第一节短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起) 不计分
Years ago, all my parents were involved in a serious car accidents. Uncle Bob took on the role as a father to him. I lived with him during that period. He allowed me stay with him though his home was not really bigger. He showed his care and love for me by pay attention to my health, education and what I needed at that time. I really appreciated the time he spent with me. We used to go on the trips together. We would just spend days either playing our guitars and reading our favorite car magazines. I always felt gratefully towards him. He was like a father figure who will always give me encouragement.
参考答案及解析
第一节短文改错
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【分析】
这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。文章主要讲了作者的父母在一次车祸中去世，鲍勃叔叔扮演了作者父亲的角色。那时，鲍勃叔叔通过关心作者的健康、教育和作者需要的来表达对作者的关心和爱。作者对鲍勃叔叔为自己所做的一切，深表感激。
【详解】
第一处：考查语境理解。句意：几年前，我的父母都卷入了一场严重的车祸。“我的父母双亲”是两个人，所以用both，all表示“三者或者三者以上”，所以all改成both。
第二处：考查名词。句意：几年前，我的父母都卷入了一场严重的车祸。“一场严重的车祸”是单数意义，用名词单数，所以accidents 改成accident。
第三处：考查代词。句意：对于我来说，鲍勃叔叔扮演了父亲的角色。文中表示“对于我”，所以him改成me。
第四处：考查固定用法。句意：他允许我和他住在一起，虽然他的家不是很大。allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事，该用法是固定用法，所以stay之前加to。
第五处：考查形容词。句意：他允许我和他住在一起，虽然他的家不是很大。这里没有进行比较，故用形容词原级，所以bigger改成big。
第六处：考查常见用法。句意：那时，他通过关心我的健康、教育和我需要的来表达对我的关心和爱。介词之后，用v+ing，所以pay改成paying。
第七处：考查固定用法。句意：我们过去常一起去旅行。go on trips去旅行，该短语是固定短语，所以去掉the。
第八处：考查连词。句意：我们会花上几天的时间，来弹吉他，或者阅读我们最喜欢的汽车杂志。文中表示选择关系，所以and改成or。
第九处：考查形容词。句意：我总是对他心存感激。作感官动词之后的表语，用形容词，
所以gratefully改成grateful。
第十处：考查时态。这里含有一个定语从句。表示从过去的某一时间来看，将来要发生的动作或呈现的状态，用一般过去将来时，所以will改成would。
