英语65提纲作文写作
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第六十九讲提纲作文写作一学习目标1.了解写作指南2.掌握常用句型3.体验写作实例4.体验佳作向导5.了解范文体验二考点解析⊙写作指南1.提纲作文要求考生根据给出的提示性文字,确定文章的中心思想,然后围绕中心思想展开,表达主旨。
命题常以短文提示、要点提示或表格提示三种形式呈现。
它的特点是提纲既体现了文章的层次,又规定了各段大体的内容,为考生提供了写作思路。
2.提纲只是对文章的提示和概括,不是主题句。
考生需要根据提纲的性质,写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子,使之成为主题句,然后围绕主题句进行扩展。
3.收集材料支持主题句。
材料可以是例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。
应当注意的是,所选材料要与文章的主题相符,即要“扣题”,同时要具有典型性,能充分说明问题。
在有多个例证的段落中,还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。
⊙常用句型1.总起:①It is necessary for us to do...对我们来说,做……是必要的。
②I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.我经常想象我未来的生活会是怎样。
2.表达不同观点:①People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards...人们对……采取了不同的态度。
②Everything has two sides and...is not an exception.It has both advantages and disadvantages.任何事物都是有两面的,……也不例外。
它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
③...has bee a hot topic among people,and especially among the young heated debates are righton their way.……已成为人们关注的热门话题,特别是在年轻人当中,它将引发激烈的辩论。
④People who are for/against the idea think...赞同/反对这一想法的人认为……⑤Some people believe that...Others argue that...有些人认为……而其他人争论说……3.不同观点之间的衔接:①However...of them hold a different view./...of them hold the opposite opinion.然而,他们中的……持有不同/相反的观点②On the other hand,people object that...另一方面,人们反对说……某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论学习习惯问题。
请你结合自身学习实际,按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1.说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;2.介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;3.描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;4.开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.1.文体信息(1)体裁:提纲作文(2)时态:一般现在时(3)人称:以第一人称为主2.思路点拨这篇书面表达为提纲作文,通过文字信息可以确定,本文要求谈谈学习习惯方面的问题。
要求考生写作时注意要点全面,语言简练,结构紧凑;注意恰当使用连接词,以使行文连贯。
3.要点表达(1)众所周知,学习习惯在我们的学习中起着关键的作用。
It is known to us all that learning habits play a key role in our study.=As we all know,learning habits play a key role in our study.(2)只有养成良好的学习习惯,我们才能有效地学习。
We can learn efficiently only if we form a good learning habit.=Only if we form a good learning habit can we learn efficiently.(3)我想制定一个切实可行的计划,并坚持执行将是一个很大的帮助。
I think it would be very helpful to make a practical plan and stick to it.=I think making a practical plan and sticking to it will be of great help.(4)另外,我认为向老师们请教也是很重要的。
Besides,I think it’s of great importance to ask the teachers for advice.=In addition,I think it also important to turn to our teachers for advice.(5)但也存在不少问题。
But there are also a lot of problems.(6)为了改善这种情况,我决定学着快速记笔记,并尝试把重点放在重要的问题上。
In order to improve this situation,I decide to learn to take notes quickly and try to concentrate on the important issues.=To improve this situation,I decide to learn to take notes quickly and try to focus on the important points.It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.①(众所周知),learning habits play a key role in our study.②(我们只有养成良好的学习习惯)can we learn efficiently.Among learning habits,reviewing regularly ③(是最重要的一项).If we go over our notes and textbooks regularly,④(它们将变得更有意义,更容易被记住).How should we do to develop such a good habit? I think making a practical plan and sticking to it⑤(将有很大帮助).In addition,I think it also important⑥(向我们的老师请教). But there also exit many problems.For example,I can’t take down⑦(老师所说的)in class.⑧(为了改善这种状况),I decide to learn to take notes quickly and try to focus on the important points.答案:①As we all know②Only if we form a good learning habit③is the most important one④they will bee more meaningful and be remembered more easily⑤will be of great help⑥to turn to our teachers for advice⑦what the teachers say⑧In order to/To improve this situation三练习题题(一):每年高考之前总会出现“高考移民”,他们设法到录取分数线较低的省份参加考试。
你班同学就此展开讨论,提出以下两种相反意见:请就此给“学生英语报Student Times”写一篇报道,说明上述讨论情况。
说明:1.词数100左右;2.标题和开头段已给出.Students on the Move for Their Exams ─Fair or Unfair?Every year some students from high─s core areas move to other provinces to take the Entrance Examination of the Colleges. Recently we had a discussion about this.参考范文:Students on the Move for Their Exams ─Fair or Unfair?Every year some students from high─score areas move to other provinces to take the Entrance Examination of the Colleges. Recently we had a discussion about this.Some think it understandable for the students move to other places to take the exam since they want to be able to study at a better university. And it seems to be the right of a student as a citizen to have such a chance, especially those from an area of high entry─sco re. Otherwise they have to get much higher scores to enter a university than those who are from a low entry─score province.Other take a quite different stand.They think those who are from high─score areas would add pressureto the areas they move to , which also means an unfair situation to those students in low─score areas. What’s more, it seems to be just favourable to the powerful and not fair to ordinary people. So they don’t think it a good thing.。