0k-pammd大学英语六级考试作文预测
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大学英语六级考试作文预测(2010.12) 恩波教育英语研究所 预测作文(一) Aging Before Wealthy 1. 物价上涨,通货膨胀,社会压力越来越大,很多白领出现“未富先老”的现象。 2. 作为一个大学生,走出校门后,你将如何应对这种情况。
【范文】 Stress has been around human beings ever since its existence; it is an unavoidable consequence of life. In current society, everyone is required to work in a fast pace with the competition getting more and more hectic. What one earns does not make ends meet. Therefore a lot of white collars are suffering from “aging before wealthy”. As university students, we will face those issues in no time. The first thing we should do is to stay positive. Secondly, knowledge is power. A competent person will accomplish his/her goal easier than others. So when we are still in campus, we shall spend more time in improving our skills, as well as broadening our horizons. In addition, everyone needs to learn stress management that suits them in order to cope with the current pace of the society. All in all, by following the above steps and recognizing the seriousness of the reality, I am quite confident that we can face the future challenges and eventually survive.
【点评】 首段交待“未富先老”的历史和社会背景,先讲压力自古有之,后讲现代社会的压力更大。不仅如此,收入与支出的不和谐更是导致当今社会白领压力过大的重要原因。三句话步步深入,层层递进。“收支不平衡”使用what one earns does not make ends meet。 第二段提供了三个应对措施。第一是从心理上保持乐观积极。第二是增强自身的业务技能。第三是进行压力管理。整段长短句结合,在表达“某人应该做某事”这个意思时,分别使用了sb. should do, sb. shall do, sb. needs to do等,使语言更加丰富。另外,在遇到和就业压力、升学压力、生存压力、心理健康等话题时,可供参考的短语和词组有:hectic(疯狂的)competition, suffer from, stay positive, a competent person(有竞争力的人),stress management, cope with, confident和survive.。
预测作文(二) Audaciousness(出位) 1. 目前,互联网上有很多出位的现象,比如裸奔 (streaking)等。 2. 是不是在新时代要获取关注,就要靠出位呢? 3. 你如何看待这种现象?
【范文】 Currently, audaciousness online like streaking has grabbed many people’s attention. It seems that in order to be famous, people have to resort to audaciousness. However, I believe that audaciousness may not be a proper way to draw public attention and realize one’s self-value. To acquire fame and success, one has to consider three basic factors, namely goal, methods, and persistence. First, one needs to set a crystal-clear goal. This goal should aim at achieving the wholesomeness of the society. Second, one has to make the most of the mass media, since we are in an information age, and people gain news from various kinds of ways. Finally, persistence makes sure that success is within one’s reach. In conclusion, by doing right things at the right time, we can also grab the public’s attention. Yet it is without doubt that audaciousness is not a good choice.
【点评】 第一句话开门见山,用sth. has grabbed(抓住) sb’s attention。接下来使用的 “have to resort to”表现了一种被迫和无奈之感,但转折词however马上话锋一转,引出了作者的观点。在表达对像搏出位这样的社会现象时,切不可武断使用bad一类的词语进行价值评判。一会显得措辞鲁莽,二会显得过于主观。所以这里推荐使用sth. be/not be a proper way to do sth. else.以显示客观中立。 第二段讲了对出位的认识。文章没有直接讲这种行为的优点或缺点,而是从追求成功的角度阐释一个人应该具备目标、达到目标的方法和坚持不懈的毅力。言下之意是间接否定了出位。比较好的表达有:明确的目标(crystal-clear goal),社会完整(the wholesomeness of the society),充分利用(make the most of),志在必得(sth. is within one’s reach.)。最后一段是重申主题和作者的立场。
预测作文(三) Marriage: Is it still a tradition? 1. 剩男剩女越来越多。 2. 传统的成家立业、结婚思想是否会发生变化? 3. 未来社会是否会有更多的人选择不结婚,单身过日子,谈谈你的看法。
【范文】 Marriage, what a holy and inspiring word for human beings is. However, with the passage of time, the concept of marriage changes dramatically, as can be seen from the increasing numbers of single men and women in contemporary society. From my perspective, this interesting phenomenon well reflects the young’s value shift in the aspect of marriage, family and so forth. First, the substantial development of our nation’s economy greatly changes the way young people treat marriage. They are more financially independent and attempt to seek individual freedom. Second, young people are becoming growingly competitive that they subconsciously raise the standards of their ideal partners, which lead to the fact that many find it hard to find their perfect matches. As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that single life is not the main trend in the long run for both men and women, because marriage can bring a lot happiness to us. Accordingly, the future of marriage will still be promising.
【点评】 首句欲抑先扬,指出婚姻是holy and inspiring(神圣并振奋人心的)。接着通过转折词however,