On excessive packaging

On Excessive Packaging要求1 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象2 出现这一现象的原因3 我对这一现象的看法和建议On Excessive PackagingWith the rapid development of our society giving present play a more and more important role in life. Presents can help indent distance between people which means faster to reach your goal！So in order to earn more economic gains，a lot of people who have a present shop package their products with unnecessary and well material to appeal people to buy their products .Beautiful gifts can better express our sincerity so, packing gifts seems indispensable. But here is the problem. First of all，packing box can bring environmental problem which can not be underestimated .Secondly，it can increase the cost of enterprise. Besides it can increase the burden on consumer.In my opinin green marketing is the key of solving packing problem. only to establish the concept ofsustainable development and use green packing can we reduce the harmful effect to our life.。

• 第三段: 谈论“我的看法”时，作者并没有单纯倾向 于哪一种观点。段首句中作者首先解释: 我的观点 介于两者之间；之后，又在发展句中对其态度作 了进一步说明。
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小结
• 一篇好的作文首先要有好的结构（写提纲, 不离题）
• 句子、段落之间合理使用连接词 • 句子主题句明显 • 说理之后可以借助举例 • 恰当地使用特殊的句式（强调句、倒装句、
• 描述现象+观点1.2（积极性、消极性）
+个人观点
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• Private Cars: Good or Evil • With the improvement of people‘s living
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the consumers suffer.
In conclusion, excessive packaging brings not only
people unnecessary waste but also psychological pressure.
It should be avoided or even eliminated.
level of the whole society is largely improved.
Therefore，excessive packaging is a common phenomenon
nowadays.
As far as I am concerned, excessive packaging is not
the reasons are as below.
Firstly, excessive packaging
causes unnecessary waste of resources which is opposite
to sustainable development promoted.
On Excessive Packaging （120--180）
1. 目前很多商品存在过度包装的现象
2. 出现这一现象的原因
3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议
to begin with, 定语从句/主语从句
in adition, 比较状语从句
last but not lest， only 引导的倒装句
From what I have presented above, a smooth conclusion
can be easily achieved that...

英语四级作文题目及参考范文：On Excessive Packaging题目：on excessive packaging提纲： 1. 目前很多商品存在过度包装现象2. 出现这一现象的原因3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议简易范文如下：首段：现象描述in contemporary society, it has become a trend for many products or items to be excessively packaged. in the meanwhile, an increasing number of customers find it more expensive to purchase these goods. taking a look around, we can find a great many examples in supermarkets: excessive packages of food, clothes and gifts. 当今社会，商品往往被过度包装。

同时，越来越多顾客发现这些商品更贵了。

看看我们周围，可以发现超市中就有很多这样的例子: 食品，服饰和礼物都存在过度包装。

二段：原因分析it is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. in the first place, some customers' psychological need is the root cause. these packages bring the sense of beauty, arouse people's enthusiasm to buy, and help manufacturers to promote sale. in the second place, it is these packages that enable shops to build up a foundation for advertising. as a matter of fact, industries in mounting numbers have come to realize the necessity of packaging for sale. 显然，该现象原因是多方面的。