浙江新高考英语作文指津2

2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习（十八）写作指导一、续写原文第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面知文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our hors es, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

应用文写作 感谢信 A：感谢对方、你的收获、邀请对方来访 B：任期将满归国的外教（老师对你在学习上和生活上的帮助、表达感激之情及祝愿） C：对英语老师表示感谢（absent-minded/get involved in/upset/discouraged/poor performance/my efforts pay off.） 写作思路： 表达感谢： ...take this opportunity to extend/convey/express my heartfelt appreciation/thanks/gratitude to the assistance you offered me. Any appreciation for your generous help is beyond words. Thank you for your time/kindness/consideration. 说明事由 再次表示感谢： Thanks again! Again! I would like to express my warm thanks to you. Please accept my gratitude. Thanks again and I hope that I will have the opportunity to return/repay your kindness. I feel obliged to thank you once more. 邀请信（邀请外教担任评委、邀请外教参与中国传统活动、参与娱乐活动） A：邀请外教摘草莓（活动时间地点、该地草莓的特点、表达你的期望） B：郊游（参与者；时间地点；活动包括登山和野餐等） 写作思路：  A邀请名人：（I am honored）on behalf of.../it is my great honor to invite sb to attend (the celebration of...) On behalf of..., I would be very pleased to invite you to attend...to be held in... B邀请参加聚会/活动： I wonder is there is any chance for you to come...It would be my pleasure to share the important moments with you... I am writing to ask you whether you are available this weekend...we will be grateful if...  具体安排：as scheduled, the performance/meeting/celebration is due to start at... and end at.... Sth will be performed, and sth be included. please let me know if you come and you will be able to make it before...

请你写一篇短文向校英文报“S ports and Healt h”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间的运动。

内容包括：1. 介绍推荐的运动；2. 推荐理由。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

S t and Up and Ex erci se, St udents!_________________________________写作分析1.这是一篇投稿，向同学们推荐适合课间的运动项目并说明理由。

2.审题：①文体：记叙文短文（推荐）②话题：课间运动③阅读对象：全校学生④人称：第一、第三人称⑤时态：一般现在时3.写作内容:①介绍：慢跑、跳绳、踢毽子、打羽毛球（乒乓球）等（这些项目中只能选择一项）②理由：简单、易操作、不费时、缓解压力、增进友谊等4.注意点：①运动对h e a lt h的作用要提到②选择该项“课间运动”，要考虑场地、时间、激烈程度等③短文的读者是“同学们”参考范文1S t and Up and Ex erci se, Students!It is widely acknowledged that health always stands first in our daily life. Hence, I am writing to remend jogging.Jogging is easy to carry out, and it doesn’t need much time or space. We may jog in an interactive and experiential way, like jogging in circles.Jogging does benefit us in many ways. It can help us get refreshed, thus enabling us to study more efficiently. Besides, by jogging interactively, we will be on better terms with our classmates, which makes life at school more meaningful. Let’s stand up and exerc ise now! 93W参考范文2S t and Up and Ex erci s e, St udents!Recognizing the paramount importance of health in our daily lives, I am writing to advocate for the practice of jogging.Jogging is a convenient and accessible form of exercise that requires minimal time and space. Whether jogging in circles or exploring new routes, it offers an interactive and experiential way to engage in physical activity.The benefits of jogging are multifaceted. Not only does it refresh and invigorate us, enhancing our ability to study more effectively, but interactive jogging also fosters stronger connections with our classmates, enriching our school experience. Let's rise and embrace the opportunity to exercise now!参考范文3S t and Up and Ex ercis e, S tudent s!Nowadays, with tight study time, many students would like to stay in the classroom. Therefore, the students don’t have enough amount of exercise. I can say the table tennis is suitable for exercise between classes.Firstly, it doesn’t take long in a session, which means we needn’t worry about when the class is ing and when it’s over. Secondly, table tennis uses a little plastic ball so it is portable for us students. What’s more, it also uses most muscles in different positions on our body.What a great sport! So stand up and play table tennis, everybody! 98w参考范文4S t and Up and Ex erci se, S t udent s!In today's fastpaced academic environment, many students are often confined to the classroom, leading to a lack of physical activity.Table tennis offers an ideal solution for exercise between classes. Not only are the sessions brief, alleviating concerns about class schedules, but the game's portability makes it accessible for students. Furthermore, table tennis engages various muscle groups, providing a fullbody workout.Embrace this fantastic sport and get moving with a game of table tennis!参考范文5S t and Up and Ex erci se, St udents!During our breaks between classes, it's important to find ways to relieve the stress from studying. I highly remend taking up a sport like rope skipping, which is easy to practice and requires only a simple rope.This activity is convenient as the equipment is small and flexible. Participants simply need to jump up and down, making it a lowimpact exercise. Rope skipping not only promotes physical health but also carries a low risk of injury.It's a great way to stay active and unwind during our busy school days.参考范文6S t and Up and Ex erci se, St udents!Rope skipping is a fun and effective exercise for students. It involves jumping over a rope as it swings around.The benefits are numerous. It's a great way to improve cardiovascular (/ˌkɑːdiəʊˈvæskjələ(r)/心血管的) health, stamina, and coordination. It also helps in burning calories, toning muscles, and improving bone density. Rope skipping can be done anywhere, alone or with friends, making it a convenient and enjoyable form of exercise.To sum up,it's a fantastic way to stay active and healthy while having fun at the same time!。

2016年浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题第二节：概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. Howe ver, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a mea ns to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with h ot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when t he rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, Kin g of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifica lly speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standard s of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements r epeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever soft er, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents n ervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsib le for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immuno logist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.（原创范文，仅供参考）One possible version：People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a lon g time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. (要点 2 ) However, people began t o change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told tha t washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点3) However, some scient ists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system. (要点4)【范文点拨】(一)要点分析1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there is n othing fixed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have differen t attitudes towards dirt. 再结合下文谈到的主题可知Different people have diffe rent attitudes towards dirt on the skin. 范文中的要点1“People have mixed opi nions towards dirt on our skin. ”概括非常精炼。

精心整理2016年浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题第二节：概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

??Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.??Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashing offdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughtolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkin ghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEur opelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,the kingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.??Thoughthebeliefinthemerit(好处)ofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18cent ury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreven tingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarII.Advertisementsrepeatedlys elltheidea:clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar???Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,which mightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourages childrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatter(后者)positionisgainingsomeground.（原创范文，仅供参考）Onepossibleversion：??Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.(要点?1)Foralongtimeinhistory,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,such asFrance,believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.(要点?2)However,peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout2 00yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.(要点?3)However,somescientistsbelievetha texposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.(要点?4)【范文点拨】?(一)要点分析???1.?文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，点明了总的观点：However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.?换句话说：Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardsdirt.?再结合下文谈到的主题可知Differentpeoplehavedifferent概括非常精炼。

其次讲句式要高级，句子要鲜活句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不行能得高分。

精彩句式的合理运用会使文章极具可读性。

考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并留意句式的敏捷多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！考生的英语水平，还能提升写作档次。

1．运用强调句①(2024·太原模拟书面表达)With your generous help, I firmly believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible.→It is with your generous help that I firmly believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible.②(2024·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)I believe hard work will pay off!→I do believe hard work will pay off!2．运用倒装句(2024·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The game is so significant that it is required that everyone should be present punctually.→So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should be present punctually.3．运用虚拟语气If you should accept my application, I would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.→Should you accept my application, I would spare no effort to commit myself to your satisfaction.4．运用省略句(2024·昆明高三摸底调研书面表达)While we travel along the way, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.→While travelling along the way, we can enjoy the beautiful scenery as well as the new looks of the villages and towns.5．it 句型①(2024·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)First of all, bear it in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness.(it作形式宾语)②(2024·江苏卷书面表达)It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towardsratings.(it作形式主语)1.定语从句的应用可以特别有效地提升表达档次，在写作中假如我们可以把两个简洁句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，这些都能为文章增加亮点。

2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习（二十）写作指导一、概写原文阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Have you ever intended to be fully absorbed in your work but found yourself distracted（被分心）by e-mail, the Internet and other things throughout the day? "People often lose their concentration when they are bored or when they are engaged in several challenging tasks at the same time." says Peter Bregman. "They sometimes feel the need to escape from what's difficult or boring, so they jump out," he says.The part of the brain devoted to attention is connected to the brain's emotional center. Any strong emotion--quarrels with colleagues, problems at home –can interrupt our attention. Studies over the last decade have shown that too much work to do at a time can easily lead to distraction.Refocusing is hard for many people. Robert Epstein suggests the following, "Stop and listen to music for a few minutes. Go for a short walk or take a deep breath. While you breathe in deeply, count to five slowly, hold it and breathe out very slowly." This can blow out all the tension and the unwanted in your mind to restore your focus.Take more control of what you are doing. "Setting the phone alarm to go off(响起来) every hour is my way of creating awareness of my behavior," Mr. Bregman says. "You have to inform yourself that you've lost focus inorder to do something about it." Starting the day with a to-do list is important, such as when to eat, when to go to the gym or take a walk. But if it's overly ambitious(雄心勃勃的) you will put yourself in a state of anxiety, which makes it hard for the brain to concentrate. "Choosing three or four things as your priority(优先事项) for the day allows your brain to settle down and focus," he says.二、词汇讲解1. intend to do sth 打算…,想要做…It is still far from clear what they intend to do.现在还完全不清楚他们究竟想做什么。

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浙江省最新高考英语作文句型及词汇（1）浙江省最新高考英语作文句型及词汇一.开头句型1.As far as ...is concerned 就……而言2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻，...3.It can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说......4.As the proverb says，正如谚语所说的，5.It has to be noticed that... 它必须注意到，...6.It’s generally recognized that... 它普遍认为...7.It’s likely that ... 这可能是因为...8.It’s hardly that... 这是很难的......9.It’s hardly too much to say that... 它几乎没有太多的说…10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是二.衔接句型1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是...2.As is often the case...由于通常情况下...3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……5.But it’s a pity that... 但遗憾的是…6.For all that...对于这一切...... In spite of the fact that...尽管事实......7.Further, we hold opinion that... 此外，我们坚持认为，...8.However , the difficulty lies in...然而，困难在于…9.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 同样，我们要注意...10.not(that)...but(that)...不是，而是11.In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势12.As has been mentioned above...正如上面所提到的…13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即…三.结尾句型1.I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说…2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...因此，我们有理由相信…3.All things considered,总而言之It may be safely said that...它可以有把握地说......4.Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...因此，在我看来，更可取的是…5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论…6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是，....7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好四.常用于引言段的句型1. Some people think that …. 有些人认为…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。

2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习（十二）写作指导一、概写原文阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

When was the last time you sent someone a letter by regular mail? Thanks to the speed and ease of using the Internet, sending e-mail, rather than mailing letters using the postal system is the preferred means of communication for many people.In a survey of 2,000young people conducted by the e-mail provider MSN Hotmail, around half said they send thank-you notes by e-mail, not post. Besides, young people entering the working world today find themselves sending and replying to hundreds of business related e-mails every week.However, many of these same young people seem to be unaware of some basic rules when it comes to sending e-mail at work. They said they didn't check their spelling or punctuation before hitting 'send'. Even more surprising was that one in twenty of them said they sometimes end e-mails to their boss with the words "love and kisses!', which is normally considered inappropriate.The main reason for this use of informal language in workplace e-mail is that a lot of young people have always communicated with others on the Internet-especially using email--in a relaxed and friendly manner. For many, online communication outside of work involves talking with others in chat rooms, posting on message boards, and sending e-mail to friends--all for fun.Another reason is that young people now entering the workforce are unfamiliar with how to write formal letters, because they have never had to write one before. They have had no training in how to compose a basic business letter, and are unaware of the style and language that should, and should not, be used. This need for training has led to a variety of books and websites being written, which all aim to familiarize people with appropriate business e-mail writing.With more business correspondence now being conducted using the Internet than ever before, it is important for people to be aware of the differences in language use between personal and business communication-especially when using e-mail. So the next time you send an e-mail at the office, remember you're not just online, you're at work.二、词汇讲解1. easen. 容易This computer is popular for its good design and ease of use.这种计算机因设计巧妙、简单易用而广受欢迎。