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"When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.When people succeed, it is because of hard work, but luck has a lot to do with it, too. Success without some luck is almost impossible. The French emperor Napoleon said of one of his generals, “I know he’s good. But is he lucky?" Napoleon knew that all the hard work and talent in the world can't make up for bad luck. However, hard work can invite good luck.When it comes to success, luck can mean being in the right place to meet someone, or having the right skills to get a job done. It might mean turning down an offer and then having a better offer come along. Nothing can replace hard work; but working hard also means you're preparing yourself for opportunity. Opportunity very often depends on luck.How many of the great inventions and discoveries came about through a lucky mistake or a lucky chance? One of the biggest lucky mistakes in history is Columbus' so-called discovery of America. He enriched his sponsors and changed history, but he was really looking for India. However, Columbus' chance discovery wasn't pure luck. It was backed up by years of studying and calculating. He worked hard to prove his theory that the world was round.Success that comes from pure luck and no hard work can be a real problem. For example, consider a teenage girl who becomes a movie star. Imagine she’s been picked from nowhere because of her looks. She is going to feel very insecure, because she knows she didn't do anything to earn her stardom. On the other hand, think about an actress who’s spent years learning and working at her craft. When she finally has good luck and becomes a success, she will handle stardom better. She knows she earned it.People who work hard help make their own luck by being ready when opportunity knocks. When it comes to success, I think that hard work and luck go hand in hand.Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?There are a lot of advantages to having friends who are different from you. For one thing, they'll give you a different way of looking at the world. Friends who are different can introduce you to foods, music, politics, and books you've never tried before. If you're a spontaneous kind of person, someone who is more scheduled can help you get better organized. You, on the other hand, can help them loosen up a little bit, and do things more on the spur of the moment.Someone who is different from you won't have the same reaction to situations. This can be a big help. If you're the kind of person who gets very impatient waiting for your meal in a restaurant, it helps to have someone calm with you. Your friend can help you keep your temper. If you're a little timid about standing up for yourself, a more assertive friend can help you develop a little more self-respect.However, there can also be advantages to having friends who are similar to you. You usually enjoy doing the same things, so you don't have to argue about what you want to do. Sometimes it’s fun experiencing new things. Other times, it’s more fun doing what you know you'll enjoy.All things considered, I think I'd like to have a lot of acquaintances who are different and a few close friends who are similar to me. That seems the best of both worlds."When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. "Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.原文(4.5分左右)Many people attribute others' success to luck. However, I agree with the quotation that success comes only through hard work and not through luck. I ascribe my decision to the reasons elucidated as follows.Each of us has our own goals and ambitions in life for which we continually strive. When we reach the determined goal, we call it success. Thus, success is the end product of long-term effort. Consider the case of a student pursuing a high score in the final exams. The student would have to work hard fight from the beginning of the year. He/she needs to get acquainted with the subjects, topics and the logic. Only through hard work can he/she excel in the subject and eventually get a high score. Should the student fail to concentrate on studies at first and then try to cram towards the end, the result may not be favorable. Burning the midnight oil could never equal planned work.Similarly, we can take the case of an athlete preparing for an upcoming event. The athlete can never depend on luck to win the event for him/her. He / she has to put in a lot of hard work to attain the stamina and the energy sufficient for the event. If it were true that success comes out of luck, all the athlete needs to do is to go straightaway to the field and voila success would be his/hers. But, that is not what occurs in reality. Only sheer hard work and planned efforts can bring ultimate success.It is the common criterion for everything in life that success comes through hard work. Very true is the saying that hard work never goes unrewarded. Thus success is sweet and lasting to those who really strive for it. But, only momentary satisfaction is ascribed to those who rig it out.Hence, we can clearly say that success comes purely out of hard work and luck becomes a mere coincidence. Also, there is no substitute for hard work and without it success becomes a part of fantasy. We can conclude this reasoning with the claim that hard work alone can bring success and nothing else can equal it.专家修改(6分)(1) Many people attribute success to luck. (2) However, I agree with the quotation that success comes only through hard work and absolutely not through luck.(3) It takes non-stop and even painful efforts in order to succeed. Relying on Goddess Luck will get you nowhere at all.(4) Success is the fruit borne only after long-term efforts. (5) Each of us has our goals and ambitions for which we are continuously striving. (6) Only when the preset once-far-away goals finally jump into our vision and within easy reach can we enjoy the happiness of success. (7) Without one hundred percent hard work, a person can hardly excel in his or her field or attain success. (8) For example, a student who fails to concentrate on studies and at the last moment tries to cram, hoping to get away with it, finds the result more often than not frustratingly unsatisfactory. (9) Only sheer hard work and planned efforts can bring ultimate success.(10) Luck is definitely unreliable. (11) Anyone dreaming to realize successthrough sheer luck is doomed to fail and be fooled by Fate. (12) We can take the case of an athlete preparing for an upcoming event. (13)The athlete can never depend on Goddess Luck to win the event. (14) He/she has to work terribly hard so as to obtain the stamina and energy needed for success. (15) If it were true that success comes out of luck, all the athlete needs to do is to pray to Goddess Luck and then go straight to the field and then success would be his/hers. (16) But, that is not what occurs in reality. Ironically, the opposite usually happens.(17) It is the common criterion for everything in life that success comes only through hard work. (18) Very true is the saying that hard work never goes unrewarded.(19) Thus success is sweet and lasting to those who have really strived for it. (20) But, only momentary satisfaction is felt if the success is obtained by accident. (21) Hence, we can say for sure that success comes purely out of hard work and luck is a mere coincidence. (22) Also, there is no substitute for hard work and without it success is nothing but fantasy. (23) To conclude, hard work alone can bring success and nothing else can equal it.例文评论一、文章类型:观点选择型二、语言运用1.句(3)优秀:It takes non-stop and even painful efforts in order to succeed. Relying on Goddess Luck will get you nowhere at all.评论:这一句是原文中没有的。