新托福写作易犯错误示例与解析
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托福写作中的低级错误汇总
托福写作中的低级错误汇总托福写作中低级错误其实也是很常见的，而这些问题在托福写作评分标准中也是着重看重的，一个不好就会让分数低下来，那么下面托福写作经验就介绍一下。
1. 词汇失误Example 1: Reading can increase my words, rich my knowledge and enlarge my eyesight。
托福写作经验提到这是考生在描述读书的好处，其优点在于在句子结构方面尽力打造排比结构。
然而，词汇失误严重影响句子理解和整体效果。
“读书可增大词汇量，增长知识，开阔眼界。
”本句中词汇失误频繁出现，如：increase，words，rich ;enlarge my eyesight令人费解。
建议可做如下修改：Revised: Reading can enlarge my vocabulary, enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons。
Example 2: Sometimes I play with friends from my school。
通过托福写作评分标准可以看出此句是典型的Chinglish，在中文中，可以说“和朋友玩”，但是不可对应为英文的“play with friends”，其意思是把朋友当成了玩具。
play 用作不及物动词时，常接介词with，表示“玩;玩耍”。
例如：The little boy is playing with a yoyo。
Don't play with fire. It is very dangerous。
2.用词不当学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是托福作文中不能犯的。
In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.——problems应改为questions这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
托福写作：这些小错误你遇到了吗？(2)
托福写作：这些小错误你遇到了吗？（2）托福写作错误一：标点问题例：I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.在句子中使用了太多的句号。
托福写作错误二：重复冗余例：Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。
托福写作错误三：单数/复数例：Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.单词需要从单数变为复数，或者由复数变成单数。
单数可数名词不能单独使用，应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词（a、the、my、his、her、Gary’s、no、any、1、3、50、most等）。
托福写作错误四：主语、动词或宾语有问题例：I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本结构有问题，缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者某些重要成分重复。
托福写作错误五：语气与文章不符例：I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.语气与文章其他部分不相符，可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
出国考试：托福写作不可犯的7大类语言错误优选份
出国考试：托福写作不可犯的7大类语言错误优选份出国考试：托福写作不可犯的7大类语言错误 1出国考试：托福写作不可犯的7大类语言错误1. 用词不当原：The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society。
改：The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society。
评：groupwork是“分组”或者“小组集体任务”的意思。
这位同学原本想说teamwork“团队合作”，却用了一个看起来很像，但实际完全不同的词，表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。
原：You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture。
改：You will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture。
评：dangerous表示所修饰的对象是“带来危险的，有危险性的”，而be in danger才是“身处险境”的意思。
到底谁才是威胁呢?原：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students toutilize what they learned in class, might effect their further development。
改：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development。
托福写作十大丢分点
托福写作十大丢分点1、用词不当学生们在新托福写作备考中或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。
In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.problems应改为questions。
2、拼写错误这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的手误，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy orcertain answers.judgement应改为judgment。
3、乱用大词First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。
该句子还有以下问题：1该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;2although和but是不能连用的。
3指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么。
4、表达中式The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are akind of vocation.该句的表达过于中式化。
托福作文中常犯错误归纳
托福作文中常犯错误归纳1.结构不平行例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books. 当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
2.不知所云例：Many panies began using puters mouth.3.段落过长，不分段主语与动词一致问题 She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time. 主语和动词在数方面不一致。
4.句子别扭 We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed. 措辞过长或不清。
换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用缩写在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can’t，don’t，it’s， we’ll， they’ve等等) ，而应当使用单词完整形式 (cannot， do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。
6.关联词语重复 Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores. 不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。
7.句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school. 句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。
这是桓龇浅? 常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。
8.不要使用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式的场合。
英语考试作文-托福写作22大失分点,快检查一下你躺枪没？
英语考试作文托福写作22大失分点，快检查一下你躺枪没？托福写作中存在一些极其容易出错的部分，稍有不慎就会造成失分。
为各位梳理了托福写作中常见的22处失分点，请大家对照检查一下，有则改之无则加勉。
1.结构不平行例子：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.将一系列的单词连接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
2.不知所云例子：Many companies began using computers mouth.3.段落过长，不分段，主语与动词一致问题例子：She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词不一致。
4.句子别扭例子：We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辞过长或不清。
换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。
5.拼写错误主语、动词或宾语有问题例子：I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本结构有问题，缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。
6.语气与文章不符例子：I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.语气与文章其他部分不相符，可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
托福写作常犯的一些基础性错误
托福写作常犯的一些基础性错误一、用词不当例如：In the show, if participators answer twenty problemsthat the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize. problems应改为questions。
二、拼写错误这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
例如：This arguement is not valid.arguement应该为argument三、乱用大词First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。
该句子还有以下问题：1.该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;2.although和but是不能连用的;3.指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么。
四、中式表达例如：The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kindof vocation.五、表意重复1.They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
托福写作考试中4个常见的不协调错误
托福写作考试中4个常见的不协调错误在新托福的写作中，假如规律不好或者结构没有构思好就有可能造成写作文章的混乱，而也有不少考生本身也存在许多弱势点，比如语法不熟识，导致写作文章的不协调。
下面是我整理的托福写作考试中4个常见的不协调错误，盼望大家仔细对待这些问题。
托福写作考试中4个常见的不协调错误主谓不全都例：When one have money ,he can do what he want to.(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么。
)剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。
本句是典型的主谓不全都。
改为：Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do).词性不全都“词性不全都”常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。
例：None can negative the importance of money.剖析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。
改为：None can deny the importance of money.句子前后不全都托福写作中的句子前后不全都是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通，这也是考生常犯的毛病。
例：The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.剖析：The fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。
It 与things 在数方面不全都。
改为：Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.指代对象不全都这里的指代对象不全都主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不全都。
把这一项单独提出来是由于大家实在很青睐这一部分：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，由于她要她做她的伴娘。
托福写作常见问题与解答
托福写作常见问题与解答在托福考试中，写作部分常常让考生感到困扰。
本文将探讨托福写作中常见的问题，并提供相应的解答，帮助考生更好地应对这一挑战。
一、语法错误语法错误是托福写作中常见且严重的问题之一。
考生可能会在时态、主谓一致、冠词使用等方面出现失误。
时态混乱是一个突出的问题。
例如，在描述过去的事件时，错误地使用了现在时态，或者在叙述一般情况时，没有保持时态的一致性。
主谓不一致也时有发生，如“ The number of students is increasing, but the quality of education are not improving ” 这里主语是“ The number of students ”，是单数概念，谓语动词应该用“ is ”，而“ the quality of education ”也是单数，谓语动词应该是“ is not improving ”。
冠词的错误使用，如“ I had a wonderful day I went to a park and sawan beautiful flower ” 这里“ an beautiful flower ”应该是“ a beautifulflower ”，因为“ beautiful ”发音不是以元音开头。
解决语法错误的方法首先是要系统学习语法知识，掌握常见的语法规则和易错点。
其次，在写作练习后，认真检查和修改自己的文章，也可以请老师或同学帮忙批改。
二、词汇匮乏词汇量不足或使用不当会影响文章的质量和表达效果。
一些考生在写作时反复使用相同的词汇，导致文章显得单调乏味。
例如，在表达“重要”这个意思时，通篇只使用“ important ”，而不知道“ significant ”“ crucial ”“ essential ”等同样可以表达该意思的词汇。
另外，词汇使用不当也较为常见。
比如，“ The accident caused a lotof damages ” 这里“ damages ”通常用于复数形式表示“损害赔偿金”，而表示“损害、破坏”应该用“ damage ”。
新托福写作易犯错误示例与解析
今天小编整理了新托福写作易犯错误示例与解析,快来看看有没有踩雷吧，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。
新托福写作易犯错误示例与解析1.用词不当学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。
In the show， if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly， they will get five hundreds thousand dollars as a prize.——problems应改为questions2.拼写错误这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
In conclusion， issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one， requiring subjective judgement， consequently， there are no easy or certain answers.——judgement应改为judgment3.乱用大词First of all， children can earn money from their jobs， although there isn‘t too much， but they will keep their salary gingerliness.这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。
该句子还有以下问题：1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;2)although和but是不能连用的;3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;4.表达中式The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion， it is quite difficult to compare parents toteachers because parents are a kind of people， teachers are a kind of vocation.句子中划线部分的表达过于中式化。
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新托福写作易犯错误示例与解析今天了新托福写作易犯错误示例与解析,快来看看有没有踩雷吧，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。
1.用词不当学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。
In the show， if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly， they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.——problems应改为questions2.拼写错误这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
In conclusion， issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a plex one， requiring subjective judgement，consequently， there are no easy or certain answers.——judgement应改为judgment3.乱用大词First of all， children can earn money from their jobs，although there isn‘t too much， but they will keep their salary gingerliness.这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。
该句子还有以下问题：1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;2)although和but是不能连用的;3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;4.表达中式The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some oasion， it is quite difficult to pare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people， teachers are a kind of vocation.句子中划线部分的表达过于中式化。
5.表意重复They shocked their friends， devastated their families，crushed their best friends.前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
The show is so pelling but attractive.pelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。
6.固定用法错误To some extends， I agree with the author‘s general assertion that if parents also have a prehensive sense of professional knowledge.——To some extends应改为To some extent中华考试网7.例证夸张For example， when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer， the doctor cannot ___ the truth， for the truth may cause the patient‘s immediate death.虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。
8.成分多余Aording to a prehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.该句中的shows that是多余的成分。
9.词性混乱However， the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing.10.文体不正式All of the players gonna to ___ the truth in attempt to win $500，000.——gonna过于口语化。
In addition， I think people shoudn‘t always ___ the truth to others.——在托福作文中尽量不要用缩写，这里应该写should not.11.两个独立句子间无连词Another point is that young people are more aggressive and energetic， and it‘s suitable for them to choose such jobs， which will provide them with rich experience that is essential for their future suess.这个错误犯的频率相当高，一定要注意。
12.时态错误托福大作文一般使用现在时态，除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态。
Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.—— claimed应该改为claim13.不知所云They also mention that in modern society there are too much entertainment bothering them as the huge gap lying between them and the suess.这句话完全不知道是什么意思，逻辑混乱，这是中国学生经常犯的错误。
托福写作地道表达之名词化简单说，名词化即是动词或形容词被用作名词的现象。
比如动词转成名词：discovery->discovery， move->movement，refuse->refusal，又比如形容词转成名词：careless->carelessness， difficult->difficulty，intense->intensity。
那么什么情况下，我们需要进行名词化呢?A 谓语动词的宾语部分原句：I do not know either what she meant or what he intends.名词化：I do not know either her meaning or his intentions.B 结合被动形式原句：If people decide without enough persuasive information，...名词化：If a decision is made without enough persuasive information，...C 取代诸如从句中“the fact that”的用法原句：The fact that I denied what he aused me of impressed the jury.名词化：My denial of his ausations impressed the jury.更好的名词化：a. When I denied his ausations， I impressed the jury.b. In denying his ausations， I impressed the jury.D 名词化部分用在there is/are的后面原句：We demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.名词化：There is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.原句：The floods considerably eroded the land.名词化：There was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.然而，有些时候，在我们的思维方式中认为理所应当使用“名词化”时，老外认为是没有必要的。
比如：A 名词化部分跟在动词后面原句(名词化“冗余”)：The police conducted an investigation into the matter.改后：The police investigated the matter.B 名词化部分作为主语原句：Our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.改后：We discussed a tax cut.C 连续进行名词化原句：a. First， she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.b. There was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.改后：First，she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.D 连接部分名词化原句：Their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel losses.改后：They ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.原句：The instability of the motor housing did not preclude the pletion of the field trials.改后：Even though the motor housing was unstable， the research staff pleted the field trials.以上这些情况是我们中国学生很常见的名词化缺失或名词化滥用的例子。