7 书写是否工整美观？
评价标准
Dear Danny,
美文赏析
I’m sorry to hear that you have so many problems,
and I’m glad to help you.
The first problem is you are too thin, I think you
Task 4 Make a report
My friend ____has a problem , he is_____ I think he should ___ and he should ___ If he ________ , he will ________
Dear Lily,
While –writing(写中)
class. What should I do ?Please help me.
Yours ,Danny
请你给你的朋友Danny 写一封回信，针对他的问题
提出建议，字数在60-80词左右.
审写作要求
审题
审体裁 应用文 审人称 第二人称
审时态 一般现在时
一般将来时
Dear Lily,
思维导图
Can you help me ? I have a lot of worries . I am too thin ,IIaammaallwwaayyssttiirreedd.. And I often feel
结果
I think you will be better in the future
Yours , Lily
Read your passage and check it
1 是否有开篇点题的句子？ 2 是否说明了“问题” 3 是否说明了“解决方法”? 4 是否说到了 “结果”? 5 有没有拼写错误? 6 是否有语法错误?
