新东方英语四级写作笔记2(非常完整版)
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新东⽅四级作⽂:2010年12⽉英语四级作⽂范⽂(21篇) 1. On Open Policy The open policy means that our country is open to investment, trade and technical and economic cooperation with other countries on the basis of equality and mutual benefit. The purpose of open policy is to acquire advanced technology, management skills to serve our socialist construction so as to promote the realization of the four modernizations. We must adhere to the open policy. Because economic relations between states today have become increasingly close, and no country can possibly advance behind close doors. Only in this way, can we gradually close the gap between our country and the developed countries. Through the implementation of policy, we can learn advanced technology and managerial expertise from abroad; make full use of the foreign capitals to set up great enterprises; absorb useful and healthy ideas and new knowledge of the modern civilization; and broaden our views and raise our level of competence. 2. The place of Science and Technology in Modern Life. Human life can not continue without science and technology. For many years, human society has developed with the advance of science and technology while the development of science and technology has in turn brought the process to mankind. So the life we are living now is more civilized than that of our fore fathers. The development of science and technology have brought about many changes in people's life. For example, the invention of television and space rocket have opened a new era for mankind. Through the use of TV people can hear the sound and learn the events happening thousands of miles away. Owing to the invention of spaceship and rocket, the dream of man's landing on the moon has now come true. Science and technology also play an important role in our socialist construction. We may say, our socialist construction is just like a skyscraper, while science and technology are its base. Without the base, the skyscraper can't be built. Therefore, we should try our best to contribute to the development of science and technology so as to provide a more solid base to build our country. 3. Importance of Education China, as a developing country, is determined to catch up with and even surpass the developed ones. I think that one of the best possible ways to do so is to give first priority(优先)to the development of culture, science and especially education. In modern times, when science and technology are making great progress, the education of the work force is of primary importance. Moreover, many of the success in advanced countries have demonstrated that a nation 's prosperity mainly depends on the quality of its labour force, namely those who have been well educated. In a developing country such as China, our investment in culture, education and science, and especially elementary education, must enjoy top priority. This is crucial(决定性的)for China to catch up with the developed nations in today's surging(汹涌的) waves of technological revolution. Otherwise, the gap between China and advanced countries will be widened rather than bridged. 4. Air Pollution Air pollution is one of the major problems of the modern world. A great deal of energy is needed to run the factories of modern industrial nations. Automobile, trains, planes and busses need energy, too. Nearly all of this energy is produced by burning fuels. The burning produces wastes, some of which remain in the air, causing air pollution. Scientists are finding ways to stop air pollution especially in big industrial areas and densely-populated cities. They are studying new ways of generating electricity that may be less damaging to the environment. In the meantime, many power plants are being modernized to give off less polluted material. Also, engineers try to design and locate new power plants to do minimum damage to the environment. However, it may be that we still have a long way to go before we have a "clean" world. Nearly all of the countries are trying hard to prevent and control air pollution. There indeed seems to be no end to tasks that environmentalists will be required to do. People will continually find new ways to control pollution. 5. Environmental Protection Today the quality of our natural environment has become an important issue. The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowded. We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this, life on earth cannot survive. Concerned people have made some progress in environmental protection. Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution. Still more measures should be taken to solve environmental problems. People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems, to use modern methods of birth control, to conserve(保存) our natural resources and recycle(再循环) our products. We are sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future. 6. Automobiles Automobiles, as a product of modern civilization, have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of human society.Industry needs automobiles for farming as well as transportation. Every day, automobiles drive people to and from work. On weekends automobiles take families for joyful outings. And during holiday seasons, automobiles fill the highways everywhere, even in remote areas. It could be said that the wheels of automobiles move society forward. But automobiles have also given rise to a series of problems. For example, cities are overcrowded with automobiles. They create a lot of noise and traffic accidents which disable(伤残) or kill many people each year. Worst of all perhaps is the air pollution caused by the exhaust gases produced by automobiles. Some of the gases are highly toxic(有毒的) and a serious health hazard. 7. Computer The computer is widely used in all fields of society. Today, wherever you go, you will find computers being used. For example, computers are used in universities, large corporations, and small offices, etc. It has even entered the homes of ordinary people. As it is able to store and process a large amount of information, the computer bring about great convenience and high efficiency to people of all walks of life. Computers can help people in different ways. For example, computer help scientists in analyzing data and doing complex calculation. For another example, computers are made use of by engineers in designing a plane, or a spaceship. Besides, computers may also play a great role in helping children with their lesson. Whatever you are doing, you many find computer a useful aid. However, the computer must be designed and instructed by man. What is more, it is true that computers can make decisions, but they need detailed instructions and programs prepared by humans to operate. Therefore, the computer can never replace the human brain. 8. Travelling It is exciting to visit different places. As you travel, you will see beautiful sceneries typical of the region. Besides, you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races. Finally, you can get to know the customs and living habits of the local people. Today people are so fond of travelling that tourism has become one of the faster growing industries in most countries. The main reason why people travel is, perhaps, for pleasure. For example, having worked hard throughout the weekdays, people will find a widened trip to the nearby mountains or beaches a real relaxation. For another example, spending an annual holiday travelling abroad is an especially satisfying experience for those who do not have much of an opportunity to be away from their homelands. When people return from their travel, they will generally feel fresh and energetic, ready to work harder. Travelling is also one of the best means for learning. You may have read or heard about something but you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it for yourself. Seeing is believing. Furthermore, if you area careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology, and history of the places you visit. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling. The knowledge acquired from travel, as you will have found in your life, is no less valuable than that from any influential reference book. 9. The World Population Explosion The human race has experienced a consistent increase in population since the beginning of its history. Famine and disease have done little to offset(抵消)this steady increase. Too many people are added annually to the population of the world. So both the causes of population increase and the results of having more people are worth careful study. Culture evolution is the major factor responsible for population increase. Early in human development, people invented tools to hunt animals. Later they built shelters to protect themselves. Step by step, they made life easier. As a result, fewer died from natural forces, such as harsh climate and disease. In the past, when population grew, there was unexplored territory to inhabit. But now, almost all the habitable land has been explored. The world's population may reach 8.7 billion in 2033. It is clear that world population is a serious issue that needs careful attention. Human beings are unique to solve problems through cultural evolution.(发展) Facing the world population explosion in the near future. We must carry out the birth control program in order to save the mankind and save the world. 10. Opening-door Policy is the Only Way to Make China StrongModern Chinese history leads us to the conclusion that socialism, not capitalism is best for China. But how a socialist China should look at capitalism and more importantly, make use of the better side of capitalism for its own advantage is of vital(⾄关) importance to the country.。
英语作文写作及翻译老师笔记(四六级考试)1.人文教育可以丰富学生的生活,为他们提供看待社会运转方式的不同视角。
Liberal arts education (1. 人文教育)can enrich students' life (2.丰富学生的生活)and provide them with different perspectives on(3.对……不同的视角)the way society works(4.社会运转).2.大学生以其忙碌的日常安排而出名。
除了完成作业以及应对考试之外,他们还要兼顾课外活动以及兼职工作。
University students have notoriously(1.以……而出名)busy schedules(2.忙碌的日常安排). In addition to(3.除了)working on assignments and preparing for exams, they also have to juggle (4.兼顾)extracurricular activities and part-time jobs.3.教育的作用不只在于传授知识,更在于培养学生的批判性思维以及为他们未来的职业发展做准备。
The function of education is not just about (1.不仅仅在于)imparting knowledge(2.传授知识), but more about developing students’critical thinking(3.批判性思维)and preparing them for(4.帮助某人做好准备)their future career development(5.未来职业发展).4.一般来说,大学生已经被社会视为成年人,那么在体育锻炼方面,他们应当享有相应的决策自主权。
In general, university students are treated as (1.被视为……)adults by society and should be given a corresponding(2.相应的)levelof decision-making autonomy(3.决策自主权)with respect to (4.在……方面)physical activity.。
写作模板——提纲式作文模版1Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.More importantly, 论据2.Most important of all, 论据3.In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to表决心.或From above, we can predict that 预测.模版2People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2.Last but not the least, 论据3.To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或From above, we can predict that 预测.模版3There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。
Some people are of the view that 观点1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。
2023年英语专业四级作文范文(12篇)Video Gamesgames have become mroe and more popular among the students.so i'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether students could play the video of the students think the video games can have a bad influence on younger video games are violent or about killing other players and they aer even worse than the violent films.if students play the video games,some of them will be addicted to the video games,so they will pay less attention to their studies or have no time to commuicate with others.on the other hand, 3% believe that playing video games will help us to take a good knowledge of computer,then we will become more and more creative and quickly 's more,video games makes students'brains relaxed so they can study effective.in my opinion, playing the video games is as middle school students, we should put all our into our studies.creative [kri'eitiv] adj. 创造性的popular ['pɔpjulə] adj. 流行的,大众的,通俗的,受欢迎的effective [i'fektiv] adj. 有效的,有影响的violent ['vaiələnt] adj. 暴力的,猛烈的,极端的relaxed [ri'lækst] adj. 放松的,松懈的,随意的relax的过去式2023年英语专业四级作文范文第5篇2023专四改G已尘埃落定,专四作文取消了原有的小作文(便条),大作文以材料作文为主题,约200词。
四级作文万能模板四级作文万能模板[1]议论文Along with the advance of the society more and more controversial issues have been brought to our attention, one of which is that....随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是 ____________ 。
关于是否值得 X 的问题,一直以来争论不休 .Just as the saying goes: "so many people so many minds". It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗话说, "" 。
不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。
Those who criticize X argue that X They believe that X But people who favor X on the other hand argue that.X1.To begin /start with2.furthermore/besides/in additionst but not least.批判 X 的人认为 X。
他们相信 X,不过,另一方面,赞同 X 的人则认为 X。
After a thorough consideration for my part I am in favor of the latter view that X经过深思熟虑,我较支持后一种看法,亦即 X。
[2]说明文Along with the advance of the society more and more controversial issues have been brought to our attention one of which is that X随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是 X。
新东方大学英语四级答案及解析第一部分写作【文章解析】第一段:简要描述图画内容;第二段:可以指出这幅图画所反映的问题(过度使用手机社交媒体)及造成的影响,或者第二段也可以分析此问题出现的原因有哪些;第三段:解决问题,并总结归纳,展望未来(如何正确合理使用手机社交媒体)。
【参考范文】Overreliance on One’s Mobile PhoneThe picture vividly illustrates a funny dialogue between a boy student and his math teacher. The boy is required to come up with the result of the equation on the blackboard. Instead of working it out on his own, he chooses to turn to the relative math app on his mobile phone.It’s widely acknowledged that students’ overreliance on mobile phones does much harm to their study. Firstly, it takes the place of students’ brainpower, undermining students’ thinking ability. Secondly, it corrupts students’ interest in the process of working out a problem by himself, leading them to the point that they show little enthusiasm in acquiring new knowledge. Finally, it makes students lose their competitiveness in the real world, unable to compete with students who really learn many skills by thinking, reasoning and most importantly by interacting with their teachers and peers.No doubt, overusing mobile phones should be limited in particular in the process teaching and learning in classroom. Only by systematic training of their brain and constant practice by themselves can they accomplish maturity and obtain skills necessary for success in their future life.第二部分听力理解【答案速查】【1-5】 D C A B C【6-10】 D C A D A【11-12】 C C B A C【16-20】 A B C C D【21-25】 C C A A B【26】vital 【27】battle 【28】divert 【29】usage 【30】devices【31】phenomenon 【32】community 【33】electronic 【34】similarly 【35】be beneficial for【听力原文】Section A【1】M: Father’s Day is around the corner and I’m thinking of buying a present for my dad. Any idea? I heard could get wonderful things by visiting online shopping websites.W: Yes, that’s true. If you check on some websites, there’ll be a top ten list of popular products. Then you’ll find one gift for your father.Q: What does the woman want the man to do?【2】M: What would you like for dinner? I think I’ll have rice and some vegetables. What about you?W: Don’t care about me. Just go ahead. I’m not hungry for the time being. I need to have a rest after so exhausting a busy day at work.Q: What will the woman most probably do?【3】M: The young man must have stolen something from that grocery store. See, he’s detained and being questioned by the security guard.W: Not really. He was buying something present in the store when the robbing happened.Q: What do we learn about the young man?【4】W: My head aches after staring at the computer screen for so long. I just can’t keep going with my term paper. M: Do have a rest before continuing with your work. Otherwise, you may have problems with your health before you finish your assignments. Q: What do we learn about the woman from the conversation?【5】M: How about going to a meal tonight with me, Janet? Then we can discuss how to get money for a new car.W: Ok, no problem. Our car is beyond repair. Let’s get one as soon as possible.Q: What did Janet mean?【6】W: We have to admit that social media is of much necessity. But there’re some problems with its use among the average people. M: Of course. People are just busy using those social media websites. They haven’t realized that they’ve already wasted much time on them.Q: What does the man mean?【7】W: Hi, Mr. Pond, I am so sorry that I fail to finish typing your business letter on time. I mess up your appointment with our business partners. M: Never mind. The appointment has been postponed to the next week. You have plenty of time to get it done. I’m just about to tell you the news. Q: What’s the relationship between the two speakers?【8】W: Mark has been taking six courses this term, but it seems he couldn’t handle them well. He failed four of them in midterm exams. M: Really? He deserves it. He would fare well if he hadn’t spent so much time playing online games. Q: What does the man mean?Conversation OneM: You know, I’m always a fan of pop music, and I enjoy singing. The best travel experience in my life is also related to music and singing.W: Tell me fast. What’s it all about?M: That’s two years ago when I made a trip down to New York to participate in one of music competition.W: Wow, that sounds interesting. As a student in college, it’ll be a brilliant chapter in your life.M: I know, but it took much for me to make it there. In fact, I borrowed money from my friend to buy a plane ticket to get there. I felt uncomfortable with borrowing money from others. W: I can imagine, owing a debt is not a good thing. But, anyway, you finally get to New York.M: Definitely. The competition was wonderful. All the participants enjoyed the competition. All the judges chose only the good comments on the performance of each singer.W: You must have got much encouragement from them to go on with your singing in the future.M: Absolutely. The judges are very encouraging. But the most enjoyable and exciting part of my trip there is that I made a lot of new friends who share the same hobby of singing with me.W: That’s really an unforgettable experience for you.Questions 9 to 11 are based on the conversation you have just heard.【9】Why did the man leave for New York two years ago?【10】How did the judges respond to the performance of the participants?【11】What impressed the man most during his experience in New York?Conversation TwoW: Here we have Professor Charles Binley with us today. He’s an expert on recruiting and hiring. My first question, Prof. Binley, what is the most frequent error job applicants make during a job interview?M: I’ve been in this field for many years. And I know deep in my heart that job interviews are very stressful to every applicant. However, the first error they tend to make is that they easily get too personal during a job interview.W: Too personal? You mean, they have wrong understanding of the dress code for a job interview?M: No. That means that they talk too much about their personal life stories. You know what, that’ll make the interviewers worry about whether they can keep job-related information in secret in their future job. So, my advice is that, they should avoid voluntarily offering too much personal information, just focusing on job-related topics.W: Good advice. Focus on job-related topics. Other common errors, Professor?M: The second common error is that many interviewees fail to research the company beforehand. Maybe, they’re busy taking part in one job interview after another. There’s no time for them to get enough information about the desired posts. The result is, they don’t know even the basic information about the company. I doubt that any employer prefer someone who knows nothing about what the company is all about.W: Actually, it’s easy for one to do this in this Internet age. One can get tons of information on the web. Isn’t it?M: Yes, it’s simple. But, for every applicant, it’s on the top of a must-to-do list. The last common error I want to expand on is that some applicants are passive in responding to the interviewers’ questions. That’ll make a negative impression on the interviewers. In the deep of their mind, you’ll be regarded as a passive employee in future.Questions 12 to 15 are based on the conversation you have just heard.【12】What’s the first common error made by job interviewees?【13】When you find your intended post in a company, what’re you expected to do?【14】What’s the result of being passive in responding to questions during a job interview?【15】What is mainly talked about by the two speakers?Section BPassage OneMy native land, Denmark, is a poetical land, full of popular traditions, old songs, and an eventful history, which has become bound up with that of Sweden and Norway. The Danish islands are possessed of beautiful woods, and corn fields: they resemble gardens on a great scale. Upon one of these green islands, Funen, stands Odense, the place of my birth. Odense is called after the pagan god Odin, who, as tradition states, lived here: this place is the capital of the province, and lies twenty-two Danish miles from Copenhagen.In the year 1805 there lived here, in a small mean room, a young married couple, who were extremely attached to each other; he was a shoemaker, scarcely twenty-two years old, a man of a richly gifted and truly poetical mind. His wife was ignorant of life and of the world, but possessed a heart full of love.On the second of April, 1805, a living and weeping child was born, and that was me myself, Hans Christian Andersen. During the first day of my existence my father is said to have sat by the bed, but I cried all the time. “Will you go to sleep, or lie there quietly?” it is reported that my father asked in joke. But, I still cried on. And even in the church, when I was taken to be baptized, I cried so loudly that the preacher, who was a passionate man, said, “The young one screams like a cat!” which words my mother never forgot.Questions 16 to 18 are based on the passage you have just heard.【16】How does the speaker’s hometown get its name?【17】What’s the speaker’s father’s profession?【18】What happened when Hans Anderson was baptized in the church?Passage TwoIn the 1960’s, women engaged 41 hours per week in total unpaid work, such as housework, childcare, family, and other duties, while men did 11 hours per week of total unpaid work. For women, 32 hours of this was dedicated solely to in-home work, while men contributed 4 hours a week solely to in-home work. By the year 2000, women had decreased their housework to 19 hours a week, while men increased their housework to 10 hours a week.However, women still logged 42 hours a week in unpaid labor compared to men’s 21 hours per week of unpaid labor. Interestingly, women may not resent this imbalance when they enjoy the work, and when they and their husbands feel they are especially competent at it. Some researchers do cite past research indicating that this imbalance is likely to be seen as acceptable, but much more of an imbalance is likely to be seen by one of the partners as unfair. After all, the woman performs more than 66% or the man performs more than 36%.The imbalance may be in part “real,” but also in part the result of rating differences. While men and women agree that the man does less housework in their home, wives rate their husbands as contributing 33% to the total housework, while husbands rate themselves as contributing 42%. Differences in ratings depend on who reports the housework, husband for both, wife for both, or husband and wife individually report their own housework, and what home activities are considered “housework”.Questions 19 to 21 are based on the passage you have just heard.【19】In the 1960s, how many hours did a woman spend on household chores?【20】Why does some woman love doing more housework than men?【21】What results in the differences in rating men’s and women’s share in doing housework?Passage ThreeA 31-year-old financial analyst from Queens fainted in front of an oncoming subway train. She survived but woke up to a whole new reality. “I opened my eyes and it was dark. And I thought I got home and I was waking up from a dream or something,” said Teena Katz, a subway accident victim.It wasn’t a dream. Teena Katz wasn’t home. And somehow, she wasn’t in pain. She was awake, alert, and crushed beneath a No. 7 subway train that broke both her legs.“I looked down and I saw that there was a big cut in my leg and an opening. And immediately I told whoever was speaking to me that I saw it but I wasn’t going to stare at it because I didn’t want to go into shock,” Katz said. That person was a doctor who was shocked to hear the 31-year-old financial analyst apologizing for delaying the train. Katz arrived back home Tuesday after a dozen surgeries and more than two-months in the hospital.Before the accident, her life was filled with activities like softball games, jogging, badminton. Now she faces a future of physical therapy, and necessary medical treatment. Even the mental hurdles are equally difficult to overcome.“I was also very independent. To now need help from someone for everything, is very hard for me,” Katz said. Questions 22 to 25 are based on the passage you have just heard.【22】What happened to Teena Katz?【23】What was Teena’s reaction to her wound in her leg?【24】What did Teena say to the doctor who was tending her?【25】How’s Teena’s life now?Section CThe whole world is accepting and adopting the ways towards the advancement of mobile technology. The youth is playing a 26. vital role in this. Our youth is concentrating on some bad choices and are not able to 27. battle the crisis of mobile phone abuse. Our youth are attracted to 28. divert their attention towards the internet and they are influenced and changed a lot by the 29. usage of internet. A few of them tend to use the internet or mobile 30. devices for knowledge, information, awareness and exposure but the majority of them appear to have misused the internet or mobile phones.The using of the mobile phones by young people has been a global 31. phenomenon in recent years. It is now a key part of young peoples’ daily lives, and on student 32. community it is more than a mobile phone alone. And a mobile phone is for the majority, the most popular form of 33. electronic communication. In fact, the mobile phone has turned from a technological tool to a social tool.Young people use the mobile phone in positive ways to organise and maintain their social networks. However, there are also negative impacts on young peoples’ peer relationships. 34. Similarly, the mobile phone has lead to changed atmosphere in the family, with issues of safety from a parental perspective. While functional coordination can 35. be beneficial for the family, other problems can arise such as financial difficulties, and over reliance on the mobile phone.【答案解析】1.【答案】D【分析】根据对话中女士说“If you check on some websites,… Then you’ll find one gift for your father”得出答案是C。
6大学英语四级考试写作辅导笔记六类作文行文思路六类作文行文思路1. 现象解释型现象解释型2. 问题解决型问题解决型3. 对比选择型对比选择型4. 观点论证型观点论证型5. 记叙文记叙文6. 应用文应用文现象解释型写作模板---行文思路1 Topic首段(描述图表段)首段(描述图表段)⑴From/According to the chart/graph/table/picture, we clearly learn that 总述现象. ⑵Asearly as 图表中最早的时间,当时的数据. ⑶Then 一段时间一段时间later, 图表中数据的变化/ And (However), by 图表中数据发生显著变化的时间,图表中数据的显著变化.中间段(说明原因段)中间段(说明原因段)⑷ There are many reasons accounting for 现象或变化. / Then why 产生该现象或变化.⑸Firstly ,原因一. ⑹ 进一步说明原因一. ⑺Secondly ,原因二. ⑻ Finally, 原因三. (As a result, 以上原因导致的结果. )结尾段(阐述观点段/说明影响段/说明问题段)说明问题段)⑼As to me/ As far as I am concerned, "我"的态度相关情况或是现象将来的趋势、可能带来的(好或坏的)影响或存在的问题. ⑽For one thing, 理由一/影响一/问题一. ⑾Foranother/In addition/ Besides,理由二/影响二/问题二. ⑿ In brief/ To conclude, 总结全文(经常是提出建议或作出期望.现象解释型写作模板---行文思路2Topic首段(描述现象段)首段(描述现象段)⑴From/According to the chart/graph/table/picture, we clearly learn that 总述现象. ⑵现象表现或变化(表现一、二/变化一、二.) ⑶The reason for this phenomenon are varied./ There aremany different factors influencing 该现象或其他情况/说清楚原因.中间段(说明原因/影响段)影响段)⑷Among these reasons/factors, 原因一原因一 plays a critical role. /Undoubtedly, 该现象该现象have brought great (negative) effect on 影响对象. ⑹ 进一步说明原因一/影响一. ⑺ Secondly ,原因二/影响二. ⑻ In addition, 原因三/影响三.结尾段(阐述观点段/说明影响段/说明问题段)说明问题段)⑼No doubt/From my point of view, 对该现象做出总体评价对该现象做出总体评价. ⑽ However,可能存在的问题./ it is worth noting that 应该注意的事项. ⑾ 进一步描述问题或注意事项. ⑿All in all/Therefore, 总结全文.问题解决型写作模板---行文思路行文思路Topic首段(描述问题段)首段(描述问题段)⑴Nowadays/recently/In recent years, 问题问题is becoming more and more of a problem/has become quite a serious problem in /has aroused widespread attention/concern from.⑵问题表现一/原因一/危害性一⑶What's worse/In addition,问题表现二/原因二/危害性二危害性二中间段(说明危害/原因段)原因段)⑷ It is very clear that 该问题该问题 is bringing great harm to 危害对象危害对象/There are many factors resulting in 该问题该问题 / ⑸Above all, 危害一/Among these 原因一原因一plays a vital role.⑹ 进一步说明危害/原因一. ⑺ What's more ,危害二/原因二.结尾段(说明方法段)结尾段(说明方法段)⑻Considering the seriousness of 该问题, it is an urgent thing for us to take effectivemeasures to 解决该问题. ⑼First of all 方法一.⑽进一步阐述方法一/Secondly,方法二.⑾Thirdly/In addition,方法三. ⑿ Only through these ways, can the problem be solved./To conclude,it is everyone's responsibility to take effort to solve the problem.对比选择型写作模板---行文思路1Topic首段(提出观点段)首段(提出观点段)⑴When it comes to 谈论主题, there is no complete agreement among people/differentpeople will offer different ⑵Some people take it for granted/believe 一种观点/选择⑶However,others maintain /prefer 另一种观点另一种观点/选择. 中间段(对比论证段)中间段(对比论证段)⑷ Those people who hold the first opinion/make the former choice believe 观点/选择一的理由一. ⑸ (In addition,) in their eyes, they maintain/point out 观点/选择一的理由二. ⑹ However,still others think differently/ do not agree this. ⑺In their opinions, 观点/选择二的理由一. ⑻Besides, they argue 观点/选择二的理由二.结尾段(总结观点段)结尾段(总结观点段) ⑼Weighing up these two argument/choices/preferences, I prefer/am inclined to theformer/the latter one/"我"的选择.⑽ For one thing,理由一. ⑾ For another/What's more,理由二. ⑿Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, we/ I may reasonably conclude/suggest 重申观点. / In a word, 提出建议.对比选择型写作模板---行文思路2Topic首段(提出观点段)首段(提出观点段)⑴Nowadays/In recent years, 一种现象. ⑵Some people 一些人的看法或做法,while others, 另一些人地看法或做法. ⑶ As to me, I prefer to/ am in favor of the former/latter.中间段(反面论证段)中间段(反面论证段)⑷ Of course, "我"不赞同观点的合理性. ⑸ For example, 支持其合理性的例./进一步阐述其合理性. ⑹ But it doesn't mean/it is worth noting that "我" 不赞同不赞同观点的不足. ⑺From my point of view/In my view, 我的不同观点.结尾段(正面论证段)结尾段(正面论证段)⑻The following reasons can account for/contribute to/support my argument. ⑼ First,理由一. ⑽ A good example to illustrate,支持理由一的例子/进一步说明理由一. ⑾ Second, 理由二.⑿ To conclude/From the foregoing,重申观点.观点论证型写作模板---行文思路行文思路Topic首段(提出观点段)首段(提出观点段)⑴Nowadays still many people believe/For years many people have such thought that 与论点冲突的背景观点或现象.⑵进一步说明背景观点或现象. ⑶However, 论点. ⑷The following reasons can support the argument.中间段(说明危害/原因段)原因段)⑸Undoubtedly, 论据一. ⑹进一步说明论据一. ⑺ Furthermore/Moreover,论据二. ⑻ For example ,支持论据二的事例/进一步说明论据二. ⑼ In addition/ What's more, 论据三.结尾段(总结观点段)结尾段(总结观点段)⑽ All mentioned above tell that 重申观点. ⑾ 进一步阐述论点. ⑿Therefore, we should正确态度或做法.记叙文写作模板---行文思路1Topic首段(描述背景段)首段(描述背景段)⑴背景事件⑴背景事件will come soon, 事件的重要性或意义.⑵There is no more appropriate time than this for 相关人员的态度或行动.⑶So on this special occasion, 我的愿望或打算.中间段(叙述经过段)中间段(叙述经过段)⑷ Now I still remember clearly 主题事件. ⑸Firstly ,原因一. ⑹ 进一步说明原因一.⑺Secondly ,原因二. ⑻ Finally, 原因三. (As a result, 以上原因导致的结果. )结尾段(阐述观点段)结尾段(阐述观点段) ⑼As to me/ As far as I am concerned, “我”的态度相关情况或是现象将来的趋势、可能带来的(好或坏的)影响或存在的问题. ⑽For one thing, 理由一/影响一/问题一. ⑾Foranother/In addition/ Besides,理由二/影响二/问题二. ⑿ In brief/ To conclude, 总结全文(经常是提出建议或作出期望.)记叙文写作模板---行文思路2Topic首段(描述背景段)首段(描述背景段)⑴简要介绍事件发生的时间, I witnessed 总述目击事件.⑵ 事件给人印之处, which isstill vivid in my mind./该事件was so 事件的突出特点that I was left a deep impression.中间段(叙述经过段)中间段(叙述经过段) ⑶It was/happened 事件开始时间,when 当时的情形. ⑷ ( Suddenly, ) 事件的发展一. ⑸ 事件的发展二. ⑹ 事件的发展三. ⑺As a result, 事件的最终结果或影响.结尾段(阐述观点段)结尾段(阐述观点段)⑻ 总述该事件带来的影响/事件产生的原因.⑼For one thing, 影响一/原因一/措施一. ⑽进一步说明影响一/原因一/措施一. ⑾For another, 影响二/原因二/措施二. ⑿Therefore, 总结全文(提出建议或作出期望).Or Such an incident teaches us an important moral, that is “我的感受或得到的启示. 感受一/行动一. Furthermore,感受二/行动二. In conclusion,I do believe that 总结全文。
实例二99年6月真题
Reading Selectively Or Extensively?
Outline: 1.有人认为读书要有选择
2.有人认为应当博览群书
3.我的想法
①11分
When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books
Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,
on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we interested, and it would be helpful for us.
On another hand. Someone’s interesting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn’t reading at only one level.
I confirmed all of these ideas were g ood but weren’t wise.
As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Don’t treat these books with reckless abandon.
The best technology of reading is connect.
失分原因:分段太多,语法错误太多
④14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.
(转)Paragraph III:(1)承上启下的过渡句;
(2)提出另一种观点或缺点;
(3)本段的支持性分论点
(4)本段总(可以省略)。
(合)Paragraph IV:(1)平衡两种看法;
(2)给出自己的观点。
④14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(启)
注:1.第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read a ll the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.(承)
注:1.本段总分总结构
2.they argue that = they think that
3.with the development of...
4.what's more 递进关系,moreover
责任
But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading. Directions: Write a composition about 120/150 words based on the following outline:
1)当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象
2)诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实
2002.6
Topic: Student Use of Computers (at least150 words)
Average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week
1、上图所示为1990、1995、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况,请描述其变化;
2、请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明);。