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洛基国际英语 成千上万人，学洛基英语

留学文书润色技巧：丰富自己的课余生活

【范文】

Tolerance, restrain, and perseverance…

These are the words that my Tae Kwon Do class will begin with every time. Before the first

class began, the coach explained these words one by one but I did not pay any attention to them

because at that time my head was full of those fierce fights and breath-taking movements I saw on

the television. Hoping the coach to speak as fast as he could, I could not help imagining myself

giving a cool kick on the body of my “enemy” . However, when the coach published the training

content of the first class, I felt rather disappointed: 5000m long distance running and 30 sets of frog

jump, nothing to do with Tae Kwon Do.

“It is just one class.” I comforted myself. To my surprise, in the following two classes, we did

nothing but running, jumping and climbing rocks. I couldn't stand it anymore.

“I quit. I come to learn Tae Kwon Do and all this has nothing to do with it.” I complained to my

coach and decided to quit the class.

“What do you think is relevant about Tae Kwon Do?，，He did not get angry at all; instead, I

could see smile on his face.

“Kick the person confronting with you. ” I answered this easy question without a second

thought.

“Then kick me with all your strength. ”

I was stunned by his words but I decided to show him what I was capable of. Using all my

strength, I gave him a heavy kick yet I was surprised to see that he didn，t move back at all. The kick

seemed to be so weak that it did not have any impact on him. I stood still feeling rather confused.

“ See? This is why I taught you to remember the three words in the first place. You are not

wasting your time doing those exercises because they help you accumulate enough strength in

your body with which you can give a stronger kick than your opponent. Only those who have

tolerance, restrain and perseverance can insist upon such training and only those people can win

the game in the end. ” These words were deeply implanted in my head and I never said about

quitting the class since that day.

I gradually understood that every movement in the game had been practiced hundreds or even

thousands of times in order to have the biggest impact. Tae Kwon Do is more than wins and losses.

In fact, it embodies a kind of spirit: accumulate enough strength to give the best kick. And this spirit

can only be cultivated through tolerance, restrain and perseverance.

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洛基国际英语 Having learned Tae Kwon Do for more than three years, I felt rather glad that I chose not to quit

in the beginning because what it taught me greatly influenced my life. When I first entered high

school, I was not enrolled in the fast class due to my weakness in math. What was more shocking to

me was that in the first math examination, I got the lowest score in my class. In the

second examination, things did not change. I felt rather discouraged and confused and then the

words of my coach rang in my head, “accumulate enough strength to give the best kick” . Then I

re-allocated my time and focused on the study of math. At the same time, I carefully analyzed my

papers locating my weakness in math study and doing exercises accordingly. One month later, I

moved to the middle level of my class. In the end of the semester, I became the No.l in my class, the

best kick I had ever made.

Whenever being asked about my secrets of study, I would smile and say “Tae Kwon Do Spirit” .

This is the most important lesson I learned in my past eighteen years and I would like to keep it in

my mind in my entire life.

【忍耐，克制，坚持】

忍耐，克制，坚持…… 这些词是我每一节跆拳道课开始的时候都要大声讲的。在第一节课开始之前，教练挨个解释了这些 词的含义然而我却没有在意，因为在那时我的脑海中充斥的都是那些我在电视上看到的激烈的对抗和令人窒息的场景。我希望教练快点讲完他要讲的内容，我迫不及待地开始想象自己对着“敌人”的身体摆 出一个漂亮的踢腿。但是，当教练公布了第一堂课的训练内容，我却感到失望之极：5000米长跑和30组 蛙跳——和跆拳道一点关系也没有的训练内容。 “只是一节课而已。”我安慰自己。让我感到惊讶的是，在之后的两节课里，我们什么也没做，只 是在跑步，跳跃，爬山。我再也无法忍受了。 “我不学了。我来这里是学跆拳道的，但是你的训练和跆拳道一点关系也没有。”我向教练抱怨， 并且决定退出班级。“你觉得什么是和跆拳道相关的呢? ”教练并没有生气，相反，我可以看到他脸上 的笑容。 “踢倒你的对手。”我想都没想就回答了这个简答的问题。

“那么，你就用尽全力踢我吧。”

我被他的话惊呆了，但是我决定向他展示我的实力。用尽全身力气，我对着他重重地踢了一脚，但是我却惊讶地发现他一动不动。我踢的这一脚好像力量太过薄弱，根本没有对他造成任何影响。我呆站 在那里，心生疑惑。

“看到了吧?这就是为什么我要你们首先记得那三个词。你们做那些练习并不是在浪费时间，因为

只有让你们的身体积累更多的能量，才能让你更加有力地踢向你的对手。只有那些做到忍耐、克制和坚持的人才能坚持完成这些训练，而只有那些人才能最终赢得比赛的胜利。”这些话深深地印在了我的脑 海里。从那天开始，我再也没有说过要退出的话。

我逐渐开始明白比赛中的每个时刻都巳经被练习过几百次甚至几千次，这样才能获得最大的效力。跆拳道不仅仅关系输赢，实际上，它蕴藏着一种精神：积累足够的力量来给出最棒的一击。这种精神只 能通过忍耐、克制和坚持来不断培养。

我已经练习跆拳道三年多的时间，一想到我当时决定不退出我就非常开心因为跆拳道教给我的东西对我的人生产生了巨大的影响。当我初入高中，因为数学的弱势我没有被分到快班。更让我感到震

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润色语言的三个技巧 英语

润色语言的三个技巧 英语

润色语言的三个技巧 英语

Here are three tips for polishing your language in English, with a length of

more than 400 words:

1. Vocabulary Expansion:

- To enrich your language, it is essential to expand your vocabulary. Instead

of using the same words repeatedly, explore synonyms and antonyms to convey your

meaning precisely. For example, instead of saying "good," you can use "excellent,"

"outstanding," or "remarkable." This adds variety and depth to your expression.

2. Sentence Structure:

- Varying your sentence structures can enhance the readability and flow of

your writing. Instead of relying solely on simple sentences, use compound and complex

sentences. Incorporate coordinating conjunctions (e.g., and, but, or) and

subordinating conjunctions (e.g., because, although, when) to create more

sophisticated sentences.

英文邮件润色方法

英文邮件润色方法

英文邮件润色方法

摘要：

1.引言

2.英文邮件润色的五个关键要素

a.语法和拼写检查

b.简洁明了的

正文：

随着全球化的发展，英文邮件已成为工作中必不可少的沟通工具。一封经过润色的英文邮件不仅可以体现个人的专业素养，还能提高沟通效率。以下五个方面是英文邮件润色的关键要素。

首先，语法和拼写检查至关重要。在写邮件过程中，尽量使用可靠的语法和词汇，避免出现低级错误。可以借助诸如Grammarly等在线语法检查工具来进行复查。

其次，保持邮件简洁明了。正文部分应直接传达主题，避免冗长和复杂的句子。使用简单明了的表达有利于提高邮件的可读性。

第三，精准的称呼和问候。在邮件开头，使用恰当的称呼和问候语，表示对收件人的尊重。例如，对于商务邮件，可以使用“Dear Mr.Smith”或“Dear Dr.Zhang”。

第四，注意标点符号和格式。遵循英文标点符号的规范，如使用逗号分隔句子，使用句号结束句子等。同时，保持段落清晰，使用合适的间距和缩进。

最后，专业和礼貌的语言。在邮件中避免使用过于口语化的表达，如俚语和网络用语。尽量使用正式、礼貌的措辞，表达自己的观点和需求。

具体润色方法和建议如下：

1.使用语法检查工具：如Grammarly、Ginger等，这些工具可以帮助我们快速发现并修复语法和拼写错误。

2.避免过于口语化的表达：尽量使用正式的词汇和句式，让邮件显得更加专业。

3.确保段落清晰和连贯：划分合理的小节，使用恰当的过渡词汇，使邮件内容易于理解。

4.适当使用缩写和缩略词：在某些情况下，可以使用缩写和缩略词，如“ASAP”（尽快）、“CEO”（首席执行官）等，以提高邮件的效率。

5.结尾表达对收件人的尊重和感谢：在邮件结尾部分，表达对收件人的敬意和感激之情，如“Thank you for your attention”或“Best regards”。

总之，一封经过润色的英文邮件是专业素养和良好沟通的体现。遵循以上五个关键要素，相信你的英文邮件将更具可读性和实用性。

sci润色注意事项

sci润色注意事项

sci润色注意事项

英文回答：

Tips for SciProofing:

1. Read your article carefully: Before starting the

proofreading process, make sure to thoroughly read your

article. This will help you understand the content and

identify any areas that require improvement.

2. Check for grammar and punctuation errors: Proofread

your article for any grammatical or punctuation mistakes.

Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and

proper use of commas, periods, and other punctuation marks.

3. Improve sentence structure and clarity: Ensure that

your sentences are clear and concise. Avoid long and

complicated sentences that may confuse the reader. Break up

lengthy sentences into shorter ones to improve readability.

4. Enhance vocabulary and word choice: Use appropriate

and accurate vocabulary to convey your ideas effectively.

给作文润色的英文

给作文润色的英文

给作文润色的英文

英文：

When it comes to the topic of improving writing skills,

there are a few things that come to mind. Firstly, reading

is an essential part of improving writing skills. By

reading more, you can learn new vocabulary, sentence

structures, and writing styles. Secondly, practice makes

perfect. The more you write, the better you will become.

It's important to set aside time for writing every day,

even if it's just for a few minutes. Lastly, getting

feedback from others can be extremely helpful. Whether it's

a friend, teacher, or writing group, having someone else

read and critique your work can provide valuable insights

and suggestions for improvement.

中文：

提到如何提高写作技能，我想到了几个方面。首先，阅读对提高写作技能至关重要。通过阅读更多的书籍，你可以学习新的词汇、句子结构和写作风格。其次，熟能生巧。你写的越多，你就会变得越好。每天抽出一些时间写作非常重要，即使只是几分钟。最后，从他人那里获得反馈非常有帮助。无论是朋友、老师还是写作小组，让别人阅读和批评你的作品可以提供有价值的见解和改进建议。