Wish you happiness every day! Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, LiHua
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him/her. He/She graduated from_____________ (毕业学校). He/She is good
at _______________(擅长和技能). What’s more, _____________(进 一步介绍被推荐者情况).
In a word, ______________(总结).
No matter how reasonable my reasons are, it’s my fault to change our plan. So I hope from the bottom of my heart you can forgive me. And do you think it’s OK to change the date to the weekend of two weeks later?
Looking forward to your early reply.