湖南省长沙县实验中学高三英语二轮复习 书面表达复习重点话题指导 专题02 报道评论话题指导(教师版)
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实例指导1---- Enjoy Sports,Enioy Life【写作任务】你班下周要举行一次英语班会,主题为“Enjoy Spots,Enioy Life ,请根据以下提示写一篇词数为120--150的英语发言稿,谈谈体育运动对健康的重要生。
提示:1.体育运动能促进人体各系统器官的机能和协调,使我们更健康;2.体育运动能促进大脑内啡肽(endorphins)分泌,这种物质会使人心情振奋、精神愉悦;3.户外活动可以让我们感受大自然之关并呼吸新鲜空气,使我们头脑清醒。
clear-headed 头脑清醒的essential 非常重要的问候不同听众: Hello, everyone. / Ladies and gentlemen / Dear friends / Comrades and friends / Dear classmates / Boys and girls / My fellow classmates 等。
结束语:I hope ... / I think we should ...'That's all. Thank you.【范文习作】Enjoy Sports, Enjoy LifeDear classmates,As is known to all, playing sports regularly is one of the best ways to keep healthy. First, sports give us ,aluable practice in helping every part of our bodies vorking together. Therefo re, sports can help build our bodies and prevent us from falling ill. Als o, sports cause he body to produce endorphins, chemicals that help us feel peaceful and happy. This is why sports have beome the most popular form of relaxation that almost everyone can enjoy. In addition, taking part in outdoor sports, we get closer to nature and take in fresh air. The beauty of nature will keep us clear-headed, which is essenfial to our health and helps us feel energetic in our study and work.In short, sports benefit us in many ways. I hope evryone can take an active part in sports and enjoy life every day.实例指导2—奥运冠军是否应该得到奖金【写作任务】奥运冠军除了得到中央政府的一笔奖金外,还得到地方政府的奖金。
湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题08 健康饮食话题指导(学生版)实例指导1――学生如何饮食【写作任务】如今随着人们生活水平的提高,市场上高脂肪、高热量、高蛋白的食品也越来越多;据一份调查表明学校中有五分之二的中学生属于胖子行列。
从健康和美学的角度来讲,他们都希望能够减肥。
实例指导2—饮食与健康【写作任务】请根据以下要点写一篇120词左右的说明文,可适当扩展。
1.现象:随着生活水平的提高,越来越多的人逐渐意识到了饮食与健康之间的联系。
他们的饮食合有丰富的蛋白质、维生素等。
然而,还有很多人仍然没有意识到健康饮食的重要性。
他们的饮食不科学,常吃一些含热量和脂肪过高的食品。
2.结果:由于这种不健康的饮食习惯,一些人开始发胖,癌症、心脏病这类疾病的发病率也与日俱增。
3.建议:人们应健康饮食,多吃蔬菜和水果,少吃肉,多做运动。
【学生习作】With the improvement of people' s life, more and more people have realized the link between food and health, and they eat food whi ch contains rich protein, vitamins and so on.However, many people haven't known the importance of a healthy diet. They don't eat healthy food. They often eat food having too much fat and calories. As a result, many of them are becoming fat, and illnesses, such as cancer, heart disease are increasing.Therefore, it is important for us to realize the importance of eating the fight kinds of food. We should eat healthily. We should have more vegetables, more fru its and less meat. Moreover, we should also take enough exercise so that we. can keep fit.实例指导3—睡眠不足【写作任务】根据下表反映的内容,写一篇150词左右的短文,向同学们发起倡议,确保睡眠充足,远离睡眠不足可能带来的危害。
湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题14 社会交际类话题指导(教师版)实例指导1-----身势语【写作任务】身势语在我们的日常生活中起着重要的作用,请根据下列提示写一篇书面表达:◆什么是身势语(body language)◆身势语的作用◆举例说明在讲英语和讲汉语国家有相同含义的身势语。
如:挥手表示再见、微笑和握手表示欢迎。
◆对于不同的国家来说,身势语也不同。
例如,在俄罗斯、法国、阿拉伯国家里,男人们见面时彼此亲吻。
然而,在中国或澳大利亚男人见面从不亲吻而是握手。
◆学一门外语时,了解这个国家的身势语很重要。
根据提示可以适当发挥。
词数:120左右。
【参考范文】Body language is used by people for sending messages to one another. It is very useful because it can help you make yourself easily understood. When talking with others, you are not just using words, but also using expressions and gestures. For example, waving one's hand is to say "Good-bye." A smile and handshake showwelcome. And they are accepted both by Chinese and foreigners with the same meanings.However, different countries have different body languages. For example, men in Russia, France and Arab countries kiss each other when they meet, but men in China or Australia shake hands instead of kissing.When you use a foreigin language, it is very important to know the meanings of gestures of the country. And it will make your stay there muchmore pleasant andcomfortable.实例指导2――Being a Good Listener【写作任务】实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。
湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题12 人物类话题指导(教师版)实例指导1——人物介绍【写作任务】2008年4月7日在巴黎圣火传递中,一名残疾女孩感动了所有人,当时火炬传递现场不断有“藏独”分子上前抢夺火炬,甚至有暴徒直接攻击她柔弱的身躯,但她死死护住火炬,用脸上灿烂的笑容和残缺的身体捍卫了圣火的尊严,已深深地印在了所有热爱中国、关注奥运的人们心中,她就是金晶—一个27岁的残疾人运动员,在九岁时时因病作了截肢手术,但她一直保持着积极乐观的生活方式。
请根据上面提供的材料,写一篇介绍金晶的短文。
字数:120-150生词:Tibet independence protestors 藏独分子第一步仔细审题,确立主题,明确要求根据文字提示可以确定:写作主要人称为第三人称,字数150左右,体裁为记叙文,时态以一般过去式为主。
第二步围绕主题,提炼要点,编拟提纲第一段:引出主题(① 世界被一个27岁誓死保卫火炬的中国女孩感动了)。
然后描述详细过程(② 在火炬手选拔中,金晶被选为海外火炬手;③当圣火在巴黎传递时,有藏独分子攻击金晶;④金晶不顾个人安危,;⑤她紧紧抱住火炬致使暴徒没有得逞)最后交待结果(⑥她的微笑和勇敢深深地印在了所有热爱中国、关注奥运的人们心中)。
第二段:介绍金晶的成长经历(②她是上海的一名残疾人运动员;③⑧九岁时因病截肢;④⑨截肢并没有带走她生活中的快乐;⑤在教室里妨碍别人走路,她就不撑拐杖,单脚跳;⑥2001年,2001年7月13日参加到上海轮椅击剑队,成为一名轮椅击剑队的队员并在比赛中多次赢得奖牌⑦是她的可爱与乐观使她最选为奥运会境外火炬传递手。
)再谈自己受的启发(⑧我从她那里学习到很多,我要成为像她一样积极的人,努力实现自己的目标)。
第三步分析要点及提纲,提炼关键单词和短语。
第四步恰当使用句型,连词成句。
①On April 7th,2008, the world was touched by a 27-year-old Chinese girl named Jin Jing.② Through the process of Olympic torch bearer selection, Jin became an overseas torch bearer.③ When the Olympic torch was being relayed in Paris, Jin Jing was attacked by Tibet independence protestors during the torch exchange, who attempted to grab the torch in her hands.④ Without concern for her own safety, Jin did everything she could to protect the Olympic flame.⑤ She held the torch so tightly that the attackers failed to get it.⑥ Her smile and bravery impressed all the people who are friendly to China and concerned about Olympics.⑦ Jin is a disabled athlete from Shanghai.⑧ When she was nine years old, she lost one leg because of her illness.⑨ Jin Jing does not lose her joy for life after losing her leg.⑩ Her loveliness and optimism are infectious to everyone around her wherever she is.【教师点评】作者抓住了反映金晶无畏精神的事件进行了详细的描写,整个事件的发生、过程、结果都交代的条理、清楚。
湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题04 传统文化话题指导写作任务:假如你是李明,你的美国朋友Bob来信表示对中国文化特别感兴趣,尤其想知道中国人是如何欢度春节的。
请你给他写一封回信介绍有关情况。
(词数:不少于120)Eve, the whole family usually get together to have dumplings, set off fireworks, and watch TV programs. On the New Year’s Day, people always get up early and put on new clothes. Everyone looks happy and says "Happy New Year" to each other. Children can also get lucky money from their parents and oth er adults. When you take a walk in the streets, you will be struck by the sight of beautiful decorations. Some doors are decorated with red lanterns. This is something about our Spring Festival. And welcome to our country some day.Best wishes.成稿:Dear Bob,I’ve received your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you are very interested in our traditions, such as the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. Both adults and children look forward to this great day, just like Christmas Day in the West. Several days before it, people are busy shopping and cleaning. The night before, the whole family usually gets together to have dumplings, set off fire-works,and watch TV. On New Year’s Day, peopl e always get up early and put on new clothes. Everyone looks happy and says "Happy new year" to each other. I like the Spring Festival because I can get lucky money from my elders. Walking down the street, you will see many beautiful de corations. Many homes are decorated with red lanterns and other things.Isn’t the Spring Festival interesting? I’m sure that you will love it. I hope you can join us during a Spring Festival.Best wishes.Yours,Li MingPowerful Sentences:1. It is a time for rest and relaxation. Children spend their time playing and having fun.2. It is a delightful time for everyone, especially for those who have been working very hard for the whole year.3. Public places are filled with people of all ages. Many people go traveling during the holiday.4. In the daytime, there are many kinds of activities, such as visiting friends and relatives, and going to parks and temples.实例指导2—美国的节日习俗及文化写作任务:假设你是学校英语爱好者俱乐部的会员,近期此俱乐部即将筹备一场会员聚会,主题是了解美国的节日习俗及文化。
湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题12 人物类话题指导(学生版)实例指导1——人物介绍On April 7th,2008, the world was touched by a 27-year-old Chinese girl named Jin Jing. Through the process of Olympic torch bearer selection, Jin became an overseas torch bearer. When the Olympic torch was being relayed in Paris, Jin Jing was attacked by Tibet independence protestors during the torch exchange, who attempted to grab the torch in her hands. Without concern for her own safety, Jin did everything she could to protect the Olympic flame. She held the torch so tightly that the attackers failed to get it.Meanwhile,her smile and bravery impressed all the people who are friendly to China and concerned about Olympics.Jin is a disabled athlete from Shanghai. Unfortunately, when she was nine years old, she lost one leg because of her illness. However, Jin Jing does not lose her joy for life after losing her leg. What’s more, her loveliness and optimism are infectious to everyone around her wherever she is.1.1810年2月12日,肖邦出生于波兰。
湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题22 自然灾害话题指导(学生版)实例指导1—灾害_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Class C ommittee 【参考范文】Committee实例指导2——捐款感谢【写作任务】假如你是李华,是发生8.0级地震的汶川县的一名中学生,下面是你灾后的经历:1、目睹了人们奋不顾身救人,及时地运送食品及衣物。
2、在众多陌生人的帮助下,找回了自己失散的父母,也已经重返了校园, 正在重建家园。
3、现在我们更加珍惜这难得的学习机会,也更懂得尊重和体谅他人,学会了互相关心和帮助4、要努力学习,用实际行动回报给更多的人请你就以上内容向报社写一封信,反映灾后的情况,并对来自各方面的帮助表示感谢。
注意:1、字数:120-1502、书信的格式已给出,不计入总词数。
【参考范文】De ar editor,I’m a senior student that has experienced a great earthquak e. I wrote to you to express my thanks to those who helped us when we suffered the disaster. During this time, I witnessed many strangers devoted their efforts tosaving lives, providing food and clothes regardless of their own safety. Without their help, I couldn’t find my parents in such a short time, which makes me excited. Besides, only few days passed before the students ret urned to classrooms to have classes. New houses are also being reconstructed a nd it is not long before we moved into our new houses.As a result, we all treasure the opportunity of studying in the classroom. The help from others taught us how to respect others and take others into consideration. It was also the help from strangers that made us realize the importance of helping and caring for each other facing disaster.Now, I think what we should do is to study harder and help more people in return. Yours,Li Hua实例指导3——捐款通知【写作任务】______________________________Remember to come on time.Students’ Union 【参考范文】NOTICERecently,an earthquake measuring 8.0 on the Richter scale jolted Wenchuan County, Sichuan Province in southwest China, resulting in man y deaths. Unfortunately, we cannot prevent an earthquake from happening, but if we identified potential risks ahead of time and made advance planning, many lives would be saved. So this is the reason why our school has decided to invite experts to give a lecture. It will involve how to protect yourself and guarantee your safety before, during or after an earthquake. It starts at 2 pm, May 18 in the great hall and lasts about one and a half hour. All the students are required to take part in the lecture on time. Besides, paper and a pen are also needed in case you write down some important points. I hope everyone present will benefit a lot from it.Remember to come on time.Students’ Union实战演练假如你校正在开展"秋季防火"安全教育活动。
湖南省长沙县实验中学高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题16素质教育话题指导(学生版)实例指导1规范高中补习办学【写作任务】继严禁公办高中学校招收复读生以后,山东省教育厅去年七月份又出台了规范高考补习学校办学行为的通知,雯求复读生晚间、収休日不得上谦,学生毎天睡眠时闫不能少干s 个小时.你认为这种做法有什么意义満你用英吾写一篇14-150词的短文谈谈自己的看法.【学生习作】At present, return students m Shandong Province are not required to nay at school at nigh: and weekends. They have two days off per week and spend enough time ①to sleep every day.As a matter of fact, its of great benefit to all the students For one thine. :t s good for——— students to build stronger and healthier bodies because it s very import for teenagers to grow up For another, it helps studeents reduce pressure on study; which is ©benefit to their health and self-confidence. Last but not :east all students have the same schedu上,which provides them equal opportune- of study. In other words, the competititon among students that they are ©admited to universities will be fair.1 hold the view that this regulation is good for students as we;: as teachers? whi ca in::contribute to a harmonious atmosphere of stud}・ in the long run.实例指导2-高考分数邙急私化"【写作任务】山东省高考分数查询时要输入身份证号码等验证码才能进入电话和网站的查询系统。
湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题20 校园学习话题指导(学生版)实例指导1—毕业晚会As far as I am concerned, we students should play a leading role to make the party unforgetta ble. Because of the lifelong friendship, teachers will be invited as well as our parents who support us so strongly.As you know, how to plan the party is the most important question. At first, our headteacher will make a moving speech for the opening. Then, there will follow the prepared performance, such as songs, dances, cross talks and so on. Besides, party games will be included and teachers, parents and students will take part in them. At last, the party will come to an end by taking photos freely. Last, but not least, delicious food and drink can’t be left out. As you can see, the farewell party means so much that we will spare no effort to do it well. After all, it should be the highlight of our high school life.实例指导2—校园帮派类【学生习作】How to View Gangs in Schools?It must be pointed out that gangs made up of several boys or girls, the number of which sometimes even reaches up to several hundred, can be widely se en among middle school students. Not only does a gang have bad effects on students, but also it affects the normal teaching order at school.Most of the gang members are students who are, aggressive and prefer to smoke, drink and play computer games rather than study. Some are willing to join in the gang in order to strengthen the power of their own circles; others just want to getprotection from "The Elder Brother"of the gang and still some are forced to do so. Experts s uggest that these students be guided correctly in order to avoid them doing harm to society.I think that teenagers should put their time and energy mainly into study. Avoiding joining m any gang means avoiding committing crimes later on实例指导3-早恋现象【学生习作】Puppy love is more and more comm on among middle school ,students nowadays. Concerning this, different people have different opinions.I hold the view that puppy love is unsuitable for us student's because puppy love can lead to many problems. Firstly, it not only influences our spirit but also distracts us from our studies. Then, it also makes our parents and teachers much too worried about us. What's more, puppy love is a waste of time. We are too young to be involved in it.From my point of view, we should concentrate on ourstudies because we are at a stage of gaining knowledge and growth. At this stage, learning more important th,m being involved in love affairs for us middle school students. It is urgent that we should pay more attention to our studies, and only by doing so can we have a brigh ter future.实例指导4―中学生是否可以穿时尚的服装成稿:One day we had a heated discussion about whether students should wear fashionable clothes. There were two viewpoints. 60% of the students, who are against wearingfashionable clothes, said, "These clothes are often expensive. We don’t make money, however. And surely it has a bad effect on our school life to always follow the latest fashions. We, as students, should put our hearts into study, not dressing fashionably. Moreover, we are expected to dress simply, and fashionable clothes do not fit in with school."But the rest of the students said, "We should wear good-looking clothes, including fashionable clothes. We are part of modern society, in which everyone wants beauty, so why not make ourselves more beautiful?" And they believe they have the right to own beautiful things. In the end, we all agreed that we could wear what we liked as long as we didn’t break the rules of our school.实例指导5----Ought to read too many fantasy stories for teenagers?Ought to read too many fantasy stories for teenagers?Nowadays, with the development of the technology and society, people develop their imagination quickly. As a result, more and more fantasy stories have been put out. Is it right for the middle school students to read as many fantasy stories as possible?Considering the main aim for a student, some students don’t think so. In their opinion, teenagers can’t read too many fantasy storie s as they like. It's reported that reading fantasy stories takes many students a great deal of time and energy. What’s more, some teenagers are too ridiculous that they are completely absorbed in fantasy stories, as a consequence they ignore their studies. Even worse, some fantasy stories are too vulgar, which can be harmful for the teenagers’ mental health.However, scores of students think it right for teenagers to read more fantasy stories. They think that such stories are based on the science fiction, which can lead thedirection of science. Reading them still increases their knowledge and broadens their mind. It also gives them some new ways to look at old situations and makes them look at the world in terms of centuries, not just six months or five years. Personally, although it is a good way for teenagers to develop our imagination and creativity, as middleschool students, we must first focus on studies and put more effort into our schoolwork.实例指导6—选择高考志愿[范文赏析]Chinese high school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities.A survey has been done to study it.We can see from the table that about 35 percent of the students believe th at the choice should be based on their own interest. They say that interest is the mother of success. Besides,it is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in. However, more students, or rath er, around 45 percent of them, insist that main consideration should be given to the needs of the society, for, they argue, not everyone can find the job they like best, but a good major can make it easy to find jobs after graduation. What’s more, interest can be cultivated and changed.Interestingly, there are about 20% who find it too difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teachers to make a decision.[实战演练]教师节将近,某英文报纸进行了一次"好老师需要具备什么样的素质"的调查活动,请根据下列调查记录内容,以"Wh at Makes a Good Teacher ?"为题目,写一篇120词左右的英语短文,适当发表自己的观点。
湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题09 科技发明话题指导(学生版)The users use them for calling, sending short messages and Internet-surfing. Besides, they can be used to take photos and when you are flee. you can enjoy exciting games. This mobile phone is suitable for people of all ages and all models are available.实例指导2—Information Age在互联网高速发展和普及的同时,"网络成瘾症"也随之出现,在青少年中表现得尤其突出,这影响了他们正常的学习、工作和家庭生活,也不利于他们的健康。
请根据下面两幅图的内容,写一篇120-150词的英语短文,谈谈自己的看法和观点,并提出科学合理的处理意见和建议。
参考词汇:成瘾be addicted to成稿:As we can see from the pictures, some children are so addicted to the Internet that they would rather die than stop surfing the Internet. Others spen d all their time on the Internet and they forget all about food and rest. However, they refuse to take any other peopl e’s advi ce, including their parents’.With the rapid development and popularity of the Internet, many people, especially the youth, are addicted to it, which affects their studies and work, and sometimes even destroys their family life. Worse still, it is not good for their health, mentally and physically.In my opinion, people should make full use of the Internet, searching for useful information. On the other hand, we should use it in a proper way. Don’t waste too much time on it. At the same time, teachers and par ents should take measures to educate and protect the youth against the harm caused by it.实例指导3—Science and Technology人类对外部空间的着迷已有上千年的历史了。
湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题02 报道评论话题指导(教师版)【写作任务】The Polar Express是近期上演的一部精彩的美国电影,请你根据下列内容写一则影评。
1. wonderful 2 . it be well received3. put on4.faithful5. exist6. stick to7. Luckily for sb. 8. get a reward9. invite sb. to do 10. so he did11. come true 12. congratulate sb. on th.【语句成篇】现在,文章所需的基本句型和词汇已经初步完成,根据文章思路和主题思想,将各要点表达出来,注意谓语动词的适当变化形式,以增加语言的表达力。
随后我们要发挥想象,在列出要点的基础上合理拓展,并运用适当的过渡词语将句子连接起来,能表达出文章的要点,所用句子基本流畅,思路清楚,使全文结构紧凑,进一步使整个段落或篇章浑然一体,连贯流畅,文章有层次感。
【参考范文】My comments on The Polar ExpressThe Polar Express is a wonderful American film recently and it was well received the moment it was put on .The story goes like this. Crouse is a faithful boy, who believes that SantaClaus is really living in the world. But his parents and friends insist that Santa Claus does not exist. Facing all this, Crouse still sticks to his faith firmly. Luckily for him, all his faith got a reward. One Christmas eve, a huge polar express stopped in front of his house. The conductor invited him to go to the North Pole to visit Santa Claus, and so he did ….Santa Claus really exists in this world. So have a good wish in your mind, and believe that if you stick to it, it will surely come true, and Santa Claus will send us wonderful gifts, congratulating us on our success. Santa Claus lives in our hearts!实例指导2—采访报道【写作任务】假定你是李华,下图显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的采访调查结果。
请你用英语给English Coaching Paper写一篇短文,报道你的采访结果,并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。
字数120词左右。
首句已给出(不计入词数)。
参考词汇:激起兴趣arouse sb’s interest【写作指导】当今社会,采访已经不再是记者的专利了。
日常生活和学习中,我们开展的许多活动都离不开采访。
作为中学生,写好采访稿就显得尤为必要了。
★命题思路采访稿的命题,大多给出一个话题或任务,让习作者围绕给定话题或任务开展采访活动,有时采访结果则以表格或文字提示形式给出。
此时作者的人物即是汇报采访结果。
★写作要领写好采访稿,首先要做好采访的准备活动,达到成功采访的目的。
为此,应做到以下几点:1. 确定采访目的。
每次采访活动都有其特定的目的,如你为什么要做这次采访?你想让读者知道什么?你想让公众得到什么启示?等。
2. 确定和了解被采访人。
有了明确的采访目的,下一步则是确定被采访人。
为了使采访成功,最好先了解别采访人。
事实证明,掌握和了解别采访人的背景知识,对于采访成功大有帮助。
3.列出采访提纲。
这是采访活动的关键之一。
采访前,一般要确定一条主线,理清采访思路,再设计提问。
提问的一般原则是友好,切中话题,并通过提问营造融洽、宽松的气氛,从而拉近与被采访者的距离。
所提的问题要突出重点,时而层层追问,时而避重就轻。
【参考范文】Recently we did a survey on what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. From the chart, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school. The second most popular activity for students is surfing the Internet and 36 % of them have interest in it. Only a few students, about 8 percent of them, show interest in reading. And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments.In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the needs of the students. Besides, guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music.实例指导3—诗歌评论【写作任务】下面有一首英文短诗,请根据这首诗,展开适当的想象,写一篇短文。
标题为:My Teacher Mr. LiThere’s a teacher Mr Li,Who is lovely and thirty-four.Always encouraging us to try,He leads us to world of “why”.We all admire him more and more.注意:1. 不得照抄短诗原文。
2. 必须结合短诗的内容,发挥想象,适当展开。
3. 必须突出短诗的主题,结构完整,语意连贯。
4. 短文不能写成诗歌形式.5. 词数:120左右。
1.读懂诗歌大意,了解作文要求。
读懂诗歌大意足写好诗歌评论的基本要求,同时也是关键所在;而了解作文要求,才知道写作的任务是什么,不然就会出现“答非所问”的现象。
2.根据作文要求,列出写作提纲。
明确写作要求和读懂诗歌大意后,下一步即是对照诗歌列出要点。
值得注意的是,诗歌中每一个句子都可能是一个要点,将这些要点有机结合起来,则是书面表达的“成品”了。
3.合理发挥想象,有机地组织语言,,诗歌语言凝练,意境浓缩,这就要求同学们合理发挥想象,在列出要点的基础上合理拓展,并运用适当的过渡词语将句子连接起来。
4.审题,根据所给文章标题My Teacher Mr.Li ,可确定写作任务主要是介绍Mr.Li。
进而抓住Mr.Li 的特征:最后列出提纲: 1) Mr.Li给我们的印象,他的年龄; 2) Mr.Li 的教学方法以及给我们的启发; 3)我们都喜欢和敬佩Mr.Li。
【参考范文】My Teacher Mr. LiOf all my teachers, Mr. Li is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he is one of the most popular teachers in our school.Compared With other teachers, Mr. Li pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know "what", but also understand "why", So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, we've learned how to analyse and settle problems. What a wonderful world of '"why" he leads us He is such a learned person that we all admire very much.实例指导4――介绍报纸假如你班同学自己创办了一份名为《我爱我班》的英文报纸,现在你在向其他班同学介绍你们的报纸。
内容包括:1. 办报目的:激发英语学习兴趣,提高英语知识运用能力,拓宽知识面;2. 报纸基本情况介绍,如报纸的版面数、周期以及稿件来源等;3. 主要栏目介绍,如:英语学习、校内新闻、班级公告、笑话故事等。
词数:120左右。
分析:1. 首先审清题目,根据题目所给的内容提示,不难看出本写作任务要求同学们写一篇说明文,即介绍一份班级报纸,包括办报目的、报纸基本情况以及主要栏目介绍。
说明文要求对事物进行客观的描述,因此语言要简洁,说明过程要讲究层次和条理。
教师点评:1. 这篇习作结构比较完整,叙述了内容提示中的所有要点,语句通畅,条理清晰。
2. 文章存在的问题:①初稿文章基本上是对所提示内容的翻译,在第二部分中对栏目进行描述时,建议做适当发挥,对个别栏目稍加详细介绍,这样会使文章看起来详略得当,内容充实;②有些地方表述不是很清楚,句子意思上也欠妥当,如"Everyone can get it for free."中"everyone"指代不是很明确,容易引起误解。