高中英语人物介绍书面表达写作指导(答案和解析)

如何介绍一位音乐家【写作任务】你校英文报新开设的Popular Musicians 栏目正面向全校学生征稿。

请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇介绍著名音乐家弗里德里克·肖邦（Frédéric François Chopin ）的短文。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 【写作指导】 一、审题定调本写作要求介绍著名音乐家弗里德里克•肖邦，属于记叙文的写作范畴。

其关键之处在于突出其主要经历和成就，介绍其生平事迹时一般用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主。

二、谋篇布局此类文章一般采用“总—分—总”模式，对肖邦的主要经历和成就进行介绍，使读者对其有一个较为清晰和全面的了解。

针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲： 第一部分：总体介绍（包括其身份及生卒年份等）； 第二部分：介绍肖邦的主要经历；第三部分：总结全文（说明肖邦的成就以及人们对他的评价）。

三、组织语言第一部分：总体介绍（包括其身份及生卒年份等）。

第二部分：介绍肖邦的主要经历。

第三部分：总结全文（说明肖邦的成就以及人们对他的评价）。

【范文展示】普通范文Frédéric François Chopin, a great composer, was born in 1810 and died in 1849.Chopin learned music when he was six. He started composing music at seven, and he began giving public concerts at eight. By the time he was 20, Chopin had become a well-known composer. Chopin moved to Paris at 21 and earned a living there as a composer and teacher.In his life, Chopin composed about 200 pieces of music, and has been called “the poet of the pia no”.高级范文Frédéric François Chopin, who was born in 1810 and died in 1849, was one of the greatest composers of his time.Chopin’s talent for music showed at an early age. He learned music at six, composed music at seven, and even gave public concerts at eight. The young musician rose to fame as a composer at the age of 20. The following year Chopin moved to Paris, where he spent the rest of his life, earning a living as a composer and teacher.Chopin, who has been called “the poet of the piano”, composed a bout 200 pieces of music or so throughout his life.【同步练习】你校学生会准备办一期主题为Great Musicians的英语墙报。

高考写作指导（人物介绍）常用表达法1.性别与婚姻（Sex & Marriage）I’m a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter.She got married in 1980 and now she has been married for more than 20 years.I’ m 35 ,male and unmarried.I got married five years ago but now I’m single.2.年龄（Age）He was born in 1995 and is eight years old now.Born in 1985, he is now an 18-year-old student, studying in a university.He began to make a living at the age of 14/at an early age.In his fifties, he began to feel his age .By the age of 14, he had set up a chemistry lab of his own.3.外貌特征（Appearance）她是一个圆脸,大眼睛,皓齿长发的可爱的女孩.She is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long waving hair.他又瘦又高戴着一副深度近视镜.He is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.他是一个很好看的男人,留着浓密的小胡子但是却没有头发.He is a good-looking/funny-looking man, with a thick moustache but no hair left.他是一个高个子男人,有着蓝眼睛黄头发.He is a tall man, with blue eyes and blond hair.(deep-set eyes 深陷的双眼,big bright eyes,a high straight nose,brown curling hair, broad shoulders)4.身高（名词：height）He is 1.76 meters tall.He is 176 cm tal l.He is 176 cm in height.The boy is not tall enough to reach the apple overhead.He is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.My height is 1.76 metres .(不合英语习惯)I’m 1.76 meters high.（身高不宜用形容词high）5.体重（动词：weigh 名词：weight ）She weigh s 60 kilos.She is 60 kilos in weight6.健康状况（名词：health 形容词healthy）1)由于被照顾的很好,孩子们看上去很健康.Well looked after, the children look healthy.2)我身体不强壮,但是很健康.I’m not so strong, but (I’m) in good health.3)住了六周的院,现在她看上去很虚弱.Having been in hospital for six months, now she looks very weak.7教育状况（Education）>我1984年入学,12年后毕业.I started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.2>1984年我进入北京大学, 4年后毕业.I went to study in Beijing University in 1984 and 4 years later I graduated (from that university).3>我们学很多课程,包括…We l earned many courses, including…4>我已经在天山小学上了2年多了, 下学期就毕业了.I have been studying in Tianshan Primary School (No.1 Senior Middle/High School) for more than two years and will graduate next semester.5>1998年4月我获得了数学学士学位.I got my bachelor’s (master’s, doctor’s) degree in mathematics in April 1998...8.特长爱好（Specialty & Hobbies）1>我很擅长口语,计算机是我的强项.I’m good at spoken English and even better at using computers2>我在去年的英语演讲竞赛中获得了第一名.I won the first prize in the English speech contest at school last year.3>他在网页设计大赛中获得了第一名.He got the first place in the homepage designing contest.4>我最喜欢的运动是游泳和打乒乓.My favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis.5>在我的业余时间里,我喜欢读书和旅游.In my spare time, I like reading and enjoying traveling.9. 详细特色（Something in detail）举例法（Giving examples）–He was strict with everybody and in everything he did. One day, we were having classes when…–He was very forgetful. Once he came across an old friend of his in the street and ... –He had a strange way of making his classes lively and interesting. I still remember my first day as a chemistry student.写作练习1：你是李华,申请到一家外企工作.对方要求你用英语写一篇短文, 介绍自己的基本情况.短文应该包括下表所列全部内容.姓名：李华出生年月：1977年2月出生地：辽宁大连学历：1984-1990 年光明小学1990-1996年大连市第六中学所学主要课程：语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑特长：英语、电脑、（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名）业余爱好：游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐参考答案：My name is LiHua . I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After tha t I went to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I like computer and English best and I am very good at them. Last year, I won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.写作练习2：介绍英语老师我们的英语老师李老师是我们的英语老师，40岁左右又高又瘦, 戴着一副深度近视眼镜她2000年来到我们学校，已经当了10多年的英语老师。

⾼三英语写作系列——⼈物介绍⾃荐信求职信（附答案）⾼三英语书⾯表达——⼈物描写+⾃荐信（求职信）⼀、⾼考中作⽂的⼈物描写假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找⼀个英语笔友。

请写⼀封短信，描述⼀下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。

具体条件包括：1. 年龄；2. 性别；3. 爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。

假定你是李华，从⼩喜爱⼤熊猫（panda）,⼀直通过有关⽹站（website）关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出⽣的⼤熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“⽩云”。

现在苏琳即将三岁。

请根据以下要点给动物园⼯作⼈员写⼀封信：1. ⾃我介绍；2. 祝贺苏琳⽣⽇；3. 感谢⼯作⼈员；4. 索取苏琳三岁⽣⽇照。

假定你是李华，正在⼀所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到⼀些困难，希望得到学校辅导中⼼（Learning Center）的帮助。

根据学校规定，你需书⾯预约，请按下列要点写⼀封信：1．本⼈简介；2．求助内容：3．约定时间；4．你的联系⽅式（Email：lihua@1236. com；Phone：12345678）。

假定你是李华，从互联⽹（the Internet）上得知⼀个国际中学⽣组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学⽣参加。

请写⼀封电⼦邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:1. ⾃我介绍（包括英语能⼒）;2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）;3.希望获准。

假定你是李华。

请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。

信中还需说明：李明：⾼个⼦，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8⽉6⽇上午11:30⼆、⼈物介绍的基本表述：①基本情况（年龄、籍贯、职业、家庭背景）在他幼年时在某⼈青少年期间出⽣于学者家庭⼀个贫穷家庭的孩⾝份证号码⼦⼀位全职妈妈⼀位业余运动员来⾃、出⾝于从事、做某⼯作培养，养育长⼤，成年养活⼀家⼈②性格特征优雅⽽⾃信精⼒充沛且活泼脾⽓臭的青年对……有激情很有幽默感③受教育经历毕业于⽜津⼤学主修法律出国（留学）深造被……录取获得奖学⾦在某⽅⾯排名第⼀参加课外活动提出进⼊某⼤学的申请获得博⼠学位成绩退步④兴趣、爱好、能⼒及成就有…资格，可胜对……感兴趣任…在…有天赋在……有经验因…给予某⼈某种获得……称号奖励献⾝于在……⽅⾯很熟练在……⽅⾯优秀实现梦想养成……的习惯有同样的兴趣和爱好⑤评价作为......被铭记被公认为是为……树⽴了榜样在……中⼈⽓很⾼三、有关⼈物描写的句⼦翻译⽤定语从句翻译以下句⼦：1. 1991年，奥巴马从哈佛⼤学毕业，他在那⾥主修法律。

专题04人物【话题导入】我们一生会结识很多人，认识很多人，了解他们，并可以向他人介绍。

【写作指导】以写人为主的记叙文，对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息，重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要突出重点学历经历，新闻报道要突出重点事迹，介绍自己的老师朋友，要突出他们的特特点等。

注意运用正确的时态，描写人物的外貌，性格，兴趣等，通常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出身教育背景，经历事迹等，通常用一般过去式。

●写作步骤1.Basic information2.Personal life story in details3.Evaluation●增色语料精彩句型:1.He was born into a poor/rich family.2.Showing great interest in music,he began learning to play the piano at age of3.3.Having broken the world record and got the gold medal,she became the idol of the youth.4.He is always willing to help others in trouble,thus becoming popular among us.5.She has burying herself in medical study,which enables her to win the Nobel Prize.6.He is one of the scientists who made a great contributions to society.7.People spoke highly of him and respected him8.He's honest and always ready to help others.That is why we made him monitor.9.She really cares about others and is an extremely talented listener.10.Her diligence has set an example to others.11.Mr.Zhang is such a good teacher that we all respect him.12.With a loving character,he is such a kind and helpful person as we cannot praise too much.13.From her success,we can see that everyone should be devoted to hard work consistently.范文赏析你校英语报拟开展“我最敬佩的改革先锋”征文评选活动。

高中英语书面表达人物介绍
John is a bright and diligent high school student. He is always eager to learn and never hesitates to ask questions. As a result, he has achieved excellent grades in all subjects, especially in mathematics and science. John is also very active in his school's extracurricular activities. He is a member of the debate club and regularly participates in public speaking competitions. In addition, he volunteers at a local charity organization, where he helps to raise funds for the underprivileged.
约翰是一位聪明勤奋的高中学生。

他总是渴望学习，从不犹豫提问。

因此，他在所有科目中都取得了优秀的成绩，尤其是在数学和科学方面。

约翰还非常活跃于学校的课外活动。

他是辩论俱乐部的成员，并定期参加公开演讲比赛。

此外，他还在当地的慈善组织做志愿者，帮助筹集资金为弱势群体提供帮助。

◆写作指导◆第一部分：个人情况介绍个人情况介绍的字数不宜太多，通常是以给作者印象最深的特征为切入点，简单描述即可。

介绍内容可以包括年龄、外貌、身份、性格、经历等。

注意：行文时可使用介词短语、同位语结构等来说明人物身份、职务、称号等，使文章简洁、通顺。

同时，使用并列句、复合句、非谓语动词等高级语句来增强语言表现力。

写作语料：1. My Dad is the idol in my heart.2. I have great admiration for Mr Sun, my English teacher, a middle-aged man of few words. (同位语补充说明人物身份、年龄与性格特征)3. The person I admire most is Zhong Nanshan, who helped defeat SARS in 2003 and is once again leading an expert team to deal with the novel coronavirus. (用定语从句介绍人物事迹或贡献)4. Zhong grew up in a family of doctors. His goal has always been to save as many lives as possible. (简单句介绍人物背景知识)5. Of all the outstanding people, I admire Tu Youyou the most. She is the first Chinese scientist awarded the Nobel Prize in medicine in 2015 for her great achievements in curing malaria (疟疾).6. Born to a musical family, Cyrus showed her talent for music when she was a little girl. She is a born singer and musical genius (天才). (分词作状语说明人物家庭背景)7. As the head of the Shanghai expert team who treats COVID-19, Zhang Wenhong caught the public’s attention for his frank and funny speeches. (介词短语介绍人物身份)小试牛刀：1. 我的英语老师—林老师善良热心，我们每个人都很敬佩她。

高考英语人物介绍模板作文1. Tom is a tall and athletic young man with a bright smile and a friendly personality. He is always the life of the party and loves to make people laugh with his quick wit and sense of humor.2. Emily is a diligent and hardworking student who is always at the top of her class. She is known for her intelligence and determination, and her classmates often turn to her for help with their studies.3. Jack is a talented musician who can play multiple instruments with ease. He is often seen with his guitar, strumming away and entertaining his friends with hissoulful voice and catchy tunes.4. Sarah is a compassionate and caring individual who is always there to lend a listening ear and offer support to those in need. She is involved in various volunteer activities and is passionate about making a difference inthe community.5. Alex is a natural leader who is confident and assertive. He excels in team sports and is always the first to step up and take charge when a situation calls for it. His friends admire his strong sense of responsibility and reliability.6. Jessica is a free spirit who loves to explore the world and experience new adventures. She is always planning her next trip and is known for her spontaneous and adventurous nature. Her friends often turn to her fortravel advice and inspiration.。

高一英语书面表达试题答案及解析1.你是一名高一学生，经常为看电视的事跟妈妈闹意见，今天你跟妈妈达成一致。

请根据以下表格的内容，适当补充内容，以 An Argument 为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文。

母亲儿子高中生学习任务重，看电视浪费时间学习一天很疲劳，看电视可以放松一下儿子自制力差，看电视会影响视力看电视也可以增长知识，了解国际国内大事，紧跟时代平时不准我看电视，但在周末允许我看新闻、文艺、体育或科普类节目注意：1、短文的开头已给出，不记入总词数。

2、不要表格中的内容，但不要逐翻译。

3、可以适当增添合乎情理的过渡性语言。

I am a Senior 1 student. I often quarrel with my mother___________________________________【答案】I am a Senior 1 student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in Senior 1, heavily burdened with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can’t accept her ideas. I think it is relaxing to watch TV after a day’s hard work. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news and programs of entertainment, sports or science.【解析】这是一篇正反观点类得文章，内容要点已经给出，学生写作的时候切入点容易找。

高三书面表达指导专项（三）——人物介绍类一，例文分析LiShizhen, an outstanding ancient Chinese pharmacologist, was born in 1518 in Hubei Province, China and died in1593.Ever since his childhood, he had shown much interest in medicine. He often listened to his father explaining some medical knowledge, which helped him a great deal. At the age of 24, he became a doctor.Compendium of Materia edica, one of the world-famous medical works, is his most important works. This book is based on his own experience as well as many medical books of didderent times. It took him nearly thirty years to finish this great works, which still has a great influence on the world up to now. It is regarded as one of the most important valuable scientific works in the world.1.画出文章中的同位语。

说说作者为什么使用同位语？2.文章最基本的时态是什么时态？3.画出文章中的非限定性的定语从句。

说说使用定语从句有何好处？二，比较下面两篇文章，哪一篇更好? 为什么？(1)Bruce is our English teacher. He is from England and is about 40 years old . He is tall and thin with a pair of glasses on his nose . He is strict with us in our study . He prepares his lessons well and corrects our homework carefully . His teaching style is quite different from that of the others . In class he always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own . He often helps and cares for us . He is very kind to us . In his spare time he plays basketball and football with us . We all love and respect him .(2)Bruce , our English teacher , is from England and is about 40 years old . Tall and thin with a pair of glasses on his nose, he is a handsome teacher . Despite the fact that he is strict with us, he cares for us and is very kind to us . He is a responsible teacher because he prepares his lessons well and corrects our homework carefully . His teaching style is quite different from that of the others . In class we are always encouraged to think hard and study on our own .. In his spare time he plays basketball and football with us . We all love and respect him .三，总体指导1．人物简介的写作步骤1. Birthday and birth place 2. Family background3. Education4. Big events in his or her life ( in order of time )5. Evaluation 也可以先评论后分述。