浙江省高考英语二轮复习 写作提升练(三)读后续写

高考英语读后续写（六种开篇+四种主旨升华公式+佳句积累）1副词开头我们先来看两个例句：Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass.他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。

Joyfully, he skipped up the street.他很高兴地跳过了街道。

这里的carefully和joyfully把后面的两个动作“step踩”和“skip跳”描写的更加细致和生动。

我们来看2016年高考真题。

故事大致是这样的：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，迷路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次救援但没有看见她，她感到很失望。

第一段开头的提示句是：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.意思是：没有直升机来了，天又黑了。

同学们，可以想一想，我们该怎么接下来写开头呢？我们来看看下面的写法：Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.立刻，一片黑暗笼罩着森林。

这里就用了：时间副词immediately衔接+ 环境描写，烘托了森林里迷路的紧张气氛。

2形容词短语开头我们先看两个例句：Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.他好奇地想知道里面是什么，踮着脚尖走进了黑暗的洞穴。

这里的“Curious to know what was inside, 很想知道里面有什么东西”就是形容词短语，表明他进洞穴的原因。

相当于：He was curious to know what was inside, and he tiptoed into the dark cave.Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.一句话也说不出来，他就愣在了原地。

读后续写技能保分练(三)Writing 1阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

[2020·青岛市高三练习诊断]One spring morning many years ago, I had been prospecting for gold along Coho Creek. As I emerged from a forest, I froze in my tracks. No more than 20 paces away in the bog (沼泽) was a huge Alaskan timber wolf—caught in one of Trapper George's traps.Old George had died the previous week of a heart attack, so the wolf was lucky. Confused and frightened at my approach, the wolf backed away, pulling hard on the trap chain. Then I noticed something else: It was a female, and her teats (奶头) were full of milk. Somewhere there was a den (窝) of hungry pups waiting for their mother.From her appearance, I guessed that she had been trapped only a few days. That meant her pups were probably still alive. But I suspected that if I tried to release the wolf, she would turn aggressive and try to tear me to pieces.So I decided to search for her pups instead and began to look for incoming tracks that might lead me to her den. Fortunately, there were still a few remaining patches of snow.The tracks led a half mile through the forest, and I finally spotted the den. There wasn't a sound inside. Wolf pups are shy and cautious，and I didn't have much hope of tricking them outside. But I had to try. So I began copying the squeak (吱吱声) of a mother wolf calling her young. No response.A few moments later, after I tried again, four tiny pups appeared. I extended my hands, and they tentatively (试探性地) sucked at my fingers. Perhaps hunger had helped overcome their natural fear. Then, one by one, I placed them in a bag and headed back.When the mother wolf spotted me, she stood straight. Possibly picking up the scent (气味) of her young, she let out a sorrow-stricken cry. I released the pups, and they raced to her. Within seconds, they were slurping (出声地吃) at her belly.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。

2022届浙江高考英语总复习-读后续写专项训练21.The worst tourist (旅行者) in the world may be Nicholas Scottie of San Francisco. Once he flew from the US to his hometown in Italy. He had some troubles on his journey. The night before, he stayed up late to deal with some emails, so when he boarded on the plane he decided to have a sleep. Hours later, he was woken up by some noise and he found the plane had landed.As he thought he had arrived home, Mr. Scottie got off the plane. He thought he was in Rome. However, the truth was that the plane made a one-hour stop to get oil at Kennedy Airport of New York.Mr. Scottie waited at the airport for some while, but nobody was there to meet him, he thought maybe they were held up by heavy traffic which was very common in Rome. He decided to give his family a phone call. Unfortunately, he found he had left his cellphone at the hotel in San Francisco. Therefore, he decided to go home by himself. While he was walking in the city, Mr. Scottie found that the old “Rome” had changed a lot. Many old buildings were replaced by high modern ones. He also found that many people spoke English instead of Italian and that many street signs were written in English. What made him most surprised was that drivers’ awareness of traffic safety was improved and he hardly found any driver speeding on the road. All cars were driving in line. The condition was widely different from that in the past. He was feeling proud.Mr. Scotti knew very little English, so he asked a policeman (in Italian) the way to the bus station. He happened to meet a policeman who was also born in Italy and answered him in the same language. Mr. Scotti thanked him, left, quickly found the bus station and got on a bus. He looked outside of the bus window.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

语法填空+小作文+读后续写组合训练32018年浙江卷语法填空：阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

Few people I know seem to have much desire or time to cook. Making Chinese 1．(dish) is seen as especially troublesome. Many westerners 2．come to China cook much less than in their own countries once they realize how cheap 3．can be to eat out. I still remember 4．(visit) a friend who’d lived here for five years and I 5．(shock) when I learnt she hadn’t cooked once in all that time.While regularly eating out seems to 6．(become) common for many young people in recent years, it’s not without a cost. The obvious one is money; eating out once or twice a week may be 7．(afford) but doing this most days adds up. There could be an even 8．(high) cost on your health. Researchers have found that there is a direct link between the increase in food eaten outside the home and the rise in 9．(weigh) problems.If you are not going to suffer this problem, then I suggest that the next time you go to your mum’s home 10．dinner, get a few cooking tips from her. Cooking food can be fun. You might also begin to notice the effects not only on your health but in your pocket.1. 2. 3. 4. 5.6. 7. 8. 9. 10.提纲类作文：假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。

2023年3月浙江英语高考读后续写范文全文共10篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: My Story of the 2023 Zhejiang English High School ExamHi guys! I'm so excited to share my story of the 2023 Zhejiang English High School Exam with you. It was such a memorable experience, and I can't wait to tell you all about it!So, the exam started with a reading section, and let me tell you, those passages were no joke. But luckily, I had studied hard and was able to answer all the questions without too much trouble. The questions were tricky, but I remembered to read each passage carefully and underline the key points to help me find the answers.Next up was the writing section, and I decided to write about my favorite hobby – playing soccer. I wrote about how soccer helps me stay active and healthy, and how it brings me closer to my friends. I made sure to use lots of descriptive language and to check my grammar and spelling carefully.After the writing section, there was a listening test. I was a bit nervous about this part because sometimes the recordings can be a bit fast. But I listened carefully and was able to answer all the questions correctly. Phew!Finally, the speaking test. This was probably the most nerve-wracking part of the exam for me. I had to talk about a topic for two minutes straight, without any notes. I chose to talk about my dream of traveling around the world, and I spoke about all the places I wanted to visit and why. I also answered some questions from the examiner about my travel plans. It was tough, but I tried my best to speak clearly and confidently.And that was it! The exam was over, and I felt a mix of relief and excitement. I was proud of myself for getting through it, and I hoped that my hard work would pay off.Now, I just have to wait for the results to come out. I'm keeping my fingers crossed and hoping for the best. But no matter what happens, I know that I gave it my all, and that's all that matters.Thanks for listening to my story, guys! I hope it inspired you to work hard and never give up on your dreams. Good luck to all of you in your exams, and remember – you've got this!篇2Oh my goodness, I just finished the English test for the Zhejiang high school entrance exam in March 2023, and it was so hard! But I tried my best and now it's time for the continuation writing part. Here goes nothing!After the bell rang, signaling the end of the exam, I quickly handed in my paper and walked out of the classroom. My heart was pounding as I waited for the results to come out. I had studied so hard for this test, and I really hoped I did well.A few days later, the results were finally posted. I scanned the list nervously, looking for my name. And there it was – I had passed the exam! I was so relieved and excited, I couldn't stop smiling.But then I remembered the continuation writing part of the test. I had completely forgotten about it in all the excitement. I quickly found the question and sat down to write.The prompt was about a magical adventure, where I had to use my imagination to create a story. I wrote about a girl who discovered a hidden portal in her backyard that led to a mystical land filled with unicorns and fairies. It was so much fun letting my creativity run wild on the page.As I finished my story, I felt a sense of pride wash over me. I had put my heart and soul into that exam, and I was glad to see it pay off.In the end, I learned that hard work and determination really do pay off. And even though the exam was tough, I knew that I had given it my all. I couldn't wait to see what the future held for me, and I was grateful for the opportunity to showcase my skills and abilities.So, here's to the next chapter in my academic journey –bring it on!篇3Title: My Adventure at the 2023 Zhejiang English High School ExamHey guys! So, last month I took the Zhejiang English High School Exam and it was a super crazy experience! Let me tell you all about it.First of all, the reading section was no joke. We had to read this super long passage about global warming and answer a million questions about it. I felt like a detective trying to find all the clues in the text. But you know what? I think I nailed it!Then came the writing section. We had to write a story based on a picture they showed us. It was a picture of a cat wearing a crown and sitting on a throne. I mean, how cool is that? I came up with this epic tale about a cat who became the king of all the animals in the forest. It was so much fun to write!After that, we had the listening section. They played all these recordings of people speaking in English and we had to answer questions about what they said. I have to admit, some of the accents were really hard to understand. But I just closed my eyes, listened closely, and guessed my way through it. Hopefully, I got most of them right!Overall, the exam was tough but so exciting. I feel like I learned a lot and really challenged myself. I can't wait to see how I did when the results come out. Fingers crossed for me, guys!That's all for now. See you next time!篇4Title: My Adventure at the 2023 Zhejiang English High School ExamHey everyone! Today I want to tell you about my super exciting adventure at the 2023 Zhejiang English high school exam. It was like a rollercoaster ride, full of twists and turns!First of all, let me tell you about the reading section. The passages were so interesting! I read about different cultures, animals, and even a story about a brave hero. I had to answer questions about each passage, and some were really tricky. But I tried my best and used my super skills to pick the right answers.Next up was the listening section. I had to listen to people talking and answer questions about what they said. It was a bit hard to understand some of the accents, but I focused hard and tried my best to catch every word. I was so proud of myself when I got most of the answers right!Then came the writing section. I had to write an essay about my dream job. I wrote about wanting to be a scientist and explore the mysteries of the universe. I poured my heart and soul into that essay, and I think I did a pretty good job.Finally, the speaking section. I had to talk about a topic for two minutes straight! I chose to talk about my favorite hobby, which is playing soccer. I spoke confidently and passionately, and I think the examiners were impressed.In the end, I came out of the exam room feeling tired but happy. I had given it my all and I knew that no matter what the results were, I had done my best. I can't wait to see how I did when the scores come out!So that's my adventure at the 2023 Zhejiang English high school exam. It was a wild ride, but I had a blast! I can't wait to see where my English skills take me next. Stay tuned for more updates from me, your favorite little English whiz!篇5Oh my gosh! I just finished my 2023 Zhejiang English Gaokao exam and let me tell you, it was wild! The text we had to read was about a girl going on an adventure to find a hidden treasure. It was so exciting and I was totally hooked from the beginning.After finishing the reading, we had to continue the story with our own ideas. I was so nervous because I wanted to make sure my writing was super cool and creative. I decided to have the girl face some challenges along the way, like running into a group of pirates who also wanted the treasure. But she was super brave and clever, so she outsmarted them and found the treasure first.I also added in a twist at the end where the treasure turned out to be a magical amulet that granted the girl special powers. She used these powers to help her friends and save her village from a terrible storm. It was so much fun coming up with all these ideas and I felt like a real author!I really hope the examiners like my story and give me a good score. But even if they don't, I had a blast writing it and I'm proud of myself for finishing such a challenging task. Bring on the next adventure, Zhejiang English Gaokao!篇6Hey guys, guess what happened after the 2023 Zhejiang English high school exam? Let me tell you all about it!So, after we finished the exam, everyone was feeling pretty relieved. We all headed outside to the playground to hang out and talk about how we did on the test. Some of us were feeling confident, while others were a little worried about their answers.But then, the unexpected happened - a group of teachers came out and announced that they were going to hold apost-exam activity for all of us! We were all super excited to see what it was going to be.Turns out, they had set up a mini English carnival for us to participate in. There were different booths set up with games, quizzes, and even a karaoke corner where we could sing English songs. It was so much fun!We spent the whole afternoon playing games, practicing English, and just having a great time with our friends. It was such a cool way to celebrate finishing the exam.In the end, we all left with big smiles on our faces and memories that we would never forget. It was definitely the best post-exam activity ever!Can't wait to see what they have planned for us next year!篇7Title: A Trip to the FutureHi everyone, I'm so excited to share with you my experience of traveling to the future during the 2023 Zhejiang English High School Exam!So, after finishing the reading comprehension section of the exam, I closed my eyes and suddenly found myself in the year 2050. It was like a dream come true! The first thing I noticed was how advanced technology had become. There were flying carszooming around, robots doing all kinds of tasks, and holographic displays everywhere.I met a robot named Robo who became my tour guide for the day. We visited a museum where I saw all kinds of cool futuristic inventions like teleportation devices and time machines.I even got to try on a pair of virtual reality glasses and felt like I was in a whole other world!Next, Robo took me to a school of the future where everything was so high-tech. The students had tablets instead of textbooks, and they were learning languages from around the world through virtual reality simulations. I even got to join in on a history lesson where we traveled back in time to ancient Egypt!After a fun-filled day exploring the future, it was time to return to my own time. I opened my eyes and found myself back in the exam room, with my classmates busy finishing their papers.I couldn't wait to tell them all about my amazing adventure!In the end, I learned that the future is full of endless possibilities and incredible advancements. Who knows what amazing things the world will have in store for us in the years to come? I can't wait to find out!And that's the end of my story about my trip to the future. Thanks for listening, and remember, the sky's the limit when it comes to dreaming big!篇8Oh my goodness, have you heard about the English exam in Zhejiang in March 2023? It was super tough, but also kinda fun! Let me tell you all about it.So, the exam was all about reading this cool story. It was about a group of friends who went on a crazy adventure to find a treasure hidden in an ancient temple. There were puzzles to solve, traps to escape, and even a sneaky villain trying to stop them. It was like a real-life action movie!After reading the story, we had to write a follow-up story with our own adventure. I decided to write about a magical island where the friends found a map leading to a hidden cave filled with gold coins and jewels. It was so fun letting my imagination run wild!But the best part was when we had to answer questions about the story. Some were easy, like "What was the name of the main character?" or "Where did they find the treasure?" Butothers were tricky and made us think really hard. It was like being a detective trying to solve a mystery.Overall, the English exam in Zhejiang was a blast! It challenged us to be creative, think critically, and use our language skills to the max. I can't wait to see what adventures await us in next year's exam!篇9Title: My Adventure with English Exam in 2023 Zhejiang College Entrance ExaminationHey everyone, guess what happened to me during the English exam in Zhejiang College Entrance Examination in March 2023! It was so crazy and exciting! Let me tell you all about it!So, the exam started with a listening section, and I was so nervous because I always find it the hardest. But this time, I focused really hard and managed to answer all the questions. I even guessed a few right answers and felt super proud of myself.Then came the reading and writing sections. I read the passages carefully and made sure to underline important information. When it came to the writing part, I had to write a story based on a picture. I came up with the most amazing storyabout a space adventure and I couldn't believe how quickly the time passed when I was writing it.After the exam, I met up with my friends and we all shared our experiences. It was so fun to hear about the different questions we had and how we all tackled them in our own ways. We were all so relieved that the exam was finally over and we could relax.A few weeks later, the results were out and I was over the moon to see that I had passed with flying colors. I couldn't believe it! All the hard work and practice paid off and I was so happy and proud of myself.Overall, the 2023 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination English exam was a rollercoaster of emotions, but I wouldn't change a thing. It was challenging, but it was also an adventure that I will never forget. I can't wait to see what the future holds for me and my English skills!篇10Title: My Adventure in 2023 Zhejiang English College Entrance ExamWow, guys! I had the most exciting experience at the 2023 Zhejiang English College Entrance Exam! Let me tell you all about it!First of all, the exam was held in a huge hall with hundreds of students from all over Zhejiang province. It was so cool to see all the smart and talented kids gathered in one place! The exam questions were super challenging, but I was determined to do my best. I tackled the reading comprehension section first, with passages about space exploration and environmental protection. It was so interesting and I felt like I was learning a lot while answering the questions.Next came the listening section, where we had to listen to recordings of native English speakers and answer questions about what they were saying. It was a bit tricky, but I tried my best to catch all the details. Then it was time for the writing section, where we had to write an essay on the topic of global warming. I poured my heart into it and tried to come up with as many good ideas as possible.After a few hours of intense concentration, the exam finally ended. I felt relieved and proud of myself for making it through. Now all that's left is to wait for the results and see how I did. I'm keeping my fingers crossed and hoping for the best!Overall, the 2023 Zhejiang English College Entrance Exam was a challenging but rewarding experience. I'm grateful for the opportunity to test my English skills and push myself to do better.I can't wait to see what the future holds for me!。

【2021英语二轮复习】读后续写专练浙江专版（1）【题型概述】读后续写是随着我国高考改革由教育部考试中心研制的英语高考新题型，2016年10月在浙江省首次使用。

该题型通过读写结合，检测学生的英语书面语言理解与表达能力。

要求学生能够梳理故事文体的结构、分析故事发展的线索、想像故事发展的情节以及续写故事的发展和结局。

从试题结构看，读后续写评价的是书面理解能力和书面表达能力。

因此，在写作之前，首先读懂文本，理清故事情节，然后构思故事的发展和结局。

下面介绍一下读后续写的答题技巧：【答题策略】1.通读文本，提取线索词和信息句，写出每段段落大意。

2. 根据文本每段内容，结合所给续写部分的首句，构思完整的故事情节。

3. 根据续写部分所提供的首句，写出续写部分每段的段落大意，围绕续写部分的段落大意进行合理的细节描写。

4. 润色成篇。

【实战练习】一阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

As Amy Hagadorn rounded the corner across the hall from her classroom, she crashed with a tall boy from the fifth grade running in the opposite direction.“Watch it, Squirt,” the boy yelled, as he dodged around the little third grader. Then, with an unfriendly smile on his face, the boy mimicked the way Amy limped (跛行) when she walked. Amy tried to ignore his mean teasing. She felt deeply lonely, because there were full of other students teasing about her speech or her limping.Back home at the dinner table that evening A my was quiet. That’s why Patti Hagadorn was happy to have some exciting news to share with her daughter.“There’s a Christmas Wish Contest on the radio station,” she announced. “Write a letter to Santa and you might win a prize. I think someone at this table with blond curly hair should enter.”Amy giggled. The contest sounded like fun. She started thinking about what she wanted most for Christmas. While Amy worked away at her best printing, the rest of the family tried to guess what gifts she might ask from Santa. But Amy wasn’t ready to reveal her secret Christmas wish just then.Here is Amy’s letter to Santa, just as she wrote it that night:Dear Santa Clause,My name is Amy. I’m 9 years old. I have a problem at school. Can you help me, Santa? Kids laugh at me because of the way I walk and run and talk. I have cerebral palsy (大脑性瘫痪). I just want one day when no one laughs at me or makes fun of me.Love,Amy At radio station WJLT in Fort Wayne, Indiana, letters poured in for the Christmas Wish Contest. When Amy’s letter arrived, manager Lee Tobin read it carefully. He knew cerebral palsy was a muscle disorder that might confuse the schoolmates of Amy who didn’t understand her disability. He thought it would be good for the people in Fort Wayne to hear about this special third grader and her unusual wish. Mr. Tobin called up the local newspaper.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。