2019年高考英语 纠错笔记系列 专题15 短文改错(含解析).doc

2019年高考英语短文改错专项练习(WORD版本真题试卷+名师解析答案，建议下载练习)Correction 1I went on a trip to Thailand during the winter holiday, it was wonderful because I tried something I have never experienced before. One morning when we were walking along the beach and enjoying sunshines, someone strongly advised us to go water skiing. Therefore, I didn’t dare to face the challenge because it seemed danger. My friends all encouraged me, so I finally joined in them. At first, I couldn’t stop scream in fright. Later I enjoyed myself and found it amazingly. From the ex-perience I learnt that we should brave enough to try something new. Only in this way can we find the better self to meet any challenge.解析①句意:寒假期间,我去泰国旅游了,因为尝试了以前从未有过的经历,所以这次旅游棒极了。

先行词为a trip,故用关系代词which引导非限制性定语并在从句中作主语。

也可加并列连词and,连接两个句子。

②根据句子的时态可知此处用过去完成时态,表示“过去的过去”。

③sunshine阳光,为不可数名词。

2019年高考英语短文改错专题--非谓语动词（含答案）1.Unfortunately his father died, left the family even worse off.2.He will have trouble learn English well in a year.3.While crossing the street,she was killed by an ambulance speeded by.4.It’s up to you decide whether to e at out or at home.5.On our way home,we couldn't help to talking about what we had experienced.6.If accepting for the job, you’ll be informed soon.7.The host parents took good care of us,which made us feeling at home.8.Having warned of the danger in the street at night, she went home with a friendaccompanying her.9.It took me a little while figure out these differences,but it was fun.10.We must take some measures to preserve the endangered animals from killed.11.I’m looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.12.In fact, Americans make go to the baseball game a favorite summer outing nowadays.13.I did all that I could express myself clearly but my speech was a total failure.14.You should have the courage to admit have broken the window.15.Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood,the house is big enough to enable you to have a room of your own.16.The father as well as his three children goes skating on the freezing river every Sunday afternoon in winter.17.He had to look for a place along the street to get his bicycle repairing.18.Thrown their hats into the air,the fans of the winning team let out loud shouts of victory.paring to the escaped driver,I am proud of what I did.20.The woman was observed follow him closely.参考答案1.答案：Unfortunately his father died,left leaving the family even worse off. 解析：2.答案：He will have troublelearn learning English well in a year. 解析：3.答案：While crossing the street,she was killed by an ambulancespeeded speedingby. 解析：句意:过马路的时候,她被一辆飞驰而过的救护车撞死了. ambulance 与speed by (飞驰而过)之间为逻辑t 的主动关系.要用现在分词作后置定语. 4.答案：It’s up to you to ∧decide whether to eat out or at home.解析：5.答案：On our way home,we couldn't help to talking about what we hadexperienced.解析：句意:在回家的路上, 我们禁不住谈论起我们经历过的事情.[can't help doing sth.为固定句型,意为:情不自禁地做某事。

2019年高考英语短文改错专题--形容词和副词（含答案）1.The truth proves that skiing down the snow mountain is much exciting than skating in the park.2.Besides, lying in the front of my school,the wonderful playground makes the campus surprising beautiful.3One afternoon ,our p lane landed at the world’s third big airport.4.As a result, I failed two of my most favorite subjects, math and physics, which surprised everyone.5.You may find it astonished that Charlie was taught to sing as soon as hecould speak.6.It is real a good chance to have met all of you here.7.Nobody loved money best than he did.8.Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years.9.It was the first time that I had played on stage in front of such many people.10.What’s more,the teaching co nditions here are many better than those in Sichuan.11.Prices may vary so it’s very worth shopping around before you buy.12.And we will study even more harder and try our best to do all.13.The weather couldn’t be bad,so we will not go out.14.Near 65% of the Palace Museum will then be open to visitors to mark the90th anniversary of the museum.15.Jack, a 13-year-old schoolboy, often says no to his parents’ opinions and doesn’t listen to them willing.16.Beside,my mother and I keep a relationship like close friends.17.—What do you think of the concert?—I have never seen a more better onepared with letters and public phones,mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient.19.Despite the power failure,the hospital continued to function normal.20.I can good remember the incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.参考答案1.答案：The truth proves that skiing down the snow mountain is much more/much more exciting than skating in the park.解析：2.答案：Besides, lying in the front of my school,the wonderful playground makes the campus sin surprising surpri glybeautiful. 解析：句意:而且,位于我的学校前面这个奇妙的操场使校园出乎意料地美丽。

高考英语改错常见考点大剖析及经典习题㈠高考短文改错命题焦点：短文改错是全国统一高考中一种综合性很强的试题。

短文改错的文章多采用记叙文，有时也用说明文。

在100词左右的短文中设有十个小题，该题的设计形式有四种：1．该行错一个词，找出来并改正。

2．该行多一个词，找出来并去掉。

3．该行缺一个词，补上一词。

4．该行没错，不改动。

从近几年的高考题来看，这四种形式的考查情况大致为：多一词1～2处；缺一词1～2处；正确1处；错一词5～6处。

这种题说到底是考查用词、词的搭配、词法、句法及语篇中的行文逻辑等各方面的水平。

换句话说，这是一种比较全面的考查。

我们在平时的学习中就要注意做到词不离句，句不离篇，要特别注意词的用法、搭配和语法分析能力的培养。

平时打好这种基础，就为正确地解题准备了条件。

㈡短文改错解题技巧：⒈快速阅读掌握大意。

短文改错时应先从头到尾快速读一遍，了解其大意，这样有助于了解其中的逻辑关系，对时态、人称等都心中有数。

十行中一般有九行有错误，一行无错，如发现并纠正错误，首要的任务是对全段文字有个整体的理解，阅读中注意句子的时态、语态、语气、非谓语动词或动词短语，注意句子中的名词、数词，以及其他词性的语法要求，注意句子之间的逻辑关系，注意段落的主旨内容，注意整篇短文的中心内容，这样才更加有效地完成改错。

⒉在改错过程中，要结合上下文语境来观察，不要只盯住一行。

按照上述的原则，对语法、句法、逻辑词义、搭配等诸方面进行综合考查分析并改正错误，应看上下文中有无逻辑关系上的错误，有无语法修饰上的错误，有无惯用法方面的错误。

如果没有发现明显错误，则分别检查时态、人称，单复数，主谓一致等各项。

⒊检查句与句之间的逻辑关系是否恰当。

如有不妥之处，看看是否关联词有问题。

⒋整篇做完后，认真检查一遍，注意其中逻辑关系是否合理，时态人称等是否一致。

㈢短文改错常见考点：⒈多一词：抽象名词前多一冠词：如：Modern people know more about the health.〔去掉the 〕专有名词前多一冠词：如:the England(去掉the ), the Hebei Province〔去掉the 〕, the Beijing Airport〔去掉the 〕固定词组中名词前多一冠词：如：go to the school〔去掉the 〕, go to the prison〔去掉the 〕,at the work〔去掉the 〕, in the bed 〔去掉the 〕, go to the hospital〔去掉the 〕, set a fire to sth 〔去掉a〕., at the first〔去掉the 〕, the most of them〔去掉the 〕,at the noon〔去掉the 〕, make a rapid progress〔去掉a 〕，a plenty of〔去掉a 〕表示交通工具的和by连用的名词前多一冠词：如：by the air〔去掉the 〕, by the bus〔去掉the 〕, by the ship〔去掉the 〕表示体育活动的名词前；如：play the football〔去掉the 〕, play the basketball〔去掉the 〕表示节日〔常含有Day〕的名词前多一冠词：如：the National Day〔去掉the 〕, the May Day〔去掉the 〕表示“非常”意思的“most”前多一冠词：如：He is the most hardworking. 〔去掉the 〕某种让步状语从句中名词前面多一冠词：如：A child as he is, he knows a lot. 〔去掉a 〕在表示时间的“one/ this/ every + 名词”的时间状语前多一介词：如：on one day〔去掉on 〕, on that evening〔去掉on 〕, in every week〔去掉in〕某些及物动词因混淆词义而多一介词或副词；如：①raise up one’s hand〔去掉up 〕②pick〔摘〕up apples〔去掉up 〕③return back(回来) 〔去掉back〕④repeat again〔去掉again〕⑤play with them in the match〔去掉with 〕⑥marry with the man〔去掉with 〕⑦serve for the people〔去掉for 〕⑧enter into the room〔去掉into〕⑨I learn English every day to improve it better〔去掉better 〕.表示地点的副词前多一介词：如：①go to there〔去掉to 〕②drive to home〔去掉to〕③return to home〔去掉to 〕某些动词、连词、介词或副词后面多了一个介词：如：①because of his left leg was broken〔去掉of〕②instead of he developed his love for the theatre〔去掉of 〕③I looked at but could see nothing. 〔去掉at〕④join in the army〔去掉in 〕状语从句和主句间多一并列连词：如：①Although he is very busy, but he often helps us with housework. 〔去掉but 〕②As the weather was good, so I decided to go there yesterday.〔去掉so〕充当状语的分词和主句之间多了并列连词：如：①Her husband died, and leaving her three children. 〔去掉and 〕②He sat under the tree and reading a magazine. 〔去掉and 〕作定语的分词前多一代词：如：①The child who reading a book is her brother.〔去掉who〕②How I regretted the hours which wasted in the woods. 〔去掉which 〕定语从句中多一代词：如：①The film that I saw it yesterday is good. 〔去掉it 〕②This is the very book that I am looking for it. 〔去掉it 〕③He is the man we talked about him. 〔去掉him 〕在“连词+ 分词”结构中多一代词：如：①While I waiting for a bus, I found a wallet lying on the ground.〔去掉waiting前的I 〕②If it heated, ice turns to water. 〔去掉it〕在某些固定结构中多了“to”，如：①I would rather stay at home than to go to the cinema with you.〔去掉第一个to〕②Why not to take a holiday for a good rest? 〔去掉to 〕③She said she would rather not to discuss it right now. 〔去掉to 〕④You had better not to go there. 〔去掉to 〕⑤I made them to do the cleaning. 〔去掉to 〕⑥I had him to clean the room. 〔去掉to 〕⑦We noticed him to walk out of the garden. 〔去掉to 〕⑧I often hear her to sing the song. 〔去掉to 〕⒉缺一词：表一类事物的单数可数名词前缺冠词：如：A/The ∧horse is a useful animal.单数可数名词前缺少表示“一”的不定冠词，如：①There is a∧library in every town in Britain.②Good health is a∧person’s most valuable possession.特指名词前缺定冠词the ,如：①Have you read the∧books by Mark Twain?②The book on the∧desk is mine.作状语的动词不定式缺“to”，如：①David and I want to go off to∧find help…②…and other organizations are working to∧improve health all over the world.形容词最高级前缺定冠词the ,如：one of the∧earliest kinds of moneysuch或so与单数名词连用时不可缺少冠词，如：①This is such a∧good book that I like it.②He is so good a∧student that all the teachers like him.姓氏复数形式〔表示一家人或夫妇二人〕前面缺一冠词，如：The∧Turners are watching TV.表示世纪的某个年代前面缺一冠词，如：In the∧1870s, when Marx was already in his fifties, he found it important to study the situation in Russia.表示“一个名叫…的人”前缺一冠词，如：A∧Miss Lee is waiting for you outside.“形容词比较级+ of the two”前缺一冠词，如：He is the∧taller of the two.某些固定短语中缺一冠词，如：in the∧end, go to the∧cinema, in the∧daytime, on the∧right抽象名词具体化时前面缺一冠词，如：①The meeting held yesterday was a∧success.②It is a∧famous Chinese tea.③The experiment turned out to be a∧failure.作定语的不定式后缺少必要的介词，如：①He is looking for a room to live in∧.②There is nothing to worry about∧.③I need a pen to write with∧.一些固定短语或习惯搭配中缺介词，如：①He didn’t reply to∧my letter.②Are you sure about∧it?③Thousands and thousands of∧people like watching TV.④Dr Wang started to operate on∧them at once.⑤He grasped my hands and asked for∧my name and address.⑥Just then a man came to me and asked what I was looking for∧.并列句缺并列连词，如：①He was tired and∧it was getting dark.②He asked me to go, so∧I went.③He is old, but∧he is still strong.名词性从句中缺少必要的连接词，如：①That∧he will come is certain.②It is uncertain whether∧he can come or not.③We all know the truth that∧the earth goes round the sun.④They expressed the hope that∧they would come over to visit China again.定语从句中缺少必要的关系代词，如：①The police have found the knife with which∧the man killed his wife.②The changes that/ which∧have taken place are great.③Is this the boy who∧did the good deed?缺少为防止重复而使用的替代词“that或those”，如：①The population is much larger than that∧of Canada.②The weather of Beijing is as good as that∧of Shijiazhuang.③The bikes made in Shanghai are better than those∧made in Beijing.“make, let, have, see, hear, notice, observe, watch”等动词变成被动语态时缺少“to”，如：①They were made to∧work fourteen hours a day by the landlord.②He was noticed to∧cross the street.为防止重复而使用的不定式省略形式缺少了to,如：①If you don’t want to do it, you don’t need to∧.②I wanted to go out, but my mother told me not to∧.③Don’t leave the room unless I tell you to∧.⒊错一词：名词的单复数错误，如：①Different people speak different language.(language →languages)②We have been to Europe many time.( time→times)③His word were a great encouragement to me. (word→words)④There are branch library in many villages. (library→libraries)动词时态、语态的错误，如：①Last Saturday police cars hurry to the tallest building in New York.( hurry →hurried)②Today it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past.( is →was)③Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. (cost→costs)形容词、副词混用错误〔修饰行为动词、形容词、过去分词、整个句子应用副词，修饰系动词、名词应用形容词〕及其他词性错误，如：①I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderfully →wonderful)②A player’s native langua ge is not importance. (importance→important)③Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience. ( important→importan ce)④Unfortunate, there are too many people…(Unfortunate→Unfortunately)人称代词、物主代词、反身代词的错误，如：①The game speaks for themselves. ( themselves →itself)②The Blacks did his best to make me feel at home. ( his→their)非谓语动词使用错误，如：①I was oft en a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort. ( watch →watching 动名词短语作主语)②I am looking forward to seeing you and enjoy the talk.(enjoy→enjoying, 与seeing 是平行结构)③He always went there to have his hair cut and wash.(wash→washed,与cut是平行结构，采用的是have sth done结构)同义词、近义词、形似词错误，如：across与through, among 与between, except与besides, like与as, ago 与before, accept 与receive, living 与alive, let与allow, lonely与alone, too 与either, cost 、spend 、pay与take, hard 与hardly, worth与worthy, raise与rise, likely与possible, near 与nearly, lend 与borrow, job 与work, deep 与deeply, answer 与reply, high与highly, sit 与seat, wide 与widely, try与manage,neither 与either, so 与such, every day 与everyday, all与both, every 与each, find 与found〔建立〕, lie〔躺〕、lie〔撒谎〕与lay〔放置、生产〕, hang〔挂〕与hang〔绞死〕sound与voice, place 与room, forget与leave, hope 与wish, call on与call at如：①I raised my sound so that I could be heard.(sound→voice, voice表示人的嗓音)②There isn’t any place for me in the bus.(place→room, room为不可数名词表示“空间”)③I forgot my umbrella in the classroom.(forgot→left, leave表示“剩留，把某物忘在某地”)④I hope you to come earlier next time.(hope→wish, hope后面不能跟“宾语+动词不定式”的复合结构)⑤He made such much progress that he was praised by the teacher.(such→so, 当many/ much/few/little 表示“多或少”的含义时，前面常用so)⑥I received an invitation but I didn’t receive it.(receive→accept, accept 表示“主观接受”)⑦You should rise your hand before asking the question.(rise→raise, rise是不及物动词，raise是及物动词)关系词用错，如：①I also enjoyed the evenings when we spent together.(when→that,先行词在定语从句中作宾语)②I’ll never forget the day that I went abroad myself.(that→when, 先行词在定语从句中作时间状语)③The tool with that he is working is called a saw.(that→which, 介词后面的关系代词不能用that )④If he will come to the ball has nothing to do with me.(If→Whether, if 不能引导主语从句)⑤The fact which water is composed of hydrogen and oxygen is undeniable.(which→that, that 引导同位语从句只起连接作用，不做句子成分)连词使用错误，如：if与unless, because与for, when与while①We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.( and→but)②If packages of food could be dropped from planes, the people might get hungry.(If→Unless)③He was walking by the sea while he heard a voice for help.(while→when, 此时，when不译作“当…的时候”，而表示“正在…时，这时另一件事发生了”。

2019年高考英语：短文改错专题训练及答案高考英语短文改错专题训练下列文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

一One late spring day, I saw the wild turkey and several of her chicks along the road near my home. I slow to look at the lovely babies as they gathered around their mother’s legs, but they rapid moved into the long grass. It may be a lot easy to see sights like this in the country, but even city people can find plenty nature to watch. I have a friend who keep a list of all the different birds she sees in her urban neighborhood. I once was stopped to watch ants hard at work near an anthill on the sidewalk. It was fascinated! In my opinion, share the world with other living creature is one of the things that make life interesting. Do you agree?二My favorite book is Black Beauty. It’s a story that take place in nineteenth-century England. I t’s a kind of autobiography writing from the horse’s points of view. The book describes its experiences with a variety owners. As a young horse Black Beauty lives a carefree life in a place when everyone is kind to him. Unfortunate, when the owner has to go abroad, he sells him to a family who are not so kind. He goes on to have a lot of pleasantexperiences, which is a saddest part of the story. However, the story did all end happily. Although people think of it as a children’s book, but this is a novel wh ich forces us to think about the way we treat animals.三I have a gold-coloured dog named Bobby who loves to be on photos. One day last summer, while live in a seaside house, I was trying to photograph sun setting on the sea over the edge of a wall of my place. Upon it seeing me hold my camera, my Bobby, which was two years old, climbed up the rocky rock and over towards me. She gets as close to the edge as quickly as she possible could. She stood tall, glancing back with her intelligence but innocent eyes in the direction of her camera. Then she smiled to show her tooth and wouldn’t move unt il I took her photo!四My mother is always ready for rain days. On the night before my sister’s ten birthday, she realized we didn’t have the ‘1’ and ‘0’ candles need t o top the cake. My 78-year-old grandfather was visiting, so we jumped in the car and head to the supermarket. Since it was not very much far, we arrived at our destination after we realized. While sorting through the numbered candles, my mother deciding to grab an extra ‘1’ to be ready for next year. At checkout, the teenage cashier glance d at the candle, and then looked at my grandfather. “Is she 101 years old?” she asked confusedly.五This summer, my grandmother accompanies my family to Lijiang, Yunnan Province for a vacation. On the second day of our holiday, she complained of feel unwell, suspecting a bad case of indigestion. Luckily, my mother, the doctor, recognized thesymptoms of a heart attack, and an ambulance called. Without my mother’s assistant, my grandmother would likely have died that day. The experience touched me a lot of. I used to think that it would be tired to be a medical worker like my mother and I would rather do something in the future than become a doctor. So when I saw with my own eye how my mother saved my grandma’s life, I made up my mind to be a doctor.六Last summer, my father and I hiked Wutai Mountain, that is located in the northeast of our province. Actually, hike would be an understatement. The mountain is more than 3,000 meter tall, and it took all we had make it. Sure, the journey was a lot of fun, with green shades, cool breezes, and singing birds, but that’s not that made it so much memorable. Climbing with my dad was the experience of the lifetime. It was an opportunity to deep our bond, learn how to better communicate and really worked together a s a team. It was true an experience I’ll never forget.七When I was a kid, I enjoyed make sun catchers. Sometimes I’d used a kit with colorful plastic piece, but it was even m ore fun to make them with melted crayons or colored tissue paper. They all looked cheery when they lit by the sun. Last year, I saw some of the most prettiest “sun catchers” ever made. I visited the Reims Cathedral in France, which contain stained-glass windows created by artist Marc Chagall. The blue glass, in particular, took my bre ath out. Seeing some of Chagall’s work made me interested again at creating sun catchers. I know the ones I make will never come close to be as lovely as the windows made by t he famous artist. And it’s fun to try.八I get the same present from my grandmother every Christmas —a box of handkerchief. I have no intention of opening it, so it always go straight into the charity shop. Last Christmas, my grandmother was staying with us over the holiday, but I had to open present in front of her. I tried to look cheerful, because she was watching me. I open the box unwillingly. To my surprise, I saw a ￥100 note placing in there. I can’t help think about all the cash I’ve given it away to charity over the years. I really don’t like to think about how rudely I must have appeared by not thanking her sincerely about the gift!九Last summer vacation, my friend and I visited Potatso National Park, located about 22 km east of Shangri-La. After walk for several hours, their legs failed themselves and they chose to take a ship. However, I insisted walking. As I headed forward, something white on a tree that caught my eye. I approached the tree and take a closer look at it. Just then, a small group of locals walked up but told me it was a precious eatable mushroom! I collected it careful and bagged it. After we finally returned to a hotel, I asked the owner to cook the mushroom for us. It couldn’t have tasted good. It was such a great reward.十I’d love to be a writer someday. I do a lot of writing, but no one ever read it. I felt a bit of disappointed and wondered what wide the gap between dream and reality was. Then my big break came when I was 13. I went to our city’s local newspapers and asked if I could get my writing publish. To my surprise, they said yes. And, just like that, I got my first writing out into the public. So I hope those who share the same dream with mine can stick with it. Even if it doesn’t become full-time job for you, writingis a significantly skill. Being good at string sentences together will serve you well no matter where life take you.十一Once a month, I, together with ten students from three another high schools, visit a training center for kids with special need. We also bring some snacks for the kids. When we arrive at there, we play games with them. Seeing the happy smiles on their faces make all our efforts worthwhile. The kids enjoy our stay or company. Every time we have to say goodbye, all of us are unwilling part from each other. Perhaps in some people’s eyes, what we do seems of little important. They may think we high school students should devote all of our time for study. And I know it does make the difference, not only to the little kids, but to ourselves.十二With summer approach, Mother set about arranging those heavy winter shoe. In one shoe box, she found two pairs of yellowish sneakers, which was white originally. She felt it a pity throw them away, or had no way to whiten them. Suddenly a good idea struck at me. I took out my oil paints and drew some brightly-colored plants and flowers on them. When I finish my work, the sneakers turned from a ugly duck to a swan. The experience forced me to think what we can do for the environment. With a little imagine, we can turn trash into treasure and thus helping our mother planet.十三Recently, while surfing the Internet, I find an English website: /doc/3f8f7db6a22d7375a417866fb84ae45 c3a35c27e.html . The website combines vocabulary learning to donation. You are expecting to choose the word with the samemeaning like the given word. If you get it rightly, you get a harder question. If you get it wrong, you get an easier question. For each of correct answer, the website donates 10 grain of rice through the World Food Programme to help end hunger. I like the idea. On the one hand, play the vocabulary game helps enlarge my vocabulary, which in turn allow me to better organize my ideas. On other hand, I can make a contribution to the world food problem.十四A snowstorm hit our city last night. The thick snow forced a lot of people to abandon their cars and chose public transportation this morning. Since buses were unavailable near my home, so my father had to drive me school. On our way, there was a slope, that became slippery due to the snow. Our car failed to climb up it and thus caused a traffic jam. Just at this moment, the traffic policeman arrived. Getting off his motorcycle, he began to push the car. See this, other drivers got out of their cars and joined them. With the efforts of these warm-heart people, our car finally made it. I was deeply moved by their kind. It was frozen cold outside but my heart was filled with warmth.十五Last month, my sister and I signed it up for a second-hand sale in our neighborhood. In that day, we placed some old magazines or stuffed toys on our stand. Then a father and daughter came up, that were clearly troubled. The father told us his daughter is suffering from a serious illness. A little girl asked my sister the price of a stuffed bear. My sister looked right her and said, “Give me the bigger smile you’ve got.” The little girl smiled b road. My sister then handed her the bear and said, “That smile is worth a million dollar.” I’ve never been so proud.。

短文改错11、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last month our class organized a hiking along the Chaobai River,which run through Hebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my disappoint, I found the river was serious polluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, under my teacher’s help, I used the equipments from the school lab to test the quality of the river water. But then,I used the data I had collected it to analyze the pollution of the water. Finally,I write a report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we must make small changes to protect our water resources.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．Nowadays fewer students take exercise due to various reason and some students fall ill every now and then because of they are not healthy or strong enough．However，we should take exercise regularly to improve our health．First of all，taking PE classes seriously．In PE classes we can build up our bodies with thecareful guidance of PE teachers．Secondly，it is of great important to make it a routine to exercise after class or during breaks．In addition，it was also a good idea to join a sports club that you are interested．As the old saying go，"The first wealth is health．" Let's do more exercise to live a better and healthy life．3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。