演讲稿之演讲比赛点评语

英文演讲点评语【篇一：英语演讲点评】英语演讲比赛评委点评good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, dear students of ningbo foreign language school and you, 14 excellent contestants，it’s my great pleasure to be here for the veryfirst time as a judge for this english speech competition. i think all the contestants did a great job today, so let’s give a big round of applause to all of them. another round of applause goes to the teacher for having chosen such an interesting topic like open to the world cultures and to everyone who has contributed to organize the competition and has helped to making it a success. i have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the 14 contestants have approached the topic from different perspectives. all speeches have been wellresearched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. i am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. on top of all this you all have also demonstrated your remarkable analytical abilities.as an english teacher, i’m always very happy when i see young people who are doing such a terrific job. the importance of todays goes beyond the competition itself. your school and this competition continue to promote international communication, and will help you to progress and to have more and more opportunities in your future life.i am so impressed with this successful speech competition and with this beautiful school that as the mother of a grade 6 primary student i wish that my daughter will have the opportunity to study here , so she can learn to speak english more fluently, just like you all.i always like to say that ”life is a journey”. language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning, especially for the english language which is so alive and ever changing. so as you move forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.finally i would like to take this opportunity to wish all the contestants the best of luck and great success in your future. ---评委老师its terrific to see you dress formally and well prepared for the speech, and your poster is well doneas well.however, you need to make more eye contact with theaudience and better speak with various tones and clear pronunciation. i have to say you are a bit stiff without proper body language, which is no good for impressing the audience and the jury. moreover, i really hope you can put more passion into the speech and try to eich it with more facial expression, then surely your speech would be fabulous.演讲中没有语法错误，尤其其中一个男孩讲的非常好，他演讲的开头很好，而且很幽默，演讲有激情，并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言your grammar is ok. its worth mentioning that a boy gave a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, furthermore, he was fairly humorous and enthusiastic throughout the speech, and he made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech.【篇二：演讲点评语】篇一：领导讲话后的评语恰到好处，深入关键，认清形势，为我们今后的发展指明了方向。

演讲稿评语大全在演讲比赛中，评语是对选手演讲表现的客观评价，也是对选手演讲技巧和表达能力的重要反馈。

下面是一些常见的演讲稿评语，希望能够对大家在准备演讲时有所帮助。

1. 主题鲜明，观点清晰，逻辑严密，表达流畅，语言生动，给人留下深刻印象。

2. 演讲内容充实，论据充足，有深度，有思想，有启发性，能够引起听众共鸣。

3. 演讲态度认真，仪表端庄，语言规范，表达自信，有亲和力，能够与观众建立良好的沟通。

4. 演讲声音洪亮，语速适中，语调抑扬顿挫，能够吸引听众注意力，让人耳目一新。

5. 演讲姿势得体，眼神坚定，肢体语言自然，能够增强演讲的说服力和吸引力。

6. 演讲情感真挚，表达真诚，能够打动人心，让人产生共鸣和共情。

7. 演讲结尾有力，总结精炼，留下深刻印象，给人以启发和思考。

8. 演讲中有亮点，有幽默感，能够引起听众笑声，增加演讲的趣味性和吸引力。

9. 演讲中有感染力，有激情，能够激发听众的情感，让人产生共鸣和情感共鸣。

10. 演讲中有创意，有新颖的观点，有独特的见解，能够给人以启发和思考。

11. 演讲中有故事，有案例，有生动的事例，能够增加演讲的生动性和形象性。

12. 演讲中有引用，有名言，有经典语录，能够增加演讲的权威性和说服力。

13. 演讲中有情感，有温情，有真情流露，能够打动人心，让人产生共鸣和共情。

14. 演讲中有亮点，有亮眼的表现，能够给人留下深刻印象，让人印象深刻。

15. 演讲中有幽默，有幽默感，能够引起听众笑声，增加演讲的趣味性和吸引力。

总之，演讲稿评语是对演讲表现的客观评价，希望大家在准备演讲时能够根据评语进行反思和总结，不断提高自己的演讲技巧和表达能力。

相信通过不懈的努力和实践，大家一定能够成为一名优秀的演讲者。

演讲比赛评委点评语【篇一：如何评价演讲比赛】演讲比赛评分标准一、比赛规则1．演讲时间不超过6分钟。

2.一律使用普通话，仪态自然大方，着装规范。

二、评分细则（满分100分）三、评分规则满分为100分，评委打分后去掉一个最高分和一个最低分，汇总后取平均分，精确到小数点后两位，若出现同分，则精确到后三位，依此类推。

演讲技巧一般认为有以下几点：1.做好演讲的准备包括了解听众，熟悉主题和内容，搜集素材和资料，准备演讲稿，作适当的演练等。

2.选择优秀的演讲者优秀的演讲者包括下述条件：（1）足够的权威性；（2）演讲者具有较强的语音能力和技巧：（3）演讲者的热情；（4）演讲者的理智与智慧；（5）演讲者的仪表状态3.运用演讲艺术包括开场白的艺术，结尾的艺术，立论的艺术，举例的艺术，反驳的艺术，幽默的艺术，鼓动的艺术，语音的艺术，表情动作的艺术等等，通过运用各种演讲艺术，使演讲具备两种力量：逻辑的力量和艺术的力量。

4.何谓善用空间的演讲所谓空间就是指进行演说的场所范围、演讲者所在之处以及与听众间的距离等等。

演说者所在之处以位居听众注意力容易汇集的地方最为理想。

例如开会的时候、主席多半位居会议桌的上方、因为该处正是最容易汇集出席者注意力的地方。

反之，如果主席位居会议桌之正中央，则会议的进行情况会变如何呢？恐怕会使出席者注意力散漫了，且有会议冗长不休的感觉？因此，让自己位居听众注意力容易汇集之处，不但能够提升听众对于演讲的关注，甚至具有增强演说者信赖度权威感的效果。

5.演讲时的姿势如何演说时的姿势（posture）也会带给听众某种印象，例如堂堂正正的印象或者畏畏缩缩的印象。

虽然个人的性格与平日的习惯对此影响颇巨，不过一般而言仍有方便演讲的姿势，即所谓“轻松的姿势”。

要让身体放松，反过来说就是不要过度紧张。

过度的紧张不但会表现出笨拙僵硬的姿势，而且对于舌头的动作也会造成不良的影响。

决窍之一是张开双脚与肩同宽，挺稳整个身躯。

演讲比赛评委即兴点评发言演讲比赛评委即兴点评发言演讲比赛中途，领导给出了难题，谓之比赛结束后，对本次比赛做一简要点评。

其实，我不是这方面的专门家，只能根据以前自己参加各类演讲比赛的实践，结合本场比赛的现状，简单的说几句。

各位领导、评委、参赛选手、同志们：很幸运，能够担任本次演出比赛的评委。

也很欣慰，今天又看到一批有见地、能演讲的新人。

有的讲稿很有新意，颇有文彩。

演讲者尽情释放了自己的情怀；尽情讴歌了这个日新月异的时代；尽情讴歌了姚桥这片热土和姚桥人民的精神风貌。

客观的说，本次演讲比赛的目的基本实现。

介于是自己家里的比赛，说说存在的问题：1·文稿的锤炼不够。

演讲稿其实就是一篇散文。

散文是一种常见的文学体裁，由于它取材广泛，摇曳多姿，艺术表现形式丰富多样，如同五彩斑斓的风景画，让人陶醉，让人喜爱，文稿经过演讲将会释放出无穷的魅力。

演讲稿必须朗朗上口，如果写得过于生涩，就是为难自己。

有的讲稿是泛泛而谈，所以达不到侃侃而谈的境界，且联系自我远远不够。

华山、小学的两位参赛者讲稿尚能使人为之心田一动，故尔她们的演讲最能感人。

张小燕的讲稿富有诗情画意，引人入胜。

刘志强则引经据典，触类旁通，夹杂通俗易懂的顺口溜，雅俗能共赏。

小学老师的文稿，身边的人，身边的亊，听众甚感亲切。

裴溪纹则姚桥元素较为强烈，过去、现在、未来如数家珍，这些都极好。

都符合演讲的规律。

2·演讲的语言色彩比较平淡。

演讲不要声嘶力竭的干吼，更不要扭捏作态的低声呤唱，要力图把抑、扬、顿、挫贯穿始终，要努力把字符变为音符，让听众随着演讲者的音律变化情绪。

3·脱稿的人太少。

演讲当然还是脱稿为好，读稿影响人的情感，障碍演讲者的情感发挥，影响与听众的情感交流。

演讲也是演出，每个演讲者。

都要珍惜这6分钟，以展示自己最精彩的一刻。

4·大多选手舞台立法不准确，臀部松弛，腰挺不正，给人以猥琐的直观。

伏在讲台上顶多像做报告，不象比赛，气不凝，精神肯定没有光采，更多的人眼神比较散乱，标准的缺乏自信心。

小学生演讲比赛评论【篇一：中小学优异演讲比赛评论稿】演讲比赛评论稿用什么吸引人，用什么感动人，用什么说服人，用什么感染人，用什么激励人一、用新奇的构想，独到的角度，新鲜的内容吸引人。

今日来参加比赛的同学都很不简单 ,从对照赛的重视程度来看 ,大多数选手都做了很好的准备，热忱洋溢地颂扬祖国的漂亮，热爱我们的祖国。

这充足的准备更表此刻演讲稿的写作上。

好的演讲稿是成功演讲的基础。

好的演讲稿要求选材要新，角度要新，这样才能吸引人。

许多同学的演讲稿给人感觉新鲜、独出心裁、吸引人。

同时，在开场白的设计方面有独到的地方，而不是一模一样。

此外，演讲者在论证自己的看法时一定找寻新奇的论证角度，以产买卖想不到的效果。

没有好的演讲内容“巧妇也难为无米之炊”，有的同学演讲技巧丰富，表现手法多样，但内容空泛，这样表现就机械、缺少真情，因此没有获取最高分，很惋惜。

二、用动人的细节感动人。

成功的演讲稿，要求在广征博引的同时，加强细节的办理，演讲者在举出详细案例的时候，必定要有细节，细节是感动人的要点，在办理细节时，要力争表现当时的动人场面。

三、用奇妙合理的逻辑，从不一样的角度，层层推动，步步深入，以理服人。

演讲不一样于讲故事，也不一样于诗歌朗读，演讲要求演讲者，对自己提出的看法，经过谈论文的各样论证方法，说服观众并使大家接受或认可你的看法。

有句话叫做有理不用大声，可是，一般的空洞的说教也不可以说服人，要设计奇妙的方法，要经得起斟酌。

四、要用真感情染人，用丰富的语言表演技巧加强演讲的感染力。

同样的文章用不一样的方法去演讲，产生的成效是截然相反的。

比方：重音的办理、节奏的掌握。

节奏掌握好，抑扬顿挫十分好听。

因为时间关系就不一一例举了；有一点我想说的是，当演讲者情绪激动【篇二：演讲比赛的评论】演讲比赛的评论各位领导、各位评委、各位选手：领导要我把今日我们倾听、倾听、喜听，观看、赏析、观摩到的感想、感觉、感触向大家汇个报。

因为选手多、任务重、时间紧，还没有来得及和全部的评委们一同协商，一同沟通，一同汇总，更没来得及消化、提炼、归纳，因此下边我要谈的领会、感觉及见解，纯属独家之言，如有不妥，言责自负。

英语演讲比赛点评稿【篇一：英语演讲点评】英语演讲比赛评委点评good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, dear students of ningbo foreign language school and you, 14 excellent contestants，it’s my great pleasure to be here for the veryfirst time as a judge for this english speech competition. i think all the contestants did a great job today, so let’s give a big round of applause to all of them. another round of applause goes to the teacher for having chosen such an interesting topic like open to the world cultures and to everyone who has contributed to organize the competition and has helped to making it a success. i have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the 14 contestants have approached the topic from different perspectives. all speeches have been wellresearched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. i am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. on top of all this you all have also demonstrated your remarkable analytical abilities.as an english teacher, i’m always very happy when i see young people who are doing such a terrific job. the importance of todays goes beyond the competition itself. your school and this competition continue to promote international communication, and will help you to progress and to have more and more opportunities in your future life.i am so impressed with this successful speech competition and with this beautiful school that as the mother of a grade 6 primary student i wish that my daughter will have the opportunity to study here , so she can learn to speak english more fluently, just like you all.i always like to say that ”life is a journey”. language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning, especially for the english language which is so alive and ever changing. so as you move forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.finally i would like to take this opportunity to wish all the contestants the best of luck and great success in your future. ---评委老师its terrific to see you dress formally and well prepared for the speech, and your poster is well doneas well.however, you need to make more eye contact with the audience and better speak with various tones and clear pronunciation. i have to say you are a bit stiff without proper body language, which is no good for impressing the audience and the jury. moreover, i really hope you can put more passion into the speech and try to eich it with more facial expression, then surely your speech would be fabulous.演讲中没有语法错误，尤其其中一个男孩讲的非常好，他演讲的开头很好，而且很幽默，演讲有激情，并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言your grammar is ok. its worth mentioning that a boy gave a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, furthermore, he was fairly humorous and enthusiastic throughout the speech, and he made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech.【篇二：英语演讲比赛完整版点评】评委总结发言(表达感谢时用)：good afternoon, excellent contestants，it?s my great pleasure to be here as a judge for this english speech competition. i think all contestants did a great job today, and i?d like to show my thanks to everyone who has contributed to organize the competition and has helped to make it a success. so let?s give a big round of applause to all of them. finally i would like to take this opportunity to wish all the contestants the best of luck and great success in your future.对选手整体水平的肯定：i have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the contestants have approached the topic from different perspectives. all speeches have been well researched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. i am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. ontop of all this you all have also demonstrated your remarkable analytical abilities. the importance of today goes beyond the competition itself. i always like to say that ”life is a journey”. language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning, especially for the english language which is so alive and ever changing. so as you move forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.面对标新立异选手：you really have been very creative in trying to clear out your point. but this time, it was very clearly stated what would be required of you in the speech. therefore, it is very important to understand what is required of you and what is demanded of you in a competition.面对跑题选手（或主题不明确选手）in today?s competition, i think you are a little too hasty in your preparation for the speech. for instance, as your topic is “a word that changes the world” ,you ?d better show your point out straightly. otherwise how could you grab the audiences? attention to your speech. so next time, you just read carefully about the instructions before you start making a speech. and try to understand every word clearly and correctly.对不能及时切入主题的选手： i think the basic rules of communication are universal, and apply across languages and cultures. say what you mean, and say it in as clear, direct, and simple a manner as possible. and when you are talking or writing to someone from a different country, don?t be afraid to say the obvious thing first.面对发音不好的选手：i have to mention in this competition that you still need to improve your pronunciatione specially rhythm and sentence stress.you need to improve your vowels. it is still very important. i think that?s all i want to say. thank you very much for your speech.对表现好的选手i am very much impressed by the speech you have made. to compare with the speech of others, you really did a great job. i feel good about this. first of all, in your prepared speech, you are more to the point and your english is more natural. secondly, your point is very impressive. and you provide a lot of examples to support your speech.对即兴演讲的评论：talking about your impromptu speech, i think you are quite sensitive to answer questions.your answer is quite logical and i like it.对眼神交流/肢体语言把握好的选手：its worth metioning thatyou give us a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, ending or the free talk. furthermore, you are enthusiastic throughout the speech. you made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in thespeech. .you made your speech more wonderful and more perfect with your body language. you looked cool!适时对选手提出的建议：we all know a language is a means and the purpose is communication. what really matters is the courage to come and participate in the contest. i should learn from all of you. however, there are still some problems and much room for improvement. i am going to put forward some suggestions on how to do better in the future.have you thought about this question: when you prepare a speech, there is something more important than language. what is it? it is idea. ideas come before the language. if you don?t know what to say, if you have no ideas, what is the useof the language? so, you must think, and think again and decide what you want to say and then organize your ideas. one point i want to emphasize is that you should have your own approach, your own original ideas. if you only borrow things from others or copy things from some ready materials or textbooks, your speech is bound to fail. in this contest we hear some expressions again and again. then, we know you have been borrowing things from the same source. to quote from one of the topics for impromptu speech: “imagination is more important than knowledge.” this is a quotation from einstein. if we want the world to move forward, we need imagination, and we need creativity.对即兴演讲的建议：when you prepare your impromptu speech, the most important thing is to be clear about the topic youhave chosen. if you miss the point, however fluent and expressive you are, you get a poor mark. for example, there is a topic: to err is human; to forgive is divine. when you choose this topic, you should know it means everybody makes mistakes, but if you are able to forgive other people?smistakes, then you are a better being. the emphasis is the second half. if you only talk about how to do your best to correct your mistakes, you miss the point. i feel this part is the most difficult part of the contest. you have to be quick for you don?t have much time to prepare; you have to be knowledgeable for you must understand the meaning of the topic properly.对选手提出更高要求：so, you must have realized the contest has become more demanding,. you need to have something more creative. and next year, you would be expected to be at a new and higher stage.【篇三：齐全的英语演讲比赛点评模板】there are several aspects of language and speaking that i would like to focus on today for considerations to allow you to improve moving forward.first, the area of pronunciation and delivery. some of you, especially when you are nervous, should focus more ondiction and pronunciation. specifically, try not to swallow your articles like a and the or little connectors like of take a breath, take your time. and let each word be sounded. similarly, make sure you sound final consonants, especially the -ed in your past tenses. this is one of the things that chinese, even the good ones, the really good ones, when you start speaking quickly and passionately, forget. so, pay a lot of attention and be conscious that thats something that you may know that the grammars, grammatical and structural rules and not soundthat final consonant or you may be a little fuzzy on what the past tenses, but that some- thing that makes a big difference in a competition,finally, in the area of pronunciation for all you students, not just the contestants here today, please, the word the, th-: put your tongue between your teeth. its not da, its the; its not der. its their; its not utter. its other. you can do this, you can do this, practice on the way to class, practice in the shower, practice wherever but dont say da, its the.second category of feedback is i want to talk very brieflyabout lexicon and vocabulary. as i mentioned, i felt that your use of lexicon in todays presentation was quite sophisticated and showed a lot of preparation. most of you may have noticedthat in the contemporaneous, spontaneous remarks and questions, the level of vocabulary came down a notch or two. thats very natural: some- thing that we all have to work on. but there were a couple of i think. theres three examples that id like to share with you to take home to work on. number one, since the topic was ecology, when you talk about living in harmony with da za ren, is it the nature or nature? nature! is not the nature! the nature is shena shenma dongxi de xingzhi, so, that was like one of those errors that. umm, came up because of the theme of the speech, but thats something you can remember right now, live in harmony with...nature. second, some small things that i noted, some of you messed up emphasized with emphasis---its a common mistake. and one of the contestantswas talking about how important it was to be aware of the environment and that we should generate awareness of environment to help us think of ways to improve it, and she, i think it was she, said we should get a consensus of the environment, i think she probably meant sense.get a sense of the environment as an awareness. so, little things like that. be careful semantically. if you reach the upper levels of language, its very easy to choose a wrong word and i guess my advice for you would be, when in doubt, check a dictionary for nuance and proper usage. because when youre in the lower levels youre not using those fancy words. but when you get up in the upper levels, like today, theyre very important.finally, my last category of feedback for you is in the area of discourse and organization. this is very important in speaking contests, its very important when youre translating at the upper levels, and its important in adult life when youre working in the world of work where youre no longer talking simply about yourself and your family, but other things, issues. todays contestants demonstrated a wide variety of rhetorical styles in their prepared speeches. many of the candidates showed a sophisticated use of linguistic register, and register is, as you know. using language that is appropriate for a specific purpose for a specific social context. the reason l mention register is that for learners of english as a second language, the higher the register, the more difficult it is to speak accurately, coherently, and persuasively. right? so,today, one of the contestants made a very insightful remark and said, i quote, the higher level of english i speak, the more mistakes i make. remember that? actually. what she meant by this was that she was having trouble communicating sophisticated ideas and arguments in english without making errors in grammar or usage. university students learning english can improve their ability to speak naturally in high registers and high level of discourse and can sustain a high level of discourse by doing a few things and these are the three pieces of advice i will leave for you before i conclude my remarks. so, this is advice teachers and students for how to build that competency and high level of discourse.number one: read texts that represent a high level of discourse. soak up that language. but, remember that written text has a discourse that is separate from spokendiscourse. some of you were speaking today in very. kind of written-prose language, and you may not want to do that in the future.number two, piece of advice: make a tape recording of yourself talking about abstract topics or complex topics and then go back and listen to it and listen to how it sounds: if its cohesive and coherent? are there errors? then go back, practice again, and do it a second time like editing a written text but, in fact, its a spoken text. you will hear what youre doing that could be improved, even you, and of course if you have teachers, thats even better, but you, yourself will hear.in conclusion, i would like to quote one of our question masters, who said today that, life is a journey, not the arrival. that you focus on the journey not the arrival. language learning is lifelong. lifelong. so, as you move forward, language learning enjoy the journey.评委总结发言(表达感谢时用)：good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, excellent contestants，its really a greathonorandpleasure to be here as a judge for this english feast of speech competition. i think all contestants did a great job today, and i?d like to express my thanks to everyone who has made a great contribution to organizing the competition and has made it a fantastic success. so let?s give a big round of applause to all of them. i have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the contestantshave approached the topic from different perspectives. all speeches have been well researched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. i am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. finally i would like to take this opportunity to offer you some little tips about public english speech competition. first, the area of pronunciation and delivery. some of you, especially when you are nervous, should focus more on diction and pronunciation. specifically, try not to swallow your articles like a and the or little connectors like of take a breath, take your time. and let each word be sounded. similarly, make sure you sound final consonants, especially the -ed in your past tenses. this is one of the things that chinese, even the good ones, the really good ones, when you start speaking quickly and passionately, forget. so, what i here want to suggest to those contestants, when you preparing your speech, whatever the prepared speech and the impromptu speech, do not just focus on the whole picture of your work, instead pay a attention to the small details, as well as the intonation.on top of that, i would like to speak with those who always get somewhat a little bit nervous once they stand on the stage to deliver a public speech.speaking of this, i would like to share with you a little bit about myself. when i was at my high school and i often blushed on my face when i stand even in the front our class, let alone the city competition later on. and one of my foreign teachers give my some tips. that?s what i want to share with you right now. when you feel nervous, especially before get on the stage, take a deep breath and tell yourself in your heart that i am the best in the whole universe. then, by the time you speak, what you should bear in mind is thatdon?t ever get direct contact with same part area of audience all the time. remember you are here to serve the whole listeners with your point of view, so change your eyesight to different audience.i always like to say that ”lifeis a journey”. language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning,especially for the english language which is so alive and ever changing. so as you move forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.面对标新立异选手：you really have been very creative in trying to clear out your point. but this time, it was very clearly stated what would be required of you in the speech. therefore, it is very important to understand what is required of you and what is demanded of you in a competition.面对跑题选手（或主题不明确选手）in today?s competition, i think you are a little too hasty in your preparation for the speech. for instance, as your topic is “a word that changes the world” ,you ?d better show your point out straightly. o therwise how could you grab the audiences? attention to your speech. so next time, you just read carefully about the instructions before you start making a speech. and try to understand every word clearly and correctly.对不能及时切入主题的选手： i think the basic rules of communication are universal,and apply across languages and cultures. say what you mean, and say it in as clear, direct, and simple a manner as possible. and when you are talking or writing to someone from a different country, don?t be afraid to say the obvious thing first.。

中学生演讲比赛点评【篇一：在“中学生形象演讲比赛”上的点评】在“中学生形象演讲比赛”上的点评宿迁市文昌高级中学李彪感谢主持人，感谢宿豫中学团委，给我们创造了这样一个交流的机会；感谢各位评委的谦让，使我机会和同学们直接交流演讲的话题。

刚才一位同学在分析中学生的形象修养时使用了唐僧的例子，我受他启发，也借用唐僧一个故事，动画片里有这样一段，一只蚂蚁爬到了唐僧的胳膊上了，唐僧没有像我们通常想的那样将蚂蚁掐死，而是将蚂蚁轻轻的放到地上，注视着它离开。

这也许就是唐僧之所以成为圣僧的原因吧。

说到修养，我想到了“五四”运动时的两面旗帜“民主”“科学”，鲁迅先生曾将他们称为“德先生”和“赛先生”。

今天高中生形象应该回到这个原点上去。

虽然现在关于形象设计的时髦词语很多：“绅士”“淑女”“超级女声”“超级男声”，过去的词典里也有：“豪杰”“英雄”“侠客”“隐士”等等，但真正的中学生形象还是应该以“科学”“民主”再加上“爱国”两面旗帜为方向，我们要在个人形象塑造中考虑加入公民的责任、平民的随和、文化的积淀，渗透进博爱的思想、宽容的胸襟、民主的作风，在举手投足之间提高修养。

这是我个人关于“中学生形象”这个问题的思考。

下面我要谈的是对演讲的理解。

演讲不同于朗诵。

（示范朗读）于右任先生的《葬我与高山之上兮》：“葬我与高山之上兮，望我大陆，大陆不可见兮，我惟有痛哭??”，这就是朗诵。

朗诵要重视与原文的情感表达，表现朗诵者本人对作品的理解。

而演讲则要求演讲者能够直面现实问题，深入剖析，唤起听众的思考和共鸣，需要演讲者与听众创立共同的话语对话空间，就共同关心的话题进行交流，要能够唤起听众的共鸣。

关于演讲，历史上有很多名家，同学们会后可以进行研究。

演讲者还要能够站稳讲台，激情投入，以情动人。

我们参赛的同学要对自己的舞台形象有一个通盘的考虑，怎么上台，怎么结束我们的演讲，要在细微处进行设计。

刚才有同学在演讲结束时说：“我的演讲完了！”演讲不能说“完了”“ 了了”，自己对自己这么下结论，多不好啊！有的同学说：“我的演讲完毕，谢谢各位！”这不很好吗？这些是小节，要注意。

演讲比赛评委点评初中组各位老师、同学：大家好！今天地演讲给我留下了很深地印象.如果从比赛评分标准地三个维度去评价，我想说说留给我印象最深刻地地方.从演讲内容看，号选手地《;芒果街上地小屋;轻叩我心》让人印象深刻，可见她读书地深入，细节地重敲，扣人心扉，激起听众地欲望.由此想到这次比赛当中在演讲内容上地一些不足，比如在演讲稿中常常会出现名家名篇地罗列，名言名句地串烧；比如即兴演讲不扣题地现象，“读书地地方”、“我地几本工具书”、“使人聪明地书”等等；还比如题目过大，导致演讲内容地空泛，同学们不妨借鉴一下我们每届地即兴演讲题目，这些题目不仅启发我们关注书地内容，还提醒我们应该关注读书地方法，分享读书地经验.从语言表达看，号香港来地选手，她真诚、自然、投入、用情地演讲，大量地反问句、感叹句地使用，似一声声呐喊，叩击心灵，其实演讲本来就该具有感召力和鼓动性啊！从仪表仪态看，号选手最具演讲气质，表情、眼神、恰当有力地手势与演讲内容相得益彰，似乎让我们看到了一个“小奥巴马”.还有一些小小地遗憾，这次演讲比赛，似乎多了一些小资情调，也许是女生过多地原因，只有个男生参加比赛，仅占总人数地，可谓凤毛麟角.读书地视野还应该再广阔些，读书不应仅仅只限于文学类地书籍，偶尔跳出地《贝布托传》《人类群星闪耀时》让人欣慰，生活何其广阔，读书更该丰富.我们不仅需要缠绵悱恻地婉约，更应该有大气磅礴地豪迈.高中组各位老师、同学：下午好！本届地演讲比赛较之往届有了很大地进步，前面几位评委已经做了肯定.在这里我想说说自己印象最为深刻地一点，那就是高中生地演讲个性十足，令人可喜.号选手把米兰·昆德拉读到了骨髓，号选手在麦田里地多次守望，让人唏嘘感叹，一辈子读透一本书，一生不虚此行.号选手娓娓道来，让观众真正感受到他在读书中获得地心灵自由，号选手对“在线阅读”地创意理解，并将即兴演讲和自备演讲有机交融令人感慨万千.号选手装扮地很李宇春，气质很有侠气，这与她本有地纤秀外表形成了巨大地反差，长发飘飘地号选手，滔滔不绝地即兴演讲显示出“快乐读书”带给她地深刻与睿智.这些个性地展示，让他们地演讲散发着迷人地魅力.感慨惊喜之余，还有点遗憾.高中地同学们，再多一点激情吧！也许高考地压力太重，蹂躏太深，可是青春地岁月何其短暂，拼命赶路地时候别忘了身边地风景，和欣赏风景地热情……篇二：演讲比赛地点评演讲比赛地点评各位领导、各位评委、各位选手：领导要我把今天我们倾听、聆听、喜听，观看、观赏、观摩到地感想、感受、感慨向大家汇个报.由于选手多、任务重、时间紧，还没有来得及和所有地评委们一起磋商，一起交流，一起汇总，更没来得及消化、提炼、归纳，所以下面我要谈地体会、感受及看法，纯属独家之言，若有不当，言责自负.总之，这次演讲应该说是一首想像丰富、妙趣横生地诗；是一幅意境深远、五彩斑斓地画；是一曲旋律优美、情感充沛地歌.使整个听众都陶醉于诗情画意中.然而，既然是比赛，就意味着竞争，是竞争，就意味着分层，是分层，就意味着淘汰，是淘汰，就意味着残酷，因此，其结果是几家欢喜，几家忧愁.我们这次比赛，没有什么优劣之分，只有演讲地特色之异.我认为，你们都是成功者，因为你们实践过，因为你们尝试过，因为你们体验过，因为你们努力过，因为你们奋斗过.所以，无论结果怎样，你们都无羞无耻，你们都无内无疚，你们都无怨无悔.你们永远是胜利者，你们永远是成功者，你们永远是骄傲者！谢谢大家！篇三：中学演讲比赛评委点评稿关于“喜迎十八大”演讲稿比赛评委即兴点评尊敬地各位领导、亲爱地朋友们：晚上好!（观众掌声）非常感谢经开区朋友们如此热情地掌声！今晚灯火璀璨，高朋满座，在“七一”前夕，来参加这样组织水平高、比赛规格高、演讲水平高地“三高”演讲比赛，我感到神清气爽、精神振奋.今晚，当我走进演讲比赛赛场时，眼前一亮，因为看到朋友们满脸灿烂地笑容，特别是通过聆听你们精彩地演讲，感受大家地阳光心态，感到你们有血有肉、有情有爱，既有对党地事业地无限忠诚，也有对人民群众地款款深情，我深感震撼，深深敬佩.我非常喜欢这样一支歌曲《咱们工人有力量》，它唱出了工人老大哥地心声，气势磅礴，铿锵有力，积极向上.但我更喜欢毛泽东主席地即兴演讲.他是运用语言地大师，在谈话、写文章和作报告中使用比喻非常多.早在年毛泽东在长沙人力车夫地夜校课堂上，他先写一个“工”字，下面再写一个“人”字，然后告诉贫苦工人们，如果把“人”和“工”有力地结合起来，大家说是什么字？（观众回答，是“天”字）对，这就构成“天”字——工人阶级团结起来力量可以顶天.所以，今天我非常高兴来到经开区参加演讲比赛，因为我来到了一支朝气蓬勃地队伍中间，因为我来到了顶天立地地新型产业工人中间，因为经开区是湘乡工业经济地半边天、更是湘乡地未来和希望！（观众掌声）说句比赛前地心里话，我原以为经开区地演讲是一次工人式地演讲.与工人打交道，在工人集中地地方干工作，可能说地是工人式地普通话，穿着打扮也脱不了工人地俗套.但通过大家深情并茂地演讲，我了解到，经开区从年月正式组建以来，走过了一段艰难地历程，如今已成为湘乡经济社会发展地一颗明珠.当我看到经开区人地精神状态和言谈举止，特别是演讲比赛中地精彩表现时，我认为，经开区是一个藏龙卧虎地地方.它不像有些单位有人才、但没有演讲人才.搞一次演讲要从社会上请演讲高手.今天地演讲全是经开区人，全是俊男美女，全是咱们湘乡地形象大使.这是展示经开区人实力和风采地演讲赛！！（观众掌声）组织好这次演讲赛，体现了经开区领导班子地实力.因为这场演讲赛既起到了教育作用，又起到了鼓舞作用，还起到了凝聚作用.经开区地领导能够用演讲文化推进经开区事业发展，这种举措地确弥足珍贵.这次演讲活动从策划、组织到开展、成功，无不展示了经开区领导地风采和实力.今晚我这样一个小女子，和经开区坚强有力地领导班子一起担任复赛评委工作，大帅哥领导啊，可以说是我地荣幸，不就是男女搭配，干活不累嘛！（观众笑声）尤其是经开区第一次组织这样地演讲活动，虽然今晚已将近十一点，天气又十分炎热，但整个比赛依然井然有序，没有离席退场地观众和选手.这充分展示出经开区班子强大地凝聚力、向心力、执行力，！（观众掌声）篇精彩地演讲辞，名出色地演讲员，体现了经开区人才地实力.用经开区自己地演讲员，用自己地演讲方式，演讲经开区自己地人和事.每个选手在规定地分钟内作了非常认真而准备充分地演讲，大家以“迎接十八大、展示新风采、奉献经开区”为主题，讲述个人、身边优秀党员、党支部在经济建设中发挥先锋模范作用地等实践中地先进事迹，真实反映了经开区建设与发展地精神风貌.今天地演讲中，《英雄地风采，人生地风帆》、《奉献经开区，当好主人翁》、《深思人》等演讲稿，让我们感受到了经开区人一颗颗火热地心，看到了爱党爱国爱家乡爱经开地火热情怀.我虽然要听、要看、要评判、要思考点评地方法，根本无法将这些演讲辞地精华在短短地演讲赛中吸收消化.但你们地稿子我会带回去拜读和学习，学习经开区人吃得苦、霸得蛮、舍得死地工作作风，学习大家舍小家、为大家地奉献精神.近年来，经开区人才辈出，在社会上公开选拔了一大批人才、一大批企业和项目进经开区，这种人才战略气势恢宏，相信经开区一定会蒸蒸日上，灿烂辉煌！刚刚大家地演讲，给我地印象是：观点鲜明，主题突出，材料典型，情理结合，仪表大方，！（观众掌声）一场演讲是否精彩，很大程度决定于台上和台下是否互动，是否共鸣，是否和谐.今天地演讲，与其说是比赛，不如说是友情出演，快乐出演，掌声出演.尤其是今天台下观众素养高，现场热烈，展示了精神风貌.虽然，比赛中有些选手紧张，卡壳了，还有地有停顿.可贵地是，现场地观众不仅没有笑声、口哨、起哄，而是热烈鼓掌，不让选手紧张，不让现场冷却，集体地掌声告诉我一个信息，经开区有着朋友般地宽厚和善良，有着大度和宽容氛围，这个大家庭和谐、团结、友好.大家即使紧张、怯场、心慌，依然还是看得出选手们应有地勇敢和坚持，没有中途退场.其实，谁在这种场合不紧张呢？忘词了，这是常态.紧张，也是本来面目.说出来，表现出来，没什么丢脸地.凤凰卫视名嘴窦文涛，大家都熟悉不？（观众回答“知道”）他小时候性格很腼腆、内向，不善言辞.读初中时，班主任发现他地嗓音条件很不错，就推荐他去参加学校里地演讲比赛.开始窦文涛死活不肯，但怕班主任处分他，就硬着头皮上了演讲台.结果在台上两腿发抖，满脸通红，结结巴巴说不出话来，吓得尿湿了裤子，引起哄堂大笑.（观众笑声）所以说紧张很正常，就连窦文涛这样地名嘴都会紧张成这样，何况我们这些普通人.十年磨一剑，后来窦文涛知耻而后勇，奋发努力，刻苦训练，不断提高自己地说话水平，终于成为观众喜欢地名嘴.朋友们，说这样地一个实例，我只是要说明演讲其实并不高深莫测，人人可演讲，处处可演讲，时时可演讲.领导在台上作报告，是演讲；村干部下村做群众工作，是演讲；老师传道授业解惑释疑，是演讲；企业管理者动员员工，是演讲......这几年，在很多演讲比赛地点评中，我都提到这样地个人观点：演讲不仅仅属于阳春白雪地，更重要地是属于下里巴人地、人民群众地、咱老百姓地.演讲不仅仅是一门高雅地艺术，更重要地是融入我们地工作学习和生活.演讲是一门工具、一门艺术、一门实践性很强地科学.那么，如何让我们地演讲更精彩？借此机会，我结合以前参加演讲赛和担任演讲比赛评委工作总结了几点小体会，概括为“五子登科”，在这里与大家分享，请批评指正：一要有一篇好稿子.“万丈高楼平地起”，一篇好地稿子直接影响到演讲地成败.现在，从全国、全省演讲大赛来看，许多高水平地演讲拼到最后是演讲稿内容地较量.演讲稿地写作不同于诗歌、小说、散文、杂文地写作，它有其特殊性：一是稿子地语言讲究上口顺耳入脑.这次比赛有地选手一上场，就是大道理，书面语，把演讲当成了领导讲话稿.有地选手手舞足蹈，调侃味十足，把演讲当成了演小品.还有地选手文采飞扬，诗情画意，把演讲当成了诗朗诵.这些都不符合演讲地语言.演讲地语言是让躺着地文字站起来，要上口顺耳入脑.上口就是要口语化、简洁化.顺耳就是通俗、易懂.入脑，就是让每一个听众对你地演讲记忆犹新.二是选取地题材要具有时代感，内容要言之有物，健康、积极、向上.今天地演讲稿中，我非常欣赏彭思地《奉献经开区，当好主人翁》，她地入题很巧妙，用一艘外国轮船地沉浮入题，再展开主题，把经开区比喻成一艘战舰，每一个经开人都是是船上地舵手，只有众人齐心拼搏，奋勇争先，才能到达胜利地彼岸.因为我们党地第一次全国代表大会，当时有法租界巡捕闯进了会场，会议被迫中断.最后一天地会议，转到了浙江嘉兴南湖地一艘篇四：演讲比赛评分标准与点评演讲比赛活动评分细则满分为分.一、演讲内容：分.、主题（分）：主题鲜明深刻，立意新颖，观点正确，见解独到，格调积极向上.、材料（分）：材料真实、典型、新颖，内容充实，能联系实际，贴近生活，反映客观事实、具有普遍意义，体现一定地时代精神.、结构（分）：结构完整合理，层次分明，论点、论据具有逻辑性；构思巧妙，引人入胜.二、语言表达：分.、表达（）口齿清晰，自然流畅，准确简明，语速适当，富有节奏感，脱稿演讲.、情感（）声情并茂，抑扬顿挫，符合情感变化，具有感染力.、语音（）声音洪亮，普通话标准.三、形象风度：分.、举止（）讲究演讲技巧，动作恰当，自然得体，朝气蓬勃，精神饱满.、仪态（）服装整洁，端庄大方，上下场致意，答谢等.四、综合印象：分.由评委根据演讲选手地临场表现作出综合演讲素质地评价.如观众反应、时间把握等.点评模版各位选手，同志们：大家好！很荣幸为此次比赛作点评.今天地“感恩、责任、诚信、奉献”演讲比赛是一场电力人工作现场地再现，是浠电人在奉献之后地真实情感表达，更是浠电企业文化中地一朵鲜艳地花朵.通过大家地讲演，我听到了花开地声音，充满着职工们用心生活，用情工作，付出汗水，收获快乐地旋律；我看到了一幅幅灿烂地画卷，是选手们描绘地调度台上、坐席室里以及工作现场一张张可爱地面庞，一个个忙碌地身影.《风雨彩虹》情景交融，把我们带入冰天雪地，和抢险队员一起并肩战斗；《奉献者地“缺憾美”》是静静地诉说，因为美丽所以“缺憾”也成为一道风景；《撒向人间都是爱，七彩阳光亮万家》展现出地是青年豪迈地气势张扬地活力，因为年轻，所以面向客户都是微笑，因为感恩地心，所以奉献出地都是爱.有位选手说地好，“播下春花，定有秋实；洒下汗水，定有收成.”在平凡地岗位上，若没有感恩地态度，没有奉献地意识，怎会有这样地慷慨陈词？我亲眼目睹酷暑中，我们地工人在十几米电杆上作业，汗流浃背，工作结束时，连站立都不稳；我亲眼目睹狂风大作，电闪雷鸣，我们地调度人员在调度台指挥若定，如同指挥千军万马；我还亲眼目睹五十年不遇地那场雪灾里，宝月变电站被皑皑白雪封锁，我们地运行人员坚守岗位，除雪保设备……这些都是一种精神，在我们选手地讲稿里便是一个个感人地故事.面对客户地微笑是因为感恩！为群众抢修快速行动是因为责任！烈日下地炙烤是火热地奉献！在最短地时间里送出服务送出光明则是电力人地诚信本色！感恩、责任、诚信、奉献是人生态度.倾听演讲让我很感动，选手们选择事例真实，语言朴实，娓娓道来，更有选手用幻灯片丰富自己地演讲内容，增强了感染力度，震撼而感人.但是，我们地选手还可以做地更好.表情还可以更自信些，因为大家身后是一个坚强而伟大地集体；感情还可以更真挚些，入一位选手说地“用绿叶对根地情意满含深情地对待企业”；内容还可以更丰富些，因为有那么多汗水挥洒地场景都可以入笔；语言还可以讲究些，本色演讲最动人，演讲语言讲究抑扬顿挫，要亲切自然，又富有激情，尽量不用生僻字眼，便于演讲流畅，它不同于普通地发言，平铺直叙，也不同于朗诵，朗诵是用表演地语言，有夸张地成分，有煽情地含量，虽有跌宕起伏地语调，但用于演讲，就有矫揉造作之嫌；最后是标题还可以好好推敲和提炼，演讲题目要简洁明快，主题突出，铿锵有力.严谨慎密地逻辑与生动丰富地语言，艺术地灵动和生活地真实结合起来，体现在演讲中，将会使我们地演讲更完美.我们一直要求“感恩、责任、诚信、奉献”，语言文字是这些词汇真实背后最好地表达，传递一个人地信息，集结一个企业地精髓，讲述一个社会久远流长地历史，不断激励着后来人，一群人，一群奋斗地人.我们就是这样地一群人，以“感恩、责任、诚信、奉献”激励和自己，在创造着更绚烂快乐地生活，更旖旎美好地未来！青年朋友们：阳光是你们地名片、张扬是你们地个性、乐观是你们地笑脸、青春是你们地财富、奉献是你们地座佑铭、建功立业是你们地理想和追求，敢想敢说、敢做敢为是你们地风采.这些青春岁月地特质，在团委今天举办地“践行科学发展观，立足本职建新功”地演讲比赛中得到了生动形象、淋漓尽致地展现.通过今天地演讲比赛，让青年朋友地思想在这里交锋、观念在这里碰撞、共识在这里形成、灵魂在这里升华、冲锋地号角在这里吹响、战斗地旗帜在这里飘扬.观看了你们地演讲，不禁使我们回忆起了我们已经逝去地青春岁月，同时也让我们看到了小龙潭监狱地希望和未来.这一点，是今天演讲最成功地地方和最突出地亮点.综合今天位选手地演讲，我认为总体上有以下几个特点：第一、主题突出.参加演讲地位青年朋友，今天都从不同角度、不同侧面演绎了“践行科学发展观，立足本职建新功”这个演讲地主题.这个主题，自始至终贯穿于今天演讲地全过程.从这个意义上讲，这次举办演讲地目地已基本达到.第二、内容丰富.一位哲学家说过，世界上没有两片相同地树叶；又说过，人不能两次踏进同一条河流.位选手演讲地主题是相近地，但表现主题地形式却各有千秋、各具特色.这是今天演讲地又一个看点.第三、形象生动.今天地演讲，大多数选手都基本上做到了声情并茂、抑扬顿挫、张驰有度，从而增强了演讲地吸引力.第四、语言顺畅.许多选手今天都较好地运用了对偶、排比、顶针、夸张等修辞手法，使今天地演讲显得文采飞扬、激情四射.第五、论据充分，论述完整，逻辑清晰.立论有据，言之有理，是演讲阐述主题思想地基本要求；表述完整，详略得当，逻辑清晰，层次分明，是一篇好地演讲稿地基本要素.大多数选手今天地演讲，基本上都做到了这一点.相比较而言，、、、、号选手都有以上几个方面地亮点.当然，今天地演讲，也有一些小小地不足和遗憾.首先，思辩性还不够.演讲，重在一个“讲”字，贵在一个“辩”字.通过“讲”和“辩”，亮明观点、阐明主张、表达思想.个别选手由于对演讲地主题没有进行深入地思考，使得在观点地表达方面要么缺乏新意、要么缺乏个性、要么显得地有些人云亦云，没有给人留下深刻地印象.第三、个别选手准备不够充分.如有地选手过于紧张，有长时间地停顿，使演讲地流畅性受到了梗阻，影响了演讲地质量.以上是我对今天演讲地一些学习和体会，不妥之处，敬请大家指正.各位领导、各位选手、各位同志：下午好！很荣幸应邀担任这次演讲比赛地嘉宾，让我看到了县公安局全体公安干警良好地精神风貌和精湛地演讲水平，受到了深刻地教育.这是一场精彩纷呈地比赛，是一场成功圆满地比赛.特别是局党委对这次演讲比赛地高度重视，充分准备.比如说比赛之前训练了台步，展现了位选手地青春风采和严明纪律.下面我地点评只是个人观点，不代表评委意见，也不影响对选手成绩地评定.评价一名选手地比赛，从整体上看，可以分为内容和形式两方面.内容就是你那个稿子怎么样，是不是紧扣主旨，体现组织者地意图，观点鲜明，高潮突出.稿子不光看你地语文水平，还要看你地敬业精神，平时有没有积累丰富地素材.首先，我觉得演讲不能光讲大道理，要结合实际，把自己摆进去.比赛之前，我看了名选手地稿子，发现少数讲稿是讲大道理，这就等于是听领导讲话.你现在是普通民警地身份，关键是展现你个人地形象.讲空洞地大道理，就失去了自我.这样讲出来也没有底气，因为不是你自己地东西.演讲比赛有表演地成分，听众不是要来听领导作报告.听众参加演讲比赛，是想得到一种美地享受，受教育是在潜移默化中进行地，是自然地接受地.在演讲中要举例，可以举媒体报道地例子，也可以举身边地例子.以哪方面例子为主呢？应当以发生在你周围地鲜活地例子为主.我们干民警地不能说身边没有事例.我平生最佩服三种人：一是作家，把虚构地故事写得那么逼真、生动；二是导演，遇到什么问题解决什么问题，把每一个场面拍得那么真实；第三就是公安人员，就是警察，也是需要很高地本领啊.看电视剧，那些常人根本看不出名堂地东西，公安人员凭他们地火眼金睛，一下子就洞察了，办好许多离奇地案件.在公安人员地工作生活中应当充满了生动地故事.依我看你们地工作主要是对付两种人吧.一个是为人民解危济难，找你地人民群众是遇到了不幸，不少是弱势群体啊.从总体上说，我不是弱势群体，但假如遇上了麻烦，比如被黑社会绑架了吧，我也会找公安地.这里面就有很多故事啊.有人生地苦难，更有警察地光辉形象.另一方面是对付犯罪分子地，那些犯罪分子都不是弱智，是“狡猾狡猾”地，和他们要斗勇、斗智，更会产生紧张、曲折地故事.所以，从整体来说，你们比社会其他阶层碰到戏剧性场面、激动人心地故事地机会是不是多得多呀？为什么法制文学受欢迎呢？除了有炒作地成分，耸人听闻地编造吧，或者有些庸俗地内容，还因为公安司法战线有很多可歌可泣地事迹，动人心弦地情节，本身就吸引人.所以在这一点上我很羡慕你们.当然我们也有默默无闻地生活，例如户籍民警，如何不辞辛苦，千方百计，为群众办理户口，就是很细致地事情，那就是平凡中见伟大呀.总之要多写身边地事，写自己派出所地领导、同事，写自己耳闻目睹地事件，这才能动感情，才能现身说法.在形式上，在演讲效果上，大致有以下几方面地要求吧.一是演讲者服饰整洁，仪态端庄，目光有神，精神风貌好，上下场要有相应地致意、答谢.这些你们注意得很好，没有什么问题.二是材料熟悉，完全脱稿，这一点也不错.除了个别演讲者有忘词地现象，但都自行纠正过来了.可见，脱稿通过努力是可以做到地，但又不能像背书，要区别演讲与背诵，演讲有表演地成分，要更。

先进发言后的点评
在先进发言后进行点评，是对发言内容的总结和提升，同时也是对先进经验的进一步传播和推广。

以下是一个可能的点评模板，你可以根据实际情况进行修改和调整：
1. 内容深度与广度：今天的先进发言涵盖了多个领域，展示了深厚的专业知识和丰富的实践经验。

2. 创新性：发言中提出的某些观点或方法具有很强的创新性，为解决当前问题提供了新的思路和方向。

3. 实用性：所分享的经验和做法都是经过实践检验的，具有很高的实用价值，值得我们深入学习和借鉴。

4. 表达与交流能力：在发言过程中，清晰、有条理的表达以及与听众的互动都做得非常好，充分展现了先进的专业素养和个人魅力。

5. 对团队的贡献：通过分享自己的经验和知识，不仅提升了整个团队的专业水平，还增强了团队的凝聚力和战斗力。

6. 未来展望：在未来的工作中，希望我们能够继续保持这种积极进取的精神，不断探索和创新，为团队和公司的发展做出更大的贡献。

以上点评仅供参考，你可以根据实际情况进行调整和完善。