大学英语四级写作讲义
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大学英语四级写作讲义Cherry一、四级考试写作评分标准1.四级满分为710分，本题满分为106分(占15%)，字数120~180字，时间30分钟。
写作要求是思想表达准确、意义连贯、无严重语法错误。
2.阅卷标准共分四等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。
最终得分=分数×10×0.15＝分数（106.5～43.5分）2分（1-3分）：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或绝大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分（4-6分）：基本切题。
思想表达不清楚，连贯性差。
有较多的严重语法错误。
8分（7-9分）：基本切题。
思想表达清楚，文章尚连贯，但语法错误较多，其中有一些是严重错误。
11分（10-12分）：切题。
思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语法错误。
14分（13-15分）：切题。
思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语法错误。
仅有个别小错误。
阅卷人根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如11分）相似，即定为该分数（即11分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可以加一分（即12分）或减一分（即10分）。
但不得加或减半分。
3.字数不够扣分。
（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入）段落不够扣分。
三段式（只写一段者：0 ~ 4分；只写两段者：0 ~ 9分。
）二、四级作文命题规律图1图2考试的命题作文大都是议论文结构，一般来说题目内容应该是考生所熟悉的，能够有话可说的，如那些社会热点问题就是经常出的题目。
总的来说，根据学生要求掌握的词汇，根据学生的知识结构，年龄特点和文化背景，出题的范围可大致如下：⏹ 科学技术：计算机，克隆，电视，小汽车等对社会和生活的影响⏹ 社会问题：如住房，交通，就业，犯罪，婚姻，环境，能源和广告等⏹校园生活：如学习方式，考试，课余活动，体育锻炼，人际交往和兴趣爱好等⏹青少年问题：如父子代沟，抽烟吸毒，个人思想，职业选择，文化教育和成功失败等⏹文化教育：阅读，道德修养，出国留学，学生减负，教育与成长等三、作文模板——九句话模板3-4-3 共120wordsClass work <Stop Smoking>（1）吸烟的问题越来越受到人们的关注（2）吸烟的害处（3）你的想法四、范文赏析范文一、Just as is revealed in the picture above, the young, nowadays, just like the boy in the drawing, are prone to reach for what is beyond their grasp, but ignore the significance of doing something trivial and simple before accomplishing great feats.There is no d oubt that the symbolic meaning subtly conveyed in the picture should be given deep consideration. As we all know, a man who does not sweep a room, doesn't mention to sweep the world. In other words, the foundations of a building must be strong, or else the whole structure will fall down someday. Therefore, when it comes to the key to success, the most important thing lies in d oing every tiny thing well around you.As the saying goes, “the highest eminence is to be gained step by step.” To achieve the goal, not merely do we need ambition; we also need to realize the importance of dealing with trivi ality from the beginning. Only in this way can we get on the way to success down to earth.Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay Frustration Education．You should write at least l 20 words following the outline given below．1．学校应当加强挫折教育；2．开展挫折教育意义深远；3．你认为应该如何开展挫折教育。
Frustration EducationStudents born after 80s or 90s usually grow up in a comfortable environment without failure or defeat．But frustration is inevitable during our life，and frustration education should be carried out among colleges and universities．The influence of frustration education is deep and profound．On the one hand，it plays an important role in ensuring students’ mental and physical health．A case in point is that there are an increasing number of college students committing suicide each year when confronted with some kind of frustration．On the other hand，coping with frustration in a rational way is crucial to success．The road to Rome is certainly uneasy．Even though we have a clear idea of the importance of frustration education, we will face the problem on how to strengthen the education of frustration．As for parents，they are advised not to protect their children too much．As for university authorities．they should provide students with more opportunities of working in a hard environment．As for students．they should learn how to face difficulty independently．To conclude，college students should be guided in the right path when facing setbacks in life．Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay The Importance of Interpersonal Communication．You should write at least l20 words following the outline given below．1．人人需要与他人交流；2．人际交流的重要性；3．结论。
The Importance of Interpersonal CommunicationThe 21st century is an age of information and knowledge．In such an age，interpersonal communication plays an increasingly important role both in the society and in a company．Why is interpersonal communication so important? There are some reasons contributing to this new trend．First，it helps people to understand each other better and clean up misunderstanding．For example，in a family，communication makes the family members get closer owing to the mutual understanding. Second, it helps people get more information and knowledge．Students can learn more effectively if they can communicate more with his teachers and classmates．As for leaders or professionals need more information which largely depends on their communicative channels．Third, without the interpersonal communication, our life would become a desert lack of emotion and friendship．Last but not the least，communication between people makes our life lively，interesting and lovely．In a word，humans，as social animals，have to communicate with each other，the importance of which can never be overemphasized．五、写作提示1.切题所谓切题是指在形式上诸如段落、字数、文体、格式等方面满足题目要求，并在内容上没有偏差。
