作文范文之雅思小作文地图题给分
雅思小作文地图题给分
【篇一：雅思小作文地图题】
雅思小作文题型多样，其中就包括地图题，本文将详细讲解雅思小作文地图题写作技巧。评分标准
?ta – task achievement 任务完成情况
?cc – coherence and cohesion 意合与形合
?lr – lexical resource 词汇资源
?gra – grammatical range and accuracy 语法广度与精确度
审题
the map below shows the development of the village of ryemouth between 1995 and present.
文章结构
第一段
第二段
描述1995年的地图
第三段
拿现在的地图和95年的做对比
第四段
总结全文
第一段
this report compares how the village of ryemouth has developed and changed since the year of 1995.
题目：the map below shows the development of the village of ryemouth between 1995 and present.
第二段
as is clearly described in the first picture, ryemouth was a coastal city which was divided into three parts by two roads. in the southern part, there was a fishing port on the sea, with a fish market located in the north and a coffee shop in the
north-east. a block of shops was situated on the opposite side of the market?
第三段
in the second picture, the village changed a lot. the fishing port has been removed and the fish market is replaced by apartments. several restaurants also occupy the place of the shops on the roadside. moreover, a parking lot is newly built on the east of the hotel. in addition, ?
第四段
overall, based on the brief description above, it is clear that the general layout of the village does not change a lot, while some newly-built facilities and housing has ornamented the small village.
writing task 1
you should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
the diagram below shows the development of the village of kelsby between 1780 and 2000.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
write at least 150 words.
新东方樊黎明：a类雅思地图题写作攻略
首先注意两个点：
1. 时态：本文的时间是明确的，是三个过去的时间，因此全文应当使用一般过去时。有些地图会有将来的规划，那么则应使用相应的一般将来时。
2. 顺序：该图属于动态的地图题，这种类型的地图题一律按照时间顺序来写。在这道题中，也就是按照图的顺序依次来写，不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题(即不涉及时间变化的题型)，则按照空间顺序来写。
下面我们一起来分析文章的写作。
第一段：引言段。
引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram，可以替换成three maps/ illustrations. 原文中的shows，可以改为illustrate/ demonstrate/ indicate等词。宾语development，可以替换成changes，也可以改为宾语从句how the village of kelsby developed/ changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊，可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
【例文】the three maps illustrate how the village of kelsby changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
第二段：介绍1780年的情况。
1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据，因此只需要用存在句即可表达，不涉及任何变化的单词。但是，考生非常容易把这些元素全部用there be这个句型来表达，从而导致句式单
一。表示存在的句型除了there be之外，还有非常简单的have句型，还有lie/ be located/ be situated 这样的结构。另外还有一种倒
装句型，比如“桌子上面有一本书”，可以翻译为on the desk is a book.
除此之外，要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素：住宅区homes，树林woods，农场farms，还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序(比如顺时针、逆时针，从
左到右)都是可以的，但是要考虑家庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因，因此建议先写。
还有就是土地单位的表达，land是不可数名词，因此不能说a land，只能说a piece of land。为了表达更加精确，可以用a plot of land(一小块)，a stretch of(一长片)，a large expanse of (一大片)。
另外还有注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有：in the east/ west/ south/ north of ... ; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ...; 如果是在角落，可以用in the southwestern corner of ... ; 在河流的上/下游：at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸：alongside the riverbank, 在河流的南端：at the southern end of the river.
【例文】in 1780, kelsby had only 100 homes. there was a large expanse of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmland in the centre. in the west was a river flowing from north to south.
第三段：介绍1860年的变化。
这一年的变化并没有时间先后，因此还是按照空间顺序来进行。图上多了一个元素，即道路和桥梁的修建。需要特别注意的是，因为考虑到和上文的呼应，这两个元素一定要放在后面讲，而家庭数量的增加和农场、树林面积的减少应当先讲。这个原则我们简称叫“先拆后建”原则、
第二点是时间的表达问题。上文中刚刚出现过in 1780，这里还是用in 1860的话，句式上就会出现重复。因此可以按照动态图里面学
过的表达方法，把年份用作主语，用saw/ witnessed这两个词把数据引出来。
第三点是“建”这个词的英文表达。常见的词有build, construct(一般建筑物)，erect(高大的建筑物)，establish/ set up(无建筑的物体或抽象的机构)，pave(道路的修建)。另外，如果涉及到拆除，则需要记住demolish, pull down, knock down 这些单词。需要重点指出的是，这些表示“建”和“拆”的词都应当使用被动语态，这一点和普通流程图是一致的。
【例文】the year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes, but the size of farmland and woods was halved. in the same year, a bridge was constructed over the river and a road was paved linking the river to the residences.
第四段：介绍2000年的变化。
首先还是时间的表达，这里可以再换一种结构，比如140 years later/ after 140 years。首先还是“先拆后建”，先说树林农场彻底消失，然后在交代新的元素：学校和操场。要记住的是，道路是不需要交代方位的，只需要把起点和终点表达出来即可，用link a to b或者connect a with b这类词组连接。因此，道路的描写应放到学校、操场的后面。
【例文】140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and
woods completely disappeared. in their places, several school buildings and sports facilities were constructed at the
south-eastern corner of the village, which were connected with the residential areas in the north via a newly-build road. some shops opened up along the river bank and a large stretch of wetland for birds was established at the southern end of the river.
【篇二：雅思小作文地图题范文】
现在停车场改成了一个剧院。
the car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre.
城镇a的家庭数量从1937年到2020年将翻一番。
the number of homes in town a is likely to double
(is likely to= is predicted to /is estimated to/is projected to/is expected to )
又可为：
it is likely that the number of homes in town a will double.
(it is likely that = it is predicted/estimated/projected/ expected that?..)
细节变化
地图每个细节变化都要提到，不要忽视一个细节
语态
雅思小作文地图题写作用被动语态，因为叙述的是一个事实，被动语态表达的更加的清晰，准确。
如：2000年在城镇a 新建了一个医院：a new hospital was established in town
a in 2000.
2014年开始，流程图与地图题的频率已经于其他图表题的频率不相上下，甚至有超过他们的趋势，2014年截止9月20日地图题已经考了4次，流程图也是4次。你还在备考时忽略这两种图吗？
地图题句式总结：
1. a lies/is situated in/is located in/on/to the east of b.
a 位于b的东面
2.a covers an area of about?.square meters/ hectares.
a的面积大概有。。。平方米/公顷
a covers a small area in 1980.
在1980年a的面积很小。
3.a, which used to be located in?., is replaced by?.
原本位于。。。的a由。。。取代
4. next to/ adjacent to b, a remains unchanged throughout the period.
毗邻b的a在这期间没变。
5. it is clear/apparent/evident that the sharpest difference lies in?
很明显，最大的不同在于。。。
6. the map describes how a village/dock called ?
expanded/developed from ? to?
地图描述了一个叫。。。的小镇/码头由。。。扩大到。。。
7. a disappeared/vanished in 1990, when?.
1990年a消失了，在那时。。。
第一段改写题目。
第二段总体概述。
第三段没有变化的部分。
第四段发生变化的部分。
地图题就是这么简单！你学会了吗？
the map describes how a village named strokeford developed from 1930 to 2010. it is clear that the sharpest difference is that large stretches of farmland in 1930 were replaced by houses in 2010. it is also evident that the gardens in 1930 disappeared and a retirement home was erected in that place.
river stoke which lies to the east of the village and the bridge, which is located to the north of the village, remained the same throughout the four score years. a road which cuts through the village and which is connected to the bridge is another facility which remained largely unchanged.
two shops, one big and another small, situated along the road vanished and instead some new homes were built along a newly-built side road. the primary school expanded, with two large houses lying by its side. the retirement home in 2010 was on the original site of the gardens.
地图描述了一个叫strokeford的村庄从1930年到2010年的发展。
地图很清晰的显示了最大的变化是1930年的大片农田变成了2010年的住宅。同样明显变化是1930年的花园在2010年变成了疗养院。
位于村庄东面的stoke河和位于村庄北面的大桥在80年间都没有变化。贯穿小镇的公路，与桥相连，是另一个仍然没有变化的设施。
之前在路边的一大一小两个商店消失了，取代它们的是一些新的住宅，沿着新建小路建成。小学面积扩大了，边上建起了两间大教室。2010年公园原址建起了一个养老院。
writing task 1
you should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
the diagram below shows the development of the village of kelsby between 1780 and 2000.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
write at least 150 words.
首先注意两个点：
1. 时态：本文的时间是明确的，是三个过去的时间，因此全文应当使用一般过去时。有些地图会有将来的规划，那么则应使用相应的一般将来时。
2. 顺序：该图属于动态的地图题，这种类型的地图题一律按照时间顺序来写。在这道题中，也就是按照图的顺序依次来写，不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题（即不涉及时间变化的题型），则按照空间顺序来写。
下面跟着上海环球雅思的老师一起来分析文章的写作。
第一段：引言段。
引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram，可以替换成three maps/ illustrations.原文中的shows，可以改为illustrate/ demonstrate/ indicate等词。宾语development，可以替换成changes，也可以改为宾语从句how the village of kelsby developed/ changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊，可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
【例文】the three maps illustrate how the village of kelsby changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
第二段：介绍1780年的情况。
1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据，因此只需要用存在句即可表达，不涉及任何变化的单词。但是，考生非常容易把这些元素全部用there be这个句型来表达，从而导致句式单一。表示存在的句型除了therebe之外，还有非常简单的have句型，还有lie/ be located/ be situated 这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型，比如“桌子上面有一本书”，可以翻译为on the desk is a book.
除此之外，要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素：住宅区homes，树林woods
，农
场farms，还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序（比如顺时针、逆时针，从左到右）都是可以的，但是要考虑家庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因，因此建议先写。
还有就是土地单位的表达，land是不可数名词，因此不能说aland，只能说a piece of
land。为了表达更加精确，可以用a plot of land（一小块），a stretch of（一长片），a large expanse of （一大片）。
另外还有注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有：in the east/ west/ south/ north of ? ; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ?; 如果是在角落，可以用in the southwestern corner of ? ; 在河流的上/下游：at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸：alongside the riverbank, 在河流的南端：at the southern end of the river.
【例文】in 1780, kelsby had only 100 homes. there was a large expanse of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmland in the centre. in the west was a river flowing from north to south.
第三段：介绍1860年的变化。
这一年的变化并没有时间先后，因此还是按照空间顺序来进行。图上多了一个元素，即道路和桥梁的修建。需要特别注意的是，因为考虑到和上文的呼应，这两个元素一定要放在后面讲，而家庭数量的增加和农场、树林面积的减少应当先讲。这个原则我们简称叫“先拆后建”原则、
第二点是时间的表达问题。上文中刚刚出现过in 1780，这里还是用in 1860的话，句式上就会出现重复。因此可以按照动态图里面学过的表达方法，把年份用作主语，用saw/ witnessed这两个词把数据引出来。
第三点是“建”这个词的英文表达。常见的词有build, construct（一般建筑物），
erect（高大的建筑物），establish/ set up（无建筑的物体或抽象的机构），pave（道路的修建）。另外，如果涉及到拆除，则需要记住demolish, pull down, knock down 这些单词。需要重点指出的是，这些表示“建”和“拆”的词都应当使用被动语态，这一点和普通流程图是一致的。
【例文】the year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes, but the size of farmland and woods was halved. in the same year, a bridge was constructed over the river and a road was paved linking the river to the residences.
第四段：介绍2000年的变化。
首先还是时间的表达，这里可以再换一种结构，比如140 years later/ after 140 years。首先还是“先拆后建”，先说树林农场彻底消失，然后在交代新的元素：学校和操场。要记住的是，道路是不需要交代方位的，只需要把起点和终点表达出来即可，用link a to b或者connect a with b这类词组连接。因此，道路的描写应放到学校、操场的后面。
【例文】140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and woods completely disappeared. in their places, several school
buildings and sports facilities were constructed at the
south-eastern corner of the village, which were connected with the residential areas in the north via a newly-build road. some shops opened up along the river bank and a large stretch of
wetland for birds was established at the southern end of the river.
the maps below show the civic square of the town of smallville in 1980 and
now.
图例虽然纷繁复杂，但是究其本质，第一张图永远在描述所谓的“方位”，也就是，我们需要在这张图中描述清楚图中的东西南北，各自坐落了什么事物。其余的图，永远在描述所谓的“变化”，相当于在第一张图的草稿基础上，描述第二张图发生的“加变化”和“减变化”，“恒定变化“以及“转化变化”。
搞定了这两组词汇的说法，地图题就再也不是让考生们闻风丧胆的题目了。
第一组：方位词
在这个方面，需要注意的是，我们需要准备好两者之间的所有可能的位置关系，除了最基本的a在b的东西南北方以外，还需要掌握一些特定的限定表达，比如a在b的角落等等。基础表达：
a在b的东西南北方(内部/接壤/不接触)：a is in /on / to the
east/west/south/north of b.
高阶表达：
a在b的东西南北方(内部)：a is in the
eastern/southern/western/northern partof b.
a在b的东西南北角落：a is at/in the
eastern/southern/western/northerncorner of b.
a坐落于距离b??远处：a is(数字)kilometers / miles to the east / west / south /north of b.
a和b很近：a is near /next to /close to b.
a在b的对面：a is opposite / on the opposite side of b
第二组：变化词
其实，地图题目当中蕴涵的变化，从本质来说，无非是三种，一种为所谓的“加变化”也就是在原本基础上出现了新增的部分，另一种为“减变化”，也就是原本的内容出现了缩减。所谓“恒定表达”，即前后没有发生变化。还有一种涉及到了两种内容之间的转化，被称之为“转化表达”。
加变化：
a尺寸上变大了?：the size of a has been enlarged by?
a被建造在b：a is constructed / established in b.
a被增建在b：a is added to b.
减变化：
【篇三：雅思a类小作文之地图题写作攻略】
智课网ielts备考资料
雅思a类小作文之地图题写作攻略
摘要：如果地图题反映的是一个地方在过去的一段时间的变化，文章用一般过去时。如果地图题反映的是一个地方在将来一段时间的变化趋势
地图题分两种，一种为地理变迁题，一种为选址题。首先我们来看地理变迁题，它描述的是一个地方(多为一个城镇)在一段时间的发展变化。如2006年9月a 类task 1，剑1test 4。就这些图形，我们来总结地理变迁题的写作要点。
时态
如果地图题反映的是一个地方在过去的一段时间的变化，文章用一般过去时。如果地图题反映的是一个地方在将来一段时间的变化趋势，文章用一般将来时或表“估计”的词汇。如果地图题反映的是一个地方从过去到现在的变化，可用现完成时。
如：现在停车场改成了一个剧院。
the car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre.
城镇a的家庭数量从1937年到2020年将翻一番。
the number of homes in town a is likely to double
(is likely to= is predicted to /is estimated to/is projected to/is expected to )
又可为：
it is likely that the number of homes in town a will double.
(it is likely that = it is predicted/estimated/projected/ expected that…..)
细节变化
地图每个细节变化都要提到，不要忽视一个细节
语态
地图题用被动语态
如：2000年在城镇a 新建了一个医院：a new hospital was established in town a in 2000.
地图题的书写顺序：时间顺序和空间顺序
如2006年9月a 类task 1
the map shows the development of the village of kelsbey between 1780 and 2000.
这篇文章大体框架按时间顺序，body 分三段分别描述：1780年村庄，1860村庄，2000年村庄。对每一年的描述，如1780年村庄，我们要注意按方位顺序来描述，否则文章会出现混乱。这就需要考生在考前对方位词进行总结。地图题的方位我们说东西南北，不说成左右。
? a 在b 的东方/西方/南方/北方
a is/ lies/ is located/ is situated in/on / to the
east/west/south/north of b
(in 表a 在b 内部，on 表a 和b接壤，to 表a 和b 分开)
? a 在b 内部的某个部位
a is in the eastern/ southern/ western/ northern part of b.
? a在b 西北部的120 千米处
a lies 120 km to the northwest of b.
? a 在b…..角落
a is at/in the south-eastern corner of
b ( at 表示a 在b 外部，in表a 在b 内部)
? 在河流或道路的南边/北边等
on the south/southern side of the river
on both sides of the road
on the other side
? 临近马路的地区
the area adjacent to/ near /next to/ just off the road
? 在道路或河流的最南端
at the southern end of the river
? a 在b 的对面
a is on the opposite side of b
a is opposite b
? a 在b 东部的边界上(a 在b外部)
a is on the eastern border of b
? a 在b 东部边缘上(a 在b 内部)
a is on/ along the eastern edge of b
? “变化”词汇
地图题描述的是一个地区的变化，那么“变化”词汇必须过关。变化包括两种：图形原有事物的改变，图形新添事物。
我们先看图形原有事物的改变：
? 原有事物可说成：
the original/previous/former garden
? 原有事物尺寸上变大/变小：
the size of the library has been
enlarged/extended/halved/reduced by half
? 原有事物在数量上增多或减少：
the number of homes has increased/risen/grown/reduced
/decreased/dropped/fallen/
doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled to 500.
? 原有事物没了：
the farms completely disappeared/were removed.
? 原有事物被改为：
a becomes b
a is
transformed/reconstructed/redeveloped/converted/changed/tur ned over to/ into b
a is replaced /substituted by
b = a gives way to b
? 图形新添事物
a newly-built road
a new car park was built/established/set
up/constructed/completed and opened in the middle of b
a new it centre has been added to the library
the year 2000 saw two additions to the land: a pond in the northern part and a vegetable garden on the opposite side.
地图题第二类为选址题如剑5 test 3 task 1
the map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. 为一个城镇的超市选址，有两个位置s1 和s2 供选择。选址题并不难写，主要注意两点：
? 位置描述
? 优缺点
这篇文章我们body段可分两段，分别陈述：
s1的位置及位置相应的优缺点
s2的位置及位置相应的优缺点
其中表位置的方位词已在前文有总结，
同理，2006 年2 月a 类task 1: the diagram below shows the problem of flooding in a uk town and two possible solutions
我们body 段可分两段，分别陈述：
solution 1 的解决方案和相应的优缺点solution 2 的解决方案和相应的优缺点
其中，解决方案实际还是要涉及一些方位词。
雅思小作文题型多样，其中就包括地图题，本文将详细讲解雅思小作文地图题写作技巧。评分标准 ?TA – Task Achievement 任务完成情况 ?CC – Coherence and Cohesion 意合与形合 ?LR – Lexical Resource 词汇资源 ?GRA – Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法广度与精确度 审题 The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. 文章结构 第一段 交待写作目的 第二段 描述1995年的地图 第三段
拿现在的地图和95年的做对比 第四段 总结全文 第一段 This report compares how the village of Ryemouth has developed and changed since the year of 1995. 题目：The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. 第二段 As is clearly described in the first picture, Ryemouth was a coastal city which was divided into three parts by two roads. In the southern part, there was a fishing port on the sea, with a fish market located in the north and a coffee shop in the north-east. A block of shops was situated on the opposite side of the market… 第三段 In the second picture, the village changed a lot. The fishing port has been removed and the fish market is replaced by apartments. Several restaurants also occupy the place of the shops on the roadside. Moreover, a parking lot is newly built on the east of the hotel. In addition, … 第四段 Overall, based on the brief description above, it is clear that the general layout of the village does not change a lot, while some newly-built facilities and housing has ornamented the small village.
●批改By Will 本次批改严格按照ILETS小作文评分标准进行。ILETS小作文评分项：TA (内容的完整性), CC (连贯性及一致性), GRA (语法范围及精准度), LR (词汇资源)。文末会进行总评及打分。 ●文中标识： 用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加 The graph provides the information concerning the average temperatures on a month basis in three major cities.(介于有两张图，都要提一下。此后可加一句：In addition, clearly demonstrated in the table are the time of sunshine on an annual base.) (补充：在下一段看到了你对于后一张图的总结，这样的话建议你在开头强调一下“the first graph”) As can be seen from the graph, there is a similar trend in terms of average monthly temperature between London and New York during the period from January to December. (可加入连接词：To be specific) The average temperature in London (介于你后面写的是两个城市的数据，这里改为：for both of the cities) gradually rises from January to July both in London and new york, reaching a peak at 25 degrees and 20 degrees respectively. After that, the following 4 months witness a dramatic decrease both in London and new york. In comparison (这里不妨分段), an opposite trend is found in Sydney. It (这是悉尼的第一句，建议写出来具体的量词至少：The temperature) keeps stable at 25 degrees from January to march, after which the average temperature undergoes a considerable descent, reaching the bottom point at approximately 15 degrees, before there is (there is 没必要了，可以去除) a steady ascent by 10 degrees. It is obvious that the table depicts the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. As we can see from the statistics, when it comes to the total annual hours of sunshine, new york ranks first, followed by Sydney ,London lies last. Specifically, people who live in new york enjoy 2,353 hours of sunshine every year, which is similar to people living in London with 2,473 hours (不是人和人像，是时间长短像，改为：which is similar to the amount of sunshine for those in London). However, only 1,180 hours of sunshine are found in London annually. 总评6.5（TA6.5 CC6.5 LR6.5 GRA7.0） 1.语法变化上从句数量可以了，分词的使用还可以多一些。偶尔试试一到两句倒装，如我在开头给你的那个。 2.趋势等词汇变化可以，试着多换换题目话题词汇，如people=residents=citizens
一个地图题的开头： The map about the development of the village sufficiently illustrates the way of progress of this area. In this map, we can find four main sectors and two main roads intersected with one railway and one motor way. It seems the overall development of this village has strong connection with the construction of roads. 雅思小作文地图题词汇 Part 1：表时间 流程图和地图题中都可能涉及时间表达。流程题中，使用较多的是过程时长的表述，而地图题的时间使用则体现为地理变迁的时间变化。一般在方位选址图题中较少出现。确切的时间指引，既增加文章的自然和连贯度，也能体现行文的精确性。 常见表示时间的词： in few hours几小时 during the period of …在…期间after 10 days 10天后 from…to从…到… between …and在…之间 over the…year period在一个…年期间5 years before 5年前a decade earlier几十年前from that moment on从那时起after a while一会 since自从 since then自从 finally最后 over the subsequent …years近连续几年 例句：The process lasts for up to 7 day s and the products are finally distributed to customers. Part 2：表空间 空间表达地图题出现概率较高，但流程图也偶尔出现。空间应该是地图题解题关键和主要特点。许多考生容易误把地图题的空间位置写成上下左右位置，这是失分点非常大的地方。朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家们提示烤鸭，空间表达时需要注意区分：在空间状语里，in表内部，on表接壤，to表分开。 常用的空间词： lies 靠近
101. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Test Tip Check the horizontal axis to find whether the graph refers to past, present, future or all three. We use the present simple to describe the graph: The graph shows… , We can see… If the graph refers to past period of time, we use the past simple, and if the graph includes future times, we use will or it is predicted that. Look at the line graph and complete the text with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets and the correct prepositions.
二.雅思图表作文 1.企业垃圾(线性图) 题目:The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. 范文:The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015. It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably. In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne. From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase
雅思写作地图题深度解析（上） 朗阁海外考试研究中心姜芮 在雅思小作文中，流程图和地图题无疑对于广大考生来说都有不小的威胁，很多考生在遇到此类型的题目时，会变得手足无措，不知道应该从何写起。许多考生抱着侥幸的心里，往往不重视此类小众题目的备考，结果作文分数受到了很大的影响。在本系列文章中，朗阁海外考试研究中心写作组的专家将着重对雅思写作地图题做一个深度解析。 我们用两个经典的地图题真题为例，在近两年出现的数次地图题中，多数都是属于这类“三格地图”。 WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the development of the village of Kelsby between 1780 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 在审题过程中我们需要特别注意以下几点： 1. 时态：关注时态是小作文能否取得高分的关键，同样对于地图题，我们也应该很好地注意时态，本文的时间是明确的，都是过去的时间，因此全文应当使用一般过去时。 2. 顺序：该图属于动态的地图题，这种类型的地图题一律按照时间顺序来写。在这道题中，也就是按照图的顺序依次来写，不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题（即不涉及时间变化的题型），则按照空间顺序来写。在描述单幅地图时，我们可以采取上北下南的顺序描述，或者从左到右的顺序也可以，但值得注意的是，如果地图上有明显的方向标示，那就要根据这个标示来描述。 下面我们一起来分析文章的写作。 第一段：Introduction 引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram，可以替换成figure，原文中的shows，可以改为illustrate, demonstrate, reveal, indicate等词。宾语development，可以替换成transformations，也可以改为宾语从句how the village of Kelsby developed/ changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊，可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000. 【例文】The three maps illustrate how the village of Kelsby changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000. 第二段：描述1780年的地图 1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据，因此只需要用存在句即可表达，不涉及任何变化的单词。但是，考生非常容易把这些元素全部用there be这个句型来表达，从而导致句式单一。表示存在的句型除了there be之外，还有非常简单的have句型，还有lie/ be located/ be situated这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型，比如“桌子上面有一本书”，可以翻译为on the desk is a book. 除此之外，要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素：住宅区homes，树林woods，农场farms，还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序（比如顺时针、逆时针，从左到右）都是可以的，但是要考虑家庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因，因此建议先写住宅区homes。 还有就是土地单位的表达，land是不可数名词，因此不能说a land，只能说a piece of land。为了表达更加精确，可以用a plot of land（一小块），a stretch of（一长片），a large expanse of（一大片）。 另外朗阁海外考试研究中心提醒考生们还要注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有：in the east/ west/ south/ north of ...; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ...; 如果是在角落，可以用in the southwestern corner of ...; 在河流的上/下游：at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸：alongside the riverbank; 在河流的南端：at the southern end of the river.
雅思图表作文TASK1精讲精练
雅思图表作文TASK1精讲精练 A理论部分： 雅思小作文概论 1、文章结构：主要分三部分：i。introductory sentence；ii。body paragraph；iii。Concluding sentence 具体讲：第一段introductory sentence只要写一句话，交待图形（如the line graph, pie chart等等），描述对象（如图表描述的是the number of tourists visiting England），地点（如the US, the UK等）以及时间（如between 1988 and 1997等等）；另外要注意的就是第一段不能和图表上方已给的句子太过相似！否则，会失分的! 第二部分一般写1~3段，这要视情况而定。这部分主要就是对比不同的数据，如相似或相同的数据；某个数据是另一个数据的2倍；某个数据所占比例最大或最小等等。 最后一段concluding sentence也只要写一句话，
主要是总结图表的整个趋势。 2。文章的效果。很多学生会发现小作文的例文特别简单（特别是剑桥书里提供的）。原因很简单，这个report的目的就是要让university lecturer了解某个事物的发展趋势，因此写出来的文章必须结构清晰、易懂，绝对不能太复杂，也不要把每个数据都描写出来，只要描写有代表性的，重要的数据即可。 以下为雅思小作文的四个基本步骤 第一步：改写题目 经过同义词转换在短短的1分钟内就写好作文的第一段。 举例:The graph below shows the percentage of people unable to find work in three major countries from 1983 to 1992. 题目中划线的单词都能够进行同义转换: graph—figure, show—illustrate, percentage—proportion, major—key, from…to…—between…and…, 第二步：分析时态
剑桥英语10雅思考官范文(大作文+小作文)
剑10 1-2 It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? One important stage in a child’s growth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong. This skill comes with time and good parenting, and my firm conviction is that punishment does not have much of a role to play in this. Therefore I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement. To some extent the question depends on the age of the child. To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behavior and discouraged from bad. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents. To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modelling in their own behavior. After that, if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones-an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others. Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel.
The development of Chorleywood village from 1868 to 1994. 思路: 1. 严格按照时间的推进进行描述，不可以出现倒序或是插叙的情况。 2. 物体的坐标词汇应该是绝对方位词：东西南北，物体的大小词汇应该是相对单位词：较大，较小，倍数等。 3. 线段的描述应该包含两方面：方向和动作。 4. 注意使用被动句来表达客观存在。 答案： The map shows the changes and development of Chorleywood village in Great Britain over a period of 126 years from 1868 to 1994. Chronologically, during the first 15 years from 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood was merely a very small village with two crossing main roads for its all transportation. From 1883 to 1922, with the expansion to the south, a new living area took shape and almost tripled the original scale. Besides, in 1909, a railway line, parallel with the east-bound main road, was built, linking the east and west, as well as forming Chorleywood Station. During the next period between 1922 and 1970, Chorleywood extended both eastward and westward and almost doubled the previous size. The year 1970 saw another big change of Chorleywood--the establishment of a south-bound motorway as the axis, which connected east-west main road with the railway. By 1994, there emerged 5 new resident places and some entertainment including Chorleywood Park and Golf course, all of which scattered along the two sides of the newly-built traffic system.（177）
【整个时段最高】...were the highest throughout the period./ over the period/during this 25-year period 【起点】In 1940 the proportion of XX stood at ...XX in XX, approximately XX in XX and XX in XX 【最高点后回落】After peaking at ...,XX had fallen back o XX by 2002 【最后两年增长放缓】though the growth slowed over the last two years 【由X剧烈增长到X】There was a dramatic increase in XX from(number) to (number) 【明显缩小】the gap between the three categories narrowed considerably 【相等】was equal at 【尽管有波动】Despite some initial fluctuation, 【尽管有波动】In spite of some fluctuation in the ... 【预计】is expected to/ is predicted to 【分别始于】From XX and XX respectively in 1980 【分别是】..while the impact of this on Oceania and North America was minimal, with only 1.7% and 0.2% of land affected respectively. 【保持稳定】will remain stable at 【相对不重要】relatively insignificant 【经历下降】saw a fall 【时间段末尾】by the end of the period 【时间点对应数字】..but rose dramatically in 2011 when it represented 23% of the school budget 【相应的下降】corresponding drops 【不那么明显的下降到】...also declined, but much less significantly to just below... 【表现出下降趋势】showed an upward trend 【急剧下降】plummet/ plunge 【由xx组成】be made up of /consist of/ be composed of 【维持在某一水平】remain stable at 、level off at/ hover at (高) 【最高点】peak at、reach its peak at /reach the highest level at
表格图001 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. model answer: This table clearly presents and compares favorable pastimes in eight different countries. The pastimes, across the top of the table, are analyzed in relation to each country. As can be seen, about 60% of Canadians, Australians and Americans like watching television. On the other hand, this figure is quite low for China where only 15% of people watch television. Predictably, Americans like music at 23%, whereas only 2 to 5% of people in the other countries feel the same way. 20% of people in England enjoy sleeping as a pastime whereas in Canada and the USA, for example, the figure is only 2%. Interestingly, the Chinese like hobbies the most at 50%, as opposed to only 20% in France. It isn't surprising that the highest percentage of beach-lovers is in Australia and the USA at 30%. It seems that pastimes of people of different nationalities may be influenced by a number of
雅思写作小作文范文雅思写作地图题map 城镇改造 今天我们雅思写作小作文范文的文章来研究下地图题map。该地图所展示的信息为一个名为lslip的小镇中心所计划进行的改变。图中还很贴心的给出了方向标示。我们可以看到相比于现在的样子，新的城镇中心将有环城公路，步行街，停车场等设施。而原有的各种设施的大小也有所改变。小编搜集了一篇相关的考官范文，以供大家参考。 雅思写作小作文题目 The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 雅思写作小作文范文 The diagrams illustrate some proposed changes to the central area of the town of Islip. 该图表说明了一些都对Islip小镇中心区域所提出的一些改变。 It is clear that the principal change to the town will be the construction of a ring road around the center. Various other developments with regard to shops and housing will accompany the building of this road. 很明显，该城镇最大的改变是围绕城镇中心修建了一条环路。针对商店和住宅区域的其他各种改变会伴随着道路的修建工作进行。 Looking at the map of Islip as it is now, we can see that the main road runs through its center from east to west. The second map shows the planned pedestrianization of this road. Traffic will be diverted on to a dual carriageway that will form a ring around the town center. 首先来看一下Islip镇现在的地图，我们可以看到其主干道从东向西穿过城镇中心。第二张地图显示计划将这条路改建为人行道。车辆交通将被引流到围绕城镇中心修建的双车道环路上。 Currently, there is a row of shops along either side of the main road. However, this translation is from laokaoya website, it appears that the shops along the north side of the new pedestrian street will be demolished to make way for a bus station, shopping center, car park, and new housing area. The shops along the south side of the street will remain, but it seems that the town’s park will be reduced in size so that more new houses can be built within the ring road.
小作文 折线 1.The chart below gives information about how many Europeans citizens of different age groups who frequently went to gym between 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The chart above apparently reveals the changes of the amounts of people keeping going to gym in four different age ranges from 1990 to 2010. As is shown in the lower chart, the numbers of elder people, aged 34-43 and 44-53, stay unchanged around 5% between 1990 and 1994, and then grow slowly before 1998. After 1998, however, the number of 34-43-year-old people stablily increases upto 10% while that of the eldest group stays the same. Furthermore, according to the upper chart, numbers of younger groups going to gym oftentimes including 18-23 and 24-33 ages fluctuate similarly in the range of 15%-25% with the latter one in a more dramatic manner until 2006. In addition, the latter one is caught up during 2002 to 2006. In the last four-year, the number of people in youngest group suddenly dropped off below 20% while the other group, in the contrary, increases continuously and finally exceeds 25%. To summarize, the number of people going to gym frequently in the 4 type ages all present the tendency to rise in whole except the eldest group, aging 44-53, which stay the same almost all the time.
雅思小作文地图题怎么写 【篇一：雅思小作文地图题讲解】 一个地图题的开头： the map about the development of the village sufficiently illustrates the way of progress of this area. in this map, we can find four main sectors and two main roads intersected with one railway and one motor way. it seems the overall development of this village has strong connection with the construction of roads. 雅思小作文地图题词汇 part 1：表时间 流程图和地图题中都可能涉及时间表达。流程题中，使用较多的是 过程时长的表述，而地图题的时间使用则体现为地理变迁的时间变化。一般在方位选址图题中较少出现。确切的时间指引，既增加文 章的自然和连贯度，也能体现行文的精确性。 常见表示时间的词： in few hours几小时 during the period of … 在…期间 after 10 days 10天后 from…to 从…到… between …and 在…之间 over the…year period在一个…年期间 5 years before 5年前 over the subsequent …years近连续几年 例句：the process lasts for up to 7 days and the products are finally distributed to customers. a decade earlier几十年前 from that moment on从那时起 after a while一会 since自从 since then自从 finally最后 part 2：表空间 空间表达地图题出现概率较高，但流程图也偶尔出现。空间应该是 地图题解题关键和主要特点。许多考生容易误把地图题的空间位置 写成上下左右位置，这是失分点非常大的地方。朗阁海外考试研究 中心的专家们提示烤鸭，空间表达时需要注意区分：在空间状语里，in表内部，on表接壤，to表分开。 常用的空间词：