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如何应对高考英语短文改错定语从句在高考英语短文改错部分，定语从句是一个常见的错误类型。
掌握定语从句的用法和识别技巧对于提高英语水平和应对高考英语短文改错至关重要。
本文将从定语从句的定义、类型、用法和练习技巧等方面进行详细讲解，帮助你更好地应对高考英语短文改错中的定语从句问题。
定语从句的定义和作用定语从句是一种dependent clause，用来修饰名词或代词，起到形容词的作用。
定语从句通常紧跟在它所修饰的名词或代词之后。
例如：•The book you gave me is very interesting.（你给我的那本书很有趣。
）在这个例子中，“you gave me”是定语从句，它修饰名词“the book”。
定语从句的类型定语从句分为限制性定语从句和非限制性定语从句两种类型。
1.限制性定语从句（Restrictive Relative Clauses）：限制性定语从句对先行词起到限定作用，即如果去掉定语从句，句子的意思会发生改变。
限制性定语从句前不用逗号与主句分开。
例如：•The man who is speaking to you is my teacher.（正在和你说话的那个人是我的老师。
）2.非限制性定语从句（Non-restrictive Relative Clauses）：非限制性定语从句对先行词起到补充说明作用，即如果去掉定语从句，句子的主要意思不会改变。
非限制性定语从句前要用逗号与主句分开。
例如：•My brother, who lives in New York, is a doctor.（我的哥哥住在纽约，他是一名医生。
）定语从句的用法定语从句的用法主要包括关系词的选择、先行词的确定和从句的简化等几个方面。
1.关系词的选择：定语从句的关系词有 who、whom、whose、which、that 等。
关系词的选择取决于先行词和从句的语法功能。
例如：•The book (that/which) you gave me is very interesting.（你给我的那本书很有趣。
高考英语作文增分靓句1.句式：I am Li Hua，...同位语，定语从句。
I am Li Hua, one of your students, writing in the hope that you can give us some advice on our short play.我是你的学生李华，希望你能给我们一些关于英语短剧的建议。
2.句式：现在分词作状语[2022·浙江省五校5月联考]Looking back on the past year, we'll never forget the help you offered us.回顾过去的一年，我们永远不会忘记您给我们的帮助。
3.句式：aiming to...为了……[2022·浙江省5月适应性联考]Aiming to get the students familiar with features of Chinese calligraphy, Ms Chen will start the lecture by introducing four famous Chinese calligraphy works by Wang Xizhi in detail.讲座一开始，陈老师将详细介绍王羲之的四幅中国书法名作，让同学们熟悉中国书法的特点。
4.句式：the purpose of which ＋be to do (非限制性定语从句)……为了……[2022·河北衡水中学押题卷]Every weekend, the club will carry out activities, the purpose of which is to study excellent Chinese traditional culture.每个周末，俱乐部都会开展活动，活动的主题是学习优秀的中国传统文化。
5.句式：representing/ on behalf of...代表……[2022·新高考全国卷Ⅰ]On behalf of/ Representing the whole class , I want to send our sincere gratitude for your kind help with our English learning.我代表全班同学，对你们在英语学习上给予我们的帮助表示衷心的感谢。
第四讲增光添彩的定语从句李仕才定语从句分为限制性定语从句和非限制性定语从句，非限制性定语从句和主句或先行词之间常用逗号隔开。
1.关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who，whom，whose，that，which，as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考标准范文中更是屡见不鲜。
I live next door to a couple whose children often make a lot of noise.我住在一对他们的孩子经常吵闹的夫妇隔壁。
Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.欢迎任何感兴趣的学生参加。
To begin with，the theme of the show is Environmental Protection，which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.首先，展览的主题是环境保护，这不仅有意义，但也很有趣。
As one saying goes，“Practice makes perfect”.正如谚语所说，“熟能生巧”。
2.关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when，where，why引导的定语从句。
During holiday seasons，I will live in the countryside，where the air is fresh and people are friendly.在假期，我会住在乡下，那里空气新鲜而且人们友好。
I think the reason why you are always angry may be the high pressure of study. 我认为你总是发脾气的原因可能是学习上的巨大压力。
We will put off the picnic in the park until next week，when the weather may be better. 我们将在公园的野营活动推迟到下一星期，那时候天气可能会好些。
高考语法填空抢分热点之定语从句养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
一、考点精讲定语从句是历年高考的热门话题。
就2022年的新高考卷I语法填空来说，更是有两个考点涉及到定语从句。
定语从句的常考点：1. 引导定语从句的关系词，尤其是关系代词2. 只用that引导定语从句（1）先行词是all，something，anything，everything，nothing等不定代词时。
例如：Finally，the thief handed everything that he had stolen to the police.（最后，小偷把他偷的所有东西都交给了警察。
）（2）先行词被all，any，no，every，few，little，many，much等不定代词修饰时。
例如：I have finished reading all the books that I borrowed from the library. （我己经看完了所有从图书馆借来的书。
）（3）先行词被序数词修饰或先行词本身是序数词时。
例如：The first English book that I read was “The Prince and the Pauper”by Mark Twain.（我读的第一本英文书是马克·吐温的《王子与乞丐》。
）（4）先行词被形容词最高级修饰时。
例如：This is the most beautiful park that I have ever visited.（这是我参观过的最美丽的公园。
）（5）先行词中既有人又有物时。
例如：He talked about the teachers and school that he visited.（他谈到了他参观过的老师和学校。
从高考英语评分标准谈提高书面表达的策略【摘要】高考英语评分标准对于评定学生的英语水平有着重要的作用，而书面表达在英语学习中也是至关重要的一项能力。
为了提高书面表达能力，可以采取以下策略：要能够理清思路，突出重点，避免跑题和纷乱思绪；丰富词汇并提升辨析能力，使文章更加生动和精确；合理运用句式，增加语言多样性，使得文章表达更加流畅和得体；要注意语法准确性和逻辑性，避免语法错误和逻辑混乱；多加练习，不断提高写作水平，通过不断实践和反馈来不断改进和提高。
通过以上策略的运用，可以有效提高书面表达能力，更好地应对高考英语写作。
【关键词】高考英语评分标准，书面表达，理清思路，重点突出，丰富词汇，辨析能力，合理运用句式，增加语言多样性，语法准确性，逻辑性，练习，写作水平，结论。
1. 引言1.1 高考英语评分标准高考英语作文评分标准通常包括内容完整性、语言表达能力和语言规范性三个方面。
内容完整性主要考察学生是否理清思路，有条理地展开文章；语言表达能力主要考察学生是否具备丰富的词汇和多样化的句式，能够准确表达自己的意思；语言规范性主要考察学生的语法准确性和逻辑性，确保文章表达准确、清晰。
在高考英语作文中，这些评分标准是考生提高书面表达能力的重要参考依据。
学生在备考高考英语时需要充分了解这些评分标准，有针对性地进行写作训练，从而提高自己的书面表达水平。
1.2 书面表达的重要性书面表达在高考英语中占据着重要的地位。
书面表达是考察学生综合运用语言知识和能力的重要方式，能够全面展现考生的英语水平。
书面表达是检验学生逻辑思维和表达能力的有效途径，能够锻炼学生的思辨和表达能力。
书面表达也是学习英语的一个重要环节，通过写作可以更好地掌握词汇、句型和语法知识。
提高书面表达能力对于学生来说至关重要，不仅能够在高考中取得更好的成绩，也有助于学习英语的全面提升。
我们需要认识到书面表达的重要性，采取有效的策略来提高自己的写作水平，从而在高考中取得更好的成绩。
高考英语书面表达提分秘诀之运用较为复杂的语法结构一、复合句的写作运用（一）定语从句的运用1、as 引导的非限制性定语从句：俗话说，使用名人名言来表达观点As the saying goes, ---/ There is a saying that goes “--- “/ A saying goes that “---“/ Just as a famous figure put it,…..（1）As China Daily puts it, the new story of Nezha is such a typical example of the rebellious(叛逆的) but righteous(正直的) youth that many young Chinese people can relate to it, encouraging them to become dream-chasers and fate-changers.（2）As a saying goes, All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. (话题：劳逸结合)（3）As a saying goes, Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. No matter what difficulties we are confronted with/ we encounter/ we are faced with on our way /path to success, we should have the courage to overcome them. Bear in mind that success always smiles on those who make determined efforts to realize their dreams.As long as we persist in our efforts, we will surely pay off at last. (话题：毅力)（4）There are many ways to get rid of loneliness(中心句)…… . what ‘s more, it is a wise option to read a good book. As a saying goes, reading a great book is like having a conversation with many great people.（话题：如何应对孤独）(5) As we all know, modern urban residents are much pressurized by a variety of problems.众所周知，现代都市居民承受来自各种各样问题带来的压力。
高考作文句式升级——定语从句高分作文〔1820分〕整体要求：①掩盖了全部内容要点；②应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;③语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较简单结构或较高级词汇所致；④具有较强的语言运用力量；⑤有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
写作谋篇：①内容定档：切忌写不够、写不全学会谋篇②细节定分：切忌写不对、写不好学会造句学会造句——定语从句：例句1：我盼望找到一个笔友，他的英语要好。
他能够与我写信。
I want to find a penpal. His English is good. I can write letters to him.句式升级：I want to find a penpal whose English is good and to whom I can write letters.〔定语从句〕【初级句型语法】1. 翻译：我将有一个假期。
I will have a holiday.2. 利用句中的名词再写一句，修饰句中的某个名词或整个句子。
In this holiday, I will show you around in Xi’an. 在那一个假期里，我将会带你巡游西安3. 连接代词替换相同名词〔或一般代词〕。
相同名词是人用who/whom相同名词是物用whichI will have a holiday.I will show you around in that holiday. 两句中的相同名词都是holiday改写为定语从句：I will have a holiday in which I will show you around Xi’an.【练一练】1. 翻译：西安是一座闻名的城市。
西安历史悠久。
西安人民热忱好客。
Xi’an is a famous/wellknown/reputed city. Its history is long and its people are warmhearted.写成定语从句形式：Xi’an is a famous city whose history is long and whose people are warm hearted.2. 翻译：你应当和妈妈加强沟通。
定语从句在写作中的运用根据所掌握的定语从句的知识，熟练地使用定语从句也是高考英语写作的一项基本要求。
定语从句属于较为复杂的语法结构，根据内容要点在短文中适当地运用定语从句有助于提高写作的得分。
Ⅰ.合并句子把下面各题中的句子合并为一个含有定语从句的主从复合句1．a. Seeing these changes, we cannot forget them.b. They gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble.Seeing these changes, we cannot forget those who gave us unselfish help when we were in trouble.2．a. I feel greatly honored to host the contest.b. The contest is sponsored by the Students' Union.I feel greatly honored to host the contest, which is sponsored by the Students' Union.3．a. They sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.b. The elderly always feel lonely.They sent the elderly who always feel lonely some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.4．a. The library is not far from here.b. The writer often does some reading there.The library where the writer often does some reading is not far from here.5．a. I’ve always longed for the days.b. I will be able to be independent then.I've always longed for the days when I will be able to be independent.II. 改写句子“I see many running creatures. They are made of metal and glass. Their feet are round. They have four eyes. Two of the four eyes are red. Inside I see soft shapes. They can move.”I see many running creatures which / that are made of metal and glass. Their feet are round and they have four eyes, two of which are red. Inside I see soft shapes that can move.Our class is a big family ; It consists of 12 girls and 50 boys. Most of them are mainly from the countryside. Zhao Qiang is a kind-hearted boy. He is always ready to help others. He is such a good boy that we all like him.Our class is a big family which consists of 12 girls and 50 boys, most of whom are mainly from the countryside. Zhao Qiang is a kind-hearted boy, who is always ready to help others. He is a good boy whom we all like.III. .翻译句子用定语从句翻译下列句子1．不努力学习的学生不会通过考试。
灵活运用高级表达方式提高高考英语书面表达得分近年来，高考英语书面表达评分标准规定。
考生必须使用比较高级的表达方式方能获取高分，而不少考生只会用结构简单的句子来表达文意，写出来的文章得分就低。
因此，同学们应在平时的书面表达训练中多练习使用高级表达方式，才能在高考英语书面表达中获得高分。
一、什么是高级表达方式一般说来，如果一篇书面表达通篇都是单一的主谓宾结构的简单句，表达效果就比较差。
各种复合句、特殊句式(倒装句、强调句、感叹句、such as列举句型等)和带过渡性插入语的句子通常难度大、语境逻辑强、表达效果好，是普遍认可的高级表达方式，也是高考英语书面表达是否能获取高分的重要依据同学们在写英语书面表达时应根据表达需要有选择地使用这些高级表达方式。
二、掌握简单表达方式转化高级表达方式的方法简单表达方式可以转化成高级表达方式，而且转换难度也不是很大，因为高级表达方式也是在简单表达方式的基础上构成的。
下面介绍几种将简单表达方式转化为高级表达方式的方法。
1．将两个简单句合并为一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句。
which在非限制性定语从句中代表主句内容，从句可由两个简单句之一改造而成。
例1：最近许多中学生乱花钱，关于这一点不同的人有不同的看法。
简单句：Recently many middle school students spend their money on unnecessary things. Different people have different opinions about it.高级表达方式：Recently many middle school students spend their money on unnecessary things, about which different people have different opinions.例2：许多男孩学抽烟，这对身体有危害。
