高三英语写作训练
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2025年高考英语一轮复习专题归纳—写作规范练(六) Ⅰ.应用文写作(求助信)假设你是李华,一名高三学生,你最近获得了某国外大学的英语面试机会,请你给你的外教James写信寻求帮助,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.求助原因;3.你的期待。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
参考范文Dear James,I’m writing to seek for your help on my preparations for an English interview of a foreign university next week.As you can anticipate, it matters a lot to make myself stand out among the candidates,thus I’m in desperate need of your instruction on my oral expressions since you are a native English speaker. Besides,I’m at a loss for some practical interview techniques. Plus,would you be so kind as to remind me of what courtesy should I keep in mind on this occasion?Thanks for your attention and your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.Yours,Li Hua Ⅱ.读后续写(个人成长)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A 12-year-old boy saw something in a shop window that set his heart racing.It was a jewel box.But the price—five dollars—was far beyond Reuben Earle’s means.However,he opened the door and went inside.Standing proud and straight,he told the shopkeeper what he wanted,adding,“But I don’t have the money right now.Could you please hold it fo r me for some time?”“I’ll try,” the shopkeeper smiled.“I will raise the five dollars and not tell anybody,” Reuben said to himself.Hearing the sound of hammering from a side street,Reuben had an idea.People built their own homes in Bay Roberts,using nails purchased in sacks (麻布袋) from a local factory.Sometimes the sacks were abandoned,and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece.That day he found two sacks and sold to the man in charge of packing nails.The boy’s hand tightly held the five-cent pieces as he ran home.Near his house stood the ancient barn(谷仓).Reuben found a soda tin and dropped his coins inside.Then he climbed into the top of the barn and hid the tin.All summer long,despite housework at home,Reuben kept to his secret task.Often he was cold,tired and hungry,but the thought of the object in the shop window sustained(支撑) him.Mother’s Day had come! He uncovered the tin can,poured the coins out and began to count.He needed 20 cents more.He had to find four more sacks and sell them before the day ended.Towards evening Reuben arrived at the factory.The sack buyer was about to lock up.“Mister! Please don’t close up yet.”The man turned and saw Reuben,dirty and sweat stained.“Come back tomorrow,boy.”“Please,Mister.I have to sell the sacks now—please.”注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
高三英语作文模拟训练20题(含例文解析)学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________一、读后续写1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
Any day that I had to go to the airport was the worst day of my life, and as a traveling appliance salesman, I had to fly quite a bit. On this particular day in 2010. 1 was assigned to a middle seat. Back then, I was so fat that I couldn't fit down the aisle (走廊)facing forward,so I was forced to walk sideways like a crab. I weighed between 340 and 360 pounds; the exact figure depended on whether I measured my weight before or after one of my enormous meals. When I finally squeezed into my seat, the seat belt wasn't long enough to fit around my 52-inch waist.They never were.I woke up the next morning knowing that I needed to change. I started looking for signs that might lead me toward a better life and immediately a sign showed up. I turned on the TV and happened to catch an interview with former president Bill Clinton. He said he'd been under the care of a doctor who put him on a whole-food, plant-based diet. He lost weight without feeling hungry, and he was healthier and stronger than he'd been since his twenties. I never imagined my sign would come from Bill Clinton, but there he was.I had no idea what a “whole-food, plant-based diet” was. I went online and searched fora doctor who could help me. That's when I found Preeti. 1 felt hopeful when she agreed to see me the next day. The doctor recommended a low calorie diet and suggested some moderate exercises I could do in my home. She also suggested that I go to a shelter and adopt adog.“Exercise?”I asked, “A dog?" I couldn't believe what I heard.But, she said. “A dog is a good companion. Plus, you live in an apartment. which means the dog has to be walked. So if you walk your dog twice a day,that will be your exercise."Paragraph 1:With doubts and hesitation, I drove up to a dog sheller near where I lived.___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________Paragraph 2:I came back home with the large black and-white dog with a big round body.___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________【答案】范文:Para 1:With doubt and hesitation, I drove up to a dog shelter near where I lived.Upon opening the door,I was amazed to see various types of dogs: Poodle,Husky,Samoyed .. Though abandoned,they all appeared clean and energetic. Seeing a stranger approaching, they kept barking, alert but curious. I was torn between a Poodle with golden fur and a Husky wagging its tail when a large black-and-white dog dozing in the corner caught my attention. His round body immediately reminded me of my size and what Preeti said-A dog is a good companion. I knew he was perfect for me.Para 2:I came back home with the large black-and-white dog with a big round body.I named him David, who often lay motionless on the floor and yawned with eyes half-closed. Though a bit discouraged, I was determined to change both of us. Soon, I found a ball, dragged David to the park and threw it at him. Driven by natural instinct, David dashed forward to chase the ball. Gradually, I could walk David twice a day. One month later, I suddenly realized that there was no need for me to walk like a crab on the plane. Meanwhile, David became lean and healthy.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者体重在340到360磅之间,作者决定改变自己,作者在网上找到了能帮助自己的医生,医生建议作者吃低热量的食物,并建议作者在家里做一些适度的运动。
推荐信1.假定你是李华,你校英国交换生Taylor发邮件说她加入了你校“中国艺术社”,该社团本学期开设了两门课程:中国书法和京剧,希望你能向她推荐其中一门课程。
请你给她回一封邮件,内容包括:1. 你推荐的课程;2. 推荐理由;3. 你的祝福。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.假定你是李华,你的英国网友David在学习汉语,他对中国成语尤其感兴趣,但有时不懂成语的来源或不会恰当使用。
他给你发来邮件,希望你推荐一款实用的app。
请你用英语给他回复邮件,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.推荐理由;3.表达希望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友David热爱体育运动,他将作为交换生到你校学习。
读后续写练习写作:A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 am. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared. Secure in the knowledge that no blister was developing on Jeff's hand, father took command of the kitchen. Sweeping the stove clean, he grabbed a handful of rice into the pot and left it to simmer. Father then dipped two slices of fresh bread into the egg mixture, slipped them onto the pan and constantly flipped them until both sides were golden brown. As father was dancing around in the kitchen, Jenna and Jeff stood beside in awe, their eyes round in admiration. It was merely twenty minutes later that everything was set on a tray. Winking at the twins, father sank his voice to a whisper, "take it to your mother!"The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Rubbing her bleary eyes and sitting up, mother was greeted by a bowl of steaming porridge, two pieces of crunchy bread and some fruits, all neatly arranged on a tray. "Happy Mother's Day!" the twins presented the tray to their mother, a touch of shame etched on their smiling faces, "we never knew how hard it was for you to prepare meals for us every day. Thank you mum, for what you have done for us!" Hands tightly pressed on the chest, mum could hardlyutter a complete sentence, her face streaked with tears of genuine happiness. It was truly the most delightful Mother's Day surprise.9.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Their father's jaw dropped in amazement when he saw everything before him. Jenna explained to their father their plan for Mother's Day and the accident that had just happened. Having handled Jeff's injury, their father told him to rest for a while in the living room while Jenna continued to stay in the kitchen to help. They cleaned the messy stove, and after about an hour, the golden toast and the thick porridge were made. At that moment, broad smiles spread across their faces. (87 words)The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.〃Mom, happy Mother's Day!" they said with one voice. The mother looked at the sweet-smelling breakfast - the French toast and the chicken porridge, saying, “M y God, you are so great!" Her voice shook with emotion, a wave of happiness flooding her. She suddenly felt her children had grown up! Seeing joy and pride on their mother/s face, Jenna and Jeff couldn't hide their excitement. The Mother's Day program also made them aware of the value of labor.(82 words) [169 words]As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. They pretended to be poised,trying to blockthe messy scene from his father's sight. However, the odor of burning betrayed them.Questioned by his father, Jeff narrated the whole story, twiddling with his fingers nervously. " Oh, man. You guys are so sweet. Now let/s get mom a surprise!” their father said in a soothing manner, his previous anger giving place to ecstasy. Without hesitation, their father guided them to prepare for the festive feast. Not long after that, an inviting cuisine was ready. Then their father retired into the bedroom.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ”Happy Mother's Day!" the twins exclaimed together. Their mother got out of the bed, hardly able to believe the gift before her. She felt a warm upsurge in her heart, tears streaming down her cheeks. Stretching out her arms, she lapped them in her arms. "Thank you, sweethear ts. It is the best meal I've ever had,“ she said after savoring the sandwich.At that moment, proud and overjoyed, Jeff and Jenna stealthily winked at their father standing beside them.Actually, not only is the meal a surprise but a secret bonding the father with his twins.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their fatherappeared.Catching sight of their father, Jenna's gloomy face turned into big smile while Jeff was trying hard to fight back tears. Confused about what had happened, the father darted to check Jeff's hand and at the same time listened to Jenna's explanation carefully. An expression of intense joy illuminating the father's eyes after getting to know the lovely heart of his twins, he patiently guided them to make attempt once again. Within half an hour, sweet-smelling porridge and well-baked bread were lyingon a delicate plate, on which a heart was drawn with some apple jam.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ”Happy Mother's Day, dear Mom,“ the twins whispered to their mother. With amber sunlight piercing through the window, the mother had a drowsy look at the twins and then glanced at the food in their hands, tears misting her eyes. She quickly took hold of the plate, put it on the table, and hugged the twins tightly in her arms, murmuring, “Thank you, my babies. You are my best gifts." Just at that moment, the father tiptoed in, looking at the scene as if he had the whole world he wanted. Love may be clumsy, but beautiful indeed.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their fatherappeared.Spotting the messy situation, their father understood everything. Instead of blaming them for their carelessness, their father put on a bright smile and patted on their heads. 〃 Do you want to give your mother a surprise? Let me help you fix it. " Father said with a mischievous twinkle in his eyes.Hearing the words, the twins nodded their heads, their eyes shining with excitement. Under the father's instruction, they first cleaned up the mess, and then they respectively took responsibility for French toast and chicken porridge. With the experience of failure, they accomplished their task perfectly this time. Looking at the inviting breakfast, they were deprived of all power of speech by excitement.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.The instant she noticed the breakfast was brought in bed, a ripple of excitement flashed through her face. Her eyes wandered between the breakfast and the twins as if she was asking what happened. "Happy Mother's Day!” the twins exclaimed with one voice. Themother's face beamed and her shining smile lit up the room. "Thank you my angles! Come here and give me a hug."Thetwins rushed into their mother's arms and just at that moment, their father stopped behind them. "Hey! Look here!” The mother and the twins turned their headssimultaneously. "Click-click." Using the camera, the father recorded the memorable scene. What a Mother's Day Surprise!13.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.With tears in her eyes, Jenna ran to her father and explained everything. After confirming the burn on Jeff's hand was well tended, their father cheered them up, helped them clean it up and prepared the breakfast all over again. It didn't take him too long to fill a plate with toast and a bowl with porridge. "Let's hope your mother is still fast asleep" prayed their father, Bring it up and give her a big surprise//The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up/'What's going …"their mother's question was interrupted by the sweet scent of the breakfast. She exclaimed with disbelief, 〃Oh my God, thank you so much my children! This is the best Mother's Day ever!” Then she slowly enjoyed every bit of the breakfast, with the twins excitedly telling her about their secret plan, their disappointing preparation and their father's timely help. Their father went back to the bedroom when they just finished their story. "Darling, what do you think of the breakfast?" heasked. "Unique, because it tastes of love and care" she smiled along with the twins.14.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.With tears in her eyes, Jenna ran to her father and explained everything. After confirming theburn on Jeff's hand was well tended, their father cheered them up, helped them clean it up and prepared the breakfast all over again. It didn't take him too long to fill a plate with toast and a bowl with porridge. "Let's hope your mother is still fast asleep" prayed their father, “Bring it up and give her a big surprise//The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up."What's goi ng ...” their mother's question was interrupted by the sweet scent of the breakfast. She exclaimed with disbelief, “Oh my God, thank you so much my children! This is the best Mother's Day ever!” Then she slowly enjoyed every bit of the breakfast, with the twins excitedly telling her about their secret plan, their disappointing preparation and their father's timely help. Their father went back to the bedroom when they just finished their story. "Darling, what do you think of the breakfast?” he asked. "Unique, because it tastes of love and care" she smiled along with the twins.15.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Astonished, Father was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning. When turning off the fire in tearing hurry, Jenna saw their father walking towards them with rage haunting. "What's up?" Dad questioned them in a cold voice. Z/We...We just want to make breakfast for Mom as Mother's Day gift." Jenna whispered. so sorry. Dad. We made a mess in the kitchen and Jeff had his hand burned." So ashamed was she that she shed guilty tears with head drooping. Only at this time did father realize that the twins were his precious treasure. Then, with Dad'shelp, Jenna and Jeff prepared a hearty breakfast.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. As their mother opened her eyelids, a substantial breakfast caught her sight and a sweet smell wafted into her nose. "Happy Mother's Day!” The twins congratulated. “We just want to make brea kfast for you as you do that for us. Mom, we love you!” Mom kissed them and smiled dazzlingly “Oh dear, thank you my sweeties.What a big surprise I" Their father was standing beside the door, recording this touching scene. The whole room was bathed in a happy Mother's Day atmosphere.16.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. A disastrous kitchen greeting his eyes, Father was totally stunned, not uttering a single word. After calming himself down a moment later, he got to know what was going on. He smiled with rage choking back and said."Do you need a hand?" The twins were filled with joy and tidied the kitchen up to restart cooking the dishes. This time, everything seemed to go smoothly without a hitch. The chicken and rice were dancing harmoniously in the boiling water pot and bread slices were showing off its most tremendous golden color. Despite the oil stains and holes on the twins aprons, nothing seemed imperfect, and all was ready except the most important one.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Rubbing her drowsy eyes, Mother let out a yawn. For what was almost simultaneous she opened her eyes widely and goggled at the twins and dishes they served. "Happy Mother's Day. Mommy! Why not try out today's special?" Though still in her pajamas, Mothertook abite of the toast and sipped the hot porridge. Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her son and daughter, she sobbed, with delightful tears streaming down her face. "Mom. why are you crying?" the pair asked in confusion."Is the breakfast good enough?" Melting her tears into smiles, she gave the twins a bear hug."The breakfast tastes so good! It's the most wonderful gift I've ever received!" The dawning sunshine lit up the whole room, with air being sweet.17.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Their father seemed to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next. He grabbed the handle of the pan and slipped a bar of butter to melt before putting another slice of cup. Then he swiftly removed the burnt porridge away, and poured another cup of rice, starting to cook it all over again. In between, he kept silent and focused on what he was doing. The twins stood straight and awe, watching the hustle and bustle from their father. At 7 o'clock, everything was done and perfect. The twins took over the tray, feeling guilty about being over-confident about their competence in performing the house chores.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。