高考书面表达(7)求助信学案-高三英语二轮复习

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高考书面表达

(七)求助信

一.写作结构

第一段: 1.自我介绍

2.写信原因

3.写信目的

第二段: 具体问题

第三段: 1.表达感谢 2.期盼回复

二.经典套话

1.自我介绍

I ‘m LiHua, a student from XingHua high school.

I’m LiHua,who is a student from….

I’m LiHua, a 17-year-old boy, studying in

XinHua high school.

2.写信的原因

I heard that you are very good at …

My teacher told me that you are …..

As we all know,you are…

3.写信的目的

Now ,I am writing to ask you for help.

4. 做某事有困难

I have (much) trouble/difficulty in doing sth.

I find it extremely hard for me to do sth.

5.希望,请求,表达感谢,盼望回复

I sincerely hope that you can….

I would truly/deeply /really appreciate it if you

could…

Your generous help and immediate response will

be truly appreciated.

I am looking forward to your reply.

I wonder if you can recommend some effective

methods of doing sth..

6.具体需要帮助的事项 Hopefully you would be so kind to give me some

suggestions/help on the following problems. First

of all,(困难一),which has annoyed me for quite a

long time. Besides,(困难二),…..Finally ,(困难三)

8.常见的困难

1)生活方面

与人相处 :get along well with my classmates/

the new teacher/ my parents

把握时间:arrange and make full use of my

everyday time for valuable things

明确目标 know the purpose of my life and

direction of my future.

2) 学习方面:

不懂语法 have trouble in mastering the advanced

grammar rules and put them into speaking and

writing

背单词容易忘记 have trouble in recite

words ,even though I recite well, I can’t remember

soon.

三.范文学习

范文一:2016年高考英语全国卷Ⅰ书面表达题:

假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms

Jenkins写信, 请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

内容分析: 写作题思路非常清晰:写信目的---阐述写作背景---描述求助内容---期待得到回复---表达感谢。

Dear Jenkins,

I’m Li Hua from your English writing class

last term. I’m writing to ask for your help.

I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign

company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and

resume. However, I am not quite sure of the

language and the format I’ve used. I know you have

a busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you

could take some time to go through them and make

necessary changes. Please find my application letter

and resume in the attachment(附件).

Thank you for your kindness!

Yours Li Hua

范文二

Dear Robot

I’m LiHua , a senior high school student. As I

know you are an expert in English learning. I ‘m

writing to ask you about some problems I come

across.

Hopefully you would be so kind to give me

some suggestions on following problems. First of

all, English is such a headache for me that I am not

interested in it .Besides, I have much trouble in

remembering words, which annoyed me for quite a

long time. What’s worse, I am afraid to take part in

group discussion because of my poor English.

I would be grateful if you can give me some

suggestions .I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours LiHua

实战演练:

假如你是李华,最近你在学习英语上遇到一些困难,语法难以理解,不会用,害怕写作,希望你的美国笔友John能给你一些建议。

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