Unit 1 Period Five Writing—Writing a journal entry

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Period Five Writing—Writing a journal entry

写作指导

本单元的作文是写一篇英语日记,英语日记一般记录一天发生的事件或自己感受最深的事,可分为记事、议论、描写、抒情等。写英语日记要注意下面几点:

一、格式

日记由书端和正文组成。书端指写日记的星期、日期和天气,顶格写在左上角,先写星期,然后写日期,最后再写天气。(例如:Tuesday February 26th,2019 Sunny)

二、时态

谓语动词多用一般过去时态,但是要根据具体情况使用其他时态。

三、写正文时应注意的问题

1.围绕一个主题来展开。

2.若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思,可采用“同义转换法”。

3.结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体会。

常用表达

1.Today,I found something strange with...

2.I just want to share...

3.That’s what I saw on the newspaper.

4.In my opinion,nowadays,...

5.I think there are some reasons contributing to this phenomenon.

6.Firstly,...Secondly,st but not least...

假设你是李华,今天(星期三,3月20日,晴)在公园散步时遇到一个外国人来旅游。你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇英语日记。要点如下:

1.想跟他谈话却不知所措。

2.你向他介绍你的城市。

3.他向你提供了一些学习英语的建议。

注意:

1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

审题

写作要求是介绍自己在公园散步时偶遇一个外国人,想与之交谈,练练自己的英语口语。写作时应注意下面几点:

1.确定文体:这是一篇日记。写作时注意日记的格式。

2.主体时态:文章应以一般过去时为主。

3.主体人称:由于是日记,所以人称应该以第一人称为主。

谋篇

第一段:开门见山,简要介绍自己在公园偶遇一个外国人。

第二段:具体介绍两人交谈的情况。

第三段:进行评论和总结。

核心词汇

1.散步take a walk

2.紧张的nervous

3.谈话;交谈conversation

4.鼓励encourage

5.建议advice

6.经历experience

连词成句

1.今天早晨我在公园散步。(过去进行时)

This morning I was taking a walk in the park.

2.我看见一个外国人。(SVO结构)

I saw a foreigner.

3.他正在欣赏公园的美景。(过去进行时)

He was enjoying the beauty of the park.

4.我很兴奋也很紧张。(SVP结构)

I was so excited and nervous.

5.我不知道做什么也不知道怎么开始谈话。(疑问词+to do)

I didn’t know what to do and how to start a conversation.

6.我渴望练习英语口语。(be eager to do...)

I was eager to practise my spoken English.

7.我鼓励自己走过去向他问好。(encourage) I encouraged myself and went to say hello to him.

句式升级

1.用when引导的时间状语从句和分词作宾补把句1、句2和句3合成一个句子

This morning when I was taking a walk in the park,I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the

park.

2.用so...that...把句4和句5合成一个句子

I was so excited and nervous that I didn’t know what to do and how to start a conversation.

3.用形容词短语作状语把句6和句7合成一个句子

Eager to practise my spoken English,I encouraged myself and went to say hello to him.

用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考范文

Wednesday March 20,2019 Fine

This morning when I was taking a walk in the park,I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of

the park.I was so excited and nervous that I didn’t know what to do and how to start a

conversation,though I did well in English classes.

Eager to practise my spoken English,I encouraged myself and went to say hello to him.He

was very friendly.As a native,I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty food to him.Finally,he gave me some advice on how to improve my English.

It was more than an experience!