湖北省武汉市2015高考英语书面表达暑假练习(5)及参考范文[ 高考]

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▁▂▃▄▅▆▇█▉▊▋▌精诚凝聚 =^_^= 成就梦想 ▁▂▃▄▅▆▇█▉▊▋▌ ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓点亮心灯 ~~~///(^v^)\\\~~~ 照亮人生 ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓ 湖北省武汉市2015高考英语书面表达暑假练习(5)及参考范文 【陕西省西安市长安一中2014第二次模拟】书面表达(满分30分) 假定你是中学生李华。在国外中学生贴吧上看到一位名叫Slowstudent的中学生的帖子,你看到如下内容。请你根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求跟帖。 写作要点: 1. 表明自己的看法; 2. 陈述自己的理由(可举例说明); 3. 提出至少两条建议。 要求: 1. 短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2. 短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。 3. 内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。 4. 书写需清晰、工整。 ▁▂▃▄▅▆▇█▉▊▋▌精诚凝聚 =^_^= 成就梦想 ▁▂▃▄▅▆▇█▉▊▋▌

▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓点亮心灯 ~~~///(^v^)\\\~~~ 照亮人生 ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓ SlowComments ______________________________________________________Parents’meeting panics slow studentstudentA parents’meeting is always meaning a complaints meeting to a slow student. My parents will scold me whenever they come back from it. Now the mid-term exam is over and another terrible parenets’meeting is around the corner. What shall I do? Help!

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Dear Slowstudent,This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion,______________________________________

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Yours,Li Hua

【参考范文】书面表达(满分30分)(One possible version) Slowstudent, This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a parents’ meeting; instead, you’d better take a proper attitude to it. In fact, a parents’ meeting is for the most part a communication meeting, where teachers and parents exchange information and opinions about students’ situations at school and home, which is beneficial to improve teaching quality. As for your problem, I think you can have a good talk with your parents and teachers. While talking with your parents, you can focus on how hard you study (if it is ▁▂▃▄▅▆▇█▉▊▋▌精诚凝聚 =^_^= 成就梦想 ▁▂▃▄▅▆▇█▉▊▋▌ ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓点亮心灯 ~~~///(^v^)\\\~~~ 照亮人生 ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓ the case) and why you failed this time or even ask them to help analyze your failure. When talking with your teachers, better ask them for the law of each subject and effective methods of learning them. Anyhow, improving your grades is the key to solving the problem. Yours, Li Hua

(Another possible version) Slowstudent, This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, if you use your head a little bit, it is easy to deal with. Let me put it clearer. Now that parents’ meetings bring troubles and unhappiness to you, that would be okay if there were no such kind of meeting. It is impossible for you to forbid your school or your class to hold a parents’ meeting, but you can “forbid” your parents to attend the meeting. How? One way is not telling your parents there will be a parents’ meeting. Another is trying to say something bad about the meeting (say, the meeting is intended for nothing but to collect money) so that your parents hate to go to it. These approaches prove effective, for I am as slow a student as you. Yours, Li Hua

(2014福建卷)第二节 书面表达(满分25分) 如何理解“成功”,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation),按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm." - Sir Winston, Churchill 内容要求: 1.你对该引语的理解: ▁▂▃▄▅▆▇█▉▊▋▌精诚凝聚 =^_^= 成就梦想 ▁▂▃▄▅▆▇█▉▊▋▌ ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓点亮心灯 ~~~///(^v^)\\\~~~ 照亮人生 ▃ ▄ ▅ ▆ ▇ █ █ ■ ▓ 2.你的相关经历: 3.恰当的结尾。 注意: 1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数: 2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息: 3.词数:120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that _____________. 【考点】考察开放性作文 【写作指导】 本文属于开放性作文,要求考生根据丘吉尔的名言“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."发表自己的理解,并举例说明。属于议论文的一种,主要使用第三人称和一般现在时。在讲述各人经历时可以使用过去时。要点:1.该名言告诉我们:面对失败,我们不应该泄气,相反我们应该鼓足勇气充满热情继续努力。2.各人经历:学习骑自行车的例子。3.如果我们不尝试,我们就不可能成功,最重要的是我们要坚持下去。 本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。 【一句多译】 回顾这一切,我感觉如果我失去信心,我就不能学会骑自行车了。 (1)Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. (2)When I looked back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike If I had lost heart. 【参考范文】 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With