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概要写作示例与写作训练10【写作示例】【原文呈现】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

It was once common to regard Britain as a society with class distinction. Each class had unique characteristics.In recent years, many writers have begun to speak the 'decline of class' and 'classless society' in Britain. And in modern day consumer society everyone is considered to be middle class.But pronouncing the death of class is too early. A recent wide-ranging society of public opinion found 90 percent of people still placing themselves in particular class; 73 percent agreed that class was still a vital part of British society; and 52 percent thought there were still sharp class differences. Thus, class may not be culturally and politically obvious, yet it remains an important part of British society. Britain seems to have a love of stratification.One unchanging aspect of a British person's class position is accent. The words a person speaks tell her or his class. A study of British accents during 1970s found that a voice sounding like a BBC newsreader was viewed as the most attractive voice, Most people said this accent sounded 'educated' and 'soft'. The accents placed at the bottom in this study, on the other hand, were regional(地区的)city accents. These accents were seen as 'common' and 'ugly'. However, a similar study of British accents in the US turned these results upside down and placed some regional accents as the most attractive and BBC English as the least. This suggests that British attitudes towards accent have deep roots and are based on class prejudice.In recent years, however, young upper middle-class people in London, have begun to adopt some regional accents, in order to hide their class origins. This is an indication of class becoming unnoticed. However, the 1995 pop song 'Common People' puts forward the view that though a middle-class person may 'want to live like common people' they can never appreciate the reality ofa working-class life.【思维路径】[核心内容]本文是一篇议论文，全文共分五段。

纲要写作导练一、 Rewrite the sentences according to the skills.(1)Use words of similar meanings同义替代法I didn’ t catch any fish owing to the fact that I was not patient.I didn’ t catch any fish_________ I was not patient.Keeping silent can actually make your anger longer.Keeping silent may not ________ and _____________ your anger.(2) Adopt the opposite way when saying a sentence 正话反说法You will fail.You will ____________.(3)Change the part of speech 词性变换法Patience is very important.Patience is _____________________.The pollution makes people very anxious about their living environment.People show________________________________ their living environment.She went to New Zealand because she intended to immigrate there.She went to New Zealand with______________________________ there.(4)Change the structure of a sentence 句式变化法语态变换：Parents should give children more praise.Children should__________more praise.简单句变复合句：Children should be encouraged more. This will help them learn faster.Children should be encouraged more,________ will help them learn faster.Children are given more praise. They will achieve more success.______________ more praise,children will achieve more success.连词连接法We should encourage children. We should not scold them.We should encourage children____________ scold them.We should encourage children__________________________ them.Cold and wet have nothing to do with catching colds.Why are they more frequent in the winter?...No one has yet found the answer.However, no one has yet found_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________词序改变法The secret of success was patience.______________________________________细节俭略法Don’talways scold and give lots of praise instead.____________________________________________________句意理解法Shopping on the Internet is becoming increasingly popular._____________________________________________________________。

课情分析：
1.本堂课是杭州市2021高三年级英语复习研讨会中的一堂展示课，选择了概要写作中带有主要细节的段落为突破口，围绕“How to ummarie a mar的定义，学生齐读后教师重点强调e umar作业中一段典型的段落，让学生根据刚才
的段落结构，快速定位main idea, e uinor
detai。

然后引导学生得出e uinor detai在段落中的作用，并归纳呈现。

随后教师借助
刚分析的段落，边讲解边呈现该段落的树形图，并特别强调箭头的指向。

最后教师给
出新的一段典型段落，让学生自己阅读分析并画出树形图，之后请两位学生在白板上
展示自己的成果，并向同学们解释这样画的原因。

2.文本赏析：教师首先进行小结：树状图可以帮助我们更清晰地表现段落结构，
3.指出并强调这是写a ain idea and e u into one entence 并呈现文本分析中的段落两个不同版本的ummar，让学生比较不同，和同桌讨论哪个版本更好，并说明理由。

最后引导学生归纳出：对于main idea和e umar，头脑风暴，
尽可能多地运用各种不同的结构来处理main idea和e umar，分享呈现给大家，然后
教师给出自己的版本。

最后教师对本堂课进行归纳，并强调写ummariing a aragrah with
e uorting detai的两个步骤：一是段落分析，画树状图；二是主次分明，巧用结构。

鲁周焕
余杭高级中学。

第一节归纳主旨大意将350词以内的文本浓缩成60词左右的概要, 需要一个过程。

它大致是从文本整体的理解到各部分的概括再到整体的合成。

首先, 我们需要整体阅读文本, 归纳主旨大意。

【有缘初识】, 回答导学问题。

1. 该短文的主题是________.A. shoppingB. advertisingC. undercoverD. marketing2.在A同学的概要中, 与该主题不吻合的句子是_________________.You are in a department store and you see a couple of attractive young women looking at the sweater. You listen to the conversation.“I can't b elieve it--a Lorenzo Bertolla! They are almost impossible to find. Isn’t it beautiful? And it’s a lot cheaper than the one Sara bought in Rome.”They leave and you go over to see this incredible sweater. It's nice and the price is right. You’ve never heard of Lorenzo Bertolla, but those girls looked really stylish. They must know. So you buy it. You never realize that those young women are employees of an advertising agency. They are actually paid to go from store to store talking loudly about Lorenzo Bertolla clothes.Every day we notice what people are wearing, driving and eating. If the person looks cool, the product seems cool, too. This is the secret of undercover(暗中影响的) marketing.Undercover marketing is important because it reaches people that don’t pay attention to traditional advertising. This is particularly true of the MTV generation--consumers between the age of 18 and 34. It is a golden group. They have a lot of money to spend, but they don’t trust ads.So advertising agencies hire young actors "perform" in bars and other places where young adults go. Some people might call this Practice deceptive, but marketing executive Jonathan Ressler calls it creative. "Look at the traditional advertising. Its effectiveness is decreasing.” However, one mig ht ask what "real " is exactly about if young women pretend to be enthusiastic about a sweater? Advertising executives would say it's no less real than an ad. The difference is that you know an ad is trying to persuade you to buy something. While you don't know when a conversation you overhear is just a performance.某同学写的概要:① Some attractive women say a Lorenzo Bertolla is beautiful but cheap, and you buy it. ②Actually these stylish people are employed by advertising agencies to do undercover marketing, w hich aims at people who don’t trust ads. ③Although, in some advertising executives’ opinion, it is creative and effective, undercover marketing is blamed for the performance which you are unaware of.1. 议论和说明性文体通常围绕某个主题( topic/ subject)展开。

概要写作示例与写作训练2【写作示例】【原文呈现】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Three miles is quick by car, but when those three miles consist of an old wooden fence on a cattle farm that requires a fresh coat of paint, it’s not as short of a distance. For the final week of summer heading into my sophomore year of college, painting this fence nearly wiped my existence. Luckily, I wasn’t alone in this task; I had the help of Rob, the farm manager. When two people are stuck under the relentless August sun for ten hours a day, there isn’t much to do to help pass the time. It was in this moment that I truly learned to value the art of conversation.Standing in front of this dilapidated(荒废的) fence was the last place on Earth I wanted to be. And spending over 50 hours with Rob with nothing to keep your mind busy but a mindless, tedious task, all we had for amusement was conversation---No phone, no music, only your thoughts and a little tête-à-tête(促膝长谈).It started out simple, talks about the weather, sports, and the alike. As the week progressed, so did our topics of discussion. From family and funny childhood stories to our hobbies and career goals, we began to learn more about each other. I knew Rob for years, but after this job, I felt I knew him on a different level. I’ve spent plenty of time with people whether it was going to sporting events, movies, or concerts, but never had I spent so much time with one person with absolutely nothing to break the silence. It was uncomfortable at first, but by the time the final bucket of paint was emptied, I felt like I had made a new friend.Sometimes we get caught up in trying to keep ourselves busy, entertained, or from getting bored. So seldom do we realize that there is a deeper connection you get with people when all you’re doing is talking, for life is a conversation--- Every song you hear, TV show you watch, or work of art you observe, at the simplest level, someone is just trying to communicate with you.【思维路径】[核心内容]本文是一篇夹叙夹议的文章，全文共四段。

任务写作 一．第一部分：如何概括转述所给短文的大意 对短文进行概括是一个获取信息、加工信息的过程，需要严谨的思维和准确的表达能力，而且要使用自己的语言来表达，不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。因此，“概括短文的内容要点”，实为客观简要地转述作者的观点、论据和结论。如何概括？ 1. 可先划出短文中的重要句子，例如文中的主题句、论点、论据和结论等。 2. 经过自己理解之后，转化成自己的话，运用简洁明了的语言表述出来。 第二部分：提出观点 如何更好地完成第二项任务 —— 提出自己的观点并加以论证？思路如下： 1. 要紧紧围绕所给主题 2. 明确任务 ,千万别漏掉任何一个写作要点 （因为是按照要点内容给分；注意分段写，最好一个要点一段） 3. 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的观点,也可参照阅读材料中的内容。 4. 注重连接词的恰当运用。 二．概括部分开头 This passage tells us/ points out +名词/名词词组/ that 从句 The author/ writer states/ talks about the benefits/ advantages of… According to the passage, we can know that… (可应用到的动词还有：prove/ argue/ discuss/ advise/ suggest…)

三、怎样使用恰当的连接词 逻辑角度 合适的过渡性词汇

时间顺序 first, second, third, then, finally/at last

空间顺序 here, there, on one side…on the other side,

in front of, at the back of, next to 对称顺序 for one thing, for the other thing, on the one hand, on the other hand 转折顺序 but, however, while, though, otherwise, conversely

2020年初升高英语无忧衔接第三章英语技能衔接专题五概要写作解析版【小试牛刀一】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic( 充满活力的) the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions(条件). Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and bee much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit(受益) a lot from it.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Getting up early is a good habit. And we attach great importance to getting up early because morning is the most valuable time of a day, so we can have physical training to keep healthy. Besides, getting up early can let us have enough time to program and prepare to finish doing our work or study of the day. In a word, we will benefit a lot from getting up early.【解析】一、思路点拨本书面表达属于概要写作，阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇50词左右的内容概要。

概要写作示例与写作训练8【写作示例】【原文呈现】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

No one would be willing to pay one-third of the price for the packaging or wrapping of what he or she purchases. But over-packaging has become a disease that leads to a massive waste of resources and contributes to environmental pollution in China.Behind this disease are some appalling figures. The wasted packaging materials are estimated to be worth about 280 billion yuan annually. And such packages and wrappings thrown away by customers make up half of the volume of solid waste in cities. And its percentage has been increasing. If the cost for treating the solid waste is included, the money that has been wasted on over-packaging should be much higher.To produce paper packagings or wrappings, many more trees have to be cut down. But the packagings will then be thrown away by consumers. The same is true with plastic wrappings. Over-packaging also damage the interest of consumers when they have to spend quite a high percentage on something that they will have to throw into the dustbin.Product packaging and wrapping used to be very simple 30 years ago. Moon cakes were wrapped just in papers with a piece of red paper on top as trademark. "Shabby" was the word many had used to criticize the way Chinese products were packaged. And shabby packaging was condemned for making Chinese products unattractive in the international market.It is reasonable to pay enough attention to packaging or wrapping products in such a manner that they can be appealing to customers' eyes. But that does not definitely justify that packaging should even outshine what is inside.In the Chinese proverb, maidu huanzhu, the buyer returns the pearl and just keeps the case because the latter is too fancy and luxurious. The message from the proverb is that over-packaginghelps cultivate an unhealthy consuming mentality--- to buy fancy-looking stuff but not what they really need. This is also against the principle of frugality and sustainable development.【思维路径】[核心内容]本文是一篇议论文，全文共有六段。