2018届谈高三英语写作教学讲座课件 (共51张PPT)

So I tried WOC Radio in Davenport ， Iowa.The program director ， Peter MacArthur，told me they had already hired an announcer.So I was refused.As I left his office，I asked aloud，“How can a fellow get to be a sports announcer if he can't get a job in a radio station？”
(三)典题示例 阅读下面短文，然后以约 30 个词概括其内容要点。 Students should think now about what extracurricular activities they would like to
participate in may help them deepen their physical，creative，social，political，and career interests by bringing them into communication with other like­minded people they didn't previously know.
2．然后用自己的话将上述要点表达出来，便是本文概要。 Summary： While looking for a job，the author suffered one failure after another，which made him feel very disappointed.It was his mother's encouraging words that inspired him to go on trying until he succeeded.

达到预期写作目的。
二档：6-10分（相当于百分制24-40分）
标准：未恰当完成试题规定任务。
1、漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，添加了一大 堆无关内容；
2、语法结构单调、词汇知识有限；
3、语法结构、词汇错误影响了对写作内容的理解；
4、较少使用语句间的连接成分，缺乏连贯性。信 息未能清楚地传达给读者。
• 挖掘写作提示中列出的写作要点。本篇书面表 达的要点包括：
(1) 得知Terry被中国朋友邀请到家里作客；
(2) 回信给Terry，介绍中国的一些作客礼仪;
(3) 这些礼仪务必包含以下三大内容：到达时间， 合适礼物及餐桌礼仪；
(4) 结束语，总结中国人的热情好客的特质及提出 祝愿。
满分作文分析 • 首段
• 尾段 Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
• Best wishes!
•
Yours,
•
LiHua
• 6. 邮件的结尾可用和Hope my suggestions can help you. Best wish等进行表达。这样才能体现邮 件的特点和完整性。
• Dear Terry,
• How is it going? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
许错误因尝试复杂表达结构所致； 4、运用简单的语句连接成分使全文紧凑。

半开放 半开放式 中文提纲 的提纲 式
命题趋势 能力 要求
创设情境，用英语做事情。
评分标准
20 14
覆盖所有内容要点 ,合适的开头和结尾。2，写 （ 24-25 19-20分） 分）1. 1. 虽有一两个次重点表述不具体或漏掉，但覆 （ 14-15 分）允许遗漏 1 个主要内容要点，但不影响预期 信意图明确、外观描述具体 ,句式灵活，能合理使用复合句、 盖所有主要内容； 2. 写信意图明确 ,能有效运用一些复杂的 的写作目的。句子虽然有一些错误，但基本可读，可以 非谓语动词、倒装句、省略句等语法结构； 3.衔接合理，过 语法结构（如复合句、非谓语动词等）； 3.应用简单的语句 准确传达信息。至少有2-3个正确句子并都与不同的主要 渡自然，句子流畅，层次分明；词汇丰富、地道，语气自 见连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；4.句子达意，语法错误较少， 内容要点有关。基本完成了试题规定的任务。 然、得体（帮忙代售），完全达到预期的写作目的。允许 不妨碍交际；词汇能基本满足任务的要求。完成了试题规 有个别语法结构或词汇方面的小错误（因尽力使用复杂结 定的任务。 构、高级词汇所致）。
Part 3: Ending
希望建议有用(是否有需要更多信息或帮助）。
Compare and find the good vocabulary and sentences.
Dear Chris, I'm glad that you're planning a trip to Beijing in August. To help you experience Chinese culture well, I'd strongly recommend the following activities. To begin with, it would be a good idea to visit some famous places of interest in history, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. You may also enjoy Chinese traditional arts by listening to the Beijing Opera or appreciating the Chinese paper-cuts. Besides, you could try a lot of typical food, of which dumplings and the Beijing Roasted Duck cannot be omitted. They're delicious and I'm sure you'll like them. I hope it will be helpful. If you need more information, just let me know. Yours, Li Hua

2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请 简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.