英语初中英语书面表达练习题及解析

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一、中考英语书面表达汇编1.(·江苏中考模拟)书面表达时间过得飞快,似乎几个月前才进入初三,现在中考却近在眼前。

请以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”为题,用英语写一篇短文,内容要点如下:1.你发现老师现在上课语速很快。

由于有太多的作业和考试,学生没有足够的时间来进行课外活动;2.有的同学以前学习不太努力,但现在他们已经意识到这次考试的重要性,并且全身心投入到学习中去;3.你在这最后一个月里的打算和安排……注意:1.短文须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2.第3要点的内容须用2至3句话作适当发挥;3.词数90左右,短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon!_______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!【答案】Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming soon! I find the teachers speak more quickly than usual in class now, and we have so much homework and so many exams that we do not have enough time for any after-school activities.Some students did not study hard enough before, but now they have realized the importance of the exam and are putting all their effort into study.During the last month, I am going to listen carefully in class and pay more attention to details, and it is also important for us to keep a balance between study and rest.I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!【解析】本文属于材料作文,要表达如今的学习和以前的区别以及你的计划和打算。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如usual,so much,after-school activities,the importance of,put ones effort into,pay attention to,it is adj for sb to do。

增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

点睛:写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

2.(·山东中考模拟)书面表达(湖南衡阳)荣光学校九年级(2)班就“环境问题”召开了一次班会,并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。

许多同学对未来表示乐观,但也有些同学对未来有些担心。

请根据表格中的内容提示,用英语写一篇短文。

提示:1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。

2.短文中应包含至少4个要点。

3.书写工整、语句通顺、连贯,词数不少于80.参考词汇:optimistic adj.乐观的 government n.政府take measures to采取措施private adj.私有的Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years.【答案】Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic(乐观的)about tour environment in ten years.In fact,they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment.As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.However,other students are worried about the future.They say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars..Therefore,we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available.But in my opinion,I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily.【解析】这篇作文要求我们就荣光中学九年级2班的同学们对环境问题所召开的一次班会情况进行介绍。

这个班会的主题是Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?,对于未来的环境,很多同学吃乐观的态度,而其他同学感到很担心。

题目中用表格的形式给我们呈现了这些内容,我们需要用正确的英语将他们表达出来,首先我们应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,应从句子的整体考虑,使用恰当的句型、词汇和短语,以简单句的结构为主,如主谓宾、主系表等,点缀几个并列句或复合句,提升文章档次。

其次注意使用正确的时态和人称,本文应以一般现在时态和一般将来时为主,注意谓语动词的正确形式。

最后应注意在语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文章的逻辑关系更加合理,文意流畅、连贯。

点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有信息,并根据表达的需要,进行了合理的想象和补充,使文意更加的充实。

短文共分为三段,前两段各描述了不同的同学们的观点,最后一段用一句话点明了自己的看法,层次清晰,叙述条理、明了。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,符合英语的表达习惯。

短文以一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主,阐明了学生们的不同观点,以简单句为主,也用了一些复合句,长短句结合,使文章富有节奏感,更有表现力。

最后短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语,如In fact, they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment.、As a result、However、hey say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.、Therefore, we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available.、But in my opinion, I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily等。