英语书面表达练习_英语考试_外语学习及解析
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一、中考英语书面表达汇编1.(·陕西师大附中中考模拟)书面表达生活中总有一些事情让人觉得无奈,被人误解、考试失利、遭遇逆境等。
请以“There is always hope ”为题,写一篇你的亲身经历及感受。
What’s your feeling? What did you learn from it?提示:①词数不少于70词②可适当添加细节使行文更加流畅③文中请勿提及真实的姓名和校名。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________【答案】There is always hopeAs middle school students, we have all taken many examinations and experienced failure as well as success. Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams.Some of us become low in spirits in the face of failure. Worse still, some students are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies. As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on.Fortunately, I got the helps of my teachers. They spared no effort to analyze the reasons for the failure and encouraged me to become more confident so that I won’t repeat the mistakes in my later examinations.I believe there is always hope. So long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如as middle school students,as well as,in the exams,some of,low in spirits,want to do,make further efforts,as a result,go on,spare no effort to do,so that,so long as,find out,make great progress,turn into等。
Worse still, some students are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies. / They spared no effort to analyze the reasons for the failure and encouraged me to become more confident so that I won’t repeat the mistakes in my laterexaminations./ So long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality.等多种复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。
在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。
它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。
所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2.(·北京中考模拟)善待他人是中华民族的传统美德。
某英文网站正在开展以“团结友善”为主题的征文活动。
假如你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,说说你对善待他人的看法,你曾经友善待人的经历,以及你的感受。
提示词语: important, help, happy提示问题:● What do you think of being kind to others?● What did you do?● How do you feel?Being kind to others is a traditional virtue (美德)of Chinese people. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very important for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in theEnglish exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term,he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.【解析】试题分析:本题要求谈谈对善待他人的看法,曾经友善待人的经历,以及你的感受。
短文要覆盖提示的所有要点,并适当发挥。
文中正确使用时态(过去时)来描述过去的经历以进行表达,使用第一人称形式进行写作。
但也要注意在总结自己的感受,谈论观点的时候要使用一般现在时表明看法。
写作亮点:短文开始就引入话题;提出了善待别人是传统美德,借助动名词做主语(Being kind to others is…),之后介绍了一段自己的经历,表意清晰,中心明确,动词过去时使用正确。
有几个短语和结构的使用堪称亮点,如:so…that…; give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help,丰富的短语交错使用,使得故事表达清晰具体,切合主题,主旨鲜明突出。
3.(·河南中考模拟)书面表达近几年来,越来越多的中国人出国旅游,但一些游客的不文明行为也成为国内外舆论关注的焦点。
直接影响着中国“礼仪之邦”之形象。
新华旅游局呼吁文明出游,游客应认真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”,请以How to be a qualified tourist 为题目写一则英语短文,谈谈自己的看法。