5-23雅思写作真题解析+范文

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05-23 报告类题型 – 犯罪话题

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes.

Why do you think this is the case? How should children and teenagers be

punished?

题目大意：

全球青少年犯罪增加。原因？应该怎样惩罚？

关键词+思路：

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Children and teenagers + crimes: 青年犯罪是抽象概念，要找具体的原因，就要对其予以具体化，到底是怎样的犯罪行为；涉及青年的犯罪一般可以分为2种，1）暴力犯罪（打架斗殴）；2）经济犯罪（偷，抢）；有了具体的犯罪行为，才可以倒推出各自不同的成因；

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暴力犯罪：可以归咎于媒体的影响；经济犯罪：归咎于贫穷，生计所迫；

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Be punished: 同理，惩罚也是一个抽象概念，只有在罪行具体化之后，才能有相应的措施

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针对少年暴力犯罪和经济犯罪，各自提出不同的措施 •

提纲梳理如下：

范文

It is true that there is an increasing trend of juvenile delinquency in many

countries nowadays. While various hypotheses have been put forward to explain

this phenomenon, I would say that this problem can be mainly attributed to the

poverty and influences of media, and multiple measures needs to be carried out

to curb this tendency.

Out of all the factors,poverty stands out as the first culprit contributing to the

growing youth crimes rate. Children who live in poverty are less likely to have

access to good schools, which means that many of them lack the minimum

degrees and vocational skills to make a living, and therefore might embark on

the path of crimes like stealing and robbery for livelihood. Another causation we

cannot afford to ignore is the detrimental influence of movies and video games

which are saturated with violence. A long exposure to such entertainments inevitably leads to aggressive behaviors, given that adolescents are more

susceptible to the false values behind the media.

When it comes to the punishment of youth offenders, I would recommend a

combination of incarceration and rehabilitation. For those violent lawbreakers

who threat the public safety,confinement is a necessity to isolate them from

endangering the life of others. Meanwhile, for those minor criminal offenders

due to livelihood, I would recommend a sentence of community service coupled

with vocational trainings if possible, which is conducive to reintegrate them into

society and therefore live a settled life.

In conclusion, it looks to me that the pervasive juvenile delinquency is a

complicated problem that iscorrelated to the poverty and media influence，and

accordingly a multiple punishment of confinement and education to tackle this

issue.

(完整版)雅思大作文-范文30篇

1 全球化的缺点：

• 经济上，发展中国家的劳动力被剥削，资源被取用，而产品却不能够进人发达国家,国内产业受到外商和外企的冲击; •社会上，外国的产品流人一个国家,会改变人们的生活习惯和购买习惯；年轻人比较喜欢外同产品，比如说食品、衣服、电子产品和娱乐方式；

• 文化上,本土文化会被削弱，本土语言会受到威胁，文化多样性会逐步损失;

• 环境上,工业化生产和交通量的加大会增加温室气体的排放；游人的增多会对自然环境构成威胁.

Topic 1： Increasing travels between countries enable people to learn different cultures

or to increase tension between people from different countries?

外来人口的增加有利于文化的交流：

• 游客或者移民都具备经济利益和价值(commercial interest and economic value)；而外同人的停留时间是和东道国的合作密切相关的(The length of stay depends on the cooperation of the host society.)；很多当地人因此表现得非常好客和友好，这有助于文化的交流（Many local people are very friendly and

hospitable， which promote the cultural communications。）；

• 对其他的文化和人民更为了解（a better understanding of other cultures and other peoples)，改变人们对其他民族和文化的态度（alter one's attitudes towards another people or culture）;人们因此可以接受不同的文化和价值观（embrace different values and cultures），可以和平共处(create

2023年5月13日雅思大作文示范写作

一、题目：不正当的名人是否给青年树立良好榜样

Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamour and

wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example for

young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

statement?

二、范文及解析

Introduction

Idolizing stars in either entertainments or sports industry is

common among youngsters today, while this faddism has been frowned

upon by skeptics who argue that these household names are simply well

known for their charm and money instead of concrete accomplishment.

解析：如今，名人更出名的是他们的魅力和财富，而不是他们的成就，这给年轻人树立了一个不好榜样。你在多大程度上同意或不同意这种说法? 名人影响话题经典题目，最近一次出现在2020年12月。注意先探讨题目中的前提 more famous for glamour and wealth than

accomplishments是否合理,再勘查他们是否对年轻人构成负面影响。

Idolizing stars 追星 Faddism n.赶时髦

Be frowned upon 被不赞成 Skeptics n. 怀疑论者

Body 1

雅思真题作文+解析(4)

生活质量下降的原因及解决方案

要求：

【题目要求】

Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

【题目讲解】

报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段：开头

第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力

第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压

第四段：结尾

【写作范文】

In recent decades, a large number of young population surge into major cities to pursue a better life, but to their disappointment, the quality

of city life is not as high as they expected.

The fundamental reason for declining quality of life should be the centralization of various societal resources, such as hospitals, education

institutions, large companies and so forth. Centralizing fine resources in a place is originally why a city is founded, but over concentration can

lead to high density of population who come to share these resources by being employed or starting a business, and cause problems in many

雅思(写作)模拟试卷232(题后含答案及解析)

雅思（写作）模拟试卷232 (题后含答案及解析)

题型有：1. WRITING TASK 1 2. WRITING TASK 2

WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

1． The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of

some tourist facilities.

正确答案：The diagrams illustrate some changes to a small island which has

been developed for tourism. It is clear that the island has changed considerably with

the introduction of tourism, and six new features can be seen in the second diagram.

The main developments are that the island is accessible and visitors have somewhere

to stay.Looking at the maps in more detail, we can see that small huts have been built

to accommodate visitors to the island. The other physical structures that have been

added are a reception building, in the middle of the island, and a restaurant to the

north of the reception. Before these developments, the island was completely bare

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雅思(写作)模拟试卷232(题后含答案及解析)

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