高考短文改错专题复习课件

1.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.
the
2.We are one family and live under a same roof.
the
3. Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher.
03.02.2020
_A__t_ Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
on
介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住
father to choose 冠词连词需关注
the
a
Christmas tree. 动词形
They
_c_h__o__o__s_e
chose
a big one. It was almost as_t_a__l_l_e_r as the room!
4. What a fun it is to go swimming in summer.
1. The food was expensive and the service was good. (2002)
but
2. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very
Steps of correcting a composition:
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）
2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐句找错）
interesting. (2006)

well
1. 与形容词的的混用；
2.否定副词的添加或删除。
副词
3.副词与动词的固定搭配；
4. however，therefore等逻辑关 系副词的误用
形容词
1. The popular actors are so attractive that you
absolute can’t miss this part.
absolutely
2. I’m very exciting to learn that you will start a magazine.excited
3. It is my favouritest way to spend the summer vacation. favourite
4. My mum makes the better biscuits in the
• 二、做改错题需要遵循的原则： • 1. 不错不改。（即若把一个正确的词改为
另一种正确的表达方式不给分。）
• 2 不能改变原意。（例如：Drive will be safer. 只能把Drive改成Driving, 不能把Drive改成 Drivers。）
• 3 多改不给分。（从第十一处不给分——不要 以为改卷老师不会数！）
3. The majority of my class joine∧d the activity.
4. He will go to the university in ninext year.
5. It is true that time is grea∧t value
of
“be of+抽象名词”相当于相应的形容词 这类抽象名词前我们可用一些形容词，如: great, little, some, any, no, not much等来修饰抽 象名词，用以说明程度：

• （has 改为have。 谓语动词与主语的数不 一致。）
• 7. When and where to build a new factory have not decided.
• （ have 改为is。除了语态错误之外还要 注意谓语动词与主语的数一致。）
• 8. Every means have been tried to settle the problem.
• 1. Every kind of Chinese food is worth
trying, because each has a delicious food and good for health.（09重庆卷）
• （good 前加is, be good for “对。。。有 好处”， 缺谓语。）
• 名词：主要考查其可数性或单复的使用。 • 形容词：主要考查比较等级、搭配、修饰、
用法区别等。
• 副词： 主要考查副词修饰其他词的正确 性，有时也考查搭配与行文逻辑方面的问 题等。
• 代词：主要考查前后指代的一致性以及某 些习惯用法等。
• 并列连词：主要考查行文逻辑。 • 各类从句引导词：主要考查各类从句的引
• 10. Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. （2012全国卷II）
导词的正确使用。
2. 句法错误 从句法上考查简单句、复合句的否 定、疑问、倒装、省略等。
3. 行文逻辑错误 考查人物的性别、时间先后、肯定 及否定、因果、并列与转折、递进 关系等。
改错10字要诀
完整 一致 多少 词法 逻辑
完整
• 一个句子不可没有主语和谓语，缺少其 中任何一个句子便不完整。

day.
to
五、 代词格，细领悟
• 人称代词，物主代词的使用． • 反身代词oneself 的使用． • 人称代词的主格和宾格． • 不定代词的使用． • Both, all, either, neither, none的使用. 6. Whose 和who’s， its和 it’s的区别．
（ 2007全国I）
I was only about six when he held his
hand out to me. I took it in me and we
walked.
mine
2008全国II：
I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievement. our
Steps of correcting a composition:
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）
2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐句找错）
got atothre，deooitrh, setril…l woera…rin，g hnies ijtahckeert…wnithorth…e ，
wanlloett i（n tohne lpyo）ck…et.but （also）…，
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Not only the students but also the teacher like

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常考的短文改错的错误主要是以下 几个方面：一是语法方面，主要测试动 词时态和语态，非谓语动词和短语动 词；名词、代词的各种形式，形容词 和副词以及比较等级的用法；连词、 冠词、介词；主谓一致；简单句、并 列句和复合句，以及倒装、省略句等。
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二是在行文逻辑方面，主要考查人 物的性别及相应的物主代词或物的 数量及相应的物主代词，句子的并 列、递进、转折、因果关系；时间 的先后顺序等。

2015安徽卷： You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out

wishes
permitted
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2016福建卷： If you have interests
soon.
in it, reply to me
2016陕西卷： They have all
sorts of course. I’m sure you will find one you like it. sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful. courses
likes
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3.I
will like to know where you were born. would 4.I would like you read it again.
to
5.My father mustn’t have said such a thing.
couldn’t /can’t
(3) 主动语态和被动语态的混用 。

考情分析
近│五年考全纲国解I卷读考情分析表
近五年全国I卷考情分析
短文改错的材料以记叙文和夹叙夹义文为主， 句子结构简单，话题以日常生活为主，词数常 约100-120字。通过对考点分布的分析，我们可 看出对于名词、动词、形容词副词、连词、介 词的考查是重点，对于冠词、代词的考查也是 几乎年年有。
find.
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2.The house which Lu Xun once lived is being where
repaired now.
3. I'll never forget the day which I first went to school.
when
2）名词性从句
（连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用）
accident and hit another car.
三、还要注意形和副
1.形容词和副词的误用 2.原级，比较级和最高级的误用。 高考链接３：
1.we cooked on a fire and the food tasted wonderfully.
wonderful
2. (2013年全国卷I）In fact, he even scared my
English for more thahnastwenty year. 名词数
She likes we, an代d词s格he，i细s v领e悟ry years
us
strict in all o介f词u短s.语A需lth关o注ugh she is
with
a b还it要ol注d意an形d和n副ot so beautifully,
classmates away… However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

要是因为和传统的短文改错相比，新课标短
文改错每行可能有两个错误。二是因为设错 的内容多为考生在平常进行语言操练时常犯 的错误。比如：写作中用到的关键词，语言
学习中的负迁移现象，容易忽视的虚词、小 品词等。做好短文改错题应注重以下技巧：
应试点睛
1．“规范性”原则：要严格按照示范规定的 符号改错。要记住“——”、“∧”、“\”分 别表示错词纠正、缺词填补、多词删除。切忌 用文字说明或用箭头表示。
3．复读全文，检查核对。
回头重读全文验证答案，将初步改错的短文 再次细读。在复读检查过程中，既要重视文 字、句子的字面意思，又要弄清文字段落的 内在含义和内在逻辑关系及篇章结构。看错 误类型的比例是否得当(错词、缺词和多词 比例一般为：8：1：1或7:2:1)、前后逻辑是 否一致、有无前后矛盾等现象。
得法者，事半功倍
短文改错口诀
动词形，名词数， 冠词连词常光顾， 还要注意形和副； 习惯用法要记住； 非谓语，细辨别， 句子成分多分析， 代词格，细领悟； 逻辑错误须关注，
When I was in high school , most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle ,that was only one hundred yuan . I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty . You can imagine what much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

一、 通读全文，掌握大意 二、整句理解，逐行推敲
三、先易后难，各个击破
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EXERCISES：2009全国卷1
After five years away in my hometown, I find that 76. _________ The neighborhood which I used to living in has changed 77.______ a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop 78 ._______ across the street from our middle school were gone. 79.________ There exist now a park that has a small river running 80._________ through. The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and 81. _______ Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports 82. ______ center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of 83. ______ Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to 84. _________ a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle 85.__________ school is still there.
多词

e.(05) My pronunciation was terrible
terribly .
late
f.(06) They came back lately and 命查题形特容点词ha及和d 副改som词正e的方te法误a. ：用、主形要容考
词及副词的比较级等。1）根据
adj.或adv.的基本用法确定错误；
g、 (07) Each ^ these lines
stands for a trouble in my life. of
命题特点及改正方法：介词涉及搭 配错误，因此可从以下方面确定错 误：1）介词的基本用法；2）习惯 搭配；3）动词词类确定错误，如 talk ,, serve, wait等。
介词的错误
c.(03)She liked it very much and reads it
to the class.
read
d. (04)I don’t know that they don’t
like to talk with me. Sometimes,
we talked to each other very well
命题特点： 1.女性代词指代男性或相反； 2.单数指代复数； 3.代词词性误用。 改正方法：联系上下文的逻辑关系。
代词的错误
1.人称代词的偷换错误 2. 缺少人称代词的错误 3. 人称代词数的一致问题 4. 人称代词格的一致问题
1. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(NMET03)
a
animals.
b. ( 01)We may be one family and
live under a same roof,but---

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4.The first time I went there again, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. (2018课标全国II)
are dancers and
保持一致。
cyclists.
3. 非谓语动词 的错误
1).Last summer they earned 2全).国I wI卷as )unwillin∧gtotalk with
hqiumiteanadlootfbteynssedelillsliontbhgeeyfeisdhh. i(s20r1u8le课. (标20全2国0课I卷标)
great
②I felt happily that their life had improved. (2018课标全国I卷)
happy
③One was that I was amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. (2019课标全国卷) ④Unfortunate, all the people on the car died.
形似神不是 ：
[ t]
[ ks]
_a__university _a__ European country [ u]
_a__useful/unique book

从使用情况来看，闭胸式的使用比较 广泛。 敞开式 盾构之 中有挤 压式盾 构、全 部敞开 式盾构 ，但在 近些年 的城市 地下工 程施工 中已很 少使用 ，在此 不再说 明。
...After the bath he looked energy and refreshed.
energetic
Dear Jack,
还要注意形和副： 词性转换
I am terrible sorry that I won't be able to
terribly
go to your birthday party this Saturday
afternoon...
从使用情况来看，闭胸式的使用比较 广泛。 敞开式 盾构之 中有挤 压式盾 构、全 部敞开 式盾构 ，但在 近些年 的城市 地下工 程施工 中已很 少使用 ，在此 不再说 明。
problems I have been experiencing.
Swim is good for our health. Swimming
从使用情况来看，闭胸式的使用比较 广泛。 敞开式 盾构之 中有挤 压式盾 构、全 部敞开 式盾构 ，但在 近些年 的城市 地下工 程施工 中已很 少使用 ，在此 不再说 明。
从使用情况来看，闭胸式的使用比较 广泛。 敞开式 盾构之 中有挤 压式盾 构、全 部敞开 式盾构 ，但在 近些年 的城市 地下工 程施工 中已很 少使用 ，在此 不再说 明。
3. 非谓语动词
错误
doing 主动、正在进行 非谓语动词 done 被动、已完成
to do 目的、将来
I really wan∧t share with you some of the to
6.Water pollution often bring on disease. brings