浙江专用2020高考英语二轮复习写作规范练二

写作规范练(三)(建议用时：40分钟)写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节(满分15分)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Josh来信询问你的暑假实践活动安排。

请回一封邮件告知你的打算。

内容包括：1．看望老人，学做家务；2.学打羽毛球；3.参加社区文艺演出。

注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Josh，I’m glad to hear from you again and really appreciate your summer plans. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Hope you will enjoy your summer vacation too!Yours，Li Hua 第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

A friend of mine whose name was John Smith had a bad memory，which made him famous.He was so forgetful that he sometimes forgot what he was talking about in the middle of a sentence.His wife had to constantly remind him about his meetings，his classes—even his meals！Once he forgot he had eaten breakfast twice，at home and at school.His wife liked to remind her neighbors，“If John didn't have his head tied on，he would forget that too！” Since Smith was a professor at a well-known university，his forgetfulness was often an embarrassment to him.It wasn't that he was not clever，as some critical people tended to say，but just very，very absent­minded.One hot summer day，professor Smith decided to take his children to a seaside town about a three-hour train ride away.To make the trip more interesting for his young children，he kept the name of the town a secret.However，by the time they arrived at the station，Smith forgot the name of the town he was planning to visit.Luckily，a friend of his happened to be in the station.Heoffered to take care of the children while Smith hurried back home to find out where he was going.The professor's wife was surprised to see him again so soon.“Oh，my dear，I forgot the name of the town.”“What? You forgot the name? Maybe one day you will forget my name！Now I'll write the name of that town on a piece of paper，and you put it in your pocket and please，please don't forget where you put it.”Satisfied that she had solved the problem，she sent her husband off again.Ten minutes later she was astonished to see him outside the house for the third time.Paragraph 1：“What is the matter no w？”asked his w ife.__________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：Hearing the cry，out rushed their neighbors，trying to find out w hat had happened.______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________写作规范练(三)写作第一节One possible version：Dear__Josh，I’m__glad__to__hear__from__you__again__and__really__appreciate__your__summer__plans.__Actually, I’ve already informed my parents of my schedule, which they think highly of.What I want to do first is have a good stay with my grandparents, learning how to do housework, like cooking and cleaning out a room.Badminton is my favorite game, and I will learn from Wang Lei, the best player in my class, and practise with him in the nearby gym three times a week. Most excitingly, I am chosen to perform in the art center of our community every Friday evening.Hope__you__will__enjoy__your__summer__vacation__too!Yours，Li__Hua 第二节One possible version：Paragraph 1：“What is the matter no w？”asked his w ife.“I just can't remember why I come back and where I am supposed to be going on such a hot summer day，”replied the professor.However，the real reason was that he forgot where he had left his children.Sensing something wrong，Mrs.Smith didn't believe his words，because whenever he told a lie，he would blink his eyes usually quickly.“Tell me the truth，”ordered his wife.“As you told me，I didn't forget where I put the name of that town，but I forget the station where I left our children！” whispered the professor，his voice trembling.“What a bad memory！” shouted the wife.Paragraph 2：Hearing the cry，out rushed their neighbors，trying to find out w hat had happened.A fight between the couple was about to start when the professor's cell phone began to ring.His friend，whose patience had worn thin，phoned to complain. The professor apologized，got into his car and drove away，leaving behind a bunch of people outside the house.Being afraid that he would make matters worse again，Mrs. Smith decided to follow him，who then called a taxi.By the time she caught up with her husband，the children were already back home safe and sound.。

第三板块书面表达书面表达是高考浙江卷的重要试题。

本板块精研真题，引领考向；高考真题感悟与模拟题演练相互加力，讲解与练习环环相扣，帮助考生高效备考，轻松增分。

年份考查点词数考纲解读2019 .6 第一节感谢信80左右浙江属于高考综合改革实验省份，实行一年两考。

依据《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明(高考综合改革试验省份试用第一版)》可知，2016年10月份开始的浙江英语新高考与自主命题的浙江卷写作部分发生了重大变化。

其变化就是由原来的短文改错和书面表达变成了应用文写作和读后续写或概要写作两篇作文。

第一篇是应用文写作。

此题型对于考生来说并不陌生，因为我们在平常的学习中经常接触到这方面的内容。

常考的应用文有：书信、日记、海报、倡议书、电子邮件、第二节概要写作60左右2018 .11 第一节求助信80左右第二节概要写作60左右2018 .6 第一节申请信80左右第二节读后续写150左右2017 .11 第一节邀请信80左右第二节读后续写150左右2017 .6 第一节邀请信80左右第二节读后续写150左右的憧憬而已。

写作是一个人语言基本素养的流露，是综合能力的显现，非一朝一夕之功，但这并不等于写作水平已定型，无提升空间。

因为英语写作的能力要求远低于汉语写作的能力要求，如果针对自己的薄弱环节训练得当、措施得力，是完全能够在短期内提升一个档次的。

层级一审题准，表达清高考作文阅卷，时间紧、任务重，一篇作文往往在一分钟内被判“生死”。

要想赢得高分，首先要赢得阅卷老师的“印象分”。

审题偏颇、错误百出的作文会让阅卷老师大倒胃口，阅卷老师会毫不怜悯地将其打入低分冷宫。

所以，写作要想取得高分，先要把写作基础抓稳。

一、准审题——为写作定好基调审题是写作的前提，是一篇书面表达成功的关键所在。

审题正确可以保证得到基本分，所以真正开始写作前，必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备工作，具体包含以下几方面：[典例] (2019·全国卷Ⅱ)假定你是校排球队队长李华。

学习资料高考英语二轮创新复习写作规范练二练习含解析班级：科目：写作规范练（二)（限时35分钟)对应学生用书(单独成册）第171页Ⅰ.短文改错(2020·石家庄二模)Dear Jim，How is everything going？Known that you are curious about Peking Opera，I’m more than glad to introduce it to you。

Dating back to late 18th century，Peking Opera becomes fully developed and recognized during the Qing Dynasty。

As a combination of music，vocal performance or dance,Peking Opera can offer audience with a feast for the eyes and ears.Performer wear colorful costumes and make。

ups,that are in line with the personalities of the roles that they play.I high recommend you visit the Mei Lanfang Theater to see a Peking Opera show.Hopefully，my introduction has helped you well understand Peking Opera than before.If you have any question,don’t hesitate to ask myself.答案：Dear Jim，How is everything going？错误! that you are curious about Peking Opera，I'm more than glad to introduce it to you。

语言运用练(二)(建议用时：25分钟)语言运用(共两节，满分45分)第一节(共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分)阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

(2019·浙江名校协作体联考)Rarely do teachers know whether they make permanent impressions on students. I know because it __1__ to my mother, a retired teacher, when she turned on the __2__ one morning in 2003.The story began in the mid­1960s. My mom was teaching __3__ at Burlingame Junior High. I knew little about her job at the time except for the __4__ redhead, Tamara, who was __5__ writing stories as a seve nth­grader in my mom’s class.I was visiting her in 2003 when my mom came out of her room with a __6__ look on her face. She’d been listening to the radio, and she had __7__ an interview with a best­selling French author, Tamara Pierce—the same name as that of the redhead my mom had taught nearly four __8__ before. My mother __9__：Could it be the same person?I __10__ the Internet and quickly found the website for the author. My heart began to beat rapidly when I __11__ it at the bottom—here was __12__ that my mother had taught a now­famous writer!“I should __13__ my writing career to my English teacher. (Bless you, Mrs. Jacobsen！)”My mother’s name was Mary Jacobsen.My mother’s immediate response to this __14__ was quiet. She was always kind and extremely __15__. I mention this story not only because it’s a wonderful __16__ of the influence teachers can have without being __17__ of it. It also makes me see my mom __18__. This story makes me consider how nice it would be if we all let our favorite __19__ teachers know their work __20__．1．A.fell B．appealedC．happened D．applied2．A.radio B．televisionC．computer D．heat3．A.French B．SpanishC．Italian D．English4．A.amazed B．excited C．gifted D．bored5．A.respectful of B．skilled at C．uninterested in D．surprised at 6．A.puzzled B．worried C．tired D．satisfied 7．A.conducted B．arranged C．received D．heard8．A.years B．decades C．months D．weeks9．A.shouted B．repeated C．wondered D．sighed 10．A.went into B．looked into C．checked D．searched 11．A.spotted B．recorded C．seized D．realized 12．A.possibility B．evidence C．news D．knowledge 13．A.return B．adapt C．owe D．show14．A.doubt B．creation C．event D．discovery 15．A.modest B．outgoing C．sympathetic D．faithful 16．A.victory B．example C．topic D．stage 17．A.worthy B．certain C．aware D．proud 18．A.averagely B．differently C．normally D．patiently 19．A.lost B．separate C．present D．former 20．A.mattered B．disappeared C．approached D．continued第二节(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

35分写作规范练(二)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

[2019·武汉调研]There may be two mainly reasons for the popularity of English in China in recent year: the economic reform and the open policy. With the development of international trade and cooperation, English as the international language play a more and more important role. The demand for people known English is increasing. The labor market needs you to do business with foreign companies, to open foreign markets, and to learn to use up advanced technology from abroad. They are also needed to participate international affairs. University students who English level is high are easily employed and well pay. This encourages people to learn English.答案与解析：There may be two mainly ①mainreasons for the popularity of English in China in recent year ②years: the economic reform and the open policy. With the development of international trade and cooperation, English as the ③aninternational language play ④plays a more and more important role. The demand for people known ⑤knowingEnglish is increasing. The labor market needs you ⑥themto do business with foreign companies, to open foreign markets, and to learn to use up ⑦advanced technology from abroad. They are also needed to participate ∧⑧ininternational affairs. University students who ⑨whose English level is high are easily employed and well pay ⑩paid. This encourages people to learn English.①mainly改为main reasons是名词，修饰名词应该用形容词，故将mainly改为main。

写作规范练 ( 三)( 建议用时： 40 分钟 )第一节应用文写作 ( 满分 15 分)假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Josh 来信咨询你的暑期实践活动安排。

请回一封邮件见告你的打算。

内容包含：1．探望老人，学做家务； 2. 学打羽毛球； 3. 参加社区文艺演出。

注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 能够适合增添细节，以使行文连接。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二节纲要写作 ( 满分 25 分 )阅读下边短文，依据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容纲要。

Small talk. Chitchat. These are the short conversations we have at parties, while we wait in line at the store, at family events or work. Sometimes we make small talkwith people we already know but not well. Often we have to make small talk with complete strangers. Many people find such small talk about random topics difficult. Somepeople say they hate it. Others say small talk is a waste of time. They may even call itidle chitchat or idle chatter, meaning it doesn ’ t do anything. They consider smalltalk not important. However, small talk is important.Small talk can open doors that may lead to larger, more meaningful conversations. Whenyou first meet someone or talk to someone you don’ t know well, it would be awkward to begin a conversation about a really deep topic such as war, politics or the meaning of life.Small talk also gives you the chance to decide if you want to get know that person better or not. Let ’ s say you make small talk with someone at a party. But they onlywant to talk about cats. You may not want to build a friendship with them unless youreally, really love cats.Small talk can also increase your feeling of understanding, or empathy, towardpeople you know but not well. Chatting with a colleague about their child may helpyou to understand more of their life outside the office. This could help build healthy work relationships.Small talk could even help your larger communities—your relationships with neighbors. Exchanging recipe with a neighbor i n your apartment building may make her noises upstairs easier to live with.And small talk may make us happier!In 2011, most commuters( 搭车来回于两地之间的人) in the city of Chicago said they would enjoy“quiet cars” where they sat alone and did not talk to anybody.Researchers at the University of Chicago then asked some participants in a study to talk to people while commuting to work on a train. They found that those who madesmall talk with strangers were happier than those who sat alone.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作规范练 ( 三 )第一节应用文写作One possible version：Dear Josh ，I ’m glad to hear from you again and really appreciate your summer plans. Actually, I ’ ve already informed my parents of my schedule, which they think highly of.What I want to do first is have a good stay with my grandparents, learning howto do housework, like cooking and cleaning out a room.Badminton is my favorite game,and I will learn from Wang Lei, the best player in my class, and practise with himin the nearby gym three times a week. Most excitingly, I am chosen to perform in theart center of our community every Friday evening. As a young pianist, I feel it myhonor to show my talent in the neighborhood.Hope you will enjoy your summer vacation too!Yours ，Li Hua 第二节纲要写作One possible version：Although small talk is disliked by many people, it is actually of vital importance in our daily life.(重点1) Firstly, small talk can not only lead to meaningfulconversations but also help you decide whether to further your relationship.(重点2) Besides, through small talk, you can build better relationships with yourcolleagues and neighbors.(重点3) What’s more, researchers also find that small talk can make people happier！(重点4)。

写作规范练 ( 四)( 建议用时： 40 分钟 )第一节应用文写作 ( 满分 15 分)假设你是李华，外国互换生Tony 想参加你校的社团以学习中国文化。

请你给他写一封邮件，内容包含：1．校社团状况介绍； 2. 活动的时间、地址； 3. 报名方法。

注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 能够适合增添细节，以使行文连接。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二节读后续写 ( 满分 25 分)阅读下边短文，依据所给情节进行续写，使之组成一个完好的故事。

It was Mother ’ s__Day and I was shopping at__the__local__supermarket with my son who was five years old，Tenyson．As we were leaving after finishing our shopping，we realized that only minutes earlier an elderly womanhad fallen__over at the entrance and hit her head on the ground badly.Her husband was with her，but there was blood everywhere and the woman was embarrassed and clearly in shock.Fortunately，a lot of people stopped to help out.While we were walking towards the scene，Tenyson became very worried about whathad happened to the elderly couple.He said to me，“ Mom，it’ s not much fun fallingover in front of everyone.” Seeing that there was a flower stall(摊位) at the frontof the supermarket ， he added，“ Why shouldn ’ t we buy the lady a flower ？ It will make her feel better.” I was amazed that he’d come up with this sweet idea. So we wentover and told the flower seller what we wanted. “Just take it ，” she replied.“ I can’t take your money for such a__wonderful__deed．”By now medical__staff had arrived，and were looking after the injured woman.There we saw the old man was also in great horror，but he tried to comfort his wife andheld her hands tightly to encourage her to be strong.We gave the flower to the woman’s husband and I told him it was from my son.At that，the old man started crying andsaid ，“Thank you very much.”He then turned to me，“ You have a wonderful son.Happy Mother ’ s Day to you.”The man bent down and gave his wife the flower，telling her who it wasfrom.Regardless of being badly__hurt，the old lady looked up at Tenyson with loveand appreciation in her eyes and gave him a little smile.And my son went down hisbody to the injured lady and tenderly said，“ Happy Mother’s Day to you，too. ”注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2．起码使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的重点词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写达成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的重点词语。

2020年4月浙江省温州市高三第二次模拟考试英语作文读后续写写作指导一、续写原题table the toys card baseball from spread on the Tim At Dana's yard sale,chose a, and asked about the price. Dana told him everything was a quarter except Nezumi a cotton toy rat. It was gray with some cotton sticking out from the hole where anso he's ten dollars. He needs a safe ear had been torn off. Nezumi is extra special,new home. Dana sighed.Tim laughed saying he didn't have ten dollars. Dana laughed, too and gave Nezumi. When Tim whispered it was sort of friend to Tim as a free gift because he was her. She then invited Tim to her birthday party the best old, Dana said old toys were thenext evening, adding that her parents were giving her a real rat for her birthday. Timwas amazed and asked if it was a live rat. Of course, Dana said.knitting a had bought for Dana. It was showed At home, Tim's mother him the gift shedoll. her knit for a scarf ) (编织线轴shaped like said a mushroom. Mom Dana could spoolbut a rat kind of person. Mom Tim sighed that Dana wasn't a knitting kind of person laughed after knowing what had happened. Together they drove to the pet store, where, one in which the rat ball Tim searched and searched and selected a clear plasticcould run around on the floor safe from cats and dogs. Tim thought of Nezumi's earand decided Dana's new rat would need this ball.The next day, Dana brought cupcakes to class. When she handed a cupcake to Tim,liked to ride Nezumi school as in backpacks. Tim Nezumi asked she if Tim brought towas at a loss because Nezumi was at home on his bed. Then Dana asked what gift he wasgiving her. Tim replied it was a surprise. In silence they sat for a while beforehe heard Dana say her parents were giving her a new bike for her birthday instead ofa live rat because they thought rats would bite things.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

写作规范练(五)(建议用时：40分钟)第一节应用文写作(满分15分)假定你是李华，请你代表学生会写信邀请外教Sharon参加你校将于下个月举办的校园艺术节，内容包括：1．活动的时间、地点及内容；2.邀请对方参加。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二节概要写作(满分25分)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

So far 106 species of lemurs(狐猴) have been identified and nearly all of them are judged to be at risk of extinction，many of them critically endangered.The habitats they depend on—mostly forest—only exist in Madagascar.“Just as fish cannot survive without water，lemurs cannot survive without forest.But less than ten percent of the original Madagascar forest is left，” said Professor Jonah Ratsimbazafy，director of the GERP，a center for primate research in Madagascar.“I believe that within the next 25 years，if the speed of the deforestation(砍伐森林) remains the same，there would be no forest left.And that means no lemurs left on this island.”The pressure to clear the forests comes from a rapidly growing but extremely poor population seeking to open up new farmland.A form of slash­and­burn agriculture sees trees cut down and bushes burnt to make way for fields of rice and other crops.The only long­term solution，according to Professor Ratsimbazafy，is to engage communities and persuade them that the forests—and the lemurs—have a value that is worth safeguarding.In one protected area，GERP is hiring local people to watch over the forest，making the point that the lemurs can be worth more alive than dead.It is also supporting new ways of living in the local village including fish­farming and bee­keeping，and teaching new techniques for rice­growing that do not require constant expansion into the forest.But there is an additional threat to the lemurs—a continuing demand for bushmeat(野味)．Although it is illegal to kill lemurs，poachers(偷猎者) are still setting traps for the animals or shooting them.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作规范练(五)第一节应用文写作One possible version：Dear Sharon，I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to be on behalf of the Student Union to invite you to take part in the annual campus art festival, which will be held in our school auditorium next month.At the art festival, both the students and our teachers will give performances, such as dancing, short plays and some English songs. What’s more, there will be a Chinese calligraphy and painting show, where you can learn to paint with a big brush pen. I’m sure you’ll be interested in it because it is a good opportunity to experience Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you could come and join us. Looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 第二节概要写作One possible version：Lemurs face extinction as their only habitats in Madagascar are disappearing.(要点1) This is because of people’s deforestation to cultivate new farmland.(要点2) The only long­term solution is to get local people in involved in protecting the forest and lemurs and developing new ways of living without damaging the forest.(要点3) However，the illegal hunting of lemurs is still a problem to be solved.(要点4)。

专题二读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

At the center of the mall was the perfect Santa with a gentle manner and a real white six－year－old granddaughter，Leah，jumped from foot to foot as we waited in line for her turn to sit on his lap．“I don’t know what to say，” Leah said，raising her neck around the kids in front of her.“Sure you do，”her mother，Leanne，said.“It’s ’s already your friend．You’ll do just fine.”“He’ll ask you what you want for Christmas，” I said.“And you just tell him.”、We’d gone over and over the toys she’d ask mother didn’t want surprises! Leah repeated the list．But a minute later，she inserted new toys she’d just spotted at the mall.“I’ve got an idea，” said Leanne，digging into her purse as the line inched forward.“Let’s write down your requests so you won’t forget them.” I couldn’t help but to see Santa was such an important appointment for a six－year－ child should have any worries bigger than the night before，on the news，I’d seen a village in the Middle East that had come under of the wounded were children just like our around the mall full of magical decorations and happy shoppers I felt safe，as safe as anyone could in the world should have that kind of security，especially at Christmas.“Okay，” Leanne said.“Now you’v e got everything you want written down you get nervous you can just give the note to Santa.”Leah nodded and took the list. She read out loud，“A Chia Pet，Moon Sand and Aquadoodle．”“Why don’t you add a fourth request，Leah，” I heard myself say.“Ask forpeace on earth．” My daughter looked a little surprised by my suggestion.“What’s peace on earth，Grandma” Leah asked.“Peace on earth means all the people in the world would get ’s the true meaning of Christmas.” Leah nodded seriously.“Yes，” she agreed.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；>2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。