跟着名著《小王子》学高考英语读后续写绝佳的续写
素材
小说叙述者是个飞行员，他在故事一开始告诉读者，他在大人世界找不到一个说话投机的人，因为大人都太讲实际了。
接着，飞行员讲了六年前他因飞机故障迫降在撒哈拉沙漠遇见小王子故事。神秘的小王子来自另一个星球。飞行员讲了小王子和他的玫瑰的故事。小王子为什么离开自己的星球；在抵达地球之前，他又访问过哪些星球。他转述了小王子对六个星球的历险，他遇见了国王、爱虚荣的人、酒鬼、商人、点灯人、地理学家、蛇、三枚花瓣的沙漠花、玫瑰园、扳道工、商贩、狐狸以及我们的叙述者飞行员本人。
飞行员和小王子在沙漠中共同拥有过一段极为珍贵的友谊。当小王子离开地球时，飞行员非常悲伤。他一直非常怀念他们共度的时光。他为纪念小王子写了这部小说。
01. I jumped to my feet, completely thunderstruck . I blinked my eyes hard.
I looked carefully all around me.
jump to one's feet跳起来; be thunderstruck大吃一惊; 愣住了; blink one's eyes 眨眼睛
02. He tossed his head gently, without taking his eyes from my plane. toss his head摇头; without taking one's eyes from...注视着……
03. This man was so much occupied that he did not even raise his head at the little prince's arrival.
raise one's head 抬头
04. "Forget that I am ashamed," the tippler confessed , hanging his head. hang one's head低着头
05. Then he mopped his forehead with a handkerchief decorated with red squares.
然后，他用一条饰有红色方块的手帕擦了擦额头。
06. In the moonlight I looked at his pale forehead, his closed eyes, his locks of hair that trembled in the wind.
locks of hair 绺(头发)
She brushed a lock of hair off his forehead. 她撩开他脑门上的一绺头发。
07. It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye.
但只有用心才能看得清楚，重要的东西是肉眼看不见的。
08. "But the eyes are blind. One must look with the heart..."
"但是眼睛是瞎的。必须用心去看…"
09. He looked at me very gravely, and put his arms around my neck. I felt his heart beating like the heart of a dying bird, shot with someone's rifle. look at sb gravely严肃地看着……;
put one's arms around one's neck搂着某人的脖子
10. turn around to give one more glance to...
转过头再看一眼……
11. The little prince sat down on a stone, and raised his eyes toward the sky.
小王子坐在一块石头上，抬头望着天空。
12. The little prince gazed at him for a long time.
小王子盯着他看了很久。
13. Without saying anything more, I looked across the ridges of sand that were stretched out before us in the moonlight.
我什么也没说，望着月光下伸展在我们面前的沙脊。
14. I realised clearly that something extraordinary was happening. I was holding him close in my arms as if he were a little child.
hold sb close in one's arms拥抱某人
15. And he gave me a sad smile. 他悲伤地朝我笑了笑。
16. I could not bear the thought of never hearing that laughter any more. For me, it was like a spring of fresh water in the desert.
我无法忍受再也听不到那笑声了。对我来说，就像沙漠里的一股清泉。
17. He stared at me, t hunderstruck.他瞪着我，愣住了。
18. I took him in my arms, and rocked him.
take sb in one's arms 拥抱某人
19. I dropped my eyes to the foot of the wall-- and I leaped into the air. There before me, facing the little prince, was one of those yellow snakes that take just thirty seconds to bring your life to an end. Even as I was digging into my pocket to get out my revolver I made a running step back.
leap into the air 纵身一跃; make a running step back 向后退了一步20. When I came back from my work, the next evening, I saw from some distance away my little prince sitting on top of a wall, with his feet dangling.
第二天晚上，当我下班回来时，我远远地看见我的小王子坐在墙上，两脚悬着。
21. shrug one's shoulders slightly微微耸耸肩
22. walk along with a quick and resolute step迈着坚定的步伐
23. When we had trudged along for several hours, in silence, the darkness fell, and the stars began to come out. Thirst had made me a little feverish(焦虑不安的), and I looked at them as if I were in a dream. The little prince's last words came reeling(摇摇晃晃地挪动) back into my memory:
We had to trudge up the track back to the station. (步履沉重地走)
我们不得不沿路艰难地走回车站。
24. And he took me by the hand牵着我的手
25. He remained motionless for an instant.他一动不动地待了一会儿。
26.As the little prince dropped off to sleep, I took him in my arms and set out walking once more. I felt deeply moved, and stirred.
drop off to sleep 打瞌睡; take sb in one's arms拥抱；feel moved and stirred感动
27. I reached the wall just in time to catch my little man in my arms; his face was white as snow.
just in time to do sth 正好赶上
28. I pondered deeply over the adventures of the jungle.
ponder over...琢磨
She pondered over his words. 她反复琢磨他的话。
29. After a reflective silence he answered.
after a reflective silence经过深思熟虑的沉默
After hearing the news they sat in a quiet, reflective silence.
听到这消息后，他们静静地坐着思考。
30. There was a moment of complete silence. 鸦雀无声地沉默了一会儿。
31. Again the little prince disturbed my thoughts. 扰乱了我的思想
32. By this time my patience was exhausted, because I was in a hurry to start taking my engine apart.
patience was exhausted 没有耐性in a hurry to do sth 急着去
做……
33. And the little prince broke into a lovely pea l [pi?l] of laughter, which irritated me very much.
break into a peal of laughter 突然爆发出一阵笑声
34. The little prince asked me abruptly as if seized by a grave doubt.
be seized by a grave doubt 感到非常疑惑
35. He could not say anything more. His words were choked by sobbing. words were choked by sobbing 哭得说不出话来。
36. I did not know what to say to him. I felt awkward and blundering. feel awkward and blundering 感到尴尬又愚笨
37.And when he watered the flower for the last time, and prepared to place her under the shelter of her glass globe玻璃泡, he realised that he was very close to tears.
be close to tears 快要哭了
38. He stood there all bewildered.
look bewildered 看起来困惑不解的;不知所措的
39. The geographer was suddenly stirred to excitement.
be stirred to excitement 突然激动忙乱起来
40. And he was overcome with sadness.
be overcome with sadness感到伤心
41. The little prince sat down on the table and panted a little.
pant vi. 气喘吁吁
He found her panting for breath at the top of the hill.上到山顶他发现她上气不接下气。
42. And he lay down in the grass and cried.他躺在草地上哭了。
43. And once again, without understanding why, I had a queer sense of sorrow. One question, however, occurred to me.
又一次，我不明白为什么，有一种奇怪的悲伤感。然而，我想到了一个问题。
44. So he remained standing upright, and, since he was tired, he yawned. 他只好站在那里，但是因为疲倦了，他打起哈欠来。
45. I made a gesture of weariness. 我做了个疲倦的动作。
46. "That frightens me... I cannot, any more..." murmured the little prince,completely abashed.
"这让我害怕……我再也不能了……" 小王子低声说，完全不好意思了。
47. "May I sit down?" came a timid inquiry from the little prince.
"我可以坐下吗?" 小王子怯生生地问了一个问题。
48. After five minutes of this exercise the little prince grew tired of... after five minutes of sth... 做……几分钟以后；grow tired of... 感到厌倦
49. And the little prince went away, puzzled.小王子满怀困惑地离开了。
50. He breathed a sigh of regret, and said to himself again.
breathe a sigh of regret 叹息一声
51. He plucked[pl?kt] up his courage to ask the king a favor.
pluck up one's courage to do sth 鼓起勇气做……
52. As the king made no answer, the little prince hesitated a moment. Then, with a sigh, he took his leave.
make no answer没有回答; take one's leave 离开
53. But after some thought, he added. 但经过深思熟虑，他补充道。
54. He was tired. He sat down. I sat down beside him. And, after a little silence, he spoke again, "The stars are beautiful, because of a flower that cannot be seen."
他累了。他坐下了。我坐在他旁边。沉默了一会儿，他又说道：“星星是美丽的，因为一朵看不见的花。"
55. After a silence the little prince spoke again.沉默了一会儿，小王子又开口了。
56. But he did not answer my plea[pli?].但他没有回答我的请求。
57. The businessman opened his mouth, but he found nothing to say in
answer. And the little prince went away.商人张着嘴，但他发现没有什么可以回答。小王子走了。
58. It was then that the fox appeared.就在那时，狐狸出现了。
59.A brilliantly lighted express train rushed by with a roar like thunder. 一列灯火通明的特快列车隆隆而过。
60. And they heard the roaring thunder of ...听到……隆隆声
61. The song of the pulley was still in my ears, and I could see the sunlight shimmer（闪烁）in the still trembling water.
滑轮的歌声还在我耳边，我能看见阳光在静止的颤抖的水中闪烁。
62. When I was a little boy, the lights of the Christmas tree, the music of the Midnight Mass, the tenderness of smiling faces, used to make up the radiance of the gifts I received.我小时候，圣诞树上的灯光，午夜弥撒的音乐，笑脸上的温柔，构成我收到的礼物的光辉。
小王子名著导读练习题 第一章 1、“我”画了一幅什么画？大人们理解和“我”有何差异？ 2、大人们和“我”的兴趣有何区别？ 3、“我”后来不画画了，而是该做了什么？ 第二章 4、“我”为什么给小王子画闭着肚皮的蟒蛇呢？ 5、为什么最后“我”画了盒子，想要小羊的小王子反而喜笑颜开呢？ 6、既然都是羊，小王子为什么不要公羊只要小羊呢？ 第三章 7、小王子十从哪里来？“我”是怎样弄清楚小王子从哪里来的？ 8、“我”建议画一根绳子白天拴住小绵羊，而小王子持什么态度？从两种态度中你能感受到什么？ 9、小王子为什么略带伤感地说：“一直朝前走，也不会走出多远┅┅┅┅” 第四章 10、是什么原因导致土耳其文学家两次关于小行星的论证结果截然不同？ 11、你从文中“小孩子们对大人们应该宽厚些，不要埋怨他们”这句话中读到了一种怎样的淡淡情绪？ 12、孩子和大人分别是怎样判断一座房子是否漂亮的？从中看出大人对什么最感兴趣？ 第五章 13、小王子让“我”给我画羊的原因是什么？ 14、小王子为什么让我画这个住着一个懒家伙的星球？ 15、话题“辩论”：小王子的“纪律问题”是否和大人世界中的“责任意识”是一样不可逃脱、必须解决的呢？（提示：可以从儿童和大人面对问题的态度不同、出发点不同等角度分析。主动解决还是被动接受，为了美好的愿望还是为了根本的利益，言之成理即可） 第六章 16、当小王子感到非常苦闷时，最喜欢做的事是什么？ 17、在他家乡的那个小行星上，小王子曾一天最多看见过多少次日落？ 第七章 18、小王子生活的秘密是什么？ 19、他非常恼火，气得脸色发白的原因是什么？ 20、“我”是如何安慰哭泣的小王子的？ 第八章 21、这是一朵什么样的花？与众不同的地方在哪里？ 22、这朵花要小王子为它做了哪些事情？ 23、小王子对这多花的情感发生了怎样的变化？ 第九读完本章节你会发现玫瑰花发生了哪些变化？请结合文章具体内容分析。 第十章 23、国王要满足小王子的要求，小王子只提出怎样的请求？ 24、国王为什么一而再地留住小王子？ 25、本章节描写国王时运用了哪些手法，写出了他怎样的性格特征？ 第十一章 26、爱慕虚荣的人为什么戴着帽子？ 27、本章节主要运用了哪两种描写手法？有什么作用？
2021高考英语读后续写素材积累（一）一：语料积累 1.Stanley weighed three times as much as the other boy. （人物，肖像描写） 2.Once he started a project he would work on it for years, often going days without sleep. （人物性格） 3. Elya blushed(红脸) when Myra entered the room. （人物，神态描写） 4. His clothes were soaked(被…浸湿的) with sweat. （人物描写） 5. He felt like he was digging his own grave. （心理描写，修辞） 6.Even the people looked broken, with their worn-out(疲惫不堪) bodies sprawled(四肢摊开懒散地坐或躺) over the various chairs and sofas. (环境描写，人物描写) 7. Every muscle and joint in his body ached as he tried to get out of bed. （病痛，人物描写） 8. Now he had such a huge smile it almost seemed too big for his face, like the smile on a jack-o'-lantern. （笑容，人物描写） 9. Zero's mouth was shut tight. As he glared at(怒视) Mr. Pendanski, his dark eyes seemed to expand. （生气，人物描写） 10. If he jerked(猛的一动) too quickly, he felt a throbbing(阵阵的疼痛) pain just above his neck where Zigzag's shovel had hit him. （疼痛，人物描写） 11.A big smile spread across Zero's face. （人物描写） 12. Zero's face looked like a jack-o'-lantern that had been left out too many days past Halloween— half rotten, with sunken eyes and a drooping(颓丧) smile. （人物描写） 13. Zero sat as still as a statue. （人物描写） 14. His legs were sore from remaining rigid for so long. （人物描写） 15. He had dark circles under her eyes from Jack of sleep(因缺乏睡眠). （人物描写） 16. Stanley was overcome by a rush of dizziness and almost fell over. （人物描写） 17. Stanley felt his ears redden. （人物描写） 18.A man was sitting with his feet up on a desk. （人物，动作描写） 19.Stanley could see some kids dressed in orange and carrying shovels dragging themselves toward the tents. （人物，着装与动作描写） 20. Theodore whirled(急转) and grabbed Stanley by his collar. （冲突，动作描写）
续写积累 _______________ 班级：姓名：______________ 一、环境描写的素材环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描 写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。客观环境描写：adj环境描写的要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道Part 1 the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣）（鸟鸣）蓝天）the songs of birds the blue sky(（青the green grass;娇嫩的花）（the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）the fragile flowers (…/冉冉升起的太阳）落日草）the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）; the setting/rising sun(）要求verb Part 2 环境描写的（vi&vt blow/click/howl/wail/roar)一．Wind （）1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.冷风吹拂过我的头发）(The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift. （今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。）Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter)．二)1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.声音：在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear 颜色surface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。 3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank.有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。,离此不远 4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. 似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。(action, sound, colour)三)．Sky (stand/ appear/turn)The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. 1.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云2.Blue skies stood tall and far 蓝蓝的天空高高耸立 1 主观环境描写：1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done... 某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done 被）//听到感到/闻到某物（状态/动作/某人看到3.It was so adj that we find/feel ....以至于它是如此4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed// /惊讶景物使我如此陶醉sth held sb entirely in their power景物让我完全惊呆了5.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like …景物看起来像… （来自原著：追风筝的人）二、场景描写的素材. like paper sharks roaming for prey1. At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky, , and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun the number doubled Within an hour, was perfect for kite flying, The wind A cold breeze wafted through my hair. in the sky.
名着《小王子》知识点梳理及练习 一、人物简介。 叙述者 小说的叙述者是个飞行员，他讲述了小王子、以及他们之间友谊的故事。飞行员坦率地告诉读者，自己是个爱幻想的人，不习惯那些太讲究实际的大人，反而喜欢和孩子们相处，孩子自然、令人愉悦。飞行员因飞机故障迫降在撒哈拉大沙漠，在那里遇见了小王子。飞行员写下这段故事是为了平静自己与小王子离别的悲伤。那次与小王子的相遇，让飞行员既悲伤，然也使自己重振精神。 小王子 小王子，小说就是以他命名的，是一个神秘可爱的孩子。他住在被称作B-612小星球，是那个小星球唯一居民。小王子离别自己的星球和所爱的玫瑰花开始了宇宙旅行，最后来到了地球。在撒哈拉沙漠，小王子遇到小说的叙述者飞行员，并和他成了好朋友。在小说中小王子象征着希望、爱、天真无邪和埋没在我们每个人心底的孩子般的灵慧。虽然小王子在旅途中认识了不少人，但他从没停止对玫瑰的思念。 狐狸 小王子在沙漠见到狐狸。聪明的狐狸要求小王子驯养他，虽然狐狸在两者中显得更有知识，他使小王子明白什么是生活的本质。狐狸告诉小王子的秘密是：用心去看才看得清楚，是分离让小王子更思念他的玫瑰，爱就是责任。 玫瑰 一朵喜欢卖弄风情的花，她的自负和幼稚没能让小王子明白她对他的爱，反而令他无法忍受离家出走。在分开的日子里，她却时时出现在小王子的心里。 二、中心思想。 圣·埃克苏佩里在这部童话小说里，通过一颗小星球上的一个小王子旅行宇宙的经历，表达了对人类“童年”消逝的无限感叹。 一小王子在旅途中到过六个星球，碰到过一个目空一切的国王，一个爱慕虚荣的人，一个消磨光阴的酒鬼，个唯利是图的商人，一个循规蹈矩的点灯人和一个学究式的地理学家，最后才到达地球，在浩瀚的撒哈拉大沙漠上遇到了“我”——一个飞行员。 作者以小王子的孩子式的眼光，透视出这些大人们的空虚、盲目和愚妄，用浅显天真的语言写出了人类的孤独寂寞、没用根基随风流浪的命运。同时，也表达出作者对金钱关系的批判，对真善美的讴歌。 作者特别借小王子之口赞颂了情谊和友爱，希望人们要发展友情，相互热爱。在作者看来，爱就要像小王子住的星球上的火山一样炽热，友情就要像小王子那样兢兢业业为玫瑰花铲除恶草。 三、写作特色。 《小王子》这部童话情节别致而曲折，行文富于诗情和哲理，它采用倒叙的手法，语言明白晓畅，可读性很强。由于作者以情爱贯穿全篇，所以法国评论界认为它是一部充满诗意的童话，是作者对友情的眷念。 《小王子》阅读练习（一） 1.本书的作者是_法国_（国籍）圣埃克苏佩里（作者名称），着有代表作《人类的大地》、《空军飞行员》。 2.本书是献给莱昂·韦尔特的，因为他是圣埃克苏佩里在世界上最好的朋友。再次，这个大人住在法国，他在那里忍冻挨饿，很需要安慰。 3.读第21章节，回答下列问题： 1)小王子遇到了狐狸，狐狸让小王子驯养它，并且告诉小王子一个秘密：我们只有用心才能看得清楚，本质的东西肉眼是看不到的。它叮嘱小王子不要忘记：对被你驯化了的，你们之间互相不可缺少。 2)“驯化”原指野生的动物经长期饲养后逐渐改变原来的习性，听从人的指挥，如野牛、野马等经过驯化，成为家畜，在本章节中的意思为建立联系。 4.阅读书中11-16章节,完成表格，并回答下列问题：
读后续写细节描写素材二：心理描写 开心 My heart is full of joy. 我的心里乐开了花。 My heart is as sweet as honey. 我心里像喝了蜜一样，甜滋滋的。 The surface of the calm lake stirred the waves, and my mood was as cheerful as a wave.平静的湖面激起了浪花，我的心情也像浪花一样欢腾。 I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。 We were very pleased to hear this encouraging news. 听到这个令人鼓舞的消息，我们十分高兴。 He was delighted to receive such impressive recognition for his achievements.他的成就获得大家的认可，他很开心。 悲伤 be in tears 含泪 have tears in one’s eyes 眼里含着泪水 burst into tears 放声大哭，突然哭起来 fight back tears 抑制住泪水 be close to tears 快要哭了 He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears. 她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。 It was a time of great sorrow. 这是一个非常悲伤的时刻。 Words cannot express my sorrow. 言语无法表达我的哀伤。 As he looked at Katherine, great sorrow clouded his eyes. 他看着凯瑟琳，满眼忧伤。 Their reunion after a long separation brought mixed feelings of joy and sorrow to them both. 两人久别重逢，悲喜交加。 This article brought back sad memories for me. 这篇文章使我想起了伤心的往事。Separation from his friends made him sad. 与朋友们分离使他伤心。 愤怒 fly off the handle 勃然大怒 lose one’s temper 发脾气 His anger has cooled. 他的怒气平息了。
What is a climax of a story?（什么是故事高潮?） More tension=satisfying climax 文学故事中的高潮（climax）----故事的主要场景（key scene）也通常是故事的转折点（turning point），是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的 "危机" 点。有时候, 它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点, 发生了一些事情, 或者主角必须做出决定, 从而导致一个结果或其他。我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。 常见故事高潮示例： 1. A little girl has been searching for her lost dog. All of a sudden, she hears a bark coming from around the corner, and she looks around to see . . . 2. Kevin has worked very hard to try out for the soccer team at school. The coach has posted a list of this year's team members on his office door. Kevin walks forward to look at the list . . . . 3. Mary's parents have been discussing whether or not to move to another state. They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about their decision . . . 4. Lois has performed in the state gymnastics finals. She waits anxiously to hear the names of the winners. The announcer says, "And first place goes to . . ." 文学名著中的一些故事高潮 1. The deaths of Romeo (who kills himself because he thinks Juliet is dead) and Juliet (who kills herself when she awakes and sees Romeo dead). Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare （罗密欧和朱丽叶，莎士比亚） 2. When Gaston and the townspeople come to attack the beast, and Belle admits her love for the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney （美女与野兽，迪士尼） 3. In "The Three Little Pigs," suspense builds up until the confrontation between the third pig and the wolf. This confrontation is the climax.（三只小猪） How to create a climax of a story? (如何营造故事的高潮？) 方法1.增加外部冲突 增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。 1）角色之间的冲突(人物观点差异, 竞争需要等) 如：2017年11月浙江英语高考：On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why
专题01 The Description of Snow ——本专题聚焦于雪景、适用于冬日户外的环境描写 ?1-1 The street glistened with fresh snow and the sky was a blameless blue. Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of the stunted mulberry trees that lined our street. Overnight, snow had nudged its way into every crack and gutter. 街上白雪皑皑，天空一片湛蓝。雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在我们街两旁发育不良的桑树枝上。一夜之间，雪就挤满了每一个裂缝和水沟。 glistened闪光; 闪亮; glisten的过去分词和过去式；这里形容雪铺在路上亮晶晶的样子 blameless无过错的; 无可指责的；blameless blue 湛蓝，蓝得毫无瑕疵 blanketed以厚层覆盖; blanket的过去式，blanket有毯子的意思，隐喻雪像一层毯子 weighed有…重; 重; 称重量，量体重; 认真考虑; 权衡; 斟酌; weigh的过去分词和过去式 这里指雪压弯了树梢。 nudged轻推，轻触; 轻推，渐渐推动; 用胳膊肘挤开往前走; nudge的过去分词和过去式 stunted发育不足的; 生长不良的; 未能充分发展的; 阻碍生长; 妨碍发展; 遏制; stunt的过去分词和过去式rooftop屋顶外部; 外屋顶 mulberry桑树; 桑葚; 深紫红色 gutter檐沟; 天沟; 路旁排水沟; 阴沟; 恶劣的社会环境; 道德沦落的社会最低阶 ?1-2 The park was covered in a thick blanket of white, statues peeked out under their new white caps, footsteps and paw prints crisscrossed each other around the labyrinth of paths. Aside from the brown of the denuded trees, the only other color was the vivid saffron staining around the base of each lamppost, tree and shrub. 公园像是被一层厚厚的白色毯子覆盖，公园里的雕像从它的崭新的白色帽子下露出头来，在迷宫般的小路上，足迹和爪印交错。除了光秃秃的树的棕色外，唯一的另一种颜色是每个灯柱、树和灌木底部的鲜艳的橘黄色。
高考英语作文高分素材训练 8. 高考读后续写高分技巧 (2018·浙江高考) 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm, ” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take
2021新高考英语读后续写素材积累（5）--看的动作描写 1.She stared at him in disbelief, shaking her head. 她摇着头，狐疑地看着他。 2.I saw the deaf kid sitting there just looking at me as the bullies pulled me down from the wall. 当一群恶棍正在把我从墙上扒拉下来时，我看到那个聋哑儿童就坐在那儿并且看着我。 3.When he finished, he raised / lifted his eyes and looked out the window. 说罢，他抬起眼睛并望向窗外。 4.We all gather in front of the television, hoping to catch a glance / glimpse of his face. 我们都聚在电视机前，希望能看一眼他的脸。 5.I glanced back over my shoulder to make sure that no one was following me. 我回头瞟了一眼以确保没有人跟踪我。 6.Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded doorbell. 看到没有人注意到我们，我放下圣诞礼物并且敲了敲门铃。
7.There are two kinds of things in the world that can't be gazed at directly. One is the sun, the other is human nature. 这世上唯有太阳和人心不可直视。 8. The guard had orders to shoot on sight. 士兵接到命令，一看到人就开枪 9.We lost sight of the boat in the fog. 由于大雾我们看不见那条船了。 10.She had spotted a man pacing down the hall. 他看见一个大男人在客厅里踱步。 11.Jalil’s eyes lifted slowly, met Mariam’s, paused for a moment, then dropped. 贾利勒慢慢抬起眼睛，看见了玛利亚的眼睛，停了一会儿，然后垂了下来 12.A big leafy tree came into view at some distance. 远处有一棵枝繁叶茂的大树映入眼帘。 13.She turned her eyes to me when I tapped her shoulder. 当我轻拍她的肩膀时，她把目光转向我。
续写积累 姓名：______________ 班级：_______________ 一、环境描写的素材 环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。 客观环境描写： Part 1 环境描写的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道 the blue sky(蓝天）the songs of birds（鸟鸣）the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣） the fragile flowers (娇嫩的花）;（the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚）the green grass（青草） the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）; the setting/rising sun(落日/冉冉升起的太阳）… Part 2 环境描写的verb （vi&vt）要求 一)．Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar） 1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。 2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。 3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。 4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair. (冷风吹拂过我的头发） The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift. （今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。） 二)．Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter) 声音：1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley. 在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。
浅谈初中文学名著阅读教学 老隆中学郑统军 【论文摘要】：名著是人类文化宝库中一朵璀璨的奇葩，是数千年文化的积淀，是人类智慧的结晶。在学生时代通过阅读大量的名著，对于一个人一生的发展所起的作用是不言而喻的。名著是学生扩展视野结识文学形象的窗口，是提高写作水准拓宽思路的捷径，更是陶冶性情塑造心灵的胜地。下面，我针对当前初中学生名著阅读中存在的问题提出自己的一点浅陋的看法。 【关键词】：初中语文名著阅读重要性困境与对策 名著是古今中外在文学史上有定评的优秀作品，是经读者反复筛选和检验的艺海明珠，是人类文化宝库中一朵璀璨的奇葩，是数千年文化的积淀，是人类智慧的结晶。因此它从思想到形式都是出类拔萃的。在学生时代通过阅读大量的名著，对于一个人一生的发展所起的作用是不言而喻的。名著是学生扩展视野结识文学形象的窗口，是提高写作水准拓宽思路的捷径，更是陶冶性情塑造心灵的胜地。 著名教育家苏霍姆林斯基曾经说：“让学生变聪明的办法，不是补课，也不是增加作业量，而是阅读、阅读、再阅读。”课外阅读能发展学生的爱好和才能，促进课堂效率的提高。而文学名著阅读更可使学生打破时空的界限，与文学、思想大师进行心灵的沟通、生命的对话，以便学生在生命与语文学习的起点就占据精神和生命的制高点，为终身发展奠定牢固的基础。可见名著阅读不仅可以提高课堂教学的效率，更能促进学生身心的全面发展。 《新课标》对中学生名著阅读也有明确的要求：“九年课外阅读的总量应在400万字以上。”对七到九年级学生，要求更为明确：“学会制定自己的阅读计划，广泛阅读各种类型的读物，课外阅读总量不少于260万字，每学年阅读两三部名著。”可见，名著阅读应该是初中语文教学的一个重要内容，在语文教学中具有举足轻重的地位。因
高考英语读后续写：这些细节描写素材，必须掌握！ 今天和大家分享的是可以运用在读后续写中的细节描写素材，大家赶紧学起来吧！ 《考试说明》中评分原则部分规定，读后续写阅卷时按5个档次给分。参考最高档次第五档（21-25分）的描述并考虑写作部分评分的其它因素，可以认为一篇优秀的读后续写具备以下特征： 1. 内容丰富充实，与所给短文融洽连贯； 2. 连接成分应用得当，行文结构紧凑一体，与所提供各段落开头语 的衔接紧密合理； 3. 使用并用下划线标示5个以上短文中标出的关键词语； 4. 词汇丰富高级，语法准确多变（主被动句式、各类从句、特殊句 式、非谓语动词等的使用情况灵活恰当、不拘一格、游刃有余）； 5. 词数充分，150词左右。评分细则规定少于130词的，从总分中减 去2分； 6. 拼写准确，英式或美式拼法皆可； 7. 标点合理，使用得当。 读后续写基本是以记叙文为主，而记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。一般来说，完成一篇完整的记叙文写作，需要选取合适的角度、按照一定的顺序组织素材进行叙述，其中包括六个基本要素：时间、地点、人物，事情的起因、经过和结果，即我们通常所说的五个“W”（what,
who, when, where, why）和一个“H”（how）。除此之外，鲜明的主题和生动的语言，也是一篇优秀的记叙文所不可或缺的。 描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用，它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节，有时还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。一篇好的作文往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。同样地，议论、抒情的表达方式对记叙文主题的展现也发挥着重要的作用。 一、情感心理描写 在写作中，对人物情感的描写常常能使人物的形象显得生动鲜活。人的情感可以分很多种，如喜悦、满意、失望、悲伤、憎恨、愤怒、惊讶、恐惧、赞赏等等。在英语中有很多不同的词和句式来表达这些不同的情感。 喜悦 1. He is very happy and sweet. 他又高兴又甜蜜。 2. They didn’t know what to do with themselves for joy. 他们高兴得不知道怎么办好。 3. He jumped for fun. 他高兴得跳了起来。 4. Her face brightened up. 她喜形于色。 More examples: 1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 2. His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 3. I was wild with joy. 4. I was pleased beyond description.
名著阅读 《小王子》教学设计 学习目标 1、略读与精读相结合，了解全书内容。 2．了解书中小王子、玫瑰、狐狸的人物形象。 3、精读精彩片段，体会其中蕴含的情感与哲理。 4、精读部分章节，用心体会字里行间蕴含的对生命、命运、人生的思考。 5、学生在探讨交流中获得情感上的共鸣，激发更加热爱阅读、更乐于去思考，养成良好的阅读习惯 学习方法：自主阅读、互动讨论 课前准备： 课外阅读《小王子》整本书 课时安排： 3课时 学习过程 第一课时 一、导入 师：【ppt出示插图】同学们，认识他吗？（一起说）对，他就是小王子。【板书：小王子】听大家叫得多开心啊！看来，相处了一个多月，我们与小王子已经建立起深厚的感情了。谁来读读这本书的作者？一起读：圣.艾克苏佩利。记住这个人的名字，因为他写的《小王子》这本书很多人都喜欢读，是一部全球阅读仅次于《圣经》的书籍。这本书的作者说想把它献给一个大人，一个曾经是小孩时的大人，因为很多大人都失去了童真。所以，孩子们，今天，我是向你们学习来的，希望通过你们的解读，能享受到天真的乐趣。 二、了解作者 三、初步交流 1、初步谈谈对这本书以及小王子的印象。 2、简单回顾小王子的游历过程。 （ppt）出示 （1）在B612小行星上：那是怎样的星球？小王子每天都做些什么？ （2）游历6个大人星球：六个星球中，都有哪些人，谈谈你对他们的看法。师：听了你们的解读，让老师有了很多感受。我们有些大人在忙碌着什么呢？我们又在追逐着什么呢？金钱财富还是权力，还是根本就不知道自己在追求什只看到眼前的东西，以自我为中心，或许我们就像这六个奇怪的人一样，......么．没有考虑眼前以外的东西，忙碌着连自己都不懂的事情...... （3）来到了地球：又遇到了谁？发生了哪些事情？最后的结局是什么？ 三、读精彩片段 精读文中精彩片段，思考下了问题：（ppt出示） 1、文中“我”为什么说“不会把数字放在眼里”“我喜欢以讲童话的方式讲这个故事”？ 2、由土耳其科学家论证小行星B612的曲折过程，你想到了什么？ 3、“我不能透过箱子看到里面的绵羊。也许我有点像大人了，我大概老了。”这
读后续写细节描写素材一：身体动作 head He hung / dropped / lowered / bent / bowed his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。 They nodded their heads in agreement. 他们点头同意。 She shook her head in disbelief. 她怀疑地摇摇头。 He scratched his head, not understanding a word. 他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。 scratch [skr?t?] v抓；挠 She buried her head in the pillow. 她用枕头捂住脑袋。 She rested her head on his shoulder. 她将头靠在他的肩膀上。 His head drooped and tears fell into his lap. 他耷拉着脑袋，眼泪滴落在大腿上。 droop [dru:p] vi 低垂，垂落 I fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow. 我头一碰到枕头就睡着了。 He put / held his head in his hands, greatly annoyed. 他双手抱头，十分生气。 It never entered my head that he might be lying. 我从未想过他会是在撒谎。 I decided to go for a walk to clear my head. 我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。 He could feel his head spinning after only one drink. 他只喝了一杯就觉得天旋地转。 spin [spin] v旋转；眩晕 He turned and headed for the door. 他转身朝门口走去。 She stood up and headed towards the exit. 她起身朝出口走去。face A bright smile appeared on / spread across / crossed his face. 他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。 Her face lit up / brightened / glowed when I gave her the present.我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。His face suddenly grew serious.他的表情突然严肃起来。 His face looked a little confused.他看起来有点困惑。 Jack’s face flushed / burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。flush [fl??] v发红；脸红 Her face paled with fright.她吓得脸都白了。 He had a slight frown on his face.他的脸上显出有点儿愁眉不展的样子。frown [fra?n] n皱眉 cheek He rested his cheek on her shoulder. 他把面靠在她的肩上。 He felt his cheeks burning with shame. 他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。 Her cheeks were wet with tears. 她泪流满面。 Color rushed / flooded / rose to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched. 意识到有人在看她，她顿时涨红了脸。 A tear slid down her cheek. 一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。 He kissed her on both cheeks and got on the train. 他亲了亲她的脸颊，然后上了火车。 eye His eyes were wide with horror. 他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。 The dog’s hungry eyes fell on my sandwich. 那条狗饥饿的眼神落在我的三明治上。 He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning. 听到门把转动的声音，他向门那边看去。 Tina shut her eyes tightly and bit her lip. 蒂娜紧闭上双眼，咬了咬嘴唇。 She looked her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully. 她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。