2014高考英语一轮_短文改错、书面表达训练(15)-word

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（23) 含答案第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词.此行错一个词：在错的词下划一个横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词.注意：原行没有错的不要改.Everyone can do something for our environment。

For me,76._______I should try to save electricity in our daily life。

For example，77._______if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening，78。

_______I will always remember to turn on the lights. In order to 79。

_______ protect our forests, I will use paper wise. I should try 80._______ to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible。

I would 81。

_______not use things like paper cup and disposable chopsticks 82。

_______because they are made of wood。

I believe that by doing all 83。

_______these small things will improve our environment but help 84。

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）含答案短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分)增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2。

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965．When I was a child，I dreamed of flyingin the sky．I joined the army in June, 1983．In 1992，I was sent to the air force base．In August, 1996，I was one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination．I worked hardly, because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998 .I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later．On Oct．15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circledaround the earth about 14 circle and then returned ．I was honored to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．参考答案短文改错1．farmer改为farmer，s2．去掉1965前面的in3．an air force base。

高中英语真题:2014高考英语短文改错一轮训练（2）及答案17—2考点知识精讲一、短文改错的解题基本思路1．通读全文，掌握大意首先，要认真阅读短文，把握全篇主旨，弄清上下文的逻辑关系，了解文章所创设的语言环境，为正确判断创造条件。

2．整句理解，逐行找错。

在读懂文章之后，要逐句逐行地找错。

分析每个句子中句法、语法、行文逻辑等方面是否有错，要做到逐行分析，不可遗漏，句与句之间要注意连词的用法。

3．由易到难，各个击破改错要从最简单、最熟悉的项目入手，先从语法的角度入手，再从逻辑方面考虑，最后推敲难题。

4．检查核对，规范改正最后浏览改后的全文，看全篇是否语义通顺，注意正确行。

要特别注意规范改正错误, 严格按照示范规定符号和要求去改。

切忌文字说明或用箭头表示。

二．短文改错的设题方式一．错词：错词的情况归纳起来大致可分为虚词选择错误、实词词形错误、同(近)义词、形似词选择错误等。

1．虚词错误①介词错误。

介词错误主要集中在介词的固定搭配、介词多词义的用法以及一些意义相近介词、副词和连词的混用等。

1.After five years away in my hometown，I find that the neighborhood which I used to live in has changeda lot.(09全国卷I)析：“从……离开，远离”应为短语 away from，不能与in搭配。

应将in改为from。

②连词错误主要表现: 句与句之间的关系混淆，是并列、转折、承接、还是表原因；连词与介词、副词的混用，一些连词具有多重功能和词性以及意义相近连词的区别等。

1.I meant to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，and I was held up on my way back(09全国卷II)析：分析前后两个句子可知，前面的句子与后面的句子存在转折关系，不是并列关系，应将 and 改为but。

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（1) 含答案(201＊·唐山联考)When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard,1。

________hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience2。

________pressure for the first time。

I did that my mom expected3.________because I di dn’t want to let her off. I was born to a poor4。

________peasant family，but I really knew life was not easy。

All the5。

________things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could6。

________lead better life in the future。

As the saying goes, “No pains7.________no gains。

”I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and8。

________have a chance to go to college。

Thanks to my mother’s push and the 9.________pressure, I made it。

Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing。

10。

________答案与解析：1．去掉第二个was 此处不用被动语态，故was多余。

2．experience→experienced此处应用一般过去时态，与全文时态保持一致。

第 - 1 - 页2019高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）附参考范文短文改错----（全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

George,It's been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._______ back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______ your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______ we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______ where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______ of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81．________ another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82.________ work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．________[来源:学.科.网]was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______ our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______ Yours, Mike76.after---since 77.them---us 78.for---with 79.正确80.去掉much 81.staying---stay 82.day----days 83.fly---flew 84.trip前a 85.better----more***************************************************************结束表格提示类4. 你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（4）附参考范文(201*·内江、广安模拟)Last Saturday we had a party at home. Dad's friends come 1.________along with their families. Since Mom was not at home, Dad 2.________and I had to prepare everything, so it turned out such a miracle 3.________ that they did make it! Everything went perfectly fine. 4.________A lot of kids who came that day. I had the most wonderful time 5.________with Steven. It was just amazed to find someone so much 6.________like me. We had a lot of things by common. The time seemed 7.________ short to me, and I wished we could have had some more time 8.________ to continue the conversation. Hopeful we're going on 9.________a trip together next summer, and also summer after next .10.________答案与解析：1．come→came整篇文章为一般过去时，应把come改为came。

ZXXK] 2．√3．so→but前后语境为转折关系，应把so改为but。

2014高考英语短文改错、信息匹配一轮训练（25）及答案【英语短文改错】passage 9Dear doctor,My name is Wang Lin. I’m a middle school student.I havea problem and I’m writing to ask you for some advices. 1._________I’m just 1.57 meters high, and my weight is 71 kilos.Many 2.__________Students often make fun me.Some boys are unfriendly to me. 3._________They called me “ Meat Ball”. That makes me feel unhappy. 4._________I’m now worry about my weight. Though I am a bit too fat, I 5.__________feel rather good. I enjoy my meals. I love eating meat very 6._________much. And I like sweet food, either. I often have sugar with 7._________tea, milk, porridge, and even hot water. In the past two months 8._________I have put off 5 kilos. I’m worried about this problem, 9.__________but I don’t know what to lose weight quickly. Please help me, 10_________dear doctor!I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.With best wishes,Wang Lin【参考答案】Key 91 advices –advice2 and—but 3of 4 called –call5 worry—worried6 good –well7 either –too8 right9 off –on 10 what –how*************************************************************结束*********************************************************结束信息匹配(共5小题；每小题2分,满分10分)阅读下列应用文及相关信息,并按照要求匹配信息。

2014全国高考汇编改错一（2014大纲卷）第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分l0分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√):如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个肠字符号(A)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意:原行没有错的不要改。

All of us need friendship. The understanding 76.______________between two friends mean both of them have similar 77.______________ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is 78.______________impossible for him to help each other and to make 79.______________their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80.______________“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship 81.______________should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is 82.______________wise to have as many good friends that we can. 83.______________The more friends we have, the more we can learn for 84.______________one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 85.______________76. √77. 【答案】means【试题解析】本句的主语是the understanding…，这是单个的动名词定语，做主语的时候，谓语动词要使用单数形式。

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（10) 含答案(201*·绵阳诊断)Tom is a little boy, but he is only seven years old. One day he1.________went to the cinema. It was the first time for him to do that。

He2.________bought a ticket and then went out. But after two or three minutes3。

________he came out and bought the second ticket and went in again。

After a4。

________few minutes he comes out again and bought a third ticket。

Two5。

________or three minutes later he came out and asked another ticket.6。

________Then the girl in the ticket office who asked him，“Why do you7.________buy so many ticket？How many friends do you meet?”Tom8.________answered,”No, I have not friends here. But a big boy always 9。

________stops me at the door and tear my ticket to pieces。

”10。

________答案与解析：1．but改为and 依据语境,这里前后句之间是并列关系而不是转折关系。

2．√3．out改为in 依据语境，男孩买票走进电影院.4．the改为a 下文bought a third ticket有暗示。

2014高考英语一轮_短文改错、书面表达训练（6）2019高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（6）附参考范文短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind ofaction to change them.（改为 it）****************************************** ******************结束I. 表格提示类1. 下表是对某中学高三一班50个学生健康问题的调查表。

请根据表格内容，综述学生当前存在的健康问题，并就中学生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建议。

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（12）附参考范文短文改错（201*·浙江卷）短文改错（共10题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

例如：It was very nic e to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you. LuckilytheI was completely tree then, so I'llsay” yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p. m.amin Friday evening.onI was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toysthan I did. There was one on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when hewasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing withthe toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know, I'd done something wrong. Lateon, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gaveIt back. She knows what had happened,but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.********************************************************结束●锦囊妙计1.文字、图画或图表同等重视，不可厚此薄彼，粗心大意。

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（14）含答案(短文改错）Coffee houses can be seen anywhere in America. 76。

People from European brought the idea with them. Soon77.coffee became the leading drink. Today people in United78.States drink more coffee than people in any country。

79.People who drink coffee at breakfast, at lunch, and 80. between meals。

They drink them at work and at home.81.Coffee is drunk by people around the world. Some 82。

people like coffee what is very black and very strong。

83.Another people like coffee with cream or sugar，or，cream84。

and sugar with it。

Now coffee has become a world—wide drink.85。

(四)76．anywhere →everywhere 77.European →Europe78。

in ∧→the79. any ∧→other 80. 去掉who 81.them →it 82。

√83。

what →that/which 84. Another →Other 85。

with →in****＊*＊*＊＊**＊＊＊＊******＊＊*＊*＊**＊**＊＊＊＊*＊*＊*＊＊**＊＊***＊＊***结束(一）A few days ago，Miss Wang was going home by bike. While he was76.riding in the street, she saw the man with a knife in his hand and his77.face covering with a piece of cloth running towards her. The man78.took her handbag out of the basket of her bike and ran away before79.she could do anything. There was no one she could turn for help at 80。

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（2）含答案（201*·石家庄质检)I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1。

________such as writing stories，playing piano and singing English2.________songs。

My most favorite subject is English. I became3。

________interested in it when I was very young。

My dream is 4.________to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5。

________and learn more about west culture as well。

I will be6。

________able to improving the friendship between China and7.________the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true。

8。

________And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9。

________harder and follow my heart，no matter how happens！10.________答案与解析：1．hobby→hobbies many后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示.2．piano前加the play the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。

西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the.3．去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜爱的",因此原句语义重复。

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（25）含答案第一套短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。

并在其下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(/）划掉.修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不记分。

I’m a middle school student name Li Ming。

I’m writing to tell you something。

Recently Inoticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school.I went there too inthe other day。

I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films orchat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online.On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations.The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games。

The Internetis good if we make good use of it。

Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the localgovernment should take measure to make sure that students use cybercafes positively。