高考英语作文技巧ppt

得到金黄的评价；她太渺小，不可对其大加赞扬。
6. I wish my horse had the speed of your tongue. 多么希望我的马儿会跑过你的舌头！
7. She managed to catch the early bus and a bad cold. 她赶上了早班车，也赶上了重感冒。
Defination
拈连(zeugma):
是指甲乙两个事物连在一起叙述时，把本来 只适用于甲事物的词语拈来用到乙事物上，这种 修辞手法就叫拈连，又叫“顺拈”。运用拈连， 可以一语双叙，轭式搭配，使上下文联系紧密自 然，表达生动深刻。例如：
He lost his money and his hope for a better life. 他丢了钱，也丢了过好日子的希望。
Practice: Put the following into Chinese
1. She stood there with weeping eyes and heart. 她站在那儿，眼睛流着泪，心流着血。
2. In fact, I was the efficiency expert for the whole family. I used to organize my father’s tools, my mother’s kitchen, my sister’s boyfriends.
小时孩子们吸干妈妈的奶水，大时榨干爸 爸的薪水。
5. She’s too low for a high praise, to brown for a fair praise, and too little for a great praise.
(W. Shakespeare: Much Ado About Nothing) 她太下贱，不值得褒奖太高；她皮肤太深，不宜

形成基本语义单位
用一些简单句、不同句型、不同句式或 高级词汇将要点扩展成句
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基础写作步骤
四、连句成文
时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应
背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）、 逻辑关系、开头与结尾、巧用连接词和 过渡句
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书面表达六步法
五、查错改错
要尽量剔除错误
如要点齐全、句法、语法有 无问题；单词拼写、大小写
和标点符号；句数
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基础写作步骤
六、誊写
卷面要工整
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• 建议： • 1. 注重基础,单词短语多 • 2. 培养写句意识,以动词为中心
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如何在写作中避免句式单一
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方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
Rewrite the sentences
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B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确性和合适性]
1. 旅行社
travel agency
2. 食物不合味口
the food didn’t agree with us
3. 他讲解清晰,生动。
He explained everything about the places in a clear and lively way.
• 2) We don’t satisfied with the food.
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We don’t
satisfied with the food.
weren’t • 3) People had to bought some food.
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People had to bought some food.

（范例） 高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做 一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题 适当展开，词数100~120。 Health and Sports Some students say that taking sports is just a waste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a consequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports.
• (2) 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要 灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分 词状语从句等。 • ①强调句 • [原文] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. • [修正] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely. • ② 由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中 文中的“所… …”，有很强的概括，如：
点评：
本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。文 章围绕“Health and Sports”这一主题展开，两种观 点陈述清楚。文中运用大量的词组和短语，语句变化 多样，过渡自然，结尾表明自己的观点，也显得落落 大方。

I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage. After the purchase in one of the large. fancy, expensive shops, I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting n the parking lot and my phone was dead.
步I 骤ask一ed：th读e s懂hop大a意ssi，sta理nt 清for脉he络lp, but she turned me down because she couldn’t
读所us给e 的he不r 完ph整on故e事a，t w弄o清rk大. 意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。
I then requested the shop assistant who had just sold me the luggage, which was not cheap at all, if she could help me telephone my driver. She replied, still all smiles, “I'm sorry, Sir, but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.
As I was wondering what kind of policy that was, I saw a nice-looking teenage boy I tried to ask a young boy for help, but he walked right past me as if he didn’t see coming tomwea.rd me. Remembering my wife's interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when you're in trouble, I thought I might have a chance But before I could say a word, he walked past me. It turned out he simply didn't see me. I waited a bit longer in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me. Disappointed and tired, I got out of the shop on to the busy street in front. I stood there with people rushing by, looking at their faces to see if there was a sign of kindness on their face. I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the teenager.

Beautify your Composition
英语作文的华丽变身
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写作训练—关键点
1. 越是好作文，内容越丰富； 2. 越是不好的作文，错误越是被容忍； 3. 越是好的作文，越不能出任何差错； 4. 越是好的作文，字写的越好
美文要点
1.高级词汇 2.复杂句式 3.完美过渡
词汇使用的四原则
these days recently different
应用较多的词汇
It’s very helpful.
It benefits a lot. / It is of great help.
Your efforts will be very important. Your efforts will make a great difference.
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合并为同位语从句
Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first prize in the 2004 Olympic Games.
Liu Xiang, an excellent athlete, won the first prize in the 2004 Olympic Games.
thank sb for sth give/ express/ voice thanks to sb
be thankful to sb for sth
sb appreciate sth
give one’s appreciation to sb for sth
be grateful to sb for sth show gratitude to sb for sth
more and more people

60、只有永远躺在泥坑里的人，才不会再掉进坑里。——黑格尔 32、希望的灯一旦熄灭，生活刹那间变成了一片黑暗。——普列姆昌德 33、希望是人生的乳母。——科策布 34、形成天才的决定因素应该是勤奋。——郭沫若 35、学到很多东西的诀窍，就是一下子不要学很多。——洛克
高考英语写作技巧方法
56、极端的法规，就是极端的不公。 ——西 塞罗 57、法律一旦成为人们的需要，人们 就不再 配享受 自由了 。—— 毕达哥 拉斯 58、法律规定的惩罚不是为了私人的 利益， 而是为 了公共 的利益 ；一部 分靠有 害的强 制，一 部分靠 榜样的 效力。 ——格 老秀斯 59、假如没有法律他们会更快乐的话 ，那么 法律作 为一件 无用之 物自己 就会消 灭。— —洛克

7.学生被鼓励得越多，他学习就会越努力 • The more a student is encouraged, the harder
he will work at his lessons. _____________________________________
话题1. 学校生活 假如你是李华。最近你校学生会成立了一个自行 车俱乐部，你的英国朋友Peter 准备下个月来你 校上学，你想邀请他一起加入该俱乐部。 请你 根据下列提示，给Peter 发一封邮件，告诉他有 关自行车俱乐部的情况。
• If everyone does one thing for our school,I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.
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2. 热点句型
1）如果我们有困难，我们可以向我们的老师和同 学寻求帮助 If we have difficulties, we can turn to our
___te_a_c_h_e_r_s_a_n_d_o_u_r__C_l_a_s_s_m_a_t_e_s_fo_r__h_e_lp_.______花很多时间在学习上，因此没有时间休 息和锻炼，这严重影响了学生的健康
_A_lo_t_o__f s_t_u_d_e_n_ts__s_p_e_n_d_m__u_c_h_t_im_e__o_n_s_t_u_d_y_. ____ Therefore ,they have no time for rest and sports, which really affects students’health.