读写任务
如何写好主题句
2011 NMET广东卷读写任务
【写作内容】
1.以约3()个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词讲述一次你(或你的朋友)想家的经历，内容包括：
(1)时间、地点和起因；
(2)想家给学习和生活带来的影响；
⑶ 你(或你的朋友)是如何应对的。
读以下文段，并找出本段的主题句。
I also have similar experience of feeling homesick. The school I attend is a boarding school. When I got there the first day three years ago, I was told that we would have a military drill for a week. It was my first time to live all by myself, so I was scared. The military drill was terrible and several times 1 thought I would pass out in the sun. I felt terrible, cried in bed every evening, and missed my family very much.
请根据以下扩展句写出本段的主题句。
As I felt terrible, I was low in mood. I didn't feel like eating, and as a result, I felt ilL What was worse, my classmates all thought that I was spoiled and strange and few would talk to me.
•主题句
主题旬也称为中心旬，是对文段主题的概括性陈述。
•扩展句
扩展句是对主题句的延伸或证明，需围绕主题句展开，对•主题句起到支撑的作用。主题句
I also have similar experience of feeling homesick like Tom.
•主题句的导向作用
导向(control) --------- 规定段落的发展脉络
•主题句的制约作用
制约(limit)—限制主题的覆盖范围
这些experience需与homesick相关，旦与Tom的经历相似。
找出主题句并分析其导向与制约作用。
Smoking is harmful to people' s health. Experiments show that tobacco contains some dangerous chemical substances that might lead easily to heart disease, cancer and other to diseases. Every year, there are about 4 million people who die from diseases caused by smoking. Besides, since secondhand smoke will also threaten people,s health, smoking is dangerous not only for the smokers but also for other people.
以下各段缺少主题句，请补充完整。
Before entering a house in Japan, it is a good manner to take off your shoes. In European countries even though shoes sometimes become very muddy, this is not done. A guest in a Chinese house never finishes a drink. He leaves a little to show that he has had enough. In a Malaysian house, too, a guest leaves a little food. In England, a guest always finishes a drink to show that he has enjoyed it. It seems that manners in different countries are never the same.
2).
For example teachers live by selling knowledge, philosophers by selling wisdom and priests by selling spiritual comfort. Though it may be possible to measure the value of material goods in terms of money, it is very difficult to calculate the true value of services which people perform for us. The conditions of society are such that sills have to be paid for in the same way that goods are paid fbr at shop. Everyone has something to sell.
3) .Fire can heat water, cook, give out light and keep your house warm. Sometimes, however, big fires can bum down houses and forests. For example, the big fire caused Yuanming Palace, a famous palace in Qing Dynasty, ruined completely. So we must be very careful with matches, burning cigarettes, faulty electric appliances or uiiqucnchcd(未扑灭的)fires.
写好主题句的重要性
写作
（满分20分）分值评分标准
18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主
题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能
有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）
语法错误。
篇章结构的连贯
性较好。
主题句的几种模式
写作要点是询问考生的看法时，对提问直接作出回答。
Model:假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应?
（2009广东高考读写任务要点2）
常用词组：
In my opinion / as for me / as far as I am concerned
你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？
模式2. 表明立场明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对。
Model:你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。（2009年广东高考读写任务要点3）Discuss the expressions of supporting and objecting 表示支持或赞同的句型：
I agree with the statement that
