2011年雅思写作高分全攻略

被动语态--雅思高分作文技巧雅思写作中备考同学总是因为句子的开头而苦恼，Thisis...这种简单句已经被雅思考生用烂了，并且没有任何高分内涵。

转换语法思路很重要，在句子开头时，被动语态可以被引入考虑。

被动语态在雅思高分作文技巧中占据了一个很重要的地位。

因为被动语态是雅思作文中的基础句式，它的作用很特别，可以表达出很多主动语态无法表达的内容，这一点在雅思小作文和大作文的议论文中的表现都尤为明显。

被动语态强调客观，强调客体，经常会出现在比较正式的，像是在新闻、商务、法律等英语文体中。

在这些文体中，被动语态都被广为使用。

雅思写作中的小作文图表题和大作文议论文都是比较正式的文体，所以我们也应该注意多用被动语态的使用，以赢得更高的分数。

尤其是在主语是泛指很多人或者大部分人这个方面，比如：To broaden vocabulary，we should read more native materials.可以更换为：To broaden vocabulary，more native materials should be read.Most people think that we should read more native materials to broadenvocabulary.可以更换为：It is widely believed that we should read more native materials tobroaden vocabulary.被动语态在从句、非谓语动词短语中都有可能用到，比如：It is important for nations all over the world to work hard together tocontrol the environment pollution.可以更换为：It is important for nations all over the world to work hard togetherto control the environment pollution.I am not sure whether all the college graduates can find jobs aftergraduation.可以更换为：I am not sure whether the college graduates can get employed aftergraduation.另外，被动语态也是中文和英文的一个显著区别，中文中本来是没有被动语态的，所以受汉化思维的影响很多考生不会想到这一点。

剑桥雅思11Test3雅思写作task2题目+范文剑11Test3雅思写作task2题目+范文Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.a)题目分析，包括写作中需要讨论的观点以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。

8要点1.考生要证明学习外语的原因是为了能够在国外找到工作或者旅游。

2.考生要阐释其他一些学习外语的原因。

3.对相关问题给出自己的观点。

8错误理解1.学生在讨论第一方观点的时候没有注意到only一词。

2.学生在写自己观点的时候过于机械，一定要站在某一方立场上进行说明。

b) 雅思写作范文一：For most people in modern society learning another language opens doors for travel and work in the country, or countries, where that language is spoken. Having been born in China, we learn English from a very young age and many of us have the desire to study, and potentially work in the West, particularly the UK or the US. These opportunities were not available to my grandparents, or even my parents, so my generation should feel lucky to have them and n ot feel blas é in the learning and eventual use of such a useful new life skill.There are still, however, a large number of people that although have the ability to speak a language other than their native tongue do not wish to leave their mother country, but instead are happy to use their language skills in the advancements of their own domestic career or maybe for international companies that wish to establish a base here.In my opinion, as a young adult having learned English andwishing to experience the world and different cultures and all the opportunities that my second language might bring I believe, that it would be a huge mistake if I were not to spend at least some time abroad. This may not mean I will want to live in another country, but it does mean I have the opportunity to should I desire it. Gaining a wide range of life experience, I think, is crucial to becoming a well- rounded member of society in general.对于现代社会的多数人来说，学习另外一门语言打开了去相应国家旅行或工作的大门。

雅思大作文分段思路总结一、雅思大作文分段思路如下：第一段：提出观点，引出话题。

根据提示性词语（比如I believe that...；I suggest that...），首先明确作者的观点，即认为什么是重要的、有价值的。

此处需要适当阐述观点，以便让读者了解作者的态度和看法。

第二段：阐述理由，展开论述。

这一段需要进一步阐述自己的观点，给出令人信服的理由来支撑观点。

分段展开，让论述更有条理。

第三段：比较异同，补充观点。

如果话题涉及两个事物，这一段可以比较它们的异同，并补充自己的观点。

分段展开，让论述更有条理。

第四段：总结观点，强调价值。

这一段可以总结前文所述的观点，并强调其价值或意义。

二、示例：2019年12月的题目作为例子：Nowadays people are living in a 'thrown-away' society where they use things for a short time and then throwaway. What cause this and what problem it may lead to?审题：利用1分钟弄清题目、类型。

包括：题目类型是什么?要求讨论的话题是什么?有几个问题?常见大作文题型有以下五个大类：To what extent do you agree or disagree?Discuss both views and give your opinion.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?What are the reasons and is there any solution can be taken?To what extent do you agree or disagree? Do you think it is a positive trend or negative?那么上题就是第四种报告说明类型的题目，讨论的话题就是人们用完就丢弃这种现象，两个问题：原因和影响利用3-5分钟列提纲好多考生在真实考试中会省略这一步，觉得费时间、没必要。

雅思作文题目详细分析题目：It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed without a job they enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (对于人们来说，失业比从事不喜欢的工作好。

你同意还是不同意这个观点?)首先，正方观点可以概括为，宁可不工作，也不要做自己不喜欢的工作。

我们不难分析到，如果一个人对自己的工作没有兴趣的话，那么每一份工作都将很难做长久，尤其在面对困难或者更好薪水的工作机会面前，很容易放弃现有工作，这无疑不利于个人职业以及公司的长远发展。

有关这个论点给一段例文：It is undeniable that engaging in a job without enjoyment hardly lasts long. This is mainly because they are more likely to give up and hunt for other job opportunities especially when encountering difficulties. With low motivation， employees tend to be reluctant to do their utmost when dealing with tasks in the workplace， which would be totally different from those who insist in discovering new areas and conquering obstacles due to inner motivation without being disturbed by outer hindrances or worries， such as a shortage of a grant or lower salaries.相反，反方观点是不论喜欢与否，都应该先做一份工作。

英语考试作文雅思写作高分攻略：雅思写作题目类型及思路分析进入雅思备考冲刺阶段，很多考生虽然做到了写作练习，但写作上依然存在很多问题，以至于越练越迷茫。

小站雅思君建议考生按照雅思写作题目类型复习和训练，对于雅思写作有一个全局的把握。

雅思写作题目类型：教育类 1. 教育应该包括哪些内容?母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? (050312提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开(个人与社会)，准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。

对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。

子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能?大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益?准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验?大学要不要扩招?中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育?要不要延长义务教育年限?要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学?老师要教学生如何判断是非吗?2. 学校的科目谁来选择?母题：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916)提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。

2011考研英语（一）写作真题详解及参考范文(2011-01-15 17:09:07)分类：考研复习标签：杂谈2011年考研英语已经尘埃落定，写作部分比起2010年超纲的“告示”和“变态”的火锅，难度大为降低，现解析如下。

Part A: 小作文Directions:Write a letter to a friend of yours to1) recommend one of your favorite movies and2) give reasons for your recommendation.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use”Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.(10 points)题目译文给你的一位朋友写一封信1）推荐你最喜欢的一部电影并2）给出推荐的原因。

真题详解令广大考生欣慰的是，2011年小作文并未考察大纲中已提到六年但并未考察过的摘要题型，也未考察2010年刚刚考察过的告示题型，而是考察了广大考生最为熟悉、从2005到2009已经连续五年考察的书信。

回顾刚刚过去的2010年，中国内地电影票房成功突破100亿元，成为旭日初升的朝阳产业。

从年中的《唐山大地震》、《盗梦空间》、《山楂树之恋》到年底的三大贺岁片《赵氏孤儿》、《让子弹飞》、《非诚勿扰2》，电影已经重新成为全民关注的话题。

今年的考研小作文即考察了“电影”这一热点话题。

本题属于推荐信，在拙著《2011考研英语高分写作》第64-65页详细讲解了推荐信的注意事项、写作方法，提供了经典范文及十大万能句型。

同时，该书76页提供的关于《八十天环游地球》的读书报告范文完全可以用于本文写作，下面的参考范文即由该文改写而成。

雅思写作必备高分技巧雅思写作想得高分，这些技巧不行不知道,今日我就给大家带来了雅思写作高分技巧，希望能够关怀到大家，下面我就和大家共享，来欣赏一下吧。

雅思写作想得高分这些技巧不行不知道一.词汇的问题很多同学在雅思写作的时候都会背很多高难的词汇，但这并不是雅思评分标准的核心。

他们想要知道的是你有没有精准的用到了这些词，把认识的词汇进行稳固了解才是真理。

如何做到这些呢，把6级词汇和雅思词汇拿出来，你会看到很多你认识的词，但真要说到用法，还是有很多不确定。

把这些单词整理下来，用例子和语义重新梳理一遍。

二.拓展词汇在做到精准的用词之后，就可以想想拓展词汇事情。

雅思写作的题材是特殊固定的，分类题材，在每一个分类里面找出常用的词汇。

背诵范文只是一个步骤，最关键的是在每个题材下面练习写一篇自己的文章，里面用到这些语句和词汇，仔细斟酌是否有用对这个词。

三.论述的重要性一篇文章写完最重要的是有没有自己的观点和认识，这也是雅思索官很看中的一个方面。

这时候论述的策论就很重要了，要考虑到扣题，也要考虑到完善的扩展连接自己观点。

这点对于词汇句式相对较好的人是要重点突破的一关，也是7分和6.5的分水岭。

2021年7月21日雅思写作真题回忆及范文题目为Some businesses find that new employees who just finish their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as work with others as a part of team.雅思小作文类型：流程图题目The diagram shows the how recycled paper is made雅思大作文类型：社会类题目：Some businesses find that new employees who just finish their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as work with others as a part of team.What do you think the causes of this problem?And how to solve this?范文来自雅思哥：Despite the high level of knowledge, employers today have found that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills needed in an office environment. This essay will analyze the main reason leading to the problem and offer some potential solutions to it.People with interpersonal skills are the people who can vary how they act and what they contribute. They notice the strengths and weaknesses of their group, and they adapt. However, schools and colleges or universities have failed to equip students with such applied skills. Instead, students are encouraged to focus on their academic subjects exclusively, because they are only evaluated by their academic performance which is essential to receiving an academic qualification. Unfortunately, many of them have turned into information recipients who acquire the knowledge in a passive way without truly developing abilities and skills required in today s job market. For high schools, educators should think more about how students are learning, rather than just what they are learning. Teaching should reflect the richnessof real-life interactions, and to give students experience in the kinds of settings that are going to be useful to them when they leave school. Assignments and curricula should integrate opportunities to work collaboralively. Group projects, for example, are valuable learning opportunities.In the higher education sphere, professors and administrators should encourage students to seek out real-world experiences. Colleges and universities could ask students to work cotlaboratively in the classroom and pursue internships and volunteer opportunities outside of it. Students should also look for critical growth opportunities within their extracurncular activities, rather than just viewing them as resume-fillers.To conclude, jobs requiring high levels of social interaction are growing. In order to help graduates better prepare for their future career, changes should be considered in the education system.雅思写作精简之道长难句请绕路雅思写作精简建议一：避开空洞的单词和词组1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关或重要的信息，完全可以删掉。

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略雅思写作第一部分满分攻略TASK 1写作三大步骤(1)审题:找出主要信息点，具体为两个任务:A: 辨别所要写图表的类型，是线状(line )，柱状(bar )，还是饼状(pie)等B: 找图表的主要内容，是人口变化，交通工具，受教育水平，或者是一项工艺的制作流程。

(2)构思:审题是对文章主要内容的一个大概认识，而构思就是对自己认识的进一步深化。

构思的主要任务为:分析图表的主要特征，弄清写作重点并选用适当的分析方法。

图表的主要特征是指其所描述现象或者问题的规律，并找出描述重点，不是图表上所出现的所有信息都要写出来，之后就是分析方法的选择，主要的分析方法有:数据分类，数据比较，平铺直叙法等，具体选哪种，需要根据图表的内容来确定。

(3)写作:写作是对前两个步骤的确认。

考生把自己的想法准确而详细的落实下来。

一般来说，这个部分的写作可以采用三或四段式:1)引言段(用简短的语言来描述图表的主要内容)。

一把来说,写作命题会给出的主要信息，如，The line chart below shows thegrowth of households with personal computers in the U.S.通过这句话，我们可以了解图表的主要信息，“美国每个家庭所拥有计算机量的增长变化。

”在这种情况下，考生可以重现组织一下这个具体，在中间加入一些具体的数字和变化年限等，使得阅卷老师一下就明白图表的主要内容。

引言段通用句式如下:This is a table / chart / (line线状 bar柱状pie饼状)graph whichdemonstrate / illustrate / reveal /depict/privide informationabout.............2)图表具体信息描述段:这个段落主要描写体现图表主要特征或总体变化规律的数据或信息，并用恰当的连接词语，如，on contrast , on theotherhand, however, like wise 等，把文章内容紧密的衔接起来。

剑桥雅思11test3写作范文真题解读大家在准备雅思考试的时候一定要参考一些比较官方的参考资料，这样对我们提高雅思成绩才有实用意义，下面小编给大家带来剑桥雅思11test3范文真题。

剑桥雅思11test3写作task1范文+真题Task11.图表类型：四条线的曲线图(line chart)2.主体段时态：一般过去时3.题目要求：结合折线图描述1967~2007年间，英国、瑞典、意大利和葡萄牙这四个国家人均二氧化碳排放量情况。

4.描述重点：①1967年和2007年排放量最多的是United Kingdom，分别为约11 metric tonnes和9 metric tonnes。

②United Kingdom和Sweden的排放量总体呈下降趋势;Italy和Portugal的排放量总体呈上升趋势。

Sweden的排放量在1977年达到峰值，约为11 metric tonnes，然后骤降，到2007年，排放量约为5 metric tonnes。

剑桥雅思11test3写作task2范文+真题Task2Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.1.话题和题型分类文化类;双边讨论题型2.题目分析为了出国旅行或者工作的需要学习外语是学习外语的唯一原因or 人们学习外语有更多的原因3.思路提示A. 为了出国旅行或者工作需要是学习一门外语的唯一原因语言的本质是沟通和交流的工具，如果工具没有使用的目的，的确对于只需要用母语工作和生活的人而言，的确用处不大要学习好一门语言，需要付出巨大的时间和精力，如果不是因为出国旅行或者工作的硬性需要，学习外语的时间和精力可以放在更值得的事情上B. 人们学习外语有更多的原因语言是文化的载体，世界和社会的发展需要人们了解更多国家的文化，那么学习一门外语是必须的，比如读懂外语类图书、看懂外语类电影等学习一门外语有助于开发大脑对语言的学习能力，对学习母语也是有好处的，尤其是对青少年而言学习一门外语可以让我们接触和了解更多的外国人，对社交和沟通能力也是有好处的雅思英语词汇积累：亲朋满堂Grandmother祖母;Grandma奶奶，外婆;Grandpa爷爷，外公;Father-in-law岳父;Mother-in-law岳母;Stepfather继父;Stepmother继母;Uncle叔父，伯父，舅父，姑父;Aunt伯母，舅母，姑母;Nephew侄儿，外甥;Niece侄女，外甥女;Cousin堂兄妹，表兄妹雅思词汇：设施类设施facilities设施divisions/departments系campus校园Common Room/House公共休息室canteen食堂dining hall食堂cafeteria自助餐厅accommodation住宿dorm/dormitory宿舍parking lot/area停车场car park停车场parking regulations 停车规定shopping mall购物中心teaching building 教学楼/教室楼lecture theatre阶梯教室Administration/Admin Office管理/行政办公室laboratory/lab实验室Student Union 学生会auditorium会堂，礼堂lounge, gymnasium/gym体育馆locker room更衣室the School of Law法学院law faculty法律系/学院New Students Enrolments新生报道处Recreation Center娱乐室student union 学生会society 学生社团club 学生俱乐部。

剑11Test3雅思写作task1题目+范文-CO2排放趋势图剑11Test3雅思写作task1题目：The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.a)解析：包括回答中需要讨论的主要特征、需要进行的对比以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。

8要点1.学生应该写出在四个欧洲国家中二氧化碳人均排放量的变化趋势。

2.学生应该对这些趋势做出相应的比较。

8错误理解1.学生在写作的时候可能会用现在时而不是过去时。

2.学生写作时有可能过多地注意细节而不是主要特征。

3.学生有可能忘记写单位。

b) 雅思写作范文（一）：The graph shows the average CO2 each person emits in four different countries: the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a 40- year period beginning in 1967. From the chart we can clearly see that Sweden and the UK have had a general downward trend. In Sweden, however, between the years 1967 and 1977 it did increase slightly from a little over 8 metric tonnes to over 10 metric tonnes. The Swedish decline was considerably more than that of the UK and actually nearly halved its output with the figure in 2007 showing a little under 6 metric tonnes. Both Italy and Portugal, steadily increased the emissions, with Portugal showing the greatest rise from a little under 2 metric tonnes in 1967, to nearly 6 metric tonnes by 2007. In summary, we can see that the overall amount of emissions recorded in 1967 is less than those of 2007.这个图表描述的是四个国家的人均二氧化碳排放量，即英国、瑞典、意大利和葡萄牙从1967年起的40年间的数据。