Elva Essay #2
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The Property Declaration and Publicity of O fficials is Imperative
Zhang Tiancheng who is the Deputy Political and Legal Secretary in Hanshou County, Hunan Province publicly discloses his assets invited by his micro blog friends. He made not o nly his but also his family members’ property in public in detail. He said it is a private concern to do it in micro blog and he is ready to test the water as the official exposing property into light.
From Bo Xilai to Chen Liangyu, the social harm of the corruption and the corruption phenomena is growingand strong actions are needed. As far as I am concerned, the property declaration can puncture the key of the corrupt. If the declaration property system is fairly sophisticated and the declared officials' property is in public, those whose consumption is badly inconsistent with his income, could be asked by therelative department to account for it. In this way, more officials may rein in usage.
The property declaration and publicity of officials is a basic system in public governance which is meant to superintend the power and to prevent corruption. So a law of the property declaration and publicity to be passed is a touchstone for officials of whether they value the interest of people, and it is also an important sign of whether a country’s political system develops to maturity. It is widely seen as surely the most binding of guard against corruption as well as commonly practiced in the most legal state.
There have been many countries in the world is performing this system. In the United States, after the implementation of the officials’ family properties declaration system, there were countless officials punished because of large sums of money from dubious origin. In Korea, it was declared to carry out the Real Name Regulation in the financial system in 1993and afterwards, a large number of dignitaries including the judge of the Supreme Court in a month. Since then, South Korea's financial situation has greatly improved and it has promoted the development of the national economy. Moreover, Hong Kong becomes a global political cleanser which is closely related to its improvement of the system of officials’ property declaration and publicity.
In addition, for officials to expose their property is a sense of duty. On the one hand, it is responsible to the government and party. As the officials’ property come to light, the government’ credibility is bound to be st rengthened, the transparency of work is certain to be improved and the good image of the government and party will be built. In addition, it is responsible to general public. People are the owner of the country. The official should fear the law and the people and they should ensure that the powers bestowed on them by the people are used for the benefit of the people.
Zhang Tiancheng as the Deputy Political and Legal Secretary dares to take himself as a sample. What he did was make a point, and find a direction and answer to the property declaration and publicity of officials. I hope it is a start and that the system could be institutionalized and legalized by the country.
E ssay #2 Rubric
55 points.
HOOK:The writer was able to capture the reader’s attention with an interesting 5/5 (pts)
story, statistic, statement etc.. The hook flows fluently into the thesis or essay map.
ORGANIZATION:The body supports the essay’s objective.
Transitions are properly used to ensure fluency throughout the essay. 9/10(pts)
IDEAS: The essay is correct, clear, imaginative, fresh, and insightful, containing 18/20 (pts) sufficient reasons, details, or facts
WORD CHOICE: The essay uses proper words to create just the 4/5 (pts)
right mood, impression, or picture the writer is trying to achieve.
CONCLUS ION: The concluding paragraph restates the thesis, avoids coming
to an abrupt halt, and leaves the reader with a sense of completion 5/5 (pts)
CONVENTIONS: The writer prevents any grammatical or spelling errors
that interferes with the reader’s comprehension of the content 3/5 (pts)
Minimum 400+ (5pts)
E ssay grade: 49/55pts
Good work Elva. This was an interesting topic that was provided good examples in proof of your proposal’s effectiveness. It was a pleasure to read.。