高中英语 浙江新高考读后续写
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2022年6月浙江卷读后续写范文《一般高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明(高考综合改革试验省份试用)(第一版)》已经公布。
作为试点开头单位,2022年10月份开头的浙江省新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化,其中英语写作分为两部分:第一节为应用文写作;其次节为读后续写或概要写作。
应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大,已为宽敞师生所生疏,但是其次节的读后续写或概要写作是一种新题型,之前考试中考生并未接触过。
为便利宽敞师生尽早生疏这种题型,高效备考,特作以下解读。
一、2022年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题读后续写其次节:读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,依据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the wayto workone day. As he walked along Park Avenuenear the First NationalBank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start acar. He triedagain and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turnedandlooked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthurstoppedand asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthursaid.“I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start mycar.”“Is there something I cando to help?” Arthur asked. The youngmanlooked at the two suitcasesin the back seatand thensaid,“Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t betoo much trouble, you couldhelp me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all. I’d beglad to help.”The young man got out andtook one of the suitcases from the backseat. After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the otherone. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase andstartedwalking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank.There had been a robbery(抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quieta moment before. Now the air wasfilled with the sound of the alarm and theshoutsof peoplerunningfrom all directions. Cars stopped and thepassengers joined thecrowd in front of the bank. People asked eachother,“Whathappened?” But everyone had a different answer.Arthur, still carrying thesuitcase, turned to look at the bankand walked right into the young woman infront of him.She looked at the suitcaseand then at him. Arthur was surprised.“Why is she looking at me like that?” Hethought. “The suitcase! Shethinks I’m the bank thief!”Arthur looked around atthe crowd of people. He becamefrightened, and without another thought, hestarted to run.留意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
续写A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusement, all because of my mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was elven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we would ever see them again Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathroom if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids”“What! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quite.” We were never actually left in a strange city, but we were not about to take any chance.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
新高考英语读后续写主旨升华句式一、人与自我(一)学习知识,挑战自我而成长1. It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。
每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战,做更多的尝试。
2.You could never tell me how exhilarating but daunting the experience was and all the efforts paid off when I eventually sensed the joy of hearing the wind whistling past my ears.当我终于感觉到听到风从我耳边呼啸而过的喜悦时,你永远无法告诉我,这段经历是多么令人振奋,所有的努力都得到了回报。
(2022 年汕头市高三年级第一次调研考试----学习骑自行车)3. If you are still trapped in the worry, do not be depressed but let the thing go and try to challenge yourself right now, just like my first flying javelin in the azure sky.如果你还被困在烦恼中,不要沮丧,而是要让事情过去,试着挑战自己,就像我在蔚蓝的天空中第一次飞行标枪一样。
(2022届浙江高三丽水卷--学习投标枪)4. At the end of the play, when the audience stood and applauded, I knew they were not just cheering for my performance that night, but for the performances they knew would come in later years because of my new found confidence. 在戏剧结束时,当观众起立鼓掌时,我知道他们不仅仅是为我那晚的表演欢呼,也是为他们知道几年后会因为我重新找回的信心而来的表演而欢呼。
2023浙江卷英语读后续写范文全文共6篇示例,供读者参考篇1The story I read is about a little girl named Lily who found a magical key that could unlock any door. She went on an adventure to different worlds and had many exciting experiences.I really liked the part where she met a talking squirrel who helped her escape from a dangerous forest.In the end, Lily used the key to open the door to her own heart and found the courage to face her fears. It was a really inspiring story that taught me about the importance of being brave and never giving up.If I had the magical key, I would use it to visit all the places I've always wanted to see. I would unlock the door to a world filled with unicorns and dragons, and maybe even a land made of candy!Reading this story made me realize that no matter how big or small we are, we all have the power to overcome challenges and achieve our dreams. I will always remember the lesson thatLily learned on her journey and try to be as brave and determined as she was.I can't wait to read more stories like this one and go on new adventures with the characters. Who knows what magical keys await me in the pages of my next book!篇2Title: My Adventure in the Enchanted ForestOne day, my friends and I decided to explore the enchanted forest near our town. We had heard stories of magical creatures and hidden treasures, and we were determined to see if they were true.As we entered the forest, we were greeted by the chirping of birds and the rustling of leaves. It felt like we had stepped into a different world, where anything was possible.We walked deeper into the forest, following a narrow path that led us through thickets and overgrown bushes. Suddenly, we heard a faint giggle coming from behind a tree. Curious, we approached cautiously and found a group of playful fairies dancing and laughing.The fairies welcomed us with open arms and invited us to join their dance. With giggles and laughter, we twirled and spun with the fairies, feeling the magic of the forest coursing through our veins.After the dance, the fairies led us to a clearing where a majestic unicorn stood, its coat shining in the sunlight. The unicorn nuzzled us gently, and we knew we had found a true friend in this enchanted forest.As we bid farewell to our new friends and made our way back home, we knew that we had experienced something truly special. The enchanted forest had given us memories to last a lifetime, and we couldn't wait to return and explore its wonders once again.And so, our adventure in the enchanted forest came to an end, but the magic of that day would always remain in our hearts. We knew that no matter what challenges we faced, we could always return to the forest and find solace in its beauty and wonder.篇3Title: My Adventure in WonderlandHi everyone! Today I want to tell you about my amazing adventure in Wonderland. It all started when I found a mysterious book in the school library. The cover was all sparkly and it had a picture of a rabbit with a pocket watch. I was so curious that I decided to take it home and read it.As soon as I opened the book, I was magically transported to a strange and colorful world. Everywhere I looked, there were talking animals and magical creatures. I met a friendly rabbit who was always in a hurry, a wise caterpillar who smoked a hookah, and a grinning Cheshire cat who could disappear and reappear at will.I also had tea with the Mad Hatter and played croquet with the Queen of Hearts. It was all so surreal and exciting! But the most amazing part of my adventure was when I helped Alice defeat the Jabberwocky in a epic battle. It was so brave and heroic!After all the excitement, I found myself back in the school library, holding the mysterious book in my hands. Was it all just a dream? I may never know for sure, but one thing's for certain - my adventure in Wonderland was the best day ever!That's the end of my story. I hope you enjoyed reading about my adventure in Wonderland. See you next time! Bye-bye!篇4Title: My Adventure in the Magic ForestOnce upon a time, I read a story about a magical forest where animals can talk and trees can dance. I was so fascinated by the story that I wished I could visit that forest one day. And guess what? My wish came true!I woke up one morning to find myself in a strange, beautiful forest. The trees were tall and majestic, and the flowers were in all colors of the rainbow. I could hear birds singing and animals chattering. It was like a dream come true!I walked deeper into the forest, wondering what adventures awaited me. Suddenly, I heard a rustling noise behind me. I turned around to see a squirrel with big, sparkling eyes looking at me. "Hello, little human! Welcome to the Magic Forest," the squirrel chirped.I couldn't believe my ears! The squirrel could talk! I followed the squirrel as it led me through the forest, introducing me to all the wonderful creatures that lived there. There were unicorns, fairies, and even a talking tree named Old Oak.I spent the whole day exploring the Magic Forest, making new friends, and having adventures. I rode on the back of a unicorn, danced with the fairies, and listened to the stories of the wise Old Oak. It was the best day of my life!As the sun began to set, I knew it was time to leave the Magic Forest and return home. I said goodbye to my new friends, promising to visit them again soon. And as I stepped out of the forest, I knew that this magical adventure would always hold a special place in my heart.And that, my friends, was the most amazing day of my life. The day I visited the Magic Forest and had the adventure of a lifetime!篇5Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Lily. She loved reading books so much that she spent most of her time in the library. One day, she found a mysterious book hidden deep in the shelves. The book had a golden cover and no title on it.Curious to know what the book was about, Lily opened it up and started reading. To her surprise, the words in the book started glowing and she felt a strange sensation as if she wasbeing pulled into the book. Suddenly, she found herself in a magical land filled with talking animals and fairies.The animals and fairies told Lily that she was the chosen one to save their land from an evil witch who had cast a spell on the land, making it dark and gloomy. Lily was scared at first, but she remembered the brave heroes she had read about in her books and decided to face the witch.With the help of her new friends, Lily embarked on a journey to find the witch's hidden castle. Along the way, they encountered many challenges and obstacles, but Lily never gave up. She used her wits and courage to overcome them all.Finally, they reached the castle and confronted the witch. With a mighty battle, Lily managed to break the spell and bring light and happiness back to the land. The animals and fairies cheered and thanked Lily for her bravery.As Lily closed the magical book and returned to the library, she knew that she would always be a hero in the hearts of the creatures of the magical land. From that day on, Lily's love for reading grew even stronger, knowing that the power of stories could change lives and bring hope to all. And she lived happily ever after, sharing her adventures with others and inspiring them to be brave and kind, just like her.篇6Title: My Adventure in the Enchanted ForestOnce upon a time, I went on a school trip to the Enchanted Forest. It was a magical place full of colorful flowers, talking animals, and sparkling waterfalls. As soon as I entered the forest, I was amazed by its beauty and mystery.I walked along the winding paths, marveling at the tall trees and chirping birds. Suddenly, I heard a faint voice calling my name. I looked around but couldn't see anyone. "Who's there?" I asked nervously. "It's me, the wise old owl," the voice replied. I turned around and saw a majestic owl perched on a branch, its eyes glowing in the dim light.The owl told me that I was chosen to embark on a special quest to find the lost treasure of the forest. Excited and a little scared, I followed the owl deeper into the forest. We passed by a shimmering lake where a family of ducks was swimming happily, and a group of mischievous monkeys swinging from tree to tree.After what seemed like hours of walking, we finally reached a clearing where a magnificent castle stood. The owl explained that the treasure was hidden inside the castle, protected by amagical spell. I had to solve a series of riddles to unlock the castle's secrets and claim the treasure.With the owl's guidance, I solved each riddle one by one, unlocking the doors and passing through the maze-like corridors of the castle. Finally, I reached the treasure room, where a chest filled with gold and jewels sparkled in the light. I couldn't believe my eyes – I had found the lost treasure of the Enchanted Forest!As I made my way back to the entrance of the forest, the owl congratulated me on completing the quest. I thanked him for his help and promised to visit the forest again soon. With a heart full of joy and excitement, I left the Enchanted Forest, knowing that I had experienced a truly magical adventure that I would never forget.And that was the most amazing school trip ever!。
2021年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写范文4篇阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to payfamily expenses. I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass(超过)anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football. , preparing for my future as a quarter back on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone(长号).The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiringwork, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
近五年读后续写高考真题范文汇总2024年1月九省联考One possible version:“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.“You didn’t think I was doing a good job, but I was. I decided to spy on Maya. When you got out of the tank, she swam over to the filter box. I jumped back in to check it out. This is the stuff I found.”Hilda spread out the items she had found behind the filter box: a variety of combs, a small rubber duck, and even a plastic toy fish. Katherine looked astonished as she examined the objects.Now Katherine realized what had been going on. “Well, I guess I owe you an apology, Hilda. I jumped to conclusions without understanding what was really going on.” said Katherine. “Every time you found something in the tank, that meant one less fish for Maya. She c ouldn’t bring all the items to me at once, so she found a hiding place for them. That way Maya would always get her treat.” Maya was smart. Hilda and Katherine burst out laughing. Shaking their heads in disbelief, they reached for the bucket of fish. Maya deserved the treat.2024年1月浙江卷When Coach Pitt said “Nice work!” to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. Looking around, she realized what her coach meant. Instead of being left in the dust, she found herself among the top three. “I just can’t believe it,”Eva gasped, unable to contain her excitement. Her mouth curved up into a smile and her face lit up with a sense of confidence. The mind trick had worked wonders and the word “mile” was no longer a monster for her. She felt energetic, refreshed and powerful and believed she could overcome any obstacle in her life, including her poor sense of direction.Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. She stopped racking her brains for which direction to go. Instead, she created a detailed map of the six-story building, highlighting key landmarks with different colors. Breaking down the routes into smaller sections, she explored each day, one at a time. Days turned into weeks, and now navigating the huge building seemed like a piece of cake. This episode served as a reminder that with great determination and a clever mind trick, one can achieve anything and reach far.2023年6月新课标卷One possible version:A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I won first place! My heart skipped a beat and disbelief washed over me. At the award ceremony hosted in the school hall, the headmaster kindly presented me with a certificate of achievement. My face lit up with joy as I accepted the award, my smile filled with pride. A round of applause rang through the hall.I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.“Congratulations again! I knew you had it in you,” he said warmly, signaling me to take a seat. “Thank you.” I replied, with a mixture of gratitude and excitement. I reflectedon my initial doubts and hesitations. Sometimes, all it takes is someone who believes in us, someone who sees our potential even when we don’t see it ourselves. Leaving his office that day, I felt a renewed sense of purpose and determination. I knew that this was just the beginning. I was inspired to keep writing and exploring my creativity.2023年1月浙江卷One possible version:A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. When I walked past the milking house, I cast an unconscious glance at it. Then mixed feelings came over me. Maybe another little creature was trapped? Or maybe I would meet "her" again? Whatever the reason, every nerve in my body was screaming at me to step inside for a closer look. But nothing happened. "Forget it, it was just a bird," I let out a deep sigh and made my way out.I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.There she was, flapping her wings and approaching me. A cry of joy escaped my throat. "Hey, old girl! How is everything going?" I called softly. Then she landed in my cupped hands and stared into my eyes. I stroked her feathers gently. Moments later, she uttered a squeaking call, spread her wings and flew into the sky. The memory she left with me will remain, reminding me that there are things in nature that exist outside the laws and understanding of man.2022年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试新高考I卷One possible version:We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. He hung his head, trying to avoid eye contact with me. It was a tricky moment, calling for a good choice of words. Having thought it over, I mentioned some events which won people’s praise for his determination and perseverance. His face began to lighten. He added that even the judges thumbed up at him. The whistle went off and the competitors began to take their places. To my joy, David slowly rose to his feet.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. David stood firmly in his position, ignoring anything around. Pushing forward without balance, he was left behind. However, when he came into sight, the spectators burst into thunderous cheers and applause. Inspired by the enthusiasm and encouragement, David quickened his pace in high spirits. It turned out that he achieved his best record ever. Seeing his confident smiles, I sighed in relief. With the power to conquer himself, he can conquer anything on the way to a promising future. (155 词)2022年1月浙江卷One possible version:Paragraph 1:We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. Serious as my teammate was, we gradually grew in good tune with each other. He had a way with technical things and approached every detail with a clear purpose. And I spared no effort to do my bit, collecting data and recordingresults carefully, so as to make up for my academic disadvantage. I fully discussed my ideas and shared my insights with him, who was once indifferent but later listened to me with close attention. We were making steady progress with our project.Paragraph 2:One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. The moment I saw him lying helplessly in bed, I decided I had to act alone and do my best. I assured him I would not let him down and he should concentrate on recovering. I poured more time and energy into that project than ever before, and finally presented our findings to the class, which surprisingly earned us an excellent grade! When I told him about our shared success, he smiled. It had to do with trust and the joy of sharing a common prize.(续写词数170)2021年新高考全国I&II卷One possible version:As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.2021年6月浙江卷One possible version:Paragraph 1:The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. On my way home I created many plans to spend the money. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking upset. “How much do we still need to pay for anew truck?” asked my mom. “Three hundred dollars, but we have only two hundred on hand,” answered my dad.Paragraph 2:I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down halfway. He had always intended to buy a new truck but could n’t afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received for my work. I think it would help you in some way.” Greatly touched by what I said, my dad hugged me tightly. That night, l made up my mind that I would continue the work on the farm and contribute to my family’s household. After all, l had grown up.2021年1月八省联考One possible version:When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. I shook my head and said no, wondering why she asked such a question —was she going to treat me to lunch or something? “Wait a minute,” said the girl, and then she went back to the truck. After a few minutes she came back with a paper bag. “Here are some Mexican snacks and you can have some when you are hungry,” the girl smiled. I was so surprised and touched that words almost failed me. I just said a “WOW!” instead of a “Thank you!” when I took the bag.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. When I saw what was in the bag, I was overcome with a mixture of respect and gratefulness.In addition to the snacks, there was the $20 bill. What a kind and respectable family! They are a perfect example of what kindness really means. And I’m sure I will pay it forward. (145)One possible version:When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. Of course not, for I had been trapped there for quite a few hours. She then had a word with her parents and went back to their truck. A few minutes later she came back with a paper bag. “That’s Mommy’s hand-made taco,”explained the girl. “It’s so yummy that you must love it.” I was starving to death after all that exhausting work so I took the Mexico-originated food, grateful and deeply moved. Then we waved goodbye to each other.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Inside the bag was a chicken taco. The next few minutes saw my wolfing down the delicious food. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It was awesome to know that while many people tend to ignore those in need, there are some kind-hearted ones who go out of their way to lend a hand. The good deed the foreign family did will never escape me. I am going to pass it down to create a much friendlier world. (163)2020年7月山东卷One possible version:When Mrs. Meredith heard of the idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and ordered a household popcorn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, together with her three children, paid another visit to the family and told them about the popcorn plan. Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered to Mrs. Meredith’s doorstep. And it wasn’t long before they got the hang of usin g the machine to make popcorn.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Although it was a hard time and things were tight for everybody, Bernard’s business worked out quite well. He carried the popcorn on his small bike, going from door to door to sell it. People were surprised to see such a little, poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors, but eventually almost all of them would buy a bag or two. It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. (续写词数:164)2021年1月浙江卷One possible version:Paragraph 1I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Growing more panic, I began to cry. Fortunately, hearing me crying, dad came and helped me lay my head on the table, so my neck could rest for a while. Then he said tome “Listen, honey. I have to cut this pumpkin in half. ” I had no choice but to keep still with my eyes tightly closed and listening to the knife moving on the pumpkin. Moments later, my head was finally released from this horrible pumpkin cage. Then mom told me she had just filmed me managing to pull my head out of the pumpkin.Paragraph 2That video was posted the day before Halloween. Actually my mom had asked whether she could post it on the Internet, because after all I was so embarrassed and looked so silly in it. Anyway, I nodded and supported her idea. It turned out that people liked and forwarded it crazily on the Internet, only to make me an Internet celebrity. (续写152词)2020年7月浙江卷One possible version:Para 1:A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.Para 2:At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.“Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear! (续写词数:153)2020年1月浙江卷Possible V ersion:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and in stantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other.A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time.When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. “Oh my god, who is this?” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. “It’s Poppy’s new companion.” said Mom. (155)2018年6月浙江卷Possible V ersion:Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. “We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired. Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner. (续写词数162)。
新高考英语读后续写指导一、精彩高分收尾技巧(一)画面定格这样的收尾引人入胜,给人无限想象空间,让人回味无穷。
考生可以从人物动作的画面和具有特殊寓意的写景画面两个方面定格。
1.人物动作的画面定格①(2020杭州五校联考)They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it.Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother.And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother's shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.她们并肩站在那里,等待着节日的浪潮,等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。
然后女儿扫了一眼,立刻注视着她的母亲。
慢慢地,几乎是不情愿地,带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲的肩膀上,轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。
②His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch.The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora's hand.Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.他的努力得到了回报!鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐,冲向商店去买胸针。
2022年6月浙江卷读后续写真题分析一、真题再现I need to do something in my community(社区)in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do.I thought that we would just be passing our dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn’t until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner.As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I’d come face to face with the homeless: How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous, I didn’t have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned to serve the salad with the lady next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I found quite comforting.I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty. Some looked like they had totally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn’t have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右。
2024年浙江卷1月续写(路痴的自我救赎)SelfRedemption of a Person with Poor Sense of Direction(路痴的自我救赎)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eva spent the first week of high school trying to keep her head above water. One of the major headaches for her was finding her way in the huge school building. It was a sixstory building. On each floor, hallways stretched in four directions, leading to classrooms, laboratories, and teachers’ offices. Somewhere in the building, there was also a library, a cafeteria, and a gym.Having a poor sense of direction, Eva found it impossible to get around in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rooms were too much to think about, let alone mit to memory. She decided that she would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn’t exist.In her first PE class, Eva was shocked when Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to run one mile around the track outside. She searched the faces of her classmates for signs of panic. There was nothing she feared more than having to run a whole mile. To Eva, “a mile” was used to describe long distances. It was ten miles from her home to her grandfather’s, and that always seemed like a long way, even in a car!When Coach Pitt blew his whistle (哨子), Eva figured she would be left in the dust. However, while some of her classmates edged ahead, others actually fell behind. ” It’s just the beginning, “she thought.” I’ll e in last for sure. “Soon Eva began to breathe hard, with her heart pounding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind trick on herself. She stopped thinking about the word” mile. “Instead, she focused on reaching the shadow cast on the track by an oak tree up ahead. Then she concentrated on jogging to the spot where the track curved (拐弯). After that, she tried to see if she could plete her first lap. One lap turned into two, then three, then four.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
2021高考总复习读后续写真题汇总(参考范文在后)目录2021.01浙江 (1)2021.01新高考八省联考 (2)2020.06全国新高考卷(山东) (3)2019.12山东模拟高考 (4)2020.07浙江 (5)2020.01浙江 (6)2018.06浙江 (7)2017.11 浙江 (8)2017.06 浙江 (9)2016.10 浙江 (10)参考范文 (11)2021.01浙江Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage-I carried an 85-pounder back last year.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. _________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ That video was posted the day before Halloween. __________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________2021.01新高考八省联考During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. ____________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. ________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________2020.06全国新高考卷(山东)The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy - his name was Bernard - had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do.”After their mother left the roo m, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成).”The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. I’ll tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of com Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”2019.12山东模拟高考Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray (流浪) dog, until he came to me.I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the lite one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul. 1 went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest“Shall we keep him with us?" I questioned my mom.Like any other parents would, my parents first tally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. _______________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. _________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes,that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).1 radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes,but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ______________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
高中英语浙江新高考读后续写
During the fall season。
XXX Churchill。
Manitoba。
Canada。
which is known as the "polar bear capital of the world."
Photographing polar bears XXX a safe distance from these
wild animals。
When I come face to face with a polar bear。
I prefer to use a camera with a XXX。
this can be easier said than done。
as we soon discovered.
As we were preparing our dinner。
XXX followed his nose to our camp。
which was enclosed by a high wire fence。
He began to pull and bite the wire。
and even stood on his hind legs to push at the wooden XXX。
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Terrified。
Elli and XXX。
but the polar bear was XXX at him。
hit pots hard。
and fired XXX into the air。
hoping to scare him off。
However。
none of these tactics worked。
and the bear
continued to try to tear down the fence with his massive paws。
We were running out of ideas and time。
so I ed the camp manager for help.
Thankfully。
XXX was on its way。
but it would take 30 minutes to arrive。
While we waited。
I took some pictures of the bear to document the XXX。
Elli and I feared that the fence would not last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment。
The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray。
which would burn the bear's eyes but not harm him。
With no other ns。
I approached XXX him in the face through the fence。
The bear roared in anger and ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
A few minutes later。
the bear headed back to our camp。
We were still afraid。
but the bear XXX。
we heard the sound of the helicopter。
and we felt a sense of relief wash over us。
The pilot was able to XXX's noise。
and we were able to leave the area XXX was a terrifying experience。
but we were grateful that we had the knowledge and tools to XXX.
XXX。
XXX to see it。
but still had to wait for it to land and rescue us from the XXX and I had been trying to fend off the young male polar bear that had come to our campsite in search of food。
We had tried everything we could think of。
including making noise and using pepper spray。
but nothing seemed to work。
The bear kept coming back。
tearing at the wire fence and trying to get to us。
We were terrified。
but we refused to give up.
As XXX。
we continued to throw bread at the bear to keep it at bay。
Elli even managed to take some photographs of the bear from a safe distance。
hoping to capture some XXX。
XXX。
XXX distract the bear。
XXX land.
XXX distracted。
XXX up to safety。
As we flew away from the campsite。
we looked down to see the bear running away in the XXX。
We were safe。
but still shaken by the XXX we had come so close to danger。
but we were grateful for the quick response of the rescue team。
Our trip may have been cut short。
but we had a story to tell for a lifetime.
A few minutes later。
XXX。
XXX with even greater force。
We had tried using pepper spray to scare it away。
but it only seemed to make it angrier。
As we huddled together。
praying for
a miracle。
we heard the XXX。
the helicopter arrived。
and we XXX.
Grabbing our camera。
we dashed out and snapped valuable pictures of the escaping bear。
making the XXX for the whole life。
Despite the danger we faced。
XXX on film。
It was a once-in-a-XXX.
After a few minutes。
the bear returned to our XXX。
he let
out a us howl。
With great force。
he attacked the flimsy fence。
XXX him down。
so we XXX at him one by one。
XXX。
XXX fence。
which was on the verge of collapsing。
XXX.。