四六级作文评分
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档次评分标准
切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅13-15分
有个别小错。
10-12分切题。表达思想清楚，文字较连贯，但有少量语言错误。
基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错7-9分
误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
4-6分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且1-3分
多数为严重错误。
0分未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或作文与主题毫不相关。
四六级考试写作精选话题及范文 一、志愿者活动 1、越来越多的人从事志愿者工作 2、志愿者工作的社会意义 3、作为大学生，应该怎么做 In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people,especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China. Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games. As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow. 二、培训学校 1、当前，社会上有很多私立学校和培训学校； 2、私立学校的利与弊 3、你的看法 It can be noticed that a large number of private schools or training organizations become a new landscape in education. When you read newspapers, when you watch TV, when you walk on the road, you will inevitably see lots of advertisements about private schools. There are private schools mainly dealing with foreign languages, computers, music and sports. However, is it a good or bad thing to have so many private schools? As a coin has two sides, so are the private schools. On the one hand, private schools can meet the special needs of the society or the particular requirements of people. On the other hand, they often bring people extra burden because of comparison and competition. When asked to decide whether we should have a society without private schools or a society with private schools, I will not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter. Although attending a training course will result in the extra cost or burden, it is of tremendous merits in preparing my work and cultivating my skills. 三、明星代言Celebrities as the products’spokesmen 1、明星代言现象很普遍。 2、明星代言广告存在一些问题。 3、我的看法。 In the contemporary society, it is very common for celebrities, or the so-called superstars, to be spokesmen or representatives for a wide variety of products.
六级之图表作文 Prepared on 22 November 2020
图表作文图表是科学文献中常用的一种表达手段。四六级图表作文利用图形（figure）、表格（table）、曲线图（graph）、柱状图（pie chart）和饼状图（pie chart）等作为写作提示，并以此为依据要求用简洁生动的语言把图标中所给出的信息完整而准确地表达出来。 这一类作文通常前半部分说明图标所表达的信息，后半部分进行议论，不论以何种方式出现，图标作文还是遵循一定的模式。最常见的模式是：第一段：描述现状。简要地描述图表，概括图表所表现的社会问题。第二段：分析原因。剖析图表所反映的深层次问题。用图表来论证第一段提出的主题，或者分析各个数据产生的原因。第三段：结论和启示。从图表中所体现的现象获得结论或者启示，或者对图标所表现的趋势加以预测。 图表作文模式 ①As is shown/depicted/described in the picture/chart, 概括图表内容。②For one thing, 支持这一内容的一个方面。③For another, 支持这一内容的另外一个方面。④It is obvious that 图表所反映的内容。 ⑤Many remarkable factors contribute to主题。⑥First of all, 理由一。⑦In addition, 理由二。⑧Thirdly,理由三。 ⑨Considering all these, I believe that我的看法或偏好。⑩First of all, 个人看法的依据一。⑾Furthermore, 个人看法的依据二。⑿Therefore, 个人的结论或文章的结论。 Example As is shown in the chart, the number of Chinese people traveling abroad increased gradually. For one thing, in 2001, the number of people traveling abroad was seven point five million, which was increased to ten million in 2002. For another, in 2003, there were twelve point one million Chinese people traveling abroad. It is obvious that China is witnessing an ever prosperous overseas tourism. The reasons of the increase lie in several aspects.First of all, with the implementation of China’s reform and opening policy, china’s economy has been growing rapidly and steadily. In addition, people’s income has increased tremendously, so more and more people are now eager to see the outside world with their own eyes. Thirdly, the Chinese government has been simplifying the formalities of traveling abroad and has opened more overseas tourist destinations.
针对改版后四六级的通用十大作文 分类参考范文 (一)图表型 The past years have witnessed a mounting number of Chinese scholars returning from overseas. As is lively illustrated by the column chart, the number of returnees climbed from a mere 69.3 thousand in 2008 to over 272.9 thousand in 2012, at an annual increase rate of around 50%. A multitude of factors may have led to the tendency revealed by the chart, but the following are the critical ones from my perspective. First and foremost, along with the development of
Chinese economy and society, the number of Chinese studying abroad has been soaring in the past years, which has provided an expanding base for the number of returnees. In the second place, the government has enacted a series of preferential policies to attract overseas Chinese scholars back home. Last but not least, the booming economy, science and technology in this country have generated more attative job opportunites for scholars returning from overseas. The waves of returnees will definitely contribute to this nation’s development, since they have brought back not only advanced science and
1.大学生毕业后应该创业还是找工作？. Should graduate students start their own business or look for jobs? In my opinion, becoming a member of the workforce is less valuable than owning a business. （毕业学生应该开始创业还是自己找工作？在我看来，成为一名劳动力远没有自己创业有价值） Nowadays there are many college students who choose to start their own undertakings instead of finding a job after graduation.However, why do s o many college students like to do their own undertakings? Firstly, students are facing severe employment si tuations. Many graduates couldn’t find ideal jobs, which forces them to se t up their own businesses. Moreover, some ambitious college students are dissatisfied with being employed by others. （如今很多大学生选择毕业后创业而不是找工作。然而，为什么有那么多的大学生喜欢创业呢？首先，学生们面临着很严峻的就业问题。很多毕业生不能找到很理想的工作，从而使得他们自己创业。此外，一些有抱负的毕业生不喜欢被别人雇佣。） As for me, it is a good choice for college students to start their own under takings. However, it needs firm determination, ability to endure hardship. Therefore, think it over and make full preparation before you decide to st art your own business.
英语六级作文评分标准 Prepared on 22 November 2020
英语六级作文评分标准 英语六级考试还有十多天就要开考了，考前除了安心复习，还有一些规则性的东西大家需要提前了解，这里为2015年6月英语六级作文评分原则及标准的内容，希望对大家考前冲刺作文有一个方向性的帮助。 (一)四六级作文评分标准 1. 本题满分为15分 2. 阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为所阅文章与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分);若认为所阅文章稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。 4. 评分标准 5. 2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 [注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。] 5. 字数不足应酌情扣分： (二)字数与分数扣分比例 1. 如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数。 2. 规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。 3. 如要判为0分，需慎重处理。 6. 为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准，现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60分(相当于百分制的60分)。 (三)四六级作文评分原则 1. CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此为准则。 2. CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而和合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 4. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分给高分，包括满分;该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。 5. 所发样卷一律不得翻印，严禁出版，一经发现，必予追究。
作文模版： 图画图表作文 As is shown in the picture,… According to the information conveyed by the picture, … The picture also implies that … It is clear that … There are at least two good reasons for … On the one hand, … Let′s have an example to illustrate … On the other hand, …is due to the fact that … In addition, …is responsible for … Maybe there are some other reasons to show … But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable. The suggestion as to the best way to cope with the problem is as follows. In the first place, … Moreover, …Last but not the least it is … As far I am concerned, …… I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(139words) 议论文（I） It is generally believed that …is a hot topic which is widely talked about both at home and abroad. Now our government attaches great importance to solving this problem. Scientists in this field have put forward a number of suggestions tending to relieve it. To begin with, we should …Furthermore, … It is clear that … People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people think that … According to them, all of us should … Other argue that …In their opinion, nobody can …without … There is no doubt that … As a consequence, … In short, I firmly support the view that … It is because … So my conclusion is that … (107words) 议论文（II） There is no denying the fact that …is a popular topic which is much talked about not only by …, but also by … It is generally thought that … The reasons for … are as follows. T o begin with, … Secondly,… Therefore, we should attach great significance to solving the problem. There are, I think, at least two possible ways to cope with it. The first way to tackle it is to appeal to the authorities to take drastic measures to (do) …The other policy that is worth adopting is to work out new regulations to (do) …Only in this way can we succeed in dealing with the problem in the near future. To conclude, it seems obvious that … So the prospect we are looking
英语六级四种常考作文类型 通过对历年真题进行概括和总结，不难发现六级作文总体上包括解释现象型、解决问题型、说明利弊型和对比选择型。下面对这些作文类型逐一进行介绍。 一、解释现象型 解释现象型作文一般要求考生根据考试提纲引出某种现象，然后分析现象产生的原因，阐述其影响，并给出合理的建议。此类作文在历年真题中所占比例较大，是练习的重点之一。 1.写作提纲 (1)描述现象 (2)阐述现象产生的原因，给出支持者或反对者的观点 (3)提出建议或总结观点 2.历年考题 2010.12My View on University Ranking 2009.12Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes? 2008.06Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 2007.12The Digital Age 2006.12(新)The Importance of Reading Classics2006.12The Celebration of Western Festivals 3.模拟演练 The Influence of Computer on the Movie Industry (1)电脑和互联网给电影产业带来多种影响 (2)阐释各种影响及原因 (3)我的看法 专家支招 这是一个解释现象型的题目，探讨了电脑和互联网对于电影产业的影响，写作时应当围
绕提纲进行构思：①第一段简要说明这一现象，第二段阐释各种影响及其原因，第三段提出自己的看法。②写作时注意语言做到准确流畅，可以适当应用复合句，使文章衔接更加自然。 名师点评 The Influence of Computer on the Movie Industry The movie industry is quite different from what it was before.It has become ①even more so with the aid of https://www.doczj.com/doc/4013499436.html,puters and the Internet have made many influences on the movie industry.②These,however,come down to the following aspects。 First,the development of computer graphics has enabled the movies to have more terrific③visual effects.The digital technology can create vivid images④out of thin air.And the3D picture is another breakthrough of visual enjoyment.Second, the development of personal computers and the Internet has made it easier to download piratical movies,thus the box office of movies will be impacted.However,it can also help promote movies by the wide spread of film reviews and comments。 In my opinion,the further development of computer and the Internet may make more changes to the movie industry.There may be more technologies to bring us⑤multi-dimensional enjoyments.Maybe one day we can have totally immersive impressions of movies with the help of computer。 Analysis ①even more so用于强调当前的情况更加严重，可以用于提出话题。 ②come down to表示“归结为”。 ③visual effects意为“视觉效果”，是高分表达。 ④out of thin air表示“无中生有”，属于固定搭配。 ⑤multi-dimensional意为“多维的”，可以用于有多方面意义或多角度讨论的话题。 举一反三 https://www.doczj.com/doc/4013499436.html,puters and the Internet have made many influences on the movie industry。 https://www.doczj.com/doc/4013499436.html,puters and the Internet have influenced the movie industry a lot。 https://www.doczj.com/doc/4013499436.html,puters and the Internet have great effects on the movie industry。
1.大学生心理问题Directions: Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following bar chart. In your essay, you should 1)first describe the bar chart, 2)then interpret its meaning, and 3)give your comment on it. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 话题剖析 如图所示，有一个大时钟，年轻人试图把指针向前推，而老人则尝试把指针向后推，他们累的满头大汗，却都徒劳无功。年轻人之所以要向前推是因为他对未来充满好奇，老人则是希望回到过去，但是时间是不会加快也不会变慢的。该图的寓意是我们应该充实的过好现在的每一天，珍惜现在的时间，这样才不会在年老时后悔。在论证中，可以从以下角度来考虑：时间不以人的意志向前或者倒退，年轻时应该如何充分利用宝贵时间，因为只有珍惜时间的人才会有更大的机会获得成功，才能充分实现人生的价值。 参考范文(196 words) As is apparently portrayed in the bar chart above, at present university students suffer from psychological problems of various kinds, among which spiritual depression, miscellaneous problems, and suicide-committing top the list. What the chart reveals is indeed thought-provoking.
六级作文常考话题：社会生活 1. 养宠物 keeping pets 造句联系：养宠物在很大水准上能够充实业余生活，而且还有助于培养保护动物的习惯。 参考答案：Keeping pets can largely enrich one's spare time ，beneficial to develop habits of protecting animals. 2. 整形手术 plastic surgery 造句练习：科技的发展, 手术成本的降低，使整形手术走进普通人，但是不能否认整形手术对于健康有一定水准的危害。 参考答案：Plastic surgery becomes available for average people due to better technology and less cost for operation; nevertheless, it is undeniable that the surgery will , to a certain degree, produce side effects on health. 3. 集邮 collecting stamps 或者philately 造句练习：现在，很多传统的爱好在逐步消失，例如集邮。 参考答案： Today, a large amount of tradition has gradually disappeared, for instance philately. 4. 名人崇拜 celebrity worship 造句练习：凡事都有两面，名人崇拜也不例外。一方面，那些值得尊敬的名人能够为青少年粉丝树立良好的榜样。另一方面，某些名人,尤其是某些娱乐明星的不当行为也可能被心智尚未成熟的青年所效仿。 参考答案：Every coin has two sides, without the exception of celebrity worship. For one thing, the respectable
2010.12英语四级考试作文评分标准
2010.12英语四级考试作文评分标准评分标准： 2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。) 常见写作错误 一、主语错误 1. 主语缺失 1)In our country feels very free. People feel free in our country. 2)In my hometown aren’t very busy. People in my hometown are very busy. 2. 非名词主语 1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.
Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life. 2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible. Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible. 3. 主谓错位 1)Reading books can acquire knowledge. People can acquire knowledge from books. 2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV. Now people can’t do without TV. 二、谓语错误 1. 多重谓语 1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated. In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks. 2)Poverty ma kes many people can’t study abroad. Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.
5、图表作文：人口快速增长带来的问题 Directions: A. Study the following graphs carefully and write an essay in at least 150 words. B. Your essay should cover these points; 1. effect of the country's growing human population in its wildlife 2. possible reasons for the effect 3. your suggestion for wildlife protection (15 points) 【参考范文】the ups and downs of population growth As is seen from the two graphs, it is clear that with the rapid growth of U.S. population from 1800 to 1990, the number of its wildlife species no longer existing soared during the same period. Naturally, we can draw the conclusion that the sharp decline of wildlife species resulted from the population growth. Two reasons may account for this phenomenon. To begin with, as the population grows, people consume much more natural resources, which often leads to excessive hunting. Second, with the increase of human activities, modern people take up more and more space. Which has a great impact on other species. Finally, the problem of pollution becomes more and more serious with the development of modern industry. More and more animals have to adapt themselves to the decaying environment or move to a totally different place, but not all of them are fortunate enough to survive the changes. Solving this problem calls for, above all, the government’s efforts to control population growth, to decrease industrial pollution and to enhance the laws to forbid wildlife hunting. Moreover, common citizens should be aware of this ecological crisis and take on the responsibility of wildlife protection. In a word, only when the government and the common people make joint e f forts can we hope to find a satisfactory solution to this problem. 6、图表作文：居民日常生活花消表 Study the following table carefully and write an essay of at least 150 words. Your essay must be written on Answer Sheet? Your essay should meet the requirements below. 1. Changes in people' s daily expenses in the past five years 2. Give possible reasons for the changes. 3. Draw my own conclusions ［参考范文］ In the past five years, there have been great changes in people’s daily expenses in XX city. According to the figures given in the table, the amount of money spent on food decreased gradually, accounting for 35 per cent in 1998. However, there was a rapid increase in clothing expenses, which made up 17% in 1998. In addition, the table shows an upward tendency in recreation expenses. The same was the case with other expenses. What caused these remarkable changes? In my opinion, there are at least three good reasons.
四六级考试作文评分标准分析 一、概述 在四级考试中，最难拿分的也许就是作文了。其原因大致有三：一是作文是一项综合考察的项目，既考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握情况，也考察句型、篇章的能力；二是有的考生过分自信，认为只要写足字数，大体写一写，就能得个八、九分；三是有的考生过于缺乏自信，觉得这个部分太综合了，平时也懒得写，考试时能写到哪儿就写到哪儿，结果造成了"活马当作死马医"，自然是"医死"了。 诚然，在四级作文中想得高分是很难的，但无论如何也应当拿到6分。这是一个底线，否则就要被倒扣分了，那是大大划不来的。（请见后面我所讲的作文最低分的规定）。 但是笔者认为，要想拿到6分（或者更高一点）也并非难事，关键在于掌握正确的方法、多写多练，再加上考试时的细心。 我们先来了解一下四六级考试作文的一些常识。 二、试卷要求 ＣＥＴ试卷短文写作部分，一般用英语给出题目，然后用以下三种形式之一说明内容要求： 1. 用英文列出写作提纲； 2. 用英文段首句给定每段的大意； 3. 用英文说明图表,给出信息范畴和要求。
考试时间为30分钟,要求学生写出一篇不少于100词的短文。要求切题,能正确表达思想，意义连贯，文理基本通顺，无重大语言错误。写作内容为科技、社会、文化等方面的一般常识。 三、评分原则 1. 大学英语考试的目的是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评分应以此要求为准则。 2. 大学英语考试作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 4. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分的给低分,包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。 四、评分标准 1. 短文写作部分满分为15分。 2. 阅卷标准共分五等:14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。各有参照卷一至二份。 3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则
四六级考试作文五大主题常用词汇1. 优秀品质类 悲观/乐观pessimism / optimism 勤奋diligence n. / diligent adj. 耐心patience n. / patient adj. 尊老爱幼respect the old and care for the young 创新innovation 感谢gratitude/ appreciation 奉献contribution n. / contribute v. 梦想ambition/ dream 节约thrifty adj. / thrift n. 谨慎prudence n. /prudent adj. 逆境setbacks 成功无捷径There is no shortcut to success. 幽默感a sense of humor 沟通communication 身心健康physical and mental health 捐献donation n. / donate v. 爱国主义patriotism n. 自信self-confidence 诚实honesty n. /honest adj. 谦虚modesty n. / modest adj. 2. 校园学习类 珍惜时间cherish time 辍学drop out of school/college 熟能生巧Practice makes perfect. 社会实践social practice 应试教育test-oriented education 学业成就academic achievement 课外活动extracurricular activity 选课take selective courses 3. 科技与现代生活 分享经济sharing economy 共享单车shared bikes 扫码解锁单车scan the QR code 出境游outbound trips/ oversea traveling 海外购物overseas shopping 移动支付mobile payment 高铁high-speed train 市场经济market economy 大众传媒负面影响the negative influence of mass media 一次性塑料袋disposable plastic bags 全球化globalization 一带一路倡议the Belt and Road Initiative