2020-2021学年高三英语上学期期末题型分类冲刺06书面表达之应用文(解析版)

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07 书面表达之读后续写 Passage1 (2021·黑龙江哈尔滨市第六中学校高三期末)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Jack 听说你大学准备攻读“中医药学”专业,发邮件向你询问原由,请你回复邮件。内容包括: 1.中医简介;2.家庭影响;3.个人愿望。

注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:中医药学 Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM) Dear Jack, Thanks for your letter! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Jack, Thanks for your letter! I’m very glad to share with you my idea about furthering my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine at university in reply to your email. With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit. I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. So I’ve made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. I believe it’ll turn out an excellent cause for me to pursue. Best wishes. Yours Li Hua 【分析】 这是一篇应用文,要求考生写一封信向美国朋友 Jack解释自己大学选择中医药学的原因。 【详解】 第一步:审题

体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时 结构:总分 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求: 1.回信的目的

2.选择学习中医药学的原因

1)中医简介(中医的历史,中医对国人的或世界的影响)

2)家庭影响(祖辈行医,耳濡目染)

3)个人愿望(成为出色的中医)

第二步:列提纲(重点词组) thanks for; in reply to ;be glad to do ;diagnose ; cure illness ; with satisfaction ; made up one’s mind to do;

major in ;turn out

第三步:连词成句 1.I’m very glad to share with you my idea about furthering my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine at university in reply to your email.

2.With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit.

3.I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. 4.So I’ve made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. 5. I believe it’ll turn out an excellent cause for me to pursue. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词和从句)(供参考) 1. 表并列补充关系:what’s more,;besides; in addition; as well as;last but not the least… 2. 表转折对比关系:however/ on the contrary/ but/ although/ in spite of/ despite/ on the one hand, one the other hand/ as for

3. 表文章结构顺序:first of all/ firstly/ second/ and then/ finally/ in the end/ at last 4. 表因果关系:because/ so/ as/ thus/ therefore/ as a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】 [高分句型1] With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit.(which引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. (whenever引导时间状语从句)

Passage2 (2021·东营神州天立高级中学有限公司高三月考)假如你是高中生李华,你校上周举行了冬季运动会。现《英语周报》向你约稿,请根据以下提示写一篇关于本次运动会的报道。内容要点如下: 1.时间,地点;

2.内容;

3.意义。

注意: 1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Last week, the Winter Sports Meeting, organized by our school, was held in our school’s track and field ground, lasting three days. It enjoyed a huge success. In the grand opening ceremony, every class dressing up paraded through the platform, featuring its favourite theme. In the next event competition, athletes did what they could to fight for the glory of their own class, while others cheered for players in full cry. What’s worth mentioning was the club performances in the evening, where students showed their brilliant talent and gift, displaying the charm of contemporary school students. It was through the activity that we strengthen our sense of unity and improved our fitness. In a word, we benefited a lot from it. 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于 提纲类作文,要求考生写一篇关于本次运动会的报道,介绍学校上周举行的冬季运动会。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时。 结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求: 1.时间,地点;

2.内容;

3.意义。

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) track and field ground; success; grand opening ceremony; dress up; feature; competition; fight for; in full cry; performances; brilliant talent; contemporary; strengthen; ; in a word 第三步:连词成句 1. Last week, the Winter Sports Meeting, organized by our school, was held in our school’s track and field ground, lasting three days. 2. It enjoyed a huge success. 3. In the grand opening ceremony, every class dressing up paraded through the platform, featuring its favourite theme. 4. In the next event competition, athletes did what they could to fight for the glory of their own class, while others cheered for players in full cry. 5. What’s worth mentioning was the club performances in the evening, where students showed their brilliant talent and gift, displaying the charm of contemporary school students. 6. It was through the activity that we strengthen our sense of unity and improved our fitness. 7. In a word, we benefited a lot from it.