第四节短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该增加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
AWhat Do You Feel Like Watching Today?While some people only stick to one kind of movie，I like to watch different kinds depend on how I feel that day.When I'm down or tired，I prefer movies that can cheer me edies like Men in Black or cartoons like Kung Fu Panda have fun dialogs and usually have a happy ending.The characters may not be perfect，but they will try their best solve their problems.After watching them，the problems suddenly seem less seri ous and I feel much better ugh for two hours are a good way to relax!I don't watch dramas or documentaries when I'm sad or tired.Dramas like Titanic make me feel even sad.Documentaries like March of the Penguins which provide plenty of informations about a certain subject can be interesting，but when I'm tired I don't want to think too much.I don't mind action movies like SpiderMan when I'm too tired think.I can just shut off my brain，sit back and enjoy watching an exciting superhero who always save the world just in time.Once in a while，I like to watch movies that are scary.They can be fun，but I'm too scared to watch them alone.I always bring a friend who isn't afraid of these kinds of movies.BSad but BeautifulLast night one of my Chinese friends took me to a concert of Chinese folk music.The piece which was played the erhu especially moved me.The music was strange beautiful，but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain.The pieces had a simple name，“Moon Reflected on Second Spring”，but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I've ever heard.The erhu sounded so sad that I almost cried along with it as I ter I looked up the history of Moon Reflec ted on Second Spring，and I began to understand the sa dness in the music.The music was write by Abing，a folk musician who was born in the city of Wux i in 1893.his mother died when he was very young.Abing's father taught him to play many musical instruments，such as the drums，dizi and erhu，and at age 17，Abing was known as his musical ability.However，after his father died，Abing's li fe grow worse.He was very poor.Not only that，he developed a serious illness and became blind.For several years，he had no home.He lived on the streets and played music make money.Even after Abing got married and had a home again，h e continued to sing and play in the streets.He performed in this way for many years.参考答案百度文库是百度发布的供网友在线分享文档的平台。
Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.Section A (Grammar Focus-4c)【教学目标】1. 知识目标：1) 学习掌握下列词汇：intelligent2）进行一步复习巩固学习Section A 部分所学的生词和词组。
3）掌握如何表达自己喜好的句型。
4）掌握that/which/who引导的定语从句的用法。
2. 能力目标：运用掌握的由that/which/who等引导词引导的定语从句来表达自己喜好。
3.情感目标：1）学生学会表达自己的喜好。
2）能对自己看过的书籍，电影，听过的CD等进行简单的描述。
3）通过表达个人的喜好，提高自己的欣赏美的水平。
【教学重难点】1. 教学重点：1) 复习巩固Section A 部分所学的生词和词组，达到熟练运用的目标。
2) 总结表达个人喜好的不同句型。
3）总结that/which/who引导的定语从句的用法。
2. 教学难点：that/which/who引导的定语从句的用法。
【教学过程】I. Revision and Leading in1. Have a dictation of the new words and some main phrases learned in the last class. stick to; depend on ; be down ; cheer sb. Up; have a happy ending; try one’s best; solve problems; seem less serious;feel much better; provide information ; plenty of; think too much; too tired to do sth. ;shut off one’s brain; sit backin time; once in a while2. Enjoy a song That’s Why You Go Away.3. Revision1) What kind of music do you like?I like music that I can sing along with.Rosa likes music that’s quiet and slow.I love singers who write their own music.We prefer music that has great lyrics.2) What kind of movies do you like?I only like movies that are funny.I prefer movies that give me something to think about.I prefer movies that can cheer me up.Documentaries like March of the Penguins which provide plenty of information about a certain subject can beinteresting.I like to watch movies that are scary.II．Warming up老师找几幅熟悉的歌星、电影明星的图片，让学生用that/who引导的定语从句猜测他们的信息(guessing game)。
第四节短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该增加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
AWhat Do You Feel Like Watching Today?While some people only stick to one kind of movie，I like to watch different kinds depend on how I feel that day.When I'm down or tired，I prefer movies that can cheer me edies like Men in Black or cartoons like Kung Fu Panda have fun dialogs and usually have a happy ending.The characters may not be perfect，but they will try their best solve their problems.After watching them，the problems suddenly seem less seri ous and I feel much better ugh for two hours are a good way to relax!I don't watch dramas or documentaries when I'm sad or tired.Dramas like Titanic make me feel even sad.Documentaries like March of the Penguins which provide plenty of informations about a certain subject can be interesting，but when I'm tired I don't want to think too much.I don't mind action movies like SpiderMan when I'm too tired think.I can just shut off my brain，sit back and enjoy watching an exciting superhero who always save the world just in time.Once in a while，I like to watch movies that are scary.They can be fun，but I'm too scared to watch them alone.I always bring a friend who isn't afraid of these kinds of movies.BSad but BeautifulLast night one of my Chinese friends took me to a concert of Chinese folk music.The piece which was played the erhu especially moved me.The music was strange beautiful，but under the beauty I sensed a strong sadness and pain.The pieces had a simple name，“Moon Reflected on Second Spring”，but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I've ever heard.The erhu sounded so sad that I almost cried along with it as I ter I looked up the history of Moon Reflec ted on Second Spring，and I began to understand the sa dness in the music.The music was write by Abing，a folk musician who was born in the city of Wux i in 1893.his mother died when he was very young.Abing's father taught him to play many musical instruments，such as the drums，dizi and erhu，and at age 17，Abing was known as his musical ability.However，after his father died，Abing's li fe grow worse.He was very poor.Not only that，he developed a serious illness and became blind.For several years，he had no home.He lived on the streets and played music make money.Even after Abing got married and had a home again，h e continued to sing and play in the streets.He performed in this way for many years.参考答案。
人教版九全册Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.写作主题：音乐和电影一、话题分析本单元话题是“音乐和电影”，围绕这一话题谈论和表达喜好。
而最能全面体现本单元话题及语言运用能力的话题作文就是根据提示或表格信息，谈论自己的喜好或介绍他人的喜好。
这也是单元测试和中考试题中常考的话题作文之一。
二、写作方法“总分总法”写喜欢的歌曲等作文：1．总-点明所喜欢的歌曲等;2. 分-介绍歌曲等对自己的帮助或影响、喜欢它的理由等;3. 总-总结评价，表达期待。
三、素材积累写喜欢的歌曲等作文常用词汇：which, that, music, song, movie, book, cheer up,make my life more enjoyable and convenient, different kinds of,amazed, with the help of,not only...but also...写喜欢的歌曲等作文常用句型：It's possible for us to ...My favorite kind of music/movie/... is...I like...because...It was...by...When I listen to/watch/...it,I feel...I think you should listen to/watch/...it too because...四、实例讲解【写作任务】(Section B 3a＆3b)最近某中学生英文报的Movies专栏正在征稿，主题为“你最喜欢的一部电影”，请你写一篇短文给该专栏投稿。
【思路点拨】1. 定基调体裁：说明文时态：一般现在时人称：以第三人称为主2. 谋布局、写句子3. 巧衔接(1) 在本文中，第一次提到“我最喜欢的电影”时用名词短语my favorite movie，再次提到时用it 代替。
