浙江新高考英语作文指导
专题一读后续写
[选材特点]
1．所需阅读的短文词数在350 以内；
2．多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
[评分参考]
阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：1．与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
2．内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；
3．应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；4．上下文
的连贯性。注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2．应使用 5 个以上(即至少 6 个)短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线(单下划直线即可)标出你所使用的关键词语。
[写作步骤]
1．精读文章，确定文章线索，如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这有利于“顺藤摸瓜”。
2．仔细审题，明确续写要求，如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示等，做到“心中有数”。
3．回扣原文，想象续写内容。快速回读短文，揣摩文章的思路，结合段首的提示语和划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
4．拟写草稿，修改错词病句。结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，上下文的衔接。
5．标出所使用的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语，最后誊写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。
[方法技巧]
1．在读懂原文的基础上，紧扣原文中心，以原文的结局为起点，写出故事情节的发展和变化。
2．对原文故事没有写出的情节展开合理的推想，打开思路。多角度地想象出几种情况或结局，并从中加以最优选择。
3．要注意前后照应，符合逻辑，防止自相矛盾。必须与上文紧密联系，使上下文融为一体。
4．原文的主要角色，续文中都要安排“戏”，但不要引进影响事件结局的新角色。
注意确保四个一致：
1．要与原文的主题或作者的本来意图保持一致。
2．要与原文的体裁、结构、写作手法保持一致。
3．要与原文的语言特点和叙事风格保持一致。
4．主要人物的思想行为、性格特点要与原文保持一致。
[写作要求]
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank，he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldn't get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked，“It looks like you've got a problem，”Arthur said.
“I'm afraid so.I'm in a big hurry and I can't start my car.”
“Is there something I can do to help？”Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said，“Thanks.If you're sure it wouldn't be too much trouble，you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”
“No trouble at all.I'd be glad to help.”
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground，he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking，he heard the long loud noise of an alarm．
It was from the bank．There had been a robbery(抢劫)!
Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other ，“What happened？” But everyone had a different answer.
Arthur，still carrying the suitcase，turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.
She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that ？” He thought.“The suitcase ！She thinks I'm the bank thief！”
Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened，and without another thought，he started to run. 注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2．应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，“Stop，stop！”
Paragraph 2：
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur
【经典范文】
【范文一】
As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，“Stop，stop！” And also at the moment，Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the bank robber．So Arthur didn't stop，but continued to run until he saw a taxi.He stopped it，jumped in with the suitcase and said to the driver，“Go to the police station，please.The man shouting behind is the bank thief ！”The taxi raced away like the wind.
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told the police what had happened.Obviously，the police had already learned about the robbery．They opened the suitcase and there was a large sum of money inside ，as Arthur had expected.Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other https://www.doczj.com/doc/fe14761509.html,ter，with the information，the police caught the robber.The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot.(Words：153)
【范文二】
As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，“Stop，stop！” Thinking of the way the young man had behaved，he realized the young man might be the bank robber．So Arthur ran faster and stopped a taxi.The moment he got into the taxi，he told the driver the man shouting behind was the bank thief and asked him to drive to the nearest police station.The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away.
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked the driver and directly went in.Just as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on Park Avenue and reported the young man to the police，he heard a voice outside，
“Help！Help！” To the surprise of Arthur，it was the young man.He had followed Arthur in another taxi.It turned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were just some clothes.Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway.(Words：158)
专题二概要写作
写概要时，读者要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄
袭文章的原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进
行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。[选材特点]
1．所需阅读的短文词数在350 以内；
2．所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。
[评分参考]
阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：1．对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；
2．应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；
3．上下文的连贯性；4．对各要点表达的独立性情况。
注意：理解准确，涵盖全部要求，完全使用自己的语言，准确使用相应的语法结构和词
汇，得分相应比较高。相反，如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄
自原文现象，得分档次将会大大降低；所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。
[写作步骤]
1．仔细阅读原文，掌握文章的主旨大意。在阅读过程中，要注意搜寻要点，如议论文中
的论点、论据，记叙文中的发展、高潮、结局等。
2．列出文章的要点和各段落的主题句。可以用下划线标记，也可做笔记，将要点逐一列
出。
3．分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述，并注意在结构上的顺序。
4．写出初稿。根据列出的要点和对原文的理解，用自己的语言组织内容，尝试写出概
要。
5．修改、定稿。认真阅读初稿，对照原文，检查是否漏掉重要内容。检查并确定拼写、
语法、标点正确无误。检查是否符合规定的词数要求。
[方法技巧]
在掌握一定的解题步骤后，为了顺利完成概要写作，学生在写作时还需要注
意以下方法技巧。
1．要点齐全。概要写作主要考查学生概括文章主旨大意和准确获取关键信息的能力，关
键信息获取不准确往往导致所写概要要点不齐全。要点全面是评分的重要方面，因此学生要
训练自己的语篇能力和阅读能力，既把握文本的整体和部分又把握它们之间的逻辑关系。
2．精练简洁。精练指的是概括的内容要高度浓缩。学生可以利用概括的方法对文本内容
进行提炼，用删略的方法去换不重要或者不必要的细节。简洁指的是所使用的语言简练。学
生可以用抽象的、概括性的语言代替具体形象的语言。
3．灵活转换。语言转换就是用不同的词或句式来表达与原有表达内容相同的意义，且重
新表达后能做到简单易懂。灵活转换包括语言换说和句子重构。语言换说可以通过同义、近
义和反义变换来替换需要被替换的词汇；句子重构可以改变原有句子中个别词和词组在句子
中充当的语法成分或变换句式来实现。
注意确保四个一定：
1．一定要使用第三人称。
2．一定不可加入自己的观点。
3．一定不可对原文内容加以评论。
4．一定不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。
[写作要求]
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要。
Getting rid of dirt，in the opinion of most people，is a good thing.However，there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
In the early 16th century，people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease，as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and
let ills in.A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538，the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the King of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry Ⅳ，King of France，was famously dirty.Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath，the King ordered that，to avoid the attack of disease，the nobleman should not go out.
Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.Scientifically speaking，cleaning away dirt is good to health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet，it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea：Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer，surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt，however，gone too far?
Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt，which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary，Mary Ruebush，an American immunologist (免疫学家)，encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.
【经典范文】
People have mixed opinions about dirt on our skin.(要点1)For a long time in history，people of some European countries believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.(要点2)However，people began to change their attitudes towards dirt about 200 years ago.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.(要点3) Yet，some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.(要点4)
【范文点拨】
(一)要点分析
1．文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：“However，there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.”换句话说：“Different people have different attitudes towards dirt.再结合下文谈到的主题可知“Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on the skin.
概括非常精练。
范文中的要点1“People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.”
2．第二段主要谈到了在16 世纪，人们认为“dirt o n the skin was a means to block out 尤以英、法两国的贵族为代表。结合第三段第一句“Though the belief in the merit(好disease”
处) of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.”可知，直到18 世纪之前，人们都认为dirt
是很“友好的”，有助于预防疾病。范文中的要点2“For a long time in history，
people of some European countries believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.”
很好地总结了这些要点。
引出人们对dirt 观点的转变“...since the 18th
3 ．第三段用“Though”
century.Scientifically speaking，cleaning away dirt is good to health.”再结合本段最后一部分
可得出要点3“However ，people began to change “Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea...”
their attitudes towards dirt about 200 years ago.People h ave been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.”
4．文章最后一段第一句指出，现在人们对于dirt 的态度还是有所不同，“On the contrary”引出专家的观点，一位免疫学家认为dirt 有助于增强免疫系统。这一观点得到了
一些支持。范文中的要点4“Yet，some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.”表达很恰切。
(二)要点连接
文章概要，在写完了要点之后，下一步的工作就是要把这些要点用适当的连接词进行连
接，使上下句之间具有连贯性。本篇文章整篇结构是总分结构，要点 2 和要点 3 在观点上截然相反，因此，两者之间需要表示转折的连接词，范文用了“However”恰到好处。要点 3 和
。
要点 4 在观点上又存在不同，因此，范文用了连接词“Yet”
专题三应用文写作
类型1| 书信/电子邮件
英文书信通常由下列五个部分组成：
1．信头(Heading)。包括写信人地址和写信日期，通常写在信笺的右上角。在比较熟识的朋友之间的通信，写信人的地址常可省略。
2．称呼(Salutation)。指写信人对收信人的称呼，如Dear Xiaojun，写在日期下一两行，顶格写，称呼后面可用逗号，也可用冒号，一般用Dear...或My dear... 开头。
3．正文(Body)。这是书信的主体部分，即写信人要表达的内容。正文一般在称呼下方隔两行处开始写，正文的首行左边一般留约 5 个字母宽的空白。
4．结束语(Complimentary Close)。它是书信结尾的恭维话，相当于中文书信最后的“祝
等。
好”、“致礼”之类的话语。如“Best wishes”
5．签名(Signature)。签名通常签在结束语下方的中间偏右的位置，在签名的上方可根据写信人和收信人的关系写Sincerely yours/Yours sincerely(用于长辈或朋友之间)，或Respectfully yours/Yours respectfully(用于对长辈或上级)，注意开
头字母要大写，末尾要用逗号。
假如你叫李华，你的一位朋友John 刚从国外归来，邀请你参加本周日在他
家举办的朋友聚会，但你不能参加。请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件：1．表达想参加的意愿；
2．忙于准备高考；
3．由于感冒，身体不适；4．表示歉意并另
约时间。注意：
1．词数80 左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：高考the College Entrance Examination
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2016年浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作 一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题 第二节：概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is no thing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block o ut disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up t he skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 15 46. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a frie ndly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman h ad taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman sho uld not go out. Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been re garded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning awa y dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of pre venting disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter th an white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too f ar? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of diseas e. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages ch ildren to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) positi on is gaining some ground. （原创范文，仅供参考） One possible version： People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a long time in histo ry, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected peop le from getting ill. (要点 2 ) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt abou t 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us health y. (要点 3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our im mune system. (要点 4) 【范文点拨】 (一)要点分析 1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there is nothing fix ed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have different attitudes towards di rt. 再结合下文谈到的主题可知Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on th
2019全国8套高考英语作文真题及范文指导 1.全国Ⅰ卷 【题目要求】 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。 注意： 1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．结束语已为你写好。 【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position. The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form. All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours, 1
浙江高考英语作文范文 【篇一：2012年浙江高考英语作文题目及范文】 2012年浙江高考英语作文题目及范文 你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：”your future depends on many things but mostly on you”：请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文： 1．针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法； 2．举例说明理由 注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数） in the english reading week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. ______________________________________________________ ___________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ___________________________________ 参考范文： one possible student version in the english reading week, one of m classmates recommended a quote to us which goes like this : your future depends on many things but mostly on you. i cant agree more with this view. its true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. in other words, we are the master of our own future. take abraham lincoln, for example. he was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of america. even to this day, lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. therefore, i firmly believe that our future is in our own hands. 【篇二：历年07-14年浙江高考英语作文题目及范文】 2014年
2017年高考英语作文范文10篇 高考英语满分作文一般胜在行文清晰、准确、简洁三点，这就是公认的英语满分作文“黄金三定律”。为保证所写文章清晰明了，一是越确切具体越好，二是组织结构富有逻辑性。为让读者更好地理解所传递的信息，使用英文进行写作时，行文一定要注意做到清晰、准确、简洁这三点。下面小编为各位整理了2017年高考英语作文范文20篇，供各位考生参考阅读。 高考英语作文范文：(1) 假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。内容包括：1.认为同学们不必为此烦恼2.希望能够体谅父母的苦衷3.建议与父母进行交流沟通 范文：Good morning , ladies and gentlemen , Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries . I fully
understand why we are not comfortable ab out it , but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them .If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it . Thank you! (2) 假定你是李华，在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。 I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in
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08年陕西高考英语作文书面表达(满分30分) 某天，你班贴出了一张通知，请根据通知、内容要点和要求写一篇英文发言稿。内容要点: 1、你对“周五读报活动”的看法; 2、陈述你的理由(可 定区域; 2、短文词数不少于80(不含已写好的部分); 3、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯; 4、书写须清晰、工整。Dear fellow students, Our monitor suggests that we have “Friday New Hour”. I think ____________________________________________ _ 范文: Our monitor suggests that we have “Friday New Hour”. I think that it is a good idea. Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad, let alone what we can do for our country. By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside. So I think “Friday New Hour” can broaden our mind and enrich our school life. What’s more, it will help us improve our reading skills. As for my suggestion, I think it’s better to have it twice a week. And we should make a choice about what we’ll read. I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity. 建议看怎样解决这个问题) Dear Grown-up , I have read about your
浙江新高考英语作文指津 专题一读后续写 [ 选材特点] 1．所需阅读的短文词数在350 以内； 2．多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。 [ 评分参考] 阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：1．与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度； 2．内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况； 3．应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；4．上下文 的连贯性。注意： 1．所续写短文的词数应为150 左右； 2．应使用5 个以上（即至少6 个）短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线（单下划直线即可）标出你所使用的关键词语。 [ 写作步骤] 1．精读文章，确定文章线索，如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这有利于“顺藤摸瓜”。 2．仔细审题，明确续写要求，如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示等，做到“心中有数”。
3?回扣原文，想象续写内容。快速回读短文，揣摩文章的思路，结合段首的提示语和划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。 4 ?拟写草稿，修改错词病句。结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，上下文的衔接。 5?标出所使用的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语，最后誊写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。 ［方法技巧］ 1 ?在读懂原文的基础上，紧扣原文中心，以原文的结局为起点，写出故事情节的发展和变化。 2 ?对原文故事没有写出的情节展开合理的推想，打开思路。多角度地想象出几种情况或结局，并从中加以最优选择。 3 ?要注意前后照应，符合逻辑，防止自相矛盾。必须与上文紧密联系，使上下文融为一体。 4?原文的主要角色，续文中都要安排“戏”，但不要引进影响事件结局的新角色。 注意确保四个一致： 1 ?要与原文的主题或作者的本来意图保持一致 2 ?要与原文的体裁、结构、写作手法保持一致 3 ?要与原文的语言特点和叙事风格保持一致。 4 ?主要人物的思想行为、性格特点要与原文保持一致。 ［写作要求］ 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A funny thing happe ned to Arthur whe n he was on the way to work one he walked alon g Park Avenue n ear the First Nati onal Bank，he heard the sound of some one trying to start a tried aga in and aga in but could n't get the car tur ned and looked in side at the face of a young man who looked stopped and asked “It looks like you've got a problem，” Arthur said.
2005年上海高考作文及范例 古人云：―天生我材必有用‖（There must be a use for my talent）。通过描述你 生活中一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。 There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years. From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society. When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them. To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood. From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed. (200 words) 2003年上海高考作文及范例 你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信，谈谈你的看法和建议。 受信人：徐海青寄信人：黄平写信日期：2003年六月八日 June 8, 2003 Dear Xu Haiqing, Y ou said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it. Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearan ce. Y ou must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations. A famous saying goes, ―Frugality is the mother of virtue.‖ So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. Y ou will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life. I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter. 2001年上海高考作文及范例 请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。 Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else, private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows. First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with
2014年 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书( popular science books )和文学类图书( literary books )。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100 —120 词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。 注意：信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数) 。 Dear Mr. Wang, Yours sincerely Li Yue Dear Mr. Wang, Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I 'd like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books ：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I' ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. Yours sincerely, Li Yue 2013 年 请以“ One Thing I 'm Proud of ”为题，用英语写一篇100-120 个词的短文，记述一件自己认为得
浙江高考英语作文应用文--咨询信 1.假定你是李华，在网上看到英国King’s School 有关远程教育课程(Distance Learning Course)的信息，你对其中某一门课程很感兴趣,决定给该校负责人写一封信，询问这门课程的具体情况，内容包括： 1.课程开设时间、内容等； 2.课程报名方式。 注意: 1.词数80 左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
1高考英语作文范文 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 【答案】 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me. Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点】本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。
历年高考优秀英语作文范文三篇（浙江卷） 【导语】锲而舍之，朽木不折；锲而不舍，金石可镂。备考也需要这样持之以恒的精神。wo为您提供历年高考优秀英语作文范文，巩固所学知识并灵活运用，考试时会更得心应手，快来看看吧！ 【篇一】历年高考优秀英语作文范文三篇 假定你是高中生李岳，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(scribble) 和乱丢垃圾（litter）的行为，请用英文给校长写封信；1. 说明写信的目的 2.对这些行为提出批评 3.提出建议 范文： Dear Mr. Headmaster, I am Li Yue , a student from class one ,senior II . I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students : littering and scribbling . It makes our school dirty and unpleasant , and does harm to the image of our school . I always feel ashamed whenever I see this . It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time , students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that , with the joint efforts of bother teachers and students ,our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Li yue 【篇二】历年高考优秀英语作文范文三篇 最近，李岳被评为你们班的“每周之星”，请你根据她的事迹（在上周六下午，不顾天气炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装），用英语写一篇短文 1.李岳的事迹及对同学的影响 2. 你的评论参考词汇：singing contest . costume(服装) 范文： Star student of the week
2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要” 模拟练习（九）写作指导 一、概写原文
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第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，明确各段落之间的逻辑关系，提取全文中心词(尤其是名词与动词)。 第二步：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点与次要点。 第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，重新组织语言。可用中文概括出段落大意，然后用一句话翻译出来。 第四步：通读修改。修改是一个重要的环节，要考虑连接词的使用；高级词汇的替换；句式的多样；语法是否正确以及字数的多少。 第五步：用自信衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。 三、分段概括 关键词句已在原文标出，结合理解，用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。 ?如今，美国青少年更喜欢与同龄人交往而不是与年少的儿童或者是成年人交往。 Nowadays, adolescents in America prefer to interact with their peers rather than younger children or adults. ?这一趋势主要有三个原因：首先，工业化导致了职业的变化以及更多的职业女性，这使得该现象不可避免。
This trend is mainly due to three factors. Firstly, industrialization led to changes in the workplace and more working mothers, which made the phenomenon inevitable. ?其二，学校改革也导致了他们很少与儿童交往。 Secondly, school reform has resulted in little contact with younger children. ?此外，青少年人数的增长导致同龄文化的出现。 Additionally, the growing adolescent population accounts for the appearance of peer culture. ?然而，研究对青少年花更多时间与同龄人在一起持积极的态度。 However, research holds a positive attitude towards adolescents spending more time with their peers. 四、下水范文 Nowadays, adolescents in America prefer to interact with their peers rather than younger children or adults. This trend is mainly due to three factors. Firstly, industrialization led to changes in the workplace and more working mothers, which made the phenomenon inevitable. Secondly, school reform has resulted in little contact with younger children. Additionally, the growing adolescent population