects will drop to $5 billion in 2007, down from $8 billion last year.Pfizer argues that addressing two distinct and serious cardiovascular risk factors in one pill has advantages. People with both hypertension and high LDL cholesterol (the "bad" kind) number around 27 million in the U.S., notes Craig Hopkinson, medical director for dual therapy at Pfizer, and only 2% of that population reaches adequate treatment goals. Taking two treatments in one will increase the number of patients who take the medications properly and "assist in getting patients to goal," he says.Doctors also may be quick to adopt Norvasc-Lipitor, Pfizer figures, because it's made up of two well-studied drugs, which many physicians are already familiar with. But Dr. Stanley Rockson, chief of consultative cardiology at Stanford University Medical Center, says fixed-dose combination pills represent "an interesting crossroads" for physicians, who are typically trained to "approach each individual problem with care." Combining treatments would challenge doctors to approach heart disease differently. But better patient compliance is important enough, says Rockson, that heexpects doctors to be open to trying the combined pill.Some other physicians are more skeptical. "If you want to change dosage on one of the new pill's two drugs, you're stuck," fears Dr. Irene Gavris, professor of medicine at Boston University School of Medicine. She says she would feel most comfortable trying the combination pill on patients who "have been on the drugs for a while" and are thus unlikely to need changes in dosage.As usual, economics could tip the scales. Patients now taking both Lipitor and Norvasc "could cut their insurance co-pay in half" by switching to the combo drug, Gavris notes. That's a key advantage. Controlling hypertension, for instance, can require three or more drugs, and the financial burden on patients mounts quickly. If patients also benefit ——as Pfizer and other drug companies contend ——making the switch to superpills could be advantageous for everyone.26. Pfizer could avoid the loss caused by expiration of Norvasc's patents by ____.A. reducing the various risks to heart healthB. switching the patients to the superpillsC. offering greater convenience to patientsD. increasing the sales of Lipitor27. Which of the following is Not one of the advantages of superpills?A. Lessening several risks to the heart at the same time.B. Restoring the lost body functions of the patients.C. Contributing enormously to the income of drug companies.D. Helping more patients to reach treatment goals.28. The fourth paragraph is intended mainly to _____.A. contrast different responses to combopillsB. explain Pfizer's expectation of doctors' supportC. illustrate doctors' possible reception of combopillsD. stress the importance of patient compliance29. It can be inferred from the text that ____.A. doctors' approval is decisive for the invention of medicinesB. drug companies will benefit a lot from the new pills financiallyC. different people exhibit different attitudes toward the new pillsD. switch in medications is up to a combination of factors30. The author's attitude towards superpills can best be described as one of _____.A. approvalB. neutralC. toleranceD. disapprovalText 3After their 20-year-old son hanged himself during his winter break from the University of Arizona five years ago, Donna and Phil Satow wondered what signs they had overlooked, and started asking other students for answers.What grew from this soul searching was Ulifeline, a Web site where students can get answers to questions about depression by logging on through their universities. The site has been adopted as a resource by over 120 colleges, which can customize it with local information, and over 1.3 million students have logged on with their college ID's."It's a very solid Web site that raises awareness of suicide, de-stigmatizes mental illness and encourages people to seek the help they need," said Paul Grayson, the director of counseling services at New York University, which started using the service nearly a year ago.The main component of the Web site is the Self-E-Valuator, a self-screening program developed by DukeUniversity Medical Center that tests students to determine whether they are at risk for depression, suicide and disorders like anorexia and drug dependence. Besides helping students, the service compiles anonymous student data, offering administrators an important window onto the mental health of its campus.The site provides university users with links to local mental health services, a catalog of information on prescription drugs and side effects, and access to Go Ask Alice, a vast archive developed by Columbia University with hundreds of responses to anonymously posted inquiries from college students worldwide. For students concerned about their friends, there is a section that describes warning signs for suicidal behavior and depression.Yet it is hard to determine how effective the service is. The anonymity of the online service can even play out as a negative. "There is no substitute for personal interaction (个人互动才能解决) ," said Dr. Lanny Berman, executive director of the American Association of Suicidology, based in Washington.Ulifeline would be the first to say that its service is no replacement for an actual therapist. "The purpose is to findout if there are signs of depression and then direct people to the right places," said Ron Gibori, executive director of Ulifeline.Mrs. Satow, who is still involved with Ulifeline, called it "a knowledge base" that might have prevented the death of her son, Jed. "If Jed's friends had known the signs of depression, they might have seen something," she said.31. The first paragraph is written to ____.A. report the suicide of a young manB. show the suffering of Mr. And Mrs. SatowC. describe the Satows' confusion over their son's deathD. introduce the topic of a website called Ulifeline32. One reason that many colleges adopt the website is to ____.A. provide their students with campus informationB. offer medical treatment to students in mental disorderC. encourage their students to seek advice about depressionD. give their students various help they may need33. Go Ask Alice as mentioned in the passage is ____.A. a side effect caused by some prescription drugsB. intended to counsel college students on mentalproblemsC. a collection of medical responses from students the world overD. meant to describe the various signs of mental disorders34. The first sentence of the sixth paragraph implies that ____.A. only actual therapy can ensure adequate treatmentB. the help given by the web service is doubtfulC. doctors have expressed a negative view of the serviceD. a therapist's office is the first place for the depressed to go35. Mrs. Satow would probably agree that ____.A. Jed's friends can prevent her son's deathB. her son's suicide is unavoidableC. Ulifeline is a worthwhile websiteD. depression is the final cause of suicidesText 4The meanings of "science" and "technology" have changed significantly from one generation to another. More similarities than differences, however, can be found between the terms. Both science and technology imply a thinkingprocess, both are concerned with causal relationships in the material world, and both employ an experimental methodology that results in empirical demonstrations that can be verified by repetition. Science, at least in theory, is less concerned with the practicality of its results and more concerned with the development of general laws, but in practice science and technology are inextricably involved with each other. The varying interplay of the two can be observed in the historical development of such practitioners as chemists, engineers, physicists, astronomers, carpenters, potters, and many other specialists. Differing educational requirements, social status, vocabulary, methodology, and types of rewards, as well as institutional objectives and professional goals, contribute to such distinctions as can be made between the activities of scientists and technologists; but throughout history the practitioners of "pure" science have made many practical as well as theoretical contributions.Indeed, the concept that science provides the ideas for technological innovations and that pure research is therefore essential for any significant advancement in industrial civilization is essentially a myth. Most of the greatest changes in industrial civilization cannot be traced to the laboratory.Fundamental tools and processes in the fields of mechanics, chemistry, astronomy, metallurgy, and hydraulics were developed before the laws governing their functions were discovered. The steam engine, for example, was commonplace before the science of thermodynamics elucidated the physical principle underlying its operations.In recent years a sharp value distinction has grown up between science and technology. Advances in science have frequently had their bitter opponents, but today many people have come to fear technology much more than science. For these people, science may be perceived as a serene, objective source for understanding the eternal laws of nature, whereas the practical manifestations of technology in the modern world now seem to them to be out of control.Many historians of science argue not only that technology is an essential condition of advanced, industrial civilization but also that the rate of technological change has developed its own momentum in recent centuries. Innovations now seem to appear at a rate that increase geometrically, without respect to geographical limits or political systems. These innovations tend to transform traditional cultural systems, frequently with unexpected social consequences.Thus technology can be conceived as both a creative and a destructive process.36. Science is, as the author argues, similar to technology in that ____.A. it involves a long process of changeB. it focuses on the casual aspects of the material worldC. it resorts to experiments as an exclusive method of researchD. it is concerned about the theoretical development37. Which of the following does the author NOT agree with?A. Scientific activities are deeply involved with those of technology.B. Industrial civilization is largely based on the scientific progress.C. Science and technology move forward at a comparable speed.D. Either of science and technology is necessary for the advance of each other.38. The example of the steam engine is presented to ____.A. refute the belief that industrial progress feeds off scientific ideasB. illustrate the remarkable achievements of industrial civilizationC. indicate that many great inventions originate from the laboratoryD. laws come out much earlier than related functions39. What does"the practical manifestations…out of control"(Para.3) mean?A. Technology is losing its traditional practicality.B. Technology is moving further away from science.C. Technological progress is benefiting the whole world.D. Technology is threatening the existence of human civilization.40. The"historians"as mentioned in the last paragraph regard the technology with ____.A. absolute enthusiasmB. total indifferenceC. obvious resentmentD. reserved approvalPart BDirections:In the following article, some sentences have been removed. For Questions 41—45, choose the most suitable onefrom the list A—G to fit into each of the numbered blank. There are two extra choices, which do not fit in any of the gaps. Mark your answers on ANSWER SHEET 1. (10 points) The patriotic outpouring that followed the World Trade Center and Pentagon attacks—80 percent of Americans displayed the flag on their car, house, or lapel—brought hopes of renewed voter interest. Yet turnout in this year's congressional primaries was a mere 17 percent, no better than four years ago and only half that of three decades ago. Turnout in Tuesday's election is expected to be less than 40 percent, significantly below what it once was.41) _______________________________________________________. But it's time to stop blaming the citizens. Candidates, public officials, and journalists are not giving Americans the type of campaign they deserve.America's politicians have also managed to invent the most unappetizing campaigns imaginable. If equivalent offerings were served at restaurants, Americans would never eat out. Attack ads have doubled in frequency since the 1770s and now account for a majority of the ads featured prominently in campaigns. Many of the attacks are so twisted that even a whiff of fresh air would topple them.42) ____________________________________________________.And where are the news media? They're so enamored of infotainment and sensationalism that they can't find time for the midterm elections. In the 1998 midterms, coverage was down by more than half over 1994. And it's falling again—a comparison of news coverage in 10 states shows the midterm election is getting 13 percent less coverage this year than in 1998.When Journalists deign to cover elections, they magnify the very things they rail against. Candidates are ignored or portrayed as boring if they run issue-based campaigns. Attack sound bites get airtime; positive statements land on the cutting-room floor. 43) ____________ _________________________________.It's not surprising voters are disenchanted with campaigns. During the 2000 election, as part of the Vanishing Voter Project at Harvard University's Shorenstein Center on the Press, Politics and Public Policy, we interviewed 100,000 Americans to discover why they're disengaging from elections.44) _________________________________________________________.Officials unfailingly urge citizens"to do your duty and vote."Yet, these officials embrace policies that make it harderto do that. 45) ____________________________________.So look for a small turnout Tuesday, but don't ask citizens to look in the mirror. Some or them have cast their eye on what's going on in candidate—land media—land and are asking why they should be bit players in that artifice.[A] Electoral competition is key to democracy, and America's voters aren't getting the full benefit of that. Only a couple of dozen of this year's 435 US House races are competitive. Two years ago, 98.5 percent of incumbents won, typically by margins of 70 percent or more.[B] True leadership has become so rare that politicians may no longer even dream of stepping forward to say something other than what polls tell them is safe. Tuesday's election will surely pass without much of a debate on the momentous foreign and domestic issues facing the nation.[C] Amid the uproar over Florida's ballot irregularities, no commentator has seen fit to ask why polls there close at 7 p.m. Florida is one of 26 states that close their polls before 8 p.m. Unsurprisingly, turnout in these states is several percentage points below that of states where polls are open until 8 p.m. or later.[D] As for trivial issues, why did candidate Bush's 1970sdrunk—driving arrest get more time on the network newscasts in the final days of the 2000 election than Gore's foreign policy statements got in the entire general election?[E] No doubt, ordinarily Americans share responsibility for their lapse in participation; it is always easier to leave the work of democracy to others.[F] Today, 87 percent of Americans reside in states that close registration two weeks or more before the election. The majority of unregistered Americans who otherwise would cast a vote are out of luck. Only six states allow election—day registration.[G] Their responses tell the story: 81 percent believe"most political candidates will say almost anything to get themselves elected"; 75 percent feel"political candidates are more concerned with fighting each other than with solving the nation's problems".Part CDirections:Read the following text carefully and then translate the underlined segments into Chinese. Your translation should be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Why has global inequality increased? The answer is infour parts: (1) faster economic growth in developed OECD countries than developing countries as a group; (2) faster population growth in developing countries than in OECD countries; (3) slow growth of output in rural China, rural India, and Africa; and (4) rapidly widening output and income differences between urban China on the one hand, and rural China and rural India on the other.These trends in turn have deeper causes. (46) Technological change and financial liberalization result in a disproportionately fast increase in the number of households at the extreme rich end, without shrinking the distribution at the poor end. Population growth, meanwhile, adds disproportionately to numbers at the poor end. (47) These deep causes yield an important intermediate cause that makes things worse: the prices of industrial goods and services exported from high-income countries are increasing faster than the prices of goods and services exported by low-income countries, and much faster than the prices of goods and services produced in low-income countries that do little international trade.These price trends mean that the majority of the population of poor countries are able to buy fewer and fewerof the goods and services that enter into the consumption patterns of rich-country populations. The poorer countries and the poorer two-thirds of the world's population therefore suffer a double marginalization: once through incomes, again through prices.(48) The result is a lot of unemployed and angry young people, to whom new information technologies have given the means to threaten the stability of the societies they live in and even to threaten social stability in countries of the wealthy zone. Economic growth in these countries often depletes natural capital and therefore future potential. More and more people see migration to the wealthy zone as their only salvation.It is striking that most of the organized opposition to more globalization comes from North America, Western Europe and Oceania. (49) Why have elites from developing countries for the most part subscribed to the globalization agenda that western states, businesses, and multilateral organizations have been promoting, if a case can be made that the gains of free markets for goods and capital tend to be concentrated in the top levels of the income distributions of their countries? Why are they doing so little to integrate their。
2022届高考英语考前30天终极冲刺考前必背高分作文范文18篇1.写人记叙文(2020年全国1卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。
请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括:1.人物简介;2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The Person I respectThere are many respectable people around us. Among them, our English teacher is regarded as my favourite one.To begin with, my English teacher is a typical charming lady as you can imagine, slim figure, fair skin as well as infectious beautiful smile. But most importantly, far behind her outstanding appearance, it is her fabulous teaching ability and empathetic feature that make her respectable. She has a talent for teaching, always making her class lively. Following her steps, we can learn English with great pleasure while receiving good grades. Meanwhile, she is the one that you can rely on, can turn to and can share everything with. She is not only a respectable teacher who does huge benefit to you, but also a lifetime friend you ought to cherish.That is my English teacher, my most respectable person. She is the star glowing with high school experience. She is the fragrant rose that beautifies my life.2.记事记叙文A(2020年全国Ⅱ卷)上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。
考研英语作文:疯狂背诵30篇(03)Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:1. describe the drawing,2. analyze the reasons why it is difficult for university graduates to find a job, and3. point out the possible ways to solve the problem.You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.审题:《招员工七名》这篇文章关注的是当前重要的就业难问题。
它的要求非常明确,在描述图画后,先给出原因,再给出解决办法,这是非常常见的文章模式。
Sample:The recruiting fair in the above drawing is filled with young graduates each holding a pile of resumes in their hands. Around a desk in the front of the drawing, there are dozens of students waiting to hand in theirresumes but only seven are wanted by the company as is written on a board beside the desk.It is clear that the drawer wants to draw our attention to the difficulty that today s university graduates are faced with in finding a job. In fact, in many universities and colleges, the employment rate of graduates is lower than 50% and much fewer can find a satisfactory job. The reasons for this situation can be listed as follows. In the first place, the enrolment expansion of universities and colleges has resulted in a great increase in the number of graduates every year, which has exceeded the increase in positions in the job market. What makes things worse is that quite a lot of students like to choose those hot majors when they enter the university and to look for jobs in big developed cities when they graduate. So it is even more difficult for them tofind a suitable job.From my point of view, the society and the graduates need to join their hands in the endeavor to solve this problem. On the one hand, the societyshould continue to focus on economic development so as to provide bigger employment chances for the graduates. On the other hand, the students should choose the majors that they are really interested in and well capable of and broaden their horizon when looking for jobs. Only in this way can they gain larger space for their future career.点评:该文分为三段,第一段描述图画,第二段对此问题进行了小结,而后给出了原因。
英语作文考前必背Preparing for the English Essay Examination: Essentials to Memorize。
As we approach the momentous occasion of the English essay examination, it is imperative to equip ourselves with the necessary tools and strategies to ensure a successful performance. This essay will delve into the key aspectsthat one must bear in mind before taking the plunge into the world of essay writing.Firstly, it is crucial to understand the format and requirements of the essay. Different examinations may have different guidelines, so it is essential to familiarize oneself with the specific demands of the task. This includes knowing the word limit, the number of paragraphs expected, and the style of writing required. By having a clear understanding of these basics, one can plan and structure their essay effectively.Secondly, it is important to have a well-stockedarsenal of vocabulary and phrases. A rich vocabulary not only enhances the quality of writing but also allows for more precise and expressive communication. Memorizing key words and phrases related to the topic of the essay canhelp one express their ideas more effectively. Additionally, learning synonyms and antonyms can add variety to one's writing and prevent repetition.Thirdly, mastering the art of paragraph development is crucial. Each paragraph should have a clear topic sentence that introduces the main idea, followed by supportingdetails that elaborate on the topic. Transition words。
Direction 26Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:1. describe the picture;2. interpret the meaning of the picture;3. make your comments.You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.审题:这道题目属于哲理类的题目,可以用多种方法来说明图中所阐述的道理,文章的安排也有多种可能性。
我们可以采用一种比较独特的方式,先描述图表,在第二段中就所表达的内容进行提问,在第三段中以举例说明我们对该问题的理解和认识,最后在第四段做结。
Sample:A miserable picture unfolds before our eyes: a flood has destroyed a whole city. We can imagine the loss of lives and property. Under the picture, there was a thought provoking sentence: every drop of water says it is not responsible for the flood.This picture inevitably invites a series of questions: then who is responsible for the flood? Who has demolished the houses? Who has drowned the children?A good case in point is pollution. Twenty years ago, most rivers were so clean—the water was drinkable and so many people went swimming and fishing. Only two decades later, many of them became so polluted that we can no longer drink the water—fishes have died out and nobody ever swims in it or washes clothes by it. Every one of us never thinks the industrial waste or the living garbage we once damped into the river would cause so serious a result—today the harsh reality has become too hard to swallow.Finally we realize that every drop of water actually is responsible for the flood. Only if every citizen takes on his responsibility as a member of a family, a nation and the world can all of us wish to have a more beautiful future.点评:第一段对图表和图下的文字进行描述。
考前天作文狂背完整版 IMB standardization office【IMB 5AB- IMBK 08- IMB 2C】推荐信1(总1:原书P3-4)结构要点:推荐信是向收信人推荐某人做某事的信件,一般分为三个部分:1.指出被推荐的人及推荐的原因;2.介绍被推荐人的情况;3.总结说明被推荐人值得被推荐(例如能胜任工作)。
Directions: Suppose you have been a private tutor of Mr. Wang’s daughter for two years. But now you are going to graduate and so you recommend your friend Lily who is a sophomore to take the place of you. Write a letter to Mr. Wang in about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using Li Ming instead.Sample:Dear Mr. Wang,I am very sorry to tell you that I am going to graduate this June and cannot go on with my job as a tutor of your daughter. It has really been a pleasant experience to teach your daughter English as she is such a lovely and smart girl. Here I take great pleasure in recommending to you my friend Lily who is a sophomore majoring in English in my university. She is particularly willing to take the part-time job of an English tutor when she knows about your daughter.Lily is an excellent student. Especially her spoken English is both fluent and proficient, which can positively influence the person speaking with her. Moreover, as a lively, cheerful and easy-going girl, she is good at communicating with others.Therefore, I am confident that she is highly competent for the job and will help your daughter make further progress in English.Sincerely yours,Li Ming推荐信2(总2:原书P5-6)语言注意点:推荐信应对写被推荐人的优点,肯定其成绩。
考研英语复习诀窍+所有复习资料下载地址前几月也写过一个帖子,谈了医学考研的复习思路,好像已经石沉大海了。
今天又有学弟学妹问我考研心得,问我有没有什么窍门之类的,我苦想了3分钟,说“没有什么啊”。
现在想一想,研究生英语考了不错的分数,其中一定还是有些值得注意的东西吧,叫做窍门也好,经验也罢,总之拿出来,给大家开阔一下思路吧。
首先是要用多长时间复习英语,这是个问题。
应该说,我从来都没有完全丢开英语。
英语是一门语言,想提高英语成绩必须按照语言自身的规律。
首当其冲的就是培养对英语的兴趣。
有很多人在一开始就把英语视为仇敌,还有很多人从来都把英语丢在一边,到了要考试了才开始突击背单词、做阅读。
这些都是不对的,也不可能英语的高分。
如果你能在过去的1年里,经常看英文书报,杂志,小说,网站,听英文广播,英文歌,看欧美电影,那么你会有良好的语感。
事实证明,良好的语感对阅读和写作有太大的帮助了。
如果你能做到专业书尽量读英文版的,那么你的英语阅读水平一定了得了。
所以说,英语的复习是从平时的点滴积累中开始的。
没有平日的积累很难靠突击来提高多少成绩。
当然,考前的针对性复习的主要意义在于使你适应考试的氛围。
而且,临阵磨枪不快也光啊!其次,需要背多少单词?其实问这个问题就是错误的。
再一次,英语是一门语言。
考研大纲规定了大约5500个单词。
即使你对这5500个单词都很熟悉了,可能你读到考研英语阅读的文章还是会磕磕绊绊,而当你读到外国小说的时候你才会发现原来不认得的单词更多。
那么我们应该怎么看这5500单词呢?首先,这是一个基础。
当你达到这5500的词汇量的时候也意味着你对英语的构词法则有了一定的了解,对词根、词缀有了一定的认识,由此你可以在阅读中通过推测,派生等办法认得更多的单词。
但是单词本身毕竟不是语言,最终还是要回到语言中去。
我们中国人学外语还是主要以书面语言为主,所以,多阅读是唯一的出路。
我发现现在周围的人特别是工作以后,越来越没有阅读的习惯了。
30天复习考研英语作文1. Well, I think it's important to stay focused and motivated during the last 30 days of revising for the postgraduate entrance exam. It's a crucial time and we need to make the most of it.2. One thing I've found really helpful is to make a study schedule and stick to it. This helps to keep me on track and ensures that I cover all the necessary material before the exam.3. Another tip is to practice writing essays regularly. This not only helps to improve your writing skills, butalso familiarizes you with the exam format and requirements.4. It's also essential to take care of yourself during this time. Getting enough sleep, eating well, and taking regular breaks are all important for maintaining yourenergy and focus.5. I've also found it helpful to review past exam papers and identify any areas where I need to improve. This can help to target your revision and make sure you're fully prepared for the exam.6. Finally, it's important to stay positive and believe in yourself. Confidence can make a big difference in how you perform on the day of the exam. So, keep a positive attitude and believe in your abilities.。
考研英语作文:疯狂背诵30篇(05)Directions 5Study the following reportage carefully and write an essay in which you should:1. interpret the reportage,2. point out the reasons for the problem, and3. suggest possible ways to solve the problem.You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.题目:本报记者报道自20世纪70年代末以来,中国的离婚率持续上升。
离婚水平已超过邻国日本和韩国,与新加坡同属亚洲离婚率较高的国家。
这是近日中国社会科学院人口学专家唐灿发布的调研报告中指出的。
这份报告还写到,据2003年北京市统计年鉴公布的数据,2002年北京市的离婚总数为38756对,当年户籍人口为1136.3万,粗离婚率达到6.82‰;当年的结婚对数为76136对,由此计算离结率高达50.90%。
也就是说,这一年平均不到两对夫妻结婚就有一对夫妻离婚,北京市的离婚率已经成为全国最高。
审题:这是一道相当特殊的题目,是就一段汉语的新闻报道命题,提纲却是传统的模式。
这类形式题目出现的比率不大,我们在本书中穿插了个别这样的题目主要是为了拓展大家的视野,而且这类题目所涉及的主题也是非常重要的,很有可能以图画题或图表题等主流形式考察到。
Sample:According to the above news report, the divorce rate in China keeps increasing since 1970’s, and now is higher than that in Japan and Korea. It was also reported that the ratio of divorced couples to married couples reached 1 to 2 in 2002 in Beijing.From my point of view, the problem of high divorce rate in our country can be analyzed from three perspectives. To begin with, owing to economic development and women’s liberation, the traditional family mode has changed greatly. Now in most cases the two parties of a marriage are psychologically and economically independent. Second, because of the higher living standard and one?child policy, many young people have shaped a self?centered personality, which is liable to result in lack of mutual care and understanding. Third, when all the social members become more and more open?minded, people are less restricted to the traditional conception of marriage. Third parties, extramarital love and online marriage all pose great threats to the legal marriage.As we all know, healthy marriages are beneficial not only to the couples themselves, but also to the growth of the children and to the stability of the whole society. Therefore, it is worthwhile to make efforts to reduce the divorce rate. Before they get married, young couples should be emotionally and psychologically well prepared for all possible conditions and changes in marriage. Furthermore, school and family education should help enhance the sense of responsibility, which is not only the key to a healthy marriage but also to a successful career.点评:文章共分三段。
考研英语作文:疯狂背诵30篇(01)Directions1Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should:1. describe the two pictures,2. interpret their meaning, and3. point out the reasons for such phenomenon.You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.审题:这道题包含两幅对比鲜亮的图画,指令要求在描述图画后阐明含义并给出该现象的缘由。
我们应当这样来构造全文:第一段描述图画;其次段发表自己对图画的看法;第三段给出该现象的缘由;第四段下结论,简要提出解决问题的方法。
经过学习之后,大家就会知道这是一个极为重要的模式,请大家专心把握。
Sample:As is depicted by the two pictures, a sharp contrast is shaped between the parents and the son. In the left drawing, the parents are working hard in the field, bending over and sweating heavily. Near them is a basket with very simple food in it. However, in the right drawing, their son is squandering the money on luxurious food and chatting on mobile phone.How pitiful the parents are! They spare no efforts to earn money in order to support their sons study and life in university. They seem to be willing to do everything that is helpful to their beloved son. But, in return, the son spends the money as he likes without knowing how hard his parents work for it and how he should use it to better prepare himself for future career.In my opinion, the reasons for this phenomenon come down to one essential pointfailure of both family and school education. For one thing, quite a lot of Chinese parents spoil their children. All parents love for children is the same, but different is the way of showing it. Many parents hope too much that their children will have a bright future, which, in their eyes, means key universities, hot majors, good salaries and so on. So they try their best to satisfy the childrens demands instead of teaching them to struggle for future with their own hands. For another, centered on exam marks, the school education also fails, to a large extent, to impart moral standards to the children, especially the conception of self reliance and hard struggle.In a word, to change the phenomenon described by the above pictures, a reform in our current education system is not only necessary but urgent.点评:第一段的重点是在描述时突出两幅图画之间剧烈的反差,所以这里特地加上了第一句话。
考研英语考前30天狂背作文As the countdown to the postgraduate entrance Englishexam ticks away, the pressure to excel mounts. With just 30 days left, it's time to buckle down and focus on the essentials.The first step is to understand the structure of the essay, which is crucial for a coherent argument. Practice crafting introductions that hook the reader, followed by body paragraphs that support your thesis with clear examples.Vocabulary is the backbone of any essay. Spend time each day memorizing high-frequency words and phrases that arelikely to appear in the exam. Remember, quality over quantity; knowing a few words well is better than a vague memory of many.Reading comprehension is a significant part of theEnglish exam. To improve, read a variety of texts daily, from newspapers to academic journals. This will not only expandyour vocabulary but also train your mind to understandcomplex sentences.Don't forget to practice writing under timed conditions. This simulates the exam environment and helps you manage your time effectively. Aim for clarity and conciseness in your writing, as this will make your essay easier to follow.Lastly, review past exam papers and model essays. This will give you insight into what examiners are looking for and help you to avoid common mistakes. Remember, practice makes perfect, and the more you write, the more confident you will become.Stay motivated and keep a positive mindset. The final stretch is the most challenging, but with determination and the right strategies, you can achieve your goal. Good luck on your journey to academic excellence!。
恩波〈考研英语考前 30天狂背作文〉下载十Direction 21Read the following story carefully and write an essay in which you should:1. retell the story briefly;2. interpret the meaning;3. make your comments.You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.题目:Where are we going?A boat docked in a tiny Mexican village. An American tourist complimented the Mexican fisherman on the quality of his fish and asked how long it took him to catch them. “Not very long,” answered the Mexican.“ But then, why didn t you stay out longer and catch more?” asked the American. The Mexican explained that his small catch was sufficient to meet his needs and those of his family.The American asked, “But what do you do with the rest of your time?”“ I sleep late, fish a little, play with my children, and take a siesta with my wife. In the evenings, I go into the village to see my friends, play the guitar, and sing a few songs...I have a full life.”The American interrupted, “I have an MBA from Harvard and I can help you! You should start by fishing longer every day. You can then sell the extra fish you catch. Withthe extra revenue, you can buy a bigger boat. With the extra money the larger boat will bring, you can buy a second one and a third one and so on until you have an entire fleet of trawlers. Instead of selling your fish to a middle man, you can negotiate directly with the processing plants and maybe even open your own plant. You can then leave this little village and move to Mexico City, Los Angeles, or even New York City! From there you can direct your huge enterprise.”“ How long would that take?” asked the Mexican. “ Twenty, perhaps twenty five years,” replied the American. “ And after that?”“ Afterwards? That s when it gets really interesting,” answered the American, laughing. “ When your business gets really big, you can start selling stocks and make millions!”“ Millions? Really? And after that?”“ After that you ll be able to retire, live in a tiny village near the coast, sleep late, play with your children, catch a few fish, take a siesta, and spend your evenings enjoying your friends! ”审题:在本书的大作文中, 我们不仅为大家提供了图画题和图表题, 还提供了一些比较特殊的题目, 比如这篇看文章写作。
通知 1结构要点:通知的目的是传递信息或分配工作,包含内容、时间和地点。
如果是活动,应包含参加的人员范围;如果是讲座或报告,应包含演讲人的简介。
Directions 25Write a notice in about 100 words to inform the students and English teachers of a lecture on Australian studies.Sample:NOTICEWe are very honored to invite Prof. Richard Gilbert from SydneyUniversity to give us a lecture on Sino Australian relationship in the new millennium. Prof. Gilbert graduated from AustralianNationalUniversity in 1979 and has been teaching Australian studies for more than 20 years. He has become a leading expert in this field and has published several books and numerous papers on such topics as Australian economy, education and foreign policy. His humorous and thought provoking speech will surely benefit all the audience.The lecture will be given at Yifu Auditorium from 7 to 9 o’clock next Thursday evening. All the teachers and students are welcome to attend this lecture.English DepartmentAugust 27, 2005通知 2语言注意点:通知必须用简练、准确的语言传递信息。
)2(高考英语作文满分必备天:30考前【英语】非常有用策略指导:长句有风险,使用需谨慎。
高级句型:如何表达重要性热点作文:光盘行动,减少浪费◎策略指导经过多年对学生的英语作文批阅,很多好学生感叹“怀才不遇”,自己的作文总是得不到高分,为此忿忿不平。
为赋新词强说愁,是好学生写作文时最容易犯的通病。
这些学生喜欢卖弄一些高级词汇和复杂结构,误以为高级词汇和复杂结构越多,作文就会显得越有档次。
于是在写作文时,就一门心思地堆砌辞藻,刻意制造复杂句,把简单的问题复杂化,结果弄巧成给阅卷老师留下班门弄斧的坏印象。
就是有故意炫耀之嫌,不是造成行文晦涩难懂,拙,在追求高级词汇和复杂结构的过程中,存在的主要问题有:.吃不透高级词汇的用法。
1 不要倡导人们用餐时吃光盘中的所有食物,“光盘运动”中文大浪费。
意when food the up eat topeople 不当表advocates campaign The having meals 达简单表 the food calls on people to eat upThe campaignwhen... 达 food the upeat to people asks publicly campaign The when... the food appeals to people to eat upThe campaignwhen... 高级表达 advocates campaign The the upeat should people that food when….很少后接动词不定式的复动名词或从句,但是它后接名词、是高级词汇,Advocate do…to someone on 合结构。
当表示提倡某人做某事时,我们可以使用以下结构:call appeal to someone to do…,在考试中,我们宁缺毋滥,宁愿舍弃高级表达,也要或确保正确,减少犯错误的几率.表达高级,但词不达意。
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Directions 11Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should:1. describe the two pictures,2. give the reasons of such a phenomenon, and3. list possible solutions.You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.审题:这篇文章的结构很典型,而选择的写法却很特殊——我们选择兼顾图画所体现的两方面的问题,即自私和违反规则两个方面。
如果第一段这样来点明,那么第二段和第三段均应这样展开,使文章形成一个有机的整体。
Sample:In the first picture, two persons are talking loudly in the library as if they were the only persons there. In the second picture, a man is talking happily on the phone in the cinema, while a film is on. From these two pictures, we come across such people who are so selfish as to always think of themselves instead of others on the one hand, and who are so bold as to defy those rules and regulations on the other hand.Why do they behave in this way? On the one hand, they are brought up in such a way as to take their own interests into consideration whenever anything arises. This may not be the original purpose of parents and teachers, but this is largely the result of today’s education. Children learn from what adults do, not what they say. Years of teaching in class and family may tell them how to do, but hours of real life practice may be more influential. On the other hand, they are brought up in such a way as not to take rules and regulations seriously. In their belief, rules and regulations only restrain those silly people, and the violation of them can be both exciting and admirable.To solve this problem, all of us have a long way to go. First, teachers and parents should act in such a way to teach young children to always take others into consideration whenever they take action. Second, the authorities should severely punish anyone who violates rules and regulations. To protect the rights of more people, such punishment is more than necessary.点评:第一段先用两句话描述两幅图画,而后用一句话做总结,用on the one hand和on the other hand将问题的两个方面清晰地表达了出来。
第二段的首句没有使用传统的表示原因的模板句,如The reasons for this phenomenon are twofold / threefold.而是用了一个设问句,使行文显得生动活泼。
之后分两个方面来说明为何他们会自私和不遵守规则。
第三段首句是典型的办法类的模板句。
而后分两方面来说解决问题的办法,与第一段、第二段严格对应。
心得:这篇文章给我们留下的最大的印象就是前后呼应,三段采用了同样的结构,这样读来自然觉得流畅。
就句子写作而言,内部突出对比的句子总是给人留下深刻的印象,下面我们就以第二段的第一点为例来说明。
这一点分四句话,后三句都属于句内表示对比的情形。
第二句话一针见血——这不一定是父母和老师的初衷,但却是今天教育的结果。
大家自然要想,为何结果偏离了初衷呢?下面接着说,孩子们学的是大人的做法,而不是说法。
这句话简练、深刻。
下面一句最为精彩,多年的学校和家庭教育告诉他们如何去做,而数小时的实践可能更加有影响力。
这明确地说明,只有投入了真实的生活之中,孩子们才能真正有所体会,才能真正成长。
没有真实生活的洗礼,孩子们又怎能了解人生的真理,怎能为他人考虑呢?好的句子是深入思索(思想方面)和不断练习(语言方面)相结合的结果,只要我们不懈努力,总有达到“何意百炼钢,化为绕指柔”的那一天。
Directions 12Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:1. describe the picture,2. interpret their meaning, and3. make your comment on this phenomenon.You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.审题:这篇文章配的图很简单,而意义却是深刻的。
提纲的第二部分和第三部分分别是阐释含义和做出评论,我们可以分成三块来写:提出问题——从两方面分析——下结论。
这样文章包含开始描述图画的部分就有了四个部分。
笔记本电脑可以写作laptop computer, portable computer, notebook computer, notebook PC,在文中应替换使用。
Sample:In the above picture a university student is phoning his mother, “In order to make progress in my study, I want to buy a laptop computer.”Is a laptop computer indispensable? Does a laptop computer mean greater possibility of academic excellence? Does a student without a laptop computer have no chance of success? It is obvious that the drawer wants all of us to think deeply before providing the answer. To reach a reasonable conclusion, we should analyze this problem from two perspectives.On the one hand, we cannot guarantee that the student will use the portable computer solely for study related purposes. Most of them have not lived independently, so they do not know how hard it is to make a living. Once they have the computer at hand, those students who lack selfcontrol may be indulged in computer games or online chatting, which will waste their time and affect their health.On the other hand, a student without a notebook computer can also be a top student. Sometimes students do need computers to finish assignments, and the computer rooms on campus can often meet that purpose. For those students whose majors call for frequent use of computers, they also can buy the desktop one, which is much cheaper.After careful consideration, we should say that the luxurious learning equipment such as a laptop computer is not necessary unless the parents can easily afford it and the student uses it only to facilitate his work and study.点评:大家可能会问:出题人是让我们就题论题写笔记本电脑呢,还是推衍开去泛泛而论这样的奢侈类学习用品呢?在这里我们写成两种情形都是可以的,范文中是先就笔记本电脑展开提问和思索,最后做结时用了“诸如笔记本电脑的奢侈型学习用品”的字眼。