2019高考英语专题专练-《短文改错专题》10篇(解析版)
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2019高考英语《短文改错》专题提分练Correction 1(2018东北三省三校一模)A few years before, my family went to a seafood festival in Florida. The food was delicious, the weather was lovely, but the boat ride was great. The last thing was to go on helicopter ride. My little sister was so young to go by herself, so I volunteered to accompany with her on the ride. When I got into the helicopter, I attempt to close the door. Airplanes have doors;so do a helicopter. Wrong!The pilot told me that there was no door as they went skywards. I had never been more frightening in my life. It’s a good thing which the ride lasted for only 15 minutes. No more air rides for me, I swear! 解析:①before常与完成时连用,ago常与一般过去时连用。
句意:几年前,我们全家去佛罗里达参加了一次海鲜节。
②海鲜好吃,天气很好,坐船的经历也很棒。
三个分句之间为并列关系,而不是转折关系,故改but 为and。
③句意:最后一件事就是乘坐直升机。
ride在句中意为“乘坐;搭乘”,为可数名词,此处表示泛指,故加冠词a。
④句意:我妹妹太小,不能独自前往,因此我主动提出陪她乘坐。
2019高考英语:短文改错练习题(2)及解析第***套短文改错〔共10小题;每题1分,总分值10分〕此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。
对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如有错误〔每行只有一个错误〕,那么按以下情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号〔八〕,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:每行都有一个错误。
IwasahonestchildindeeD、Ididn’tdaretotelllies 76、becauseofmyeyesoftenletthesecretout、Iremembered 77、tellingalietomyparents,andIcouldhardfixmyeyeson 78、myfather’sface,letalonemymothereyes、Iglanced 79、hereandthere,upordown,nervously、80、However,afterIcametoBeijing,Inolongerhaveto 81、worrymyeyesbecauseeverythingIwantedtosay 82、wassentbyletter、Ifoundmyselfoftentellsmalllies、I 83、wrote,“I’mfineinBeijing、Ienjoythefoodsellingatthe 84、university、Andattheweekends,Ioftenbuyfriedchickens 85、orporktoeat、”参考答案短改:76、a改为an77、删去of78、hard改为hardly79、mother改为mother’s80、or改为and81、have改为had82、my前加about83、tell改为telling84、selling改为sold85、chickens改为chicken第5套短文改错(共10小题;每题l分,总分值l0分) Isawanaccidenthappenedonmywaytohomethisafternoon.Agirlwascrossingthes treetonazebracrossingwhileayoungmandroveamotorbiketowardsher.Theyoung mansawthegirlbuttriedtostop,buthedrovetoofasttostop.Hehitthegirlandfe lloffhermotorbike.Thegirlwasbadlyhurtandcouldn’tmove.Theyoungmandidn’tknowhowtodo.Irantoaphoneboxnearbyanddialed110.Soonthepolicereached.T heysendhertothenearesthospitalatonce.Oneofthepolicemantalkedtotheyoun gmanandwrotesomethingdownwhilewastalking.Ithinkitisverydangeroustodri veveryfast.短文改错参考答案(共10小题;每题l分,总分值l0分) Isawanaccidenthappenedonmywaytohomethisafternoon.Agirlwascrossingth estreetonazebrahappen去掉tocrossingwhileayoungmandroveamotorbiketowardsher.Theyoungmansawthegirl buttriedtostop,whenandbuthedrovetoofasttostop.Hehitthegirlandfelloffhermotorbike.Thegirlwas badlyhurtandcouldn’thismove.Theyoungmandidn’tknowhowtodo.Irantoaphoneboxnearbyanddialed110.Soonthepolicewhatreached.Theysendhertothenearesthospitalatonce.Oneofthepolicemantalked totheyoungmanandarrivedsentpolicemenwrotesomethingdownwhilewastalking.Ithinkitisverydangeroustodriveveryf ast.加he或去掉was第6套第一节短文改错〔10分〕错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加:在缺词出加一个漏字符号〔^〕,并在其下面写出该加的词。
2019年高考英语短文改错专题--非谓语动词(含答案)1.Unfortunately his father died, left the family even worse off.2.He will have trouble learn English well in a year.3.While crossing the street,she was killed by an ambulance speeded by.4.It’s up to you decide whether to e at out or at home.5.On our way home,we couldn't help to talking about what we had experienced.6.If accepting for the job, you’ll be informed soon.7.The host parents took good care of us,which made us feeling at home.8.Having warned of the danger in the street at night, she went home with a friendaccompanying her.9.It took me a little while figure out these differences,but it was fun.10.We must take some measures to preserve the endangered animals from killed.11.I’m looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.12.In fact, Americans make go to the baseball game a favorite summer outing nowadays.13.I did all that I could express myself clearly but my speech was a total failure.14.You should have the courage to admit have broken the window.15.Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood,the house is big enough to enable you to have a room of your own.16.The father as well as his three children goes skating on the freezing river every Sunday afternoon in winter.17.He had to look for a place along the street to get his bicycle repairing.18.Thrown their hats into the air,the fans of the winning team let out loud shouts of victory.paring to the escaped driver,I am proud of what I did.20.The woman was observed follow him closely.参考答案1.答案:Unfortunately his father died,left leaving the family even worse off. 解析:2.答案:He will have troublelearn learning English well in a year. 解析:3.答案:While crossing the street,she was killed by an ambulancespeeded speedingby. 解析:句意:过马路的时候,她被一辆飞驰而过的救护车撞死了. ambulance 与speed by (飞驰而过)之间为逻辑t 的主动关系.要用现在分词作后置定语. 4.答案:It’s up to you to ∧decide whether to eat out or at home.解析:5.答案:On our way home,we couldn't help to talking about what we hadexperienced.解析:句意:在回家的路上, 我们禁不住谈论起我们经历过的事情.[can't help doing sth.为固定句型,意为:情不自禁地做某事。
高考英语【短文改错题】专题训练(一)One day when I went to the theater to listen to classical music, and in the middle of a performance, someone’s cell phone rang. It was very annoyed. I found it disturbing. The lady who gets a call left the concert hall right away, but I could still hear her chat loudly outside the theater. So I could not pay attention at the nice music. Therefore the use of cell phones in public place like restaurants, libraries and buses can unpleasant and impolite. I think it is acceptable to use it, but at the same time it is a good idea to avoid disturb other people.(二)One day, I saw the boy living next door with a new scar on his forehead. I became shocked as he was just 10 year old and the scar was horrible. I went to him and asked about his injure. At first he remains silent, but after while he started to sob and said, “My mother threw a plate to me.” I asked her with surprise the reason which his mother did so. He replied, "I asked for food to eat, so there was no food in the house." Then sud den my mother came and said, “Your lunch is getting up cold. Immediately, I felt embarrassed, with my face go red.(三)Last week our school hold a sports meeting. Realize it was our last school sports meeting, we decided to make it unforgettable experience. We first attended the opening ceremony, for whom our class had made a lot of preparations. Much for our excitement, our performance was a success. My classmates took part in various event such as running, the high jump and the long jump. They cheered for the athletes, so some raised their cameras to capture the exciting moments. Our class won the second place and our efforts were paid off! With the cup in hand, we took a picture together proud.(四)Now I’d like to say something about myself. I am the Senior 3 student and I will graduate senior high school this June. In my spare time, I like to do some interested sports with my father, who usually teach me to play basketball and table tennis. But now, as the National College Entrance Examination is coming, he can't spend too many time on sports. Every day, I am busy prepare myself for the examination. Although I don’t have a lot of free time, but the busy life hastaught me how to effective make a balance between study and entertainment. Of all the subject, I love English best.(五)My parents and I went to Beishan Park to play on last Saturday. First, we watched the flowers and then we fly the kite. Honestly spoken, we played for a whole morning. And at noon, we had lunch at KFC, there the food was tasty. In the afternoon, we went to my grandparents’ house visit my grandparents. Except I, other family member talked a lot. I played outside. In the evening, my parents and I took a train to go to Yanji to take part in an English contest hurried. I felt happy from the bottom of my heart since I was tired.改错(六)Recently our English club has had a heating discussion about online shopping. Some people are in the favor of online shopping. They think it is very conveniently and time-saving. It allows people to buy all kinds of thing without leaving their homes. Beside, people can compare prices among different online shops before make decisions. However, others think online shopping isn’t reliable as traditional shopping. People can’t touch and try the things th at they want to buy. They may get unsuitable things or even get cheat by receiving goods of poor quality. In my opinion, online shopping had more advantages than disadvantages but people should think carefully before placing orders.改错(七)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday happy. We can choose among staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home,it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we should go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.(八)Life is always full of something you can’t expect. Bob missed the first two lesson this morning. He got up early as usually, but when he was ready to leave he find his bicycle’s front tyre (轮胎) flat. He wanted to take taxi to school, and he did n’t have any money on him. He had tofind a place where he could get his bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning. So she had to walk to school, carry his bicycle all the way. That was the reason how he was late for school.(九)Last week, a football match is held between Class One and Class Two. The player from both sides are very good, so the match went on fierce at first. Finally Class Two won when we lost. They didn’t win the match, and didn’t lose heart. For one thing, we think friendship comes first, and the match comes second. For the another thing, since we all tried our best, there was no need to regret. Furthermore, we should analyze the reasons of the failure so as to succeeding next time. In brief, failure is important that it's the mother of success.改错(十)Recently our class have had a heating discussion on if people should keep pets at home in cities. There’re two differently opinions. Some students thought it's a good idea to ke ep pets because many old people who will live alone can get some comfort from them. Besides, get along well with animals will make their life interesting. However, other students are for the idea for the reason that pets may attack people or make too much noise. As for me, it's good for them to keep pets at home but we must take measure to make them behave well.改错(十一)Our family, consist of 6 adults and 4 children aged 1 to 8, want to travel in abroad to see Castle Neuschwanstein. We will be doing this in December on a weekday and wondered if there will be long queues at the ticket office. If they purchase online tickets in advance, can we go direct up to the castle? If each of us use a Bayem pass, we cannot travel before 9 am, that means we cannot arrive until about 11:30 am. It will be cold but young children will not want to stand in line for long time. Can you give me some advices as to the best way to enjoy this trip? Many thanks.改错(十二)I am Daisy. My last weekend was very busy. On Saturday, I got up at 6:00. Then I did exercises in the park at 7:00. Eventual I practiced reading English. I studied math after eat breakfast because we would have a math test on next Monday. I went to take piano lesson in the afternoon. Beside, I went to the movies with my classmates in the evening. And I sleep at 9:00. On Sunday, I had to do lots of homework, after that I went to the zoo with my classmates. The zoohad much animals such as elephants, monkeys, tigers, pandas and so on. The monkeys were very clever. Look! How a busy weekend I had!改错(十三)A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happy. But how can we make friends? First, to make friends, you must be friendly at others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in the return. You should try to make a stranger feeling at home wherever he happens to be. Think more of others than yourself. Second, friends should negotiate instead quarrelling. Finally, never believe in those who leaves you when you are in trouble. But never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Friends should be faith to each other. So long as you can put your friend's interests in front of your, you will have a lot of good friend.改错(十四)I am deep sorry to hear that you could not enter the final of The V oice of China of this year. I’m writing to convey my sympathy you, hoping to help you go through the difficulty. You have been doing well and I’m convinced that your failure is not my own fault. However, it’s universally acknowledge that failure is a mother of success. I d id hope you won’t lose your heart. Still you have many more chance to try for you are so young. Only by work hard can your fate be changed, but if you go on practising singing, you will succeed next year.改错(十五)I am writing to express my thank for your helping me improve my English. With your help, I would not be a freshman studied in South China Normal University now. I still remember the days when you teach me English in Grade 3. My English was once poor, and you didn’t laugh at me. Instead, you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was great improved because your encouragement. Without your help, I wouldn’t have realize my dream. I wish more and more of my students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you a healthily body and a happy life!改错(十六)I am Li Hua, a frequent customer of your restaurant. I have been pleasing with your excellent service for years but now I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction about the poor service of one of your waiter. Last Saturday, I had a awful experience. When have beef noodles, I suddenly found there were two flies in them, that disgusted me a lot. So I asked the waiter to change it but he sayssomething rudely instead changing it. Needless to say, so a way of treating customers is unacceptable. I sincerely hope you can investigate it the matter seriously and make a formal apology with me.答案解析短文改错(一) 解析:1.第一句中的when删除。
2019年高考英语短文改错专题--形容词和副词(含答案)1.The truth proves that skiing down the snow mountain is much exciting than skating in the park.2.Besides, lying in the front of my school,the wonderful playground makes the campus surprising beautiful.3One afternoon ,our p lane landed at the world’s third big airport.4.As a result, I failed two of my most favorite subjects, math and physics, which surprised everyone.5.You may find it astonished that Charlie was taught to sing as soon as hecould speak.6.It is real a good chance to have met all of you here.7.Nobody loved money best than he did.8.Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years.9.It was the first time that I had played on stage in front of such many people.10.What’s more,the teaching co nditions here are many better than those in Sichuan.11.Prices may vary so it’s very worth shopping around before you buy.12.And we will study even more harder and try our best to do all.13.The weather couldn’t be bad,so we will not go out.14.Near 65% of the Palace Museum will then be open to visitors to mark the90th anniversary of the museum.15.Jack, a 13-year-old schoolboy, often says no to his parents’ opinions and doesn’t listen to them willing.16.Beside,my mother and I keep a relationship like close friends.17.—What do you think of the concert?—I have never seen a more better onepared with letters and public phones,mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient.19.Despite the power failure,the hospital continued to function normal.20.I can good remember the incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.参考答案1.答案:The truth proves that skiing down the snow mountain is much more/much more exciting than skating in the park.解析:2.答案:Besides, lying in the front of my school,the wonderful playground makes the campus sin surprising surpri glybeautiful. 解析:句意:而且,位于我的学校前面这个奇妙的操场使校园出乎意料地美丽。
2019年高考英语:短文改错专题训练及答案高考英语短文改错专题训练下列文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
一One late spring day, I saw the wild turkey and several of her chicks along the road near my home. I slow to look at the lovely babies as they gathered around their mother’s legs, but they rapid moved into the long grass. It may be a lot easy to see sights like this in the country, but even city people can find plenty nature to watch. I have a friend who keep a list of all the different birds she sees in her urban neighborhood. I once was stopped to watch ants hard at work near an anthill on the sidewalk. It was fascinated! In my opinion, share the world with other living creature is one of the things that make life interesting. Do you agree?二My favorite book is Black Beauty. It’s a story that take place in nineteenth-century England. I t’s a kind of autobiography writing from the horse’s points of view. The book describes its experiences with a variety owners. As a young horse Black Beauty lives a carefree life in a place when everyone is kind to him. Unfortunate, when the owner has to go abroad, he sells him to a family who are not so kind. He goes on to have a lot of pleasantexperiences, which is a saddest part of the story. However, the story did all end happily. Although people think of it as a children’s book, but this is a novel wh ich forces us to think about the way we treat animals.三I have a gold-coloured dog named Bobby who loves to be on photos. One day last summer, while live in a seaside house, I was trying to photograph sun setting on the sea over the edge of a wall of my place. Upon it seeing me hold my camera, my Bobby, which was two years old, climbed up the rocky rock and over towards me. She gets as close to the edge as quickly as she possible could. She stood tall, glancing back with her intelligence but innocent eyes in the direction of her camera. Then she smiled to show her tooth and wouldn’t move unt il I took her photo!四My mother is always ready for rain days. On the night before my sister’s ten birthday, she realized we didn’t have the ‘1’ and ‘0’ candles need t o top the cake. My 78-year-old grandfather was visiting, so we jumped in the car and head to the supermarket. Since it was not very much far, we arrived at our destination after we realized. While sorting through the numbered candles, my mother deciding to grab an extra ‘1’ to be ready for next year. At checkout, the teenage cashier glance d at the candle, and then looked at my grandfather. “Is she 101 years old?” she asked confusedly.五This summer, my grandmother accompanies my family to Lijiang, Yunnan Province for a vacation. On the second day of our holiday, she complained of feel unwell, suspecting a bad case of indigestion. Luckily, my mother, the doctor, recognized thesymptoms of a heart attack, and an ambulance called. Without my mother’s assistant, my grandmother would likely have died that day. The experience touched me a lot of. I used to think that it would be tired to be a medical worker like my mother and I would rather do something in the future than become a doctor. So when I saw with my own eye how my mother saved my grandma’s life, I made up my mind to be a doctor.六Last summer, my father and I hiked Wutai Mountain, that is located in the northeast of our province. Actually, hike would be an understatement. The mountain is more than 3,000 meter tall, and it took all we had make it. Sure, the journey was a lot of fun, with green shades, cool breezes, and singing birds, but that’s not that made it so much memorable. Climbing with my dad was the experience of the lifetime. It was an opportunity to deep our bond, learn how to better communicate and really worked together a s a team. It was true an experience I’ll never forget.七When I was a kid, I enjoyed make sun catchers. Sometimes I’d used a kit with colorful plastic piece, but it was even m ore fun to make them with melted crayons or colored tissue paper. They all looked cheery when they lit by the sun. Last year, I saw some of the most prettiest “sun catchers” ever made. I visited the Reims Cathedral in France, which contain stained-glass windows created by artist Marc Chagall. The blue glass, in particular, took my bre ath out. Seeing some of Chagall’s work made me interested again at creating sun catchers. I know the ones I make will never come close to be as lovely as the windows made by t he famous artist. And it’s fun to try.八I get the same present from my grandmother every Christmas —a box of handkerchief. I have no intention of opening it, so it always go straight into the charity shop. Last Christmas, my grandmother was staying with us over the holiday, but I had to open present in front of her. I tried to look cheerful, because she was watching me. I open the box unwillingly. To my surprise, I saw a ¥100 note placing in there. I can’t help think about all the cash I’ve given it away to charity over the years. I really don’t like to think about how rudely I must have appeared by not thanking her sincerely about the gift!九Last summer vacation, my friend and I visited Potatso National Park, located about 22 km east of Shangri-La. After walk for several hours, their legs failed themselves and they chose to take a ship. However, I insisted walking. As I headed forward, something white on a tree that caught my eye. I approached the tree and take a closer look at it. Just then, a small group of locals walked up but told me it was a precious eatable mushroom! I collected it careful and bagged it. After we finally returned to a hotel, I asked the owner to cook the mushroom for us. It couldn’t have tasted good. It was such a great reward.十I’d love to be a writer someday. I do a lot of writing, but no one ever read it. I felt a bit of disappointed and wondered what wide the gap between dream and reality was. Then my big break came when I was 13. I went to our city’s local newspapers and asked if I could get my writing publish. To my surprise, they said yes. And, just like that, I got my first writing out into the public. So I hope those who share the same dream with mine can stick with it. Even if it doesn’t become full-time job for you, writingis a significantly skill. Being good at string sentences together will serve you well no matter where life take you.十一Once a month, I, together with ten students from three another high schools, visit a training center for kids with special need. We also bring some snacks for the kids. When we arrive at there, we play games with them. Seeing the happy smiles on their faces make all our efforts worthwhile. The kids enjoy our stay or company. Every time we have to say goodbye, all of us are unwilling part from each other. Perhaps in some people’s eyes, what we do seems of little important. They may think we high school students should devote all of our time for study. And I know it does make the difference, not only to the little kids, but to ourselves.十二With summer approach, Mother set about arranging those heavy winter shoe. In one shoe box, she found two pairs of yellowish sneakers, which was white originally. She felt it a pity throw them away, or had no way to whiten them. Suddenly a good idea struck at me. I took out my oil paints and drew some brightly-colored plants and flowers on them. When I finish my work, the sneakers turned from a ugly duck to a swan. The experience forced me to think what we can do for the environment. With a little imagine, we can turn trash into treasure and thus helping our mother planet.十三Recently, while surfing the Internet, I find an English website: /doc/3f8f7db6a22d7375a417866fb84ae45 c3a35c27e.html . The website combines vocabulary learning to donation. You are expecting to choose the word with the samemeaning like the given word. If you get it rightly, you get a harder question. If you get it wrong, you get an easier question. For each of correct answer, the website donates 10 grain of rice through the World Food Programme to help end hunger. I like the idea. On the one hand, play the vocabulary game helps enlarge my vocabulary, which in turn allow me to better organize my ideas. On other hand, I can make a contribution to the world food problem.十四A snowstorm hit our city last night. The thick snow forced a lot of people to abandon their cars and chose public transportation this morning. Since buses were unavailable near my home, so my father had to drive me school. On our way, there was a slope, that became slippery due to the snow. Our car failed to climb up it and thus caused a traffic jam. Just at this moment, the traffic policeman arrived. Getting off his motorcycle, he began to push the car. See this, other drivers got out of their cars and joined them. With the efforts of these warm-heart people, our car finally made it. I was deeply moved by their kind. It was frozen cold outside but my heart was filled with warmth.十五Last month, my sister and I signed it up for a second-hand sale in our neighborhood. In that day, we placed some old magazines or stuffed toys on our stand. Then a father and daughter came up, that were clearly troubled. The father told us his daughter is suffering from a serious illness. A little girl asked my sister the price of a stuffed bear. My sister looked right her and said, “Give me the bigger smile you’ve got.” The little girl smiled b road. My sister then handed her the bear and said, “That smile is worth a million dollar.” I’ve never been so proud.。
2019高考英语专题专练-《短文改错专题》10篇(解析版)2019高考英语-《短文改错》专题汇编Correction 1(2018东北三省三校一模)A few years before, my family went to a seafood festival in Florida. The food was delicious, the weather was lovely, but the boat ride was great. The last thing was to go on helicopter ride. My little sister was so young to go by herself, so I volunteered to accompany with her on the ride. When I got into the helicopter, I attempt to close the door. Airplanes have doors;so do a helicopter. Wrong!The pilot told me that there was no door as they went skywards. I had never been more frightening in my life. It’s a good thing which the ride lasted for only 15 minutes. No more air rides for me, I swear!解析:①before常与完成时连用,ago常与一般过去时连用。
句意:几年前,我们全家去佛罗里达参加了一次海鲜节。
②海鲜好吃,天气很好,坐船的经历也很棒。
三个分句之间为并列关系,而不是转折关系,故改but为and。
③句意:最后一件事就是乘坐直升机。
ride在句中意为“乘坐;搭乘”,为可数名词,此处表示泛指,故加冠词a。
短文改错11、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month our class organized a hiking along the Chaobai River,which run through Hebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my disappoint, I found the river was serious polluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, under my teacher’s help, I used the equipments from the school lab to test the quality of the river water. But then,I used the data I had collected it to analyze the pollution of the water. Finally,I write a report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we must make small changes to protect our water resources.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.Nowadays fewer students take exercise due to various reason and some students fall ill every now and then because of they are not healthy or strong enough.However,we should take exercise regularly to improve our health.First of all,taking PE classes seriously.In PE classes we can build up our bodies with thecareful guidance of PE teachers.Secondly,it is of great important to make it a routine to exercise after class or during breaks.In addition,it was also a good idea to join a sports club that you are interested.As the old saying go,"The first wealth is health." Let's do more exercise to live a better and healthy life.3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2019年高考英语短文改错真题汇编(名师剖析解题思路与技巧+实战训练,建议下载练习)一、高考真题再现首先请同学看下面的一篇短文改错,这是一篇高考真题。
熟悉题目要求,了解试题难度。
高考真题:第四部分写作(共两节;满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are somuch that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!二、具体学习1下面我们步入短文改错的知识学习。
短文改错李仕才短文改错专练(一)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
AMarch 29th,Dear Diary,I’m writing this at my room. It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep. I’m thinking about my future! Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow” The problem is: I don’t know! My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun. Also I’m really bad at biology at the school. My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy He knew I hate flying!Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed. I can think about my future in bed. I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.BI have known my friend Rebecca for a long time. We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before. We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place. We listened to the music together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them. It is great. We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage. Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach. We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs. Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town. Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.CDear Joe,How are you Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK. I’ve got news too. I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school. We’re going to stay on a farm with four days! We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding. I’m sure I’ll love it. You know how crazy I am about the animals! I want to learn all about the cows or the horses. I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too. Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday! I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours,NadiaDPeople had always been interested in bees. This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make. In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand ofyears. In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey. They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard. Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees. In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”. Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees. They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other. Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.EYesterday afternoon, I took the No. 6 bus to go home. It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones. Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry. When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus. My ID card and ten books were in the bag. I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help. Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag. I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name. How a good man!FI read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today. According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way. He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification. Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way. They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.GLast weekends, I went shopping by myself. It was a sunny day and I feel very happy. When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus. Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop. Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room. I had to wait the next bus. Suddenly, it started to rain. I had no choice but to call a taxi. Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by. Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain. What an unlucky day!HMy name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor. I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going. I enjoy serving others. Additionally, I have vary interests. I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer. I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions. I am confident that I can do the job good. Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies. For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up. Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students. Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax. I believe I am the right person to this post.答案A1. ... at my room. at → in2. ... have to getting ... getting → get3. ... my parents asks ... asks → ask4. ... when you grow” grow后加up5. And she doesn’t ... And → But6. ... not her idea of ... her → my7. ... at the school. 去掉the8. He knew I hate ... knew → knows9. ... I’m getting tiring ... tiring → tired10. ... I’m lain down. lain → lyingB1. We firstly met ... firstly → first2. ... five years before. before → ago3. ... to the music ... 去掉the4. ... go on holiday ... go前加to5. It is great. is → was6. ... beautifully beach. beautifully → beautiful7. ... a lot of funs. funs → fun8. ... changed her job ... her → his9. ... to other town. other → another10. ... in the phone ... in → on / overC1. Thanks to your ... to → for2. ... to know when ... when → that或去掉when3. ... next weeks with ... weeks → week4. ... with four days! with → for5. ... and doing some ... doing → do6. ... about the animals! 去掉the7. ... or the horses. or → and8. ... have some times ... times → time9. ... finish homework ... homework前加my10. ... to telling you ... telling → tellD1. People had always ... had → have2. ... what bees make. what → that / which3. In the fact ... 去掉the4. ... thousand of years. thousand → thousands5. ... recently past ... recently → recent6. ... working so hard. working → work7. ... we talk with ... with → about8. ... has a new reason ... has → have9. ... bees able to ... able前加are10. ... surprised facts ... surprised → surprisingE1. ... I had listened ... 去掉had2. ... by my earphones. by → with3. ... that I should ... that → where4. ... bus in hurry. hurry前加a5. ... to finding it ... finding → find6. ... the bus companies ... companies → company7. Fortunate, at the ... Fortunate → Fortunately8. ... I see my bag. see → saw9. ... and the staff ... and → but10. How a good man! How → WhatF1. ... an interested piece ... interested → interesting2. ... they do it in ... do →did3. ... a wide ranges ... ranges → range4. ... losing the weight ... 去掉the5. ... managed to meeting ... meeting → meet6. ... like “very successful.” like → as7. ... so much failed ... much → many8. ... and led by ... led前加were9. ... time on thinking ... on → in或去掉on10. ... what would happen ... what → thatG1. Last weekends ... weekends → weekend2. ... I feel very happy. feel → felt3. ... anything I needed ... anything → everything4. ... too much people ... much → many5. Then it was my ... Then → When6. ... wait the next bus. the前加for7. ... was broke down. 去掉was8. ... filled with angry ... angry → anger9. ... an emptier bus ... emptier → empty10. ... in a rain. a → theH1. ... I wanted to be ... wanted → want2. ... or easy-going. or → and3. ... have vary interests. vary → varied4. ... as well soccer. soccer前加as5. ... be always open ... 去掉be6. ... do the job good. good → well7. ... in our classes ... classes → class8. ... who is falling ... is → are9. ... among teachers ... among → between10. ... to this post. to → for。
短文改错时要注意一下几点:1.快速阅读,整体把握短文大意.2.重视语境以及上下文的关系.3.充分运用基础语言知识找出错误所在.(一)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad.He always gives me s ome advice,but I seldom took them seriously.One day he was encouraged me to participate in a spe ech competition.So I signed up and after the competition,I did my best to be full prepared.But the moment I stood on the stage,I was too nervous that my mind completely went blank.The experience of lose a competition was really painful.Then,my dad said,"My son,life is like battlefield.You have to lose many time to win the final victory." Thanks fo r his advice,I never give up when I do anything.1.gives---gave.考查谓语动词.根据上句可知本句的谓语动词用过去式gave,表示过去的动作.2.them---it.考查代词.代指不可数名词advice用it.3.去掉was.考查谓语动词的语态.主语he 和谓语动词encouraged 之间是主动关系,表示"他鼓励我",所以去掉was.4.after---before.考查连词.本句表示"在比赛以前做充分的准备",所以用before 引导时间状语the competition.5.full---fully.考查副词.修饰形容词prepared,用副词fully.6.too---so.考查固定句式.根据后半句that my mind completely went blank.可知用so修饰nervous,表示"如此…以至于".7.lose---losing.考查非谓语动词.做介词The experience of的宾语,用动名词losing.8.battlefield前加a.修饰名词battlefield用不定冠词a,表示"一块阵地".9.time---times.考查名词.表示"许多次",many修饰可数名词复数times.10.for---to.考查固定短语.表示"幸亏,由于",用固定短语Thanks to.(二)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2019高考英语全国I短文改错精细解析黑龙江绥化一中高考命题研究名师高云峰注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.【精细解析1】形容词运用错误把interesting改为interested。
解题逻辑思路:每遇到形容词的时候查3件事——①形副是否串用①比较等级是否合理①doing和done串没串。
此题明显可见,interest的形容词形式作表语说明人的,故应该使用其v-ed形式。
【精细解析2】语义逻辑错误把where改为when。
解题思路:短文改错10个错误里一般有一两个错误属于语义逻辑错误,即非语法错误。
需要按原词理顺翻译全句就可发现是否存在这种错误。
2019年高考英语真题和模拟题分项汇编专题09 短文改错一、2019年高考真题1. 【2019·全国卷I 】I became interesting int erested in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where whenI was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenlya football fell just in front of me but and almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly hardback to the playground. To everyone’s surprising surprise , the ball went into the net. All the football player players on the playground cheered loudly, say sayingthat I had a talent for football. From now thenon, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. 【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文。
作者讲述了由于一次偶然的经历,自己喜欢上了踢足球。
从此成了一名优秀球员。
第一处:【解析】考查形容词用法。
“interest (使感兴趣;使关注)”的形容词有interesting (使人感兴趣的)常修饰物;与interested (表现出兴趣的)常修饰人。
本句的意思为:多亏一个偶然的事件,我对踢足球产生了兴趣。
主语是I ,故将interesting 改为interested 。
2019高考英语全国II短文改错精细解析黑龙江绥化一中高考英语命题研究名师高云峰2019全国II卷短文改错试题注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need. 【精细解析1】名词处理错误解题逻辑思路:每遇名词必查2件事——单复数、泛特指。
Since I was a kid, I’ve considereddifferent job I would like to do. 句中job受到different修饰,可见其需用复数形式,所以答案是把job改为jobs。
【精细解析2】词性串用错误(形-副串用)解题逻辑思路:短文改错解题时,每遇形容词或副词,需要全覆盖查3件事——1.形副是否串用;2.比较等级(三级——原级、比较级、最高级)是否合理;3. v-ed/v-ing形式是否串用。
2019年高三英语短文改错专练(共九篇)答案(一)第四部分写作(共两节,满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.短文改错1:waited 和 a 之间加for 2:past →passed 3:feet →foot 4:when →than 5:a →the 6:other →another 7:do →did 8:possible →possibly 9:去掉it 10:lose →losing(二)As a saying goes, chance favors the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.I was not chose as a member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poorly preparation that led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball every day. When another tryout arrived at, I was fully prepared and tried my best. As a result, I selected and became an important player on our school team.From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.71. a saying 改为 the saying 72. experience 改为 experiences 73. chose 改为 chosen74. give up play 改为 playing 75. but 改为and 76. poorly 改为 poor 77. arrive at 去掉at 78. I selected 中间加 was 79. convincing 改为 convinced 80. I get well prepared 改为we(三)Last month, I had a unpleasant holiday. Having visited the Australian mainland before, I planned to going to the Solomon Islands. With my disappointment, the guide cut my holiday shortly by 2 days. He also sent me to the same places I had visited them the year before. In addition, the holiday I go on included none of the activities mentioned in the travel plan. To make matters bad, I had to share a double room with someone I did not know, despite the fact I had paid for a single room. Last but not least, my luggages arrived a week late because of the delay causes by the travel agency.改错:1 a-- an 2 going-- go 3 With-- To 4 shortly---short 5去掉them 6 go --went 7 bad—worse 8 fact后加that 9. luggages ---luggage 10 causes---caused(四)In the winter holiday,I conduct a social survey in my village on the problems about the left-behind children.The results are shocked.Many left-behind children can’t afford buy food.As a result,malnutrition(营养不良) remains a serious problem among them,who has a bad effect on their physical development.With the parents working far away from home,many children have to take away on more farming work and housework,affecting their academic performance at school.Some even drop out of school because of poor.What’s worse,some children suffer from mental problems for lack of care and love.I think measures should be taking to solve the problem.On the one hand,the government should work out laws to protect their illegal rights.On the any hand,the society should show love for these children.If everyone borrow a hand to them,we can certainly make a big difference to their life!短文改错:51.conduct— conducted 52.shocked—shocking 53.afford后加to 54.who—which 55.away 去掉 56.poor—poverty57.taking—taken 58.illegal—legal 59.any—other60.borrow—lends/gives(五)Last month, my good friend Mark got an expensive watch as his birthday present. He showed to everyone in my class proud. I really envied him and every day I ask my mum to buy me an expensive present. However, to my disappointment, I only got a second-hand bike at that special day. So one day while I was riding my “dear” bike back home from school, I passed the shop that my mum worked. I saw a familiar figure kneeling down in the front of it cleaned the outside steps of the shop. It was my mum! She worked so harder to raise me! Tear in my eyes, I got off the bike and worked together with her.71 showed后加it 72.proud→proudly 73.ask加ed 74. at that special→on75.So→But76.that-----where 77. in the front去the 78.cleaned→cleaning 79.harder→hard 80. tear→tears(六)Every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, where is designed to improve living quality. Although dancing could do good to their health, but the long-time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really brought the neighbors inconvenience. I couldn’t rest or sleep well, which made me terrible upset. I felt such sleepy in class that I performed badly in study. To solve a problem, I communicated with the organizers and suggested that they should shorten the dance time and reduced the music noise. Only doing so can they have fun and let others enjoy life. To their delight, they adopted my advices.1. where→which2.去掉but3. causing→caused4. terrible→terribly5. such→so6. a→the7. reduced→reduce8. doing so前加by9. their→my 10. advices→advice(七)Nowadays ,with the growing popularity of computers ,students were paying less and less attention to handwritingAccording to a recently survey, many students do not want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer ,so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting .32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising ,and 16 percent think that practising handwriting is useless .As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.1.were →are2.recently→recent3. reason→reasons4.it →there5. our→their6.too→ so7.practising→practise 8.go→goes 9. benefit前加加a / of 10. 去掉the(八)I went to the supermarket yesterday. While walk around, I noticed a credit card on the floor by chances. I picked it up and waited for an owner. No one comes. Suddenly, a lady with an anxiously look rushed in. So I approached her and asked why she had lost something. She did, her credit card. I asked her name but confirmed that it matched the card. Then I returned to her. She said she had prayed to her mother, who had passed away recently, to help her find the card. We talked and I introduced for myself, “My name is Claire.” She responded, “My mother’s name is Claire eithe r!”1. walk→walking .2. chances→chance3. an→the / its4. comes→ came5.anxiously→anxious 6. why→if / whether 7. but→and 8. 加it 9. 去for 10. either→too(九)My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what a great fun it is to be with children! They make me feel young forever because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.短文改错①had前加have②progresses改progress③whether改that④children改children's⑤for改to⑥comparing改compared⑦hard改harder⑧And改But⑨a great fun删掉a⑩because改so。
2019高考英语短文改错专题(名师剖析解题思路与技巧+实战训练,建议下载练习)一.改错题型特点:高考短文改错是知识和能力的综合测试题型。
主要考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的准确性及词、句、篇和语法的综合水平。
高考短文改错设置的考点灵活多变,知识层次多,覆盖面广,包括词法、句法、行文逻辑以及语篇结构等,是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。
二.短文改错常见考点设置:考点1:名词命题特点: 本来用复数,却用单数;本来用单数,却用复数。
记住常考的几个不可数名词:news, work(工作), advice, fun, progress, information, luck, weather, music, health, change(零钱),baggage(行李), luggage(行李),furniture, jewellery, equipment等改正方法: (1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份(2)根据上下文的逻辑关系.1. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success.2. After class we become stranger at once.3. They want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get marks in all my subject.4. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.5. There are advantage for students to work while studying at school.6. Now we can get millions of informations from the Internet.7. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests.8. She is one of the most intelligent girl in our class.9. I looked at his other hands.10. Most of them are peasant and some often go fishing in the sea.11. We have made great progresses with Mr. Liu teaching us.12. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new rules should help students get higher grade.13. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.14. He’s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures.考点2:代词命题特点:1.男女性代词用反; 2.单数指代复数; 3.代词词性用错; 4.缺少人称代词。
2019高考英语-《短文改错》专题汇编Correction 1(2018东北三省三校一模)A few years before, my family went to a seafood festival in Florida. The food was delicious, the weather was lovely, but the boat ride was great. The last thing was to go on helicopter ride. My little sister was so young to go by herself, so I volunteered to accompany with her on the ride. When I got into the helicopter, I attempt to close the door. Airplanes have doors;so do a helicopter. Wrong!The pilot told me that there was no door as they went skywards. I had never been more frightening in my life. It’s a good thing which the ride lasted for only 15 minutes. No more air rides for me, I swear!解析:①before常与完成时连用,ago常与一般过去时连用。
句意:几年前,我们全家去佛罗里达参加了一次海鲜节。
②海鲜好吃,天气很好,坐船的经历也很棒。
三个分句之间为并列关系,而不是转折关系,故改but为and。
③句意:最后一件事就是乘坐直升机。
ride在句中意为“乘坐;搭乘”,为可数名词,此处表示泛指,故加冠词a。
④句意:我妹妹太小,不能独自前往,因此我主动提出陪她乘坐。
too...to...意为“太……以至于不能”。
⑤accompany“陪伴”为及物动词,故直接跟宾语,不用介词。
⑥由When引导的时间状语从句中的谓语动词的时态(一般过去时),可推知主句谓语动词需用一般过去时,故将attempt改为attempted。
⑦句意:飞机有门。
直升机也有门。
根据前一分句中的have可知本句用一般现在时态,主语a helicopter为第三人称单数,故将do改为does。
⑧“我”和妹妹都在直升机上,所以用代词we作主语。
⑨frightening意为“吓人的;令人害怕的”;frightened意为“感到害怕的”。
错误处表示“感到害怕的”, 故用形容词frightened作表语。
⑩本句中It为形式主语,主语从句为真正的主语,由that引导主语从句。
Correction 2(2018重庆七校第三次诊断)The other day, as I walked to school, I passed small construction area. It was not far away in my school. I notice a man bringing a bunch of things: shoes, blankets, some canned food, and clothing.Perhaps the items were gathered from his family and some of his friend. He started laying it down for people to take. Certainly, I was curious about what things would be going. But I rushed there after school. I saw that much of the items were taken by others. I have read lots of inspired stories of kindness. This is probably the sweetest act of kindness I’ve been witnessed so far.解析:①句意:几天前,我走路去学校的时候,途经一处小建筑工地。
根据句意可知此处表示泛指,area(区域,领域)为可数名词,故small construction area前加a。
②far away from...为固定短语,意为“距离……远”,故将in改为from。
③根据首句中的时间状语The other day并结合语境可知,此处叙述过去的动作,故用一般过去时。
④some of...意为“……中的一些”,of后接可数名词复数形式或者不可数名词。
friend为可数名词,故将friend改为friends。
⑤此处替代上文提到的a bunch of things,在句中作宾语,故将it改为them。
⑥句意:当然,我对事情如何发展很好奇。
what在宾语从句中作主语、宾语等成分;how在宾语从句中作方式状语。
根据句意可知此处表示方式,故将what改为how。
⑦作者对事情如何发展很好奇。
因此放学后匆忙赶往那里。
两句之间为因果关系而非转折关系,故将But改为So。
⑧items为名词复数形式,故此处用many。
⑨inspired卓越的,激动人心的;inspiring鼓舞人心的。
此处修饰stories,故用inspiring。
⑩witness目睹;主语I与witness之间为主动关系,故将been删除。
Correction 3(2018甘肃张掖第三次诊断)Dear Lucy,I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Zhangye for travel. Both my parents missed you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. May is best time of the year to visit Zhangye. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many place of interest I want to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xianfu Street, where is full of local restaurants.Best regards,Janet 解析:①句意:我父母都非常想念你。
根据语境可知此处用一般现在时,故将missed改为miss。
②“So+be/助动词/情态动词+主语”意为“……也……”。
根据上句中的miss以及本句的主语our friend可知需将is改为does。
③形容词最高级前面要加the,故在best前加the。
④a few修饰名词复数形式;a little修饰不可数名词。
rain在此处为不可数名词,故将few改为little。
⑤根据本句中的neither可推知需将or改为nor。
neither...nor...为固定搭配,意为“既不……也不……”。
⑥根据so many可知后面用名词复数形式,故将place改为places。
⑦like介词,意为“像……”,as介词,意为“作为”。
此处指“作为一名志愿者的工作”,故将like改为as。
⑧句意:你来之后可以和我们住在一起。
主语为you,宾语和主语人称不一致,故宾语不用反身代词,而改用宾格us。
⑨far away from...意为“离……遥远”;表示距离的数字+away from...意为“离……有多远”。
根据three kilometers可知需删除far。
⑩本题考查非限制性定语从句。
先行词为Xianfu Street,关系词在定语从句中作主语,先行词指“物”,故将where改为which。
Correction 4(2018青海西宁一模)With time go by, Chris is now a senior three student that devotes himself in his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as a usual, he attended several classes. In the evening, he studied at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired on Sunday that he couldn t work effective. His father came up and advises him to have a break. Soon they came up with a good ideas. They bought a kite which they liked very much and then the family went to the suburbs Chris enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Chris was energetic and active in class.解析:①在with的复合结构中,宾语time与go by “(时间等)流逝”为逻辑上的主动关系,故将go改为going。
②devote...to...为固定结构,意为“致力于”,故将in改为to。
③as usual为固定短语,意为“像往常一样”,故删除a。
④根据that从句可知此句使用so...that...句型,意为“星期天他太困太累,不能有效地学习。
”,故将too改为so。
⑤修饰动词work用副词形式,故将effective改为effectively。
⑥and连接了两个并列的谓语动词,根据上文及本句中的came可知此处需用一般过去时态,故将advises改为advised。