【高考英语】满分作文全解全析(范例5篇+标准范文1篇)2018北京卷写作任务一

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2018北京卷写作任务一一、真题展示假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。

他向你咨询相关信息。

请给他回邮件,内容包括:1. 表示欢迎;2. 推荐他上哪所大学;3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意:1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

DEAR Jim,Yours’Li Hua二、真题解析本篇书面表达属于书信范畴,要求根据所给的内容要点,给英国朋友写一专封邮件。

作者仍然是高三的中国学生李华,而对方是和你同龄的外国学生,计划来北京上大学,你要对他表示欢迎,还要向他推荐大学,并告知相应的准备工作。

写作任务没有给出具体的大学以及准备工作的具体内容,考生需要结合生活实际以及自己的理解和积淀,确定所推荐的大学并给出一些有关准备工作的建议,集中考查学生的思辨能力。

从内容的角度来说,推荐一所北京的大学并不难,很多考生都给出了“北京大学”的选项,但注意既要说出北大的好,也要从对方的角度考虑,讲清楚为什么推荐对方来北大。

对于准备工作,外国留学生和中国学生的入学流程不同,并不是通过高考一张试卷就可以入学,很多大学还需要提供语言成绩、推荐信、简历等,这些应尽量在回信中有所体现,但无论如何都需要好好学习、认真准备。

书信要体现交际性,在写作时把握好书信的固定格式和得体的寒暄用语。

在应用文中,绝大多数的书信都是以第一人称进行写作,而且本文是推荐大学的书信,主体时态应为一般现在时和将来时。

三、写作小贴士1、把握好邮件的固定格式和得体的寒暄用语。

2、文章要覆盖所有内容要点并合理发挥。

四、标准范文英文Dear Jim,I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter.First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China.Its Chinese Literature mayor is perfect for you. Where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation , some reading like The Story of the Stone in advance is needed, and some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.Yours’Li Hua译文亲爱的吉姆:我很高兴在你的上封来信中得知你计划在北京接受教育。

首先,我想表达我最诚挚的欢迎,而且我相信你会在北京度过最难忘的大学时光。

得知你对中国文化十分感兴趣,我建议你申请北京大学,中国最顶尖的大学之一。

它的中国文学专业对你来说相当完美,可以使你沉浸在中国丰富的历史和文化之中。

关于准备,提前阅读一些如《石头记》这样的名著是必需的,并且参加网上的汉语口语课程会帮助你更好地适应中国的语言环境。

我真诚地希望你的梦想能够实现,那一天到来时我也很乐意带你参观北京。

如果你有更多的问题,尽管告诉我。

你的,李华五、满分范例(一)英文Dear Jim,I’ve received your letter and known that you are interested in Chinese culture and plan to complete your college education in Beijing, which is fantastic. Welcome!In your letter, you ask me to recommend a university for you. In fact, there are numerous outstanding universities in China,especially in Beijing, the capital.But I’d like to suggest your applying for Peking University. First of all, it’s a first-class university in China and the world. Further more①, as a comprehensive university, Peking University offers dozens of majors for students to choose from. Finally, I hope we could meet in Beijing.To realize your dream, I advise you to attend a Chinese course and perfect your Chinese. Also, make sure that your scores of other subjects are good.For detailed information, remember to search on the official website of Peking University②.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Yours’Li Hua译文亲爱的吉姆:我收到了你的来信,得知你对中国文化感兴趣,并计划在中国完成大学教育。

这太棒了,欢迎你!在你的来信中,你希望我给你推荐一所中国的大学。

实际上,中国有非常多优秀的大学,尤其在首都北京。

但我想建议你申请北京大学。

首先,它是中国和世界一流的大学。

其次,作为一所综合性大学,北大有几十种专业供学生选择。

最后,我希望我们能在北京相遇。

为了实现你的理想,我建议你参加一门中文课程的学习,以完善你的中文。

此外,确保你其他科目的分数优秀。

想获得更详细的信息,记得要参照北大的官方网站。

期盼得到你的回复。

你的,李华(二)英文Dear Jim,I’m happy to hear from you.Knowing that you are fond of Chinese culture and plan to study for a bachelor’s degree in a Chinese university, I’m more than delighted. I can’t wait to meet you in Beijing! Welcome!As for which university to attend, I’m sure you have done some research, but I’d like to recommend Beijing Foreign Studies University①. As a multilingual university, BFSU not only offers foreign language majors to students in China, but also Chinese-related majors to students from abroad②. So I think you can learn a lot and quickly fit in there, since the location is also quite convenient.If you are still at a loss for what to prepare, I’m absolutely willing to help! As for the preparation, first you need a good language proficiency certificate, for example HSK.Second, you need to submit your score record in high school. Also, recommendation letters are needed.For specific information, please check the website of BFSU.Hope your dream could come true, and welcome again toBeijing!Yours’Li Hua译文亲爱的吉姆:很高兴收到你的来信。

得知你喜爱中国文化,并计划在中国的大学完成本科学位,我非常高兴,我都等不及和你在北京相见了!欢迎你!至于要申请哪所大学,我确信你也做过一些研究,但我想向你推荐北京外国语大学。

作为一所多语言的大学,北外不仅面向中国学生提供多种外语专业,还向海外学生提供中文相关专业。

因此我想你可以学到很多,并迅速适应这里的生活,因为这里的地理位置十分方便。

如果你还不知道怎么着手准备,我很愿意帮助!关于准备,首先你需要能证明你语言能力的证书,比如“汉语水平考试”。

其次,你需要提交高中成绩单。

此外,推荐信也需要准备。

想获得具体信息,请参照北外的的官网。

希望你的梦想成真,再次欢迎你来北京!你的,李华(三)英文Dear Jim,I’m glad to receive your letter, and welcome to Beijing!In regard to your inquiry, I’m more than delighted to offer my suggestions.For universities, Tsinghua University is definitely one of your best choices. As a world-class university, it ranks top along with Peking University, and is the dream of many Chinese students. Tsinghua offers many majors for you to choose from, and there must be one for you①. The campus is also very beautiful, so you can experience the authentic Chinese culture there.I’ve searched online for the application process for you. Applicants need to register and submit relevant materials on the university website, such as language test scores, graduation certificates and resumes②. Once the application is approved, students will undergo several rounds of interviews before the final decision is made③. So you can begin to prepare now.If you need any further information, just let me know. I’m always ready to help my dear friend, I look forward to your good news! Yours’Li Hua译文亲爱的吉姆:很高兴收到你的来信,欢迎来北京!关于你的询问,我很高兴能提出我的建议。