短文改错专练(二)
Test 1
[2019·成都第三次诊断] Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my achievement and the voluntary work I have done. After complete the online admission process, I took a deep breathe and dreamed about my dream college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I total got eight rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room but thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn nothing from the experience even though those rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. For this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.
答案与解析：
Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my
achievement ①achievements and the voluntary work I have
②had
done. After complete
③completing
the online admission process, I took a deep breathe
④breath
and dreamed about my dream college. However, except ∧
⑤an/the
offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I total
⑥totally
got eight rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room but
⑦and
thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn nothing
⑧something
from the experience even though those rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. For
⑩With
this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.
①achievement改为achievements考查名词。根据该句中的“all of”可知，这里表示不止一项成就，故要用名词复数。
②have改为had考查动词。根据本句中的“listed”可知，这里讲述的是过去的经历，此处表示截止到过去这个时间点我已经做的志愿者工作，故要用过去完成时。
③complete改为completing考查非谓语动词。介词After后面要用动名词，故应改为completing。
④breathe改为breath考查名词。根据前面的冠词a和形容词deep可知，此处应用名词，take a deep breath固定短语“深吸一口气”。
⑤except后加an/the考查冠词。offer为可数名词，故前面要用限定词修饰；此处可表泛指，且offer的发音以元音音素开头，故用an；也可表特指，故用the。
⑥total改为totally考查副词。修饰动词got要用副词形式。
⑦but改为and考查连词。“我将自己锁在房间里”和“思考我所做的一切”之间不存在转折关系，而是顺承关系，故要用and。
⑧nothing改为something考查代词。根据句中的“even though”并结合语境可知，虽然之前被拒绝让“我”很伤心，但是“我”也从中学到了一些东西，故要用something。
⑨删除made前的were考查语态。此处表示那些拒绝让我伤心，应用主动语态。
⑩For改为With考查介词。此处表示“带着这样一种态度”，故应用介词With。
Test 2
[2019·郑州高三第一次质量预测] This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply.
Being a capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of place of interest. Among them the West Lake is the best-known attraction, where water seem to melt into the sky by the distance. Besides, there are several museums locating in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, but they are working hard make the city more beautiful.
What attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!
答案与解析：
This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply.
capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in Being a
②the
of interest. Among the southeast of China. There are a lot of place
③places
