专业8级改错80篇

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专业八级改错练习-80Before 1973, abortion was illegal in America unless the woman's health was threatened. In March of 1970, Jane Roe, a single woman, instituted this federal action against the District Attorney of the country. The original idea was that women who truly did not want a baby should not have to have it. __1__ Since pregnacy may be a blessed act when planned or wanted, __2__ forced pregnacy, like any force bodily invasion, is anathema to American values and traditions. As legalized abortion has become an everyday part of American life, a different side to it has emerged out. __3__ Where women once were aborting because they did not want a child, the reasons being given now were becoming very different. __4__ Abortion has turned into something that women are being coerced from boyfriends'/husbands' unwilling to be fathers, out of fear __5__ of the financial pressure, out of the panic from losing their jobs, out of panic from having to quit the school, or becoming __6__ homeless, or out of fear of their parents kicking them out into the street.Abrotion for these reasons can lead to problems which develop when a woman is unable to get round her emotional responses __7__ from the trauma of an abortion. There are women who abort and do so completely of her own free will. These women have no __8__ regrets, no remorse, but are happy they had this choice availble. __9__ But a growing number of women are speaking up about how abortion effected them adversely. __10__【答案】1.it——one. it和one用来指代时,it通常用于特指,one通常用于类指。

结合上下文,此处应当指代前文的a baby,是类指,所以应当用one.2.Since——While.这里考的是根据上下文的逻辑关系判断连接词的使用。

前后两个分句是对比pregnancy和forced pregnancy这两个方面,所以应该选用表示对比的连用词while.3.out——/.emerge一词后面不要受到中文的影响加上out;但是可以说come out. emerge 可以和介词from搭配,表示“从……中浮现出来”。

4.were——are.虽然这一句从句中是过去时态,但是主句中谈的是“现在”的情况,所以应当用现在时态。

5.^from——into.动词coerce要和介词into搭配。

coerce somebody into something,意思是“胁迫某人做某事”。

6.the——/.school 前带定冠词时通常是特指,不带冠词通常是类指。

这里说“辍学”,应当是类指,所以不能带定冠词。

7.round——through. get through 的意思是“度过(经济,感情等的)难关”,get round 有“说服”的意思,原文是说“客服流畅造成的情感创伤”,应当用get through.8.her——their.这里的代词是指前文提到的women,所以应该是复数。

9.but (are)——and.从逻辑关系来看,这一句“很高兴有这个选择”和前文“没有遗憾、不后悔”是一致的、并列的,所以不能用转折连词。

10.effected——affected. effect和affect两个词形近,而词性不同,容易混淆。

前者通常作为名词,后者是动词。

专业八级改错练习-79Several years ago, we began construction on a new church buliding. In the beginning, the workmen dug a big pit in the ground and then they began to pour footings. Footings are cementpiers under __1__ which the entire buliding rests. They are crucial to the strenth of the finished structure. After the foundation hole is dug, the footings must be poured quickly, before the composition of the soil is changed by the wind, air, or water. With a similar way in these brief early __2__ years, parents of young children have the challenging job of lying __3__ the foundation that will support family friendships in later years.Physical affectation and verbal affirmation are necessary in laying __4__ a strong foundation for friendship. Hug, hug, hug. Even if you are not __5__ raised in a hugging family, hug your kids anyway. They need the warmth of physical contact and so do you need. A young child will try to __6__ manipulate and be in the charge. He will attempt to get his own way. __7__ Since the child may not be consciously trying to control, this is __8__ what he is doing. A wise parent must not permit to happen. __9__ When a child respects his parents, he will also respect the others. __10__ 【答案】1.under——upon/on.footing是“地基”的意思,一般来说,整幢建筑物怎么可能在地基之下呢?所以,介词under应该改成upon或on.2.with——in.in a similar way 意思是“以一种相似的方式”,way表示方式时通常和介词in搭配。

3.lying——laying.lying是lie的-ing分词,而lie的意思是“平躺”或“说谎”,都和原文的意思及搭配不符。

4.affectation——affection.前者是“不自然”,后者是“感情,慈爱”。

physical affection 的意思是“通过身体语言表现出来的慈爱”。

5.are——were.文中的you指的是孩子的父母,已经为人父母的人被养大成人的过程中应该是在过去的时间。

所以这里应该用过去时态。

6.need——\.“so+代动词do+somebody”这个结构已经替代了前面句子的谓语,是一个动词性替代,做简短反应,这里加一个动词need是多余的。

7.the——\.be in charge 意思是“主管,控制”,这里是说孩子们有时候试图成为控制者。

如果说in one's charge或者in the charge of somebody,意思则是被某人看管。

8.Since——While/Although/Though.这里要理解主从句的逻辑关系,从句是说小孩子也没有意识到自己的控制欲,主句说他实际上确实有控制欲,两者不是因果关系,而是让步关系。

9.permit^——this. permit是及物动词,热切不能直接以动词不定式作宾语,必须有名词或代词作宾语,所以要加一个代词this用于指代前文所述内容。

10.the——others指“别人”,没有数量范围的限定;the others指“其他的人”,有数量范围的限定。

这里只是泛指“别人”,所以不应该加定冠词。

专业八级改错练习-78Thirty or forty years ago, when most mothers in the United States didn't have jobs, ,homes were busier places. Children went to school from 9 A.M to 3 P.M. and spent the most of the time in the house under their__1__ mother's watchful eyes. Children played, watched TV, and did homework, and while they weren't in the house, __2__ they were outside in the front or backyard or playing nearly with other neighborhood children. Though this situation still exists in some communities today, it is becoming rarer and rarer as more and more mothers have work inside the home. These "two-income__3__ families" create a different kind of home—one that is a place to stop temporarily in the midst of a busy schedule __4__ of activities. Because working parentsoften leave the house by 8 A.M and return at 5 or 6 P.M, children go to school and then a series of highly-programmed after-school activities.__5__ So when school lets out for two or three weeks at New Year's time, many parents may face with a troubling situation.__6__ Some researches show the kind of child-care problem the holidays can have for busy parents. Even in those families __7__ in which the mother is home, there is often many active __8__ neighborhood full of children playing since most of the other children are involved in activities. This results from the irony __9__ of both parents and children anxiously look forward to the end__10__ of their vacation.【答案】1. most→rest:根据上下文,应表达“除了上学以外的时间”。