Phubbing作文样文
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英语作文如何得高分：
1.清晰的结构：至少3段
1) 连接句：分段的时候，每一段开头注意是否有承上启下的连接句子（开头要有开门见山的主题句,其他段落开头有连接句）。譬如此篇文章中的：
With the development of electronic products, phubbing is becoming a serious
problem. （主题句topic sentence）
This may bring a lot of problems.(连接句connecting sentence)
2)连接词：(1)First of all; What’s more; Moreover; Besides; Last;
(2)First of all/Firstly, Secondly; Thirdly; last but not least（最后，但并不是不重要，....）
(3)and, but, However, also（请把also放在句首：Also,…….）,as well, too
(4)instead, as a result, because, so
(5) in my opinion,
2.使用高级语汇
1）使用高级语态：恰当使用被动语态1，2句。但是注意不要为了使用而使用。要看作文内容确定合适的熟悉的被动语态句子。例如此文中的：
This can be seen everywhere,
2）使用高级时态。恰当使用现在完成时态1，2句。一直在进行并对现在和将来有影响的动作，使用现在完成时态代替一般现在时态。例如此文中的：
This has caused /brought a lot of problems.
3）使用高级词汇、句型。恰当使用从句，譬如when/while/before /afer/as soon as/until等连接的时间状语从句，so that/in order that引导的目的状语从句，because, so分别引导的原因结果状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句等等。(另外，如果使用定语从句，一定要注意谓语动词的单复数使用); 使用：It’s +adj+of(品质形容词kind…)/for(非品质形容词important…) sb to do sth等经典句型.
First , if people always keeps their heads down for a long time ,it’s bad for their
health.
4）多样化表达，譬如使用be supposed to do sth 取代重复出现的should do sth
例如此文中的：
Instead, we are supposed to talk with our parents, read more books and do
other meaningful things.
Phubbing 低头症
With the development of electronic products, phubbing is becoming a serious
problem. More and more people are spending too much time on mobile phones and
iPads. They surf the Internet, chat with friends or watch videos. Also, they like to
play computer games. This can be seen everywhere, either when people are at parties
or while they are on the bus or on the underground.
This has caused /brought a lot of problems. First , if people always keeps
their heads down for a long time ,it’s bad for their health. Second, they have less
time to communicate with their parents or friends.
In my opinion, we shouldn’t spend too much time on mobile phones. Instead, we
are supposed to talk with our parents, read more books and do other meaningful
things.
