2017年11月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评

2016.9 浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

爽爽文档汇编之续写A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusement, all because of my mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was elven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we would ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathroom if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “Y ou stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh (I)thought they were being awfully quite.” We were never actually left in a strange city, but we were not about to take any chance.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2017浙江英语高考新题型-读后续写6篇一、读后续写（25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly（胆怯地）. “Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.注意：1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that after noon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medici ne and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the pers on to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without tak ing the baskets with him.The n ext afternoon the farmer was sent to the police stati on. Having show n the baskets, an officer asked,“ Are these yours ”“ Yes, sir. ” the farme胆胆怯地w）red timitHjive youkilled_the_man ”“ No, no, sir. ” the farmer said in a hurry. “ When did you see the dead m“ About seven last evening. ”“ Did you see who killed the man ”“ No, sir. ” The off a knife and asked, “ Have you seen it yet ”“ No, sir. _angThanrafflioe：lr tecamepoliceme n to beat him up and sent him into pris on. the officer wan ted to trap the farmer into theconfession（供认）,but the farmer didn ' t admit he was the murderer.注意：1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2017年11月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评2017年11月浙江省高考英语科目写作第二节依然是读后续写，要求考生阅读一篇短文，根据所给情节续写，使短文与续写部分合成一个完整的故事。

自2016年10月实行新高考以来，三次英语考试写作第二节均为读后续写，之所以如此，其中一个原因可能是，相比于其他类型考题而言，读后续写对测试学生的实际写作水平具有较高的有效性。

这一点，从本次考试的试题与答题情况也可看出。

一、题型分析与上两次考试一样，本次读后续写题依然是结合了对考生输入（input）与输出（output）两种语言能力的考查（关于这两者能力的考查和读后续写文体特征等，请参见笔者发表于本刊2017年第3期的《浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评》一文）。

但是，虽然同属记叙文，本次考试所给短文的故事线索与逻辑复杂程度明显高于上两次，主要表现为次要信息较多，对考生把握情节主线有较强的干扰（具体见本文“试题要点分析”和“答题建议”）。

从这一点来看，本次考试对考生的输入考查要求远高于上两次。

另外，从所给段落开头语来看，第二段的开放性很强，考生可以有多种情节接续的可能，甚至可以有体裁的转换。

结合这两点，可以说，本次读后续写交际任务是否能很好地完成，基本上取决于对所给短文阅读理解任务完成的情况。

这给我们的启示是，读后续写教学要见成效，阅读教学上所花的功夫绝对不能少。

二、题目要求阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements，all because of my mother―loving，sweet，and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota，and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached，David，my eight-year-old brother，and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again？Finally，the moment of our departure arrived，and we loaded suitcases，books，games，camping equipment，and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept：“You stand outside the door and play lookout （放哨）while I go，and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.”I had terrible pictures in my mind：“Honey，where are the kids？”“What？！Oh，Gosh…I thought they were being awfully quiet.”We were never actually left behind in a strange city，but we weren’t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night，we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time，Mom suddenly got a great idea：Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there？David and I became nervous. To our great relief，Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections （反?Γ?. If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps，Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意：1.所?m写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

一、读后续写（25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had nomoney. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took twobaskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few peoplein the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine andhurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the groundand was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and therewas much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking thebaskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an（胆怯地）. “Have youofficer asked, “Are these yours”“Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidlykilled the man”“No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead m “About seven last evening.”“Did you see who killed the man”“No, sir.” The offangry and told thea knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet”“No, sir.” The officer becamepolicemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into theconfession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so an gry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

一、读后续写(25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money。

He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market。

The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street。

When his vegetables were sold out， it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.ground and was going to help the person to get up。

At that time he found it was a deadwithout taking the baskets with him。

baskets，an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes，sir.” the farmer answeredhurry. “When did you see the dead man" “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No，sir." The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Haveconfession(供认）， but the fa rmer didn’t admit he was the murderer。

一、读后续写（25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly（胆怯地）. “Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the fa rmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2017浙江卷英语读后续写作文范文The story of the little match girl left a deep impression on me. 火柴女孩的故事给我留下了深刻的印象。

Her struggle in the cold winter night and her sweet visions of warmth and love touched my heart deeply. 她在寒冷的冬夜中挣扎，对温暖和爱的美好幻想深深触动了我的内心。

It made me realize the harsh realities that many people face, and the importance of showing compassion and empathy towards others. 它让我意识到了许多人面临的严酷现实，以及对他人表现出同情和同理心的重要性。

The little match girl's longing for love and comfort reminded me of the simple but precious things in life that we often take for granted. 火柴女孩对爱和安慰的渴望让我想起了我们经常视为理所当然的生活中简单而珍贵的事物。

It's easy to overlook the significance of a warm embrace or a kind word, but these small acts of kindness can make a world of difference to someone in need. 很容易忽视一个温暖的拥抱或一句善意的话语的重要性，但这些小小的善举对有需要的人来说会有天壤之别。

The little match girl's story also made me reflect on the unequal distribution of wealth and resources in the world. 火柴女孩的故事也让我反思了世界上财富和资源的不平等分配。